专题08++励志故事（人与社会)-2022-2023学年新高考高一读后续写热点话题写作技巧.docx

专题01励志故事（人与社会）新高考高一读后续写热点话题写作技巧【读后续写】.（江苏省淮安市2022-2023学年高一下学期期末调研测试英语试题）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。I Owe You ThanksMrs. Crawley, a large woman, often worked into night at a hotel beauty-shop. She was walking alone with a large heavy back-pack at about eleven o'clock one night when a boy named Jack ran up behind her and tried to snatch （抢夺）her pack.The pack's strap （带子）broke. The boy's weight and the weight of the pack combined cased him to lose his balance, so Jack fell on his back on the sidewalk. Mrs. Crawley simply turned around and picked the boy up by his shirt front.The woman did not release Jack. 'Tm very sorry, lady, Tm sorry,“ he whispered in an embarrassed （尴尬的） voice.Mrs. Crawley said, looking at his face, "Now I got a great mind to wash your face. It's dirty! Did you have nobody home to tell you to wash your face?''“No, Ma'am J said Jack.“Then it will get washed this evening,M said Mrs. Crawley starting up the street dragging Jack behind her. “You ought to be my son. I would teach you right from wrong. Least I can do right now is to wash your face. Are you hungry?“Yes, Ma'am," said the being dragged boy.When getting to her door, Mrs. Crawley draggc Jack inside.“You go to that sink and wash your face, and I'm going to fix us something to eat. You're hungry or been hungry 一 to try to snatch my pack.M said the woman, turning Jack loose. He went to the sink.Frankic-Rac is such a smiley happy little girl that she brings hope to all that meet her. She relies on special equipment on her legs to support them and it is hard for her, but she never gives up practising. Although she can only say “Mum" and “Dad”, she understands everything the others say. She's a very determined little girl, who loves music and loves nothing more than waving to the music at the dance studio. With her determination, she will continue to surprise the world!【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了 Frankie-Rae Hockney的第一次让她的母亲高兴地哭了，因为她出 生时就患有一种罕见的染色体异常，所以她的未来有很多不确定因素，她的妈妈是一位舞蹈老师，当她想 到Frankie-Rae Hockney永远不能成为其中的一员时，她感到很伤心，Frankie-Rae Hockney积极进行治疗， 卡特信托基金为她提供了一辆特殊的婴儿车，她姐姐想出为帮助他们的慈善机构筹款的主意。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“然而，Frankie-Rae Hockney的颤颤巍巍的舞步给人们带来了最大的启发。”可知，第 一段可描写她的家人是如何筹款的。由第二段首句内容“Frankie-Rae Hockney是一个笑容灿烂、快乐的小女孩，她给所有见到她的人带来了希 望。”可知，第二段可描写Frankie-Rae Hockney的可贵的品质以及对人的影响。1 .续写线索：建立网页发帖为她加油筹到钱从不放弃震惊世界.词汇激活行为类建立：set up/build up筹集：raise/collect使惊讶：surprise/shock情绪类急切的：be anxious/be eager有决心的：be determined/be resolved【点睛】高分句型 1 Mary set up a page for her, introducing her and those who have the specially rare disease.（由关系代 词who引导的限制性定语从句）高分右J型 2 She's a very determined little girl, who loves music and loves nothing more than waving to the music at the dance studio.（由关系代词who引导的限制性定语从句）5.（辽宁省大连市2022-2023学年高一下学期期末考试英语试题）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。The Difference a Teacher Can MakeSteve, a twelve-year-old boy with alcoholic parents, was about to be lost forever by the U.S. education system. Remarkably, he could read, yet, he was failing. He had been failing since first grade. Though Steve looked bigger than his age, yet he went unnoticed. until Miss White.Miss White was a smiling, young, beautiful lady! Steve liked his new teacher; yet, still he failed. He never did his homework. Whenever he was punished for failing to turn in his homework, he felt just terrible! Still, he did not study.Last week, the entire seventh grade was tested for basic skills. Steve hurried through his tests, and continued to dream of other things. His heart was not in school, but in the woods, where he often stayed alone after school. He was always alone because no one cared. Oddly, Steve never missed a day of school.One day, Miss White's impatient voice broke into his daydreams.“Sieve!” Shocked, he turned to look at her.“Pay attention!” Miss White began to go over the test results fbr the seventh grade. "You all did pretty well, she told the class, “except fbr one boy, and it breaks my heart to tell you this, She hesitated, pinning Steve to his scat with a sharp stare. "The smartest boy in the seventh grade is failing my class!” She just stared at Steve, as the class turned around for a good look. Steve dropped his eyes and carefully examined his fingertips.44Just try it! ONE WEEK!” He was unmoved.“You're smart enough! You'll see a change, Nothing changed him.“Give yourself a chance! Don't give up on your Nothing.“Steve! Please! I care about you!”注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右。2 .请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Wow! Suddenly, Steve got it: someone cared about him!The following Monday, Miss White gave another test.