专题10 读后续写新高考 (一模考试专辑)-2023届高三英语地市级新题快递 解析版.docx

2023届高三英语地市级新题快递一模考试专辑专题10读后续写新高考解析版【2023 广东深圳一模】Today was Community Service Day at school. Maya's class was going （o make cards for the seniors living in a nursing home. It was also the first day Maya would be wearing her leg brace （腿支架）to school, which was designed to help her walk more steadily and smoothly.It was a cold autumn morning, Maya looked down, feeling embarrassed. To make it lovelier, she had delicately decorated the brace with pretty butterfly patterns. Still, she was unsure about others' reaction. All morning at school, kids kept glancing at her brace. To her relief they didn't say anything.In the classroom, Maya was drawing little green buds （芽）and pretty flowers when her friend Samir came over and sat by her. She felt his eyes fixed on her brace and heard him asking, "What's that fbr?, Not knowing what to say, Maya pretended she didn't hear him. After a few seconds of awkwardness, she glanced back at him, and found that he looked a little sad.After lunch, the class set off. The nursing home was on a small hill and all of them walked there happily along the path. Maya found that the brace did make it easier for her to walk up.Maya and Samir were paired up with a lady who was 83 years old. There at the end of the hall in a wheelchair, with a big smile on her face, sat the lady, wearing a pink coat, with red lipslick and beautiful carrings. She looked bright and full of life. Moving flexibly and fast towards Maya and Samir, she greeted first. "I'm Joan, “ she said cheerfully, uGlad to meet you. ”Maya and Samir handed her the cards they made. Joan looked at Samir's card carefully and spoke with admiration, "You've written a poem! That's so artistic!” Samir's face reddened with shyness. Then Joan turned to Maya's picture. 4iThc first flowers of spring!” she cried in delight. “You really have a gift fbr using colour she said. Clearly, Joan's praise added great power into Maya. 注意：1 .续写词数应为15（）左右；.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。In a sudden wave of bravery, Maya asked, "What's it like being in a wheelchair?”me with young, inexperienced kids who couldn't read music, couldn't hold their parts, and could sing only some simple songs.“Maybe we could enter Class B this year,“ 1 suggested, knowing even that would be a near-impossible mission. No!'' the kids screamed. “Class A!”I shook my head. 44Class A is extremely difTcult.“We can do it!” they shouted, uWe can do it!”44ril have to think about it,“ I said, hoping their enthusiasm would die off in a couple of weeks.But that didn't happen. Every day they begged, they pleaded, they insisted. Because I had to protect their seli-esteem. I couldn't tell them they weren't good enough.I struggled to make a decision. If I crushed their hope, would I crush their spirit? On the other hand, if we entered Class A, would they be hurt by the judges5 comments? Finally, one morning I stormed into class and declared we would sing for the contest and entered Class A.Each morning they vocalized, learned musical terms, practiced signature changes, rehearsed concert music, and went over and over the songs. Their progress was so remarkable even 1 began believing in their dream.注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右：2 .请按如卜.格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Seven months into the school year, when the contest day finally arrived, the kids felt ready to take on the world!After all the choirs had performed, we waited in our assigned room for (he results.【答案】参考范文Seven months into the school year, when the contest day finally arrived, the kids felt ready to take on the world! They warmed up, listened to my talk, and made their way to the performance area. As my choir mounted the risers, I looked at the three judges and remembered how improbable this scenario had seemed at the beginning of the school year. “Smile!” I mouthed. They looked confident. I took a deep breath, and we began. They performed masterfully. We finished our songs, and I wanted to scream at the top of my lungs, “YOU DID IT!"After all the choirs had performed, we waited in our assigned room for the results. While waiting for the judges' scores, the kids gazed at the clock, went for snacks, gazed at the clock, drew on the chalkboard, gazed at the clock. Two very long hours later the results were posted. I stood frozen, staring at the list in disbelief. There was our name at the very top: a First Place award with the highest marks of all. All around kids were squealing and embracing. Warm tears wet my cheeks. And I realized that I was surrounded by kids who had a dreamkids who refused to give up-kids who taught me to never doubt the possibility of success.【解析】【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了高中唱诗班的成员无法决定今年的比赛要唱什么歌 曲，虽然没有经验，但是他们努力准备，一遍又一遍地唱这些歌曲，直到最后赢得了比赛。【详解】1段落续写：由第一段首句内容“开学七个月后，当比赛 日子终于到来时，孩子们觉得自己已经准备 好挑战世界了！ ”可知，第一段可描写演唱的经过。由第二段首句内容“所有唱诗班表演完后，我们在指定的房间里等待结果。”可知，第二 段可描写表演的结果以及感悟。2 .续写线索：热身一一演唱一一表现出色一一等待结果一一分数最高一一感悟.