答案One possible version:Wow! Suddenly. Steve it: someone cared about him! He couldn't believe his ears. He looked up at Miss White in wonder. From her eager eyes, he could feel the warmth and the real care. On the way back home, those words constantly echoed in his mind. When he got home, fbr the first time in his life, he didn't stomi out of the room fbr the woods. He seated himself before the desk and placed his schoolbooks on it. Determined, he turned the first page open.The following Monday. Miss White gave another lest. Spreading the paper carefully on his desk, Steve hurried through the test and was the first to hand in his paper. Obviously puzzled, Miss White began to look it over. In shock, she glanced up at Steve, then down, then up. Suddenly, her face broke into a bright smile. "The smartest boy had just passed his first test!" she announced, proud and excited! At her words, Steve cracked a big smile, with his eyes sparkling with joy and gratitude. He knew that was all because of a teacher who cared about him【导语】本文讲述12岁的Sieve,父母都是酒鬼，他的成绩一直不及格。在一次七年级测试中，While老师 说他是最聪明的男孩但是成绩却不及格。随后White老师对他进行鼓励和关心，让他感受到了温暖和真切 的关怀，于是用功学习，终于在下一次考试中及格了。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“哇！突然，史蒂夫明白了：有人关心他！ ”可知，第一段描述Steve在感受到White老 师深切的关怀后的一系列心理变化和他在回家后的行为，他开始认真写作业了。由第二段首句内容“接下来的星期一，怀特小姐做了另一次测试。”可知，第二段描述Steve测试的过程和 结果，他通过了他的第一次考试。2 .续写线索：Steve的心理变化Steve回家Steve写作业Steve做测验Steve第一次及格Steve的喜悦和感激3 .词汇激活行为类.回家：get home/return home/ go back home.冲出：slonn out/rush out交卷：hand in paper/submil paper情绪类.困惑：puzzled/confused.震惊地：In shock/astonishingly【点睛】高分句型!. Steve hurried through the test and was the first to hand in his paper.（运用了不定式作后置定语）高分句型 2. He knew that was all because of a teacher who cared about him.（运用了 who 引导的限定性定语从 句）6.（山东省济宁市2022-2023学年高一下学期期末考试英语试题）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。The AceBillie Jean was always full of energy and played as well as she could. One teacher suggested she should be more 'ladylike' and try not to win all the time, but her parents didn't agree.“Play as well as you can and be the best you can be!” they told her.One morning, Billie Jean's friend Susan tapped her on the shoulder during class.“Do you want to play tennis?"What's tennis? Billie Jean whispered back.It's a fun game. YouHl love it you get to run and jump and hit a ball with a racket （球拍）！Billie Jean didn't know what a 4racket, was, but tennis sounded exciting!The next weekend. Susan took Billie Jean to a famous club the Country Club. Then Susan handed her astrange thing looking like a net. "This is a racket. You hit a ball with it!Susan threw a yellow ball at her. Billie Jean frowned and waved her racket as hard as she could. She spent more time hitting the air than she did hitting the ball, but she loved playing tennis anyway! It seemed that she found out what she was going to do with her life she wanted to be an ace （最佳选手）of tennis in the world! When going home that night, sunburned and exhausted, she had only one question in her mind.“Mom and Dad, can I please have a tennis racket of my own?” Billie Jean asked. Her parents looked at each other/'Money is a bit short,“ her mother said. "But you can save up fbr one!” 注意：1 .续写词数应为100左右；.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。“What can I do to make some money?” Billie Jean thought to herselfWith her beloved racket, Billie Jean decided to practise hard to realize her tennis dream.答案 "What can I do to make some moncy? Billie Jean thought to herself. From that day on, Billie Jean asked her neighbors about any jobs she could do. "Can I sweep your driveway? Or weed your garden?” She put all the money she earned in ajar, and it slowly filled up. Finally, the big day came: with enough money, Billie Jean brought a little wooden racket with a puiple grip it was the most beautiful thing she had ever seen.With her beloved racket. Billie Jean decided to practise hard to realize her tennis dream. She practised hard after school every day. Joining the Country Club and getting professional coach contributed to her great progress. Gradually, she mastered basic rules of the game. The more Billie Jean learned, （he more fun she had! She always took her parents5 words to heart and always played as well as she could. Billie Jean made it! She entered tennis tournaments and became an ACE of the game one of the most famous sports legends ever!【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了 Billie Jean总是精力充沛，一位老师建议她更“淑女”些，但是父母 告诉她要尽自己所能，做到最好，她的朋友Susan带她第一次去打网球，她很喜欢，想成为世界上的网球高 手，回家后她告诉父母想要买一个网球拍，妈妈告诉她钱不够，但是可以攒钱买一个。【详解】1 .段落续写：由第一段首句内容'“我能做些什么来赚钱呢?'Billie Jean心想。”可知，第一段可描写Billie Jean通过各种 办法攒钱买下网球拍。由第二段首句内容“带着她心爱的球拍，Billie Jean决定努力练习，实现她的网球梦想。”可知，第二段可 描写Billie Jean刻苦练习，最终成为网球锦标赛的王牌选手，成为有史以来最著名的体育传奇之一。2.续写线索：打听可以赚钱的工作努力工作买下球拍刻苦训练逐渐掌握要领取得成功 3.词汇激活行为类询问：ask/enquire放置：put/place牢记在心：take. to heart/learn. by heart情绪类乐趣：fun/pleasure【点睛】高分句型 1. She pul all the money she earned in ajar, and it slowly filled up.（省略关系代词的限制性定语从 句）高分句型 2. Joining the Country Club and getting professional coach contributed to her great progress.（由并列 的动名词短语作主语）7.（湖北省部分市州2022-2023学年高一下学期7月联合期末调研考试英语试题） 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Poor Jack lost his sight at the age of six after a car accident. He was cornered in his dark world. An already terrible life now looked completely hopeless. His mother tried to encourage him, but nothing she said could help him at all.Later Jack did nothing but lie in bed, sighing all day. His mother felt miserable, telling him to live with his disability, work hard and change his life on his own. She said, “Son, since you have lost your sight and nothing can change that, you have to accept it. There arc things you can't do. But there arc lots of things you can do. You have a creative mind. Find something you enjoy and stick with it, no matter what.”The fiiture didn't seem too bright fbr a blind child from the countryside. But as this young boy thought about his mother's words, about what he really wanted to do with his life, he dreamed of becoming a star. So as a child, he would practice playing the piano and singing each day from then on.Once one of his classmates heard him practicing at school and told him, uYou can't play the piano, and you can't sing either. These things are meaningless fbr you. You are doomed to be a loser/, 注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右；.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。That classmate's comment was like a sharp knife, cutting Jack's heart into pieces.In his life, he received countless awards for his music.【答案】Possible version:That classmate's comment was like a sharp knifb, cutting Jack's heart into pieces. For several days, he was in low spirits. uShould 1 give my dream up or stick to it?” he thought. All these days, his mother's words lingered in his mind. "Nothing can get in the way of my dreams,M said the determined boy. From then on, he was determined to become a star and remained focused on his goal. Hard as it was, he was willing to accept the challenge and make more efforts. Finally his hard work paid off.In his life, he received countless awardsor his music. His excellent musical style has had a lasting effect on all forms of popular music in the past ten years. The people who had looked down upon him before felt extremely surprised. When asked how he made it, he owed it to his mother. It was his mother's words that encouraged him in those confusing days. He wouldn't listen to the negative words in his life and rcfiiscd to stop. Determination and optimism arc what it takes to overcome his weakness and accomplish his goal.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了杰克在一场车祸后在六岁时失明了，在母亲的鼓励下杰克梦想成 为一名明星。所以从那时起，他每天都要练习弹钢琴和唱歌。结果，他的一个同学听到他在学校练习，说 这些事对他亳无意义，杰克因此情绪低落。最终因为心里记着母亲的话，他下定决心要成为一名明星，并 一直专注于他的目标，并最终取得了成功。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“那个同学的话就像一把锋利的刀，把杰克的心切成了碎片”可知，第一段可描写夹克听 了同学的话后情绪低落以及下定决心的经过。由第二段首句内容“在他的一生中，他获得了无数的音乐奖项。”可知，第二段可描写杰克取得的成就和感 悟。2 .续写线索：情绪低落想起母亲的话一坚定决心一取得成功感悟.词汇激活行为类评价：comment / judge集中：focus on/ concentrate on回报:pay off / repay情绪类无数：countless / innumerable惊讶：surprised /astonished【点睛】高分句型 1 Hard as it was, he was willing to accept the challenge and make more efforts.（运用 了部分倒装） 高分句型 2 When asked how he made it, he owed it to his mother.（运用 了状语从句的省略）8. （2022年新高考全国一卷英语真题）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Il was the day of the big cross-country run. Students from seven different primary schools in and around the small town were wanning up and walking the route（路线）lhrough thick evergreen forest.I looked around and finally spotted David, who was standing by himself off to the side by a fence. He was small fbr ten years old. His usual big toothy smile was absent today. I walked over and asked him why he wasn't with the other children. He hesitated and then said he had decided not to run.What was wrong? He had worked so hard for this event!I quickly searched the crowd fbr the school's coach and asked him what had happened. wI was afraid that kids from other schools would laugh at he explained uncomfortably. U1 gave him the choice to run or not, and let him decide.”I bit back my frustration（懊恼）.I knew the coach meant wellhe thought he was doing the right thing. After making sure that David could run if he wanted. I turned to find him coming towards me, his small body rocking from side to side as he swung his feet forward.David had a brain disease which prevented him from walking or running like other children, but at school his classmates thought of him as a regular kid. He always participated to the best of his ability in whatever they were doing. That was why none of the children thought it unusual that David had decided to join the cross-country team. It just took him longerthat's all. David had not missed a single practice, and although he always finished his run long after the other children, he did always finish. As a special education teacher at the school, I was familiar with the challenges David faced and was proud of his strong determination. 注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右；.请按如下格式在答题卜的相应位置作答.We sat down next to each other, but David wouldift look at me.I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners.【答案】 We sal down nexl lo each other, but David wouldn't look al me. I said gently and quietly, uNo one can change your mind, except yourself. If you desire to challenge yourself, there is nothing to do with others' thoughts.” He sat sti