词汇激活 行为类 回想起：remember/recall 放弃：give up/quit 拒绝：refuse to/dcclinc 情绪类准备好：ready /prepared难以置信：in disbelief /unbelievably【点睛】高分句型 1 As my choir mounted the risers, 1 looked at the three judges and remembered how improbable this scenario had seemed at the beginning of the school year.（运用 as 弓I 导时间 状语从句）高分句型 2 And I realized that I was surrounded by kids who had a drcamkids who refused to give up-kids who taught me to never doubt the possibility of success.（运用（who 弓| 导定语从句）【2023 广东佛山一模】I ran after the train, shouting, llHcy mister, can't you see mc?, It was hopeless, as no conductor is going to slow down for a 60-year-old man who got to the station several minutes late. They absolutely didn't know how important that day, that train ride was to me! I was on my way to an interview for what could have been the opportunity of a lifetime.I threw both my hat and my art case down in depression, and sat down on the nearest chair, wiping （擦掉）lhe sweat from my face and breathing heavily. I would have to wait a whole day for the next train, and by then my appointment with the gallery owner would have given up on me. Perhaps it was for the best. It was, after all, the first time in 40 years anyone had shown such an interest in my art. Maybe if the gallery owner had seen all my paintings, he would have changed his mind about offering me space on his walls.Disappointment filled my soul. Should I dial the gallery and get an interview on a different day? But Pierre Gianni was the owner of the most well-known gallery in New York City. Why would he give a rare second chance to an elderly nobody when he had the newest, coolest young artists to choose from?Come to think of it, perhaps these insecurities were the very reason I had never been offered a show before. I was loo afraid to try. I found countless excuses not to offer my work up to be seen and perhaps criticized. I told myself it would hurt too much if I failed, but the truth was that I had never tried.Finally, I gathered all my courage to dial the gallery, only to find my antique cell phone had broken down. It was at the very moment that I was in total despair and decided to go home. 注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右：2 .请按如卜格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Suddenly 1 felt a touch on my shoulder.The next morning I got to the gallery on time.【答案】参考范文Paragraph 1:Suddenly I felt a touch on my shoulder I turned around and saw an old man smiling gently at me. He told me that he had noticed the trouble which I was in and offered to lend me his phone. I wanted to express my heartfelt gratitude to him but words got stuck in my throat. Taking the phone he passed to me, I managed to collect myself and plucked up my courage to dial Pierre. After what seemed like an eternity, the phone was picked up. To my great relief, Pierre agreed to postpone the interview.Paragraph 2:The next morning I got to the gallery on time. I was staring at its grandeur when Pierre approached and welcomed me warmly. Several minutes later, with trembling hands I opened my art case and showed him my paintings one by one. Pierre fixed his eyes on my works with interest, listening to me attentively. Time ticking by, I grew more and more confident and excited. He loved my works! They were scheduled to be exhibited one month later! I was never more certain that what seems far beyond is simply a leap away if you dare to give it a try.【解析】【导语】本文以故事发展为线索展开，讲述在赶往面试的路上，作者因没赶上火车而沮丧。 更让作者失望的是，他不知道画廊老板皮埃尔是否会对他的画感兴趣，给他展出的机会。当 作者鼓足勇气给皮埃尔打电话时，却发现手机坏了。这时，一位老人走过来把手机借给作者。 让作者欣慰的是，皮埃尔同意推迟面试。在第二天的面试中，皮埃尔表示对作者的画很感兴 趣，并计划一个月后让作者展出。【详解】1段落续写：由第一段首句内容“突然，我感到有人碰了碰我的肩膀。”可知，第一段可描写一位陌生 人借给作者手机，作者联系.上皮埃尔，皮埃尔同意推迟面试。由第二段首句内容“第二天早上我准时到了画廊。”可知，第二段可描写作者向皮埃尔展 示他的作品，皮埃尔表示对作者的画感兴趣，并计划一个月后让作者展出。2.续写线索：陌生人帮助一一联系上画廊老板一一同意推迟面试一一参加面试、取得成功 3.词汇激活行为类推迟：postpone/put off到达：gel to/reach/arrive at流逝：tick by/pass/go by 情绪类感谢：express my gratitude /show my appreciation /be grateful激动的：excited/tlirilled 【点睛】高分句型 1 He told me that he had noticed the trouble which I was in and offered to lend me his phone.（由关系代词which引导的限制性定语从句）高分句型 2 Time ticking by, I grew more and more confident and exci（ed.（time ticking by 是“主 语+现在分词”构成的独立主格）高分句型 3 I was never more certain that what seems far beyond is simply a leap away if you dare to give it a try.（由what引导的主语从句和i引导的条件状语从句）【2023 山西临汾一模】When I was young, the kitchen had an invisiblestop" sign put there by my mom. "No, you cannot enter here!” she always said to me. Well, I really don't blame her as it is no place for kids.I was just left outside in admiration, looking at what wonders the kitchen held. A few years passed by and I became very interested in food, both eating and preparing it. However, the kitchen was still out of bounds so I couldn't experiment with cooking. But they couldn't stop me forever now, could they?It was early morning. Mom had gone for grocery shopping and no one else was at home. Time to strike! 1 walked through the dining room and there was the kitchen in front of me!I stepped inside and took in the sight in front of me-cabinets （储臧柜 ）lining a wall, the oven （炉子）occupying the central place of another wall, the dishes sparkling like diamonds. I had seen it from outside but this time it was up close. As I hadn't had breakfast, I decided to begin iny first experience as a cook by making an omelette （煎蛋）.Sure I had seen Mom do it, so how could it be hard?I searched the cabinets and finally found some eggs and onions. I knew the basics, so I began the work. I washed an onion first and then chopped it. Then came the egg. It took me two or three attempts to crack one open and into the bowl. I put the onion and some salt in the bowl too and mixed them. After that, I lighted the stove and put the frying pan on it and poured some oil in it. and poured some on the floor too, accidentally, of course! Till the pouring of the mixture into the pan, everything was going perfect-then I wondered what was used for turning the egg upside down in the pan. 注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右；.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Soon, I was running all over the kitchen, searching for the cooking spoon.While I was busy taking the burnt egg out in a plate, someone came up behind me.【答案】Soon. I was ruiiniiiR all over the kitchen, searching for the cooking spoon. I opened all the drawers but there was no sign of the spoon anywhere. Just as I was at a loss for what to do, I looked up and happened to find it hanging high up on the wall. Standing on a chair, I took down the spoon and made a rush to turn over the omelette. I managed to do that without breaking it or dropping it on the floor only to see a very nicely browned, or rather burnt, side up!Whi加 I was busy taking the burnt eur out in a plate, someone came up behind me. It was Mom. I froze with fear. She was angry at seeing the kitchen in a mess, the drawers all open, and some oil on the floor. She found a fit punishment for me-i was to eat the burnt omelette. Sitting on the table and eating the omelette, I realized cooking was not so easy as it appeared. But I was happy with my accomplishment, even if it was a bit burnt, and even happier when Mom told me she would teach me how to cook!【解析】【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者小的时候，妈妈不让他进厨房。作者对厨房感 到好奇。一天，妈妈去杂货店买东西了，家里一个人也没有。作者没有吃早饭，决定开始自 己的第一次经历作为一个厨师做了一份煎蛋。作者找到一些鸡蛋和洋葱，点燃了炉子开始煎 蛋的故事。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“很快。我在厨房里跑来跑去，找烹饪用的勺子。”可知，第一段可描 写作者找到烹饪用的勺子的经过。由第二段首句内容“当我正忙着从盘子里拿出烧焦的鸡蛋时，有人从我身后走来。”可知， 第二段可描写作者妈妈看到作者在厨房所发生事情。2 .续写线索:好奇一一发现机会一一做煎蛋一一找食材一一点燃炉子一一找勺子一一妈妈发 现教做饭.词汇激活行为类.冲过去：make a rush to/ rush to .意识到：realize/be aware of情绪类 .害怕:fear/fright.生气的：angry / cross点睛高分句型 1. Standing on a chair, I took down the spoon and made a rush to turn over the omelette.（由现在分词作状语）高分句型 2J. I managed to do that without breaking it or dropping it on the floor only to see a very nicely browned, or rather burnt, side up!（由不定式作结果状语）高分句型 3. Sitting on the table and eating the omelette. I realized cooking was not so easy as it appeared.（省略连接代词that引导的宾语从句）【2023 安徽合肥一模】Sam, Wayne and Tim were three men in their 60s, jamming in the same dusty old garage where they used to play music when they were in high school. They chatted up after ages, remembering the school days when they would take to the stage and play together as a band.Wayne looked around, wide-eyed. uIt's been more than 40 years since we practised here.”“Yes! And remember how wc promised to keep in touch and play together once a week?” Tim laughed. uSam, remember our brilliant plans?,“Ah yes! We thought we were inseparable! Now, look at us! Old and wrinkled, joints hurting, meeting at each other's grandkids' weddings. we're terrible at keeping in touch, except Will, of course. He was always calling and messaging. Where is Will? He's the guy who planned ihis,“ Sam smiled.Just then, the three men's phones buzzed （嗡嗡地响），and the message they received made their hearts sink. It was a message from Jenny, Will's wife. Wayne rushed to his car, and the others followed. A short drive later, the three men knocked on the door of WilTs house and tried to wait patiently.Jenny looked almost unrecognizably pale and （old them that Will was taking a nap. The medicines made him all weak. It moved the three men to tears to see their fourth band member in such poor health.And that day, they found out the whole story of Will's illness. Will's heart condition was serious, and it had been worsening over the past few months. The doctor said only a surgery could help. But it was going to cost at least $15,000. And after all the previous treatments, Will and Jenny didn't have that kind of money anymore. Jenny said the doctors had given Will 6 months, bursting into helpless tears. The three men comforted her and wiped their own tears. "Money isn't an issue J Sam said as an idea came to him.注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右；.请按如卜.格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。The next day the three men brought their instruments to the busy street coi ner.Will was finally admitted to hospital three months later.答案The next day the three men brought their instruments to the busy street corner. They set up t