专题10 书面表达（甲、乙卷模式）2022年英语二轮复习讲练测 -讲案（含答案解析）.docx

2022年高三二轮复习英语精品资料【讲】专题10书面表达(甲、乙卷模式)【构建知识体系】基础写作考点1记叙文型书面表达考点2应用文型书面表达考点3说明文型书面表达考点4议论文型书面表达【考纲解读】考试大纲要求考纲解读根据提示进行书面表 达。考生应能：(1)准确使用语法和 词汇；(2)使用一定的句 型、词汇，清楚、连贯地 表达自己的思想。要求考生根据所给 情景，用英语写一 篇100个单词左右 的短文。情景包括 目的、对象、时间、 地点、内容等；提 供情景的形式有图 画、图表、提纲等。书面表达的评分标准：1.信息内容的完整性 (Completeness)； 2,信息内容的连贯性(Coherence) ；3.句子结构的正确性(Correctness)； 4.句子结构的复 杂性(Variety)。【剖析全国高考真题】 预测高考命题方向书面表达2022年命题解读和近年考点再现L 2021 .全国甲卷假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会,并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外 国朋友Chris,向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括：1 .阐明写信事由；2 .征求建议；3 .表示感谢。注意：1 .词数100左右；【思路点拨】无论是在学校还是今后读大学再到走上工作岗位，写好一份申请都是你必不可少的一项技 能。这种形式的写作，学生需结合自身优势，考生成文时应注意：1.要点要齐全：（1）提出写信的目的申请做这个志愿者；（2）提出个人优势；（3） 表达出自己能做的事情；2.时态：以一般现在时为主；3.人称：第二人称为主；4.注意恰当使用一些连词, 使文章自然、流畅；5.适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。【参考范文】Dear Sir or Madam,I am Li Hua, a 17-year-old teenager studying in London. Learning that a volunteer is needed for an exhibition of Chinese traditional painting , I am writing to apply for it.I have some advantages for the job. First of all, having lived in China for years and learnt English since I was a child , I have a good command of both English and Chinese, which is beneficial when introducing Chinese paintings to foreign friends. Besides, because of my familiarity with Chinese painting culture, I can get foreigners and the locals to know more about it. Last but not least, through my efforts, I believe, I can strengthen the friendship between China and England.I would appreciate it if this wonderful chance would be offered to me. Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,LiHua7.【2019全国n】假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛，内容 包括：1 .比赛信息；.赛前准备；.表达期待。注意：1 .词数100左右；.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【解析】本文要求给你的队友Chris写一封邮件，告知他关于近期参加排球比赛的情况。邮件的主要内 容包括：1.比赛信息；2.赛前准备；3.表达期待。1 .考生在写作的时候，要注意：由于书面表达开放性很强，只为考生提供了一个笼统的写作提纲，因此 首先，要在邮件的开始点明排球比赛的具体信息，可以自己增加一些内容等。其次，写明比赛的赛前准备 等。另外，在邮件中最后表达自己的期望等。2 .时态：以一般将来时为主；3.人称：第一人称；4.注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅。5.适 当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。同时要灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。 语言力求准确、简洁。【参考范文】Dear Chris,I'm writing to let you know that we will have a volleyball match next month. The match will take place in our school gym on the morning of July 8lh. We will play against a team from Chao Yang High school. For good performance in the match, we must get fully prepared and practice hard. So starting morning, we all need to train for two hours after school every day. In addition, we should avoid getting hurt during the training and have a healthy diet to keep fit.You're an excellent player. With you on the team, we have every hope of beating another team. Let's try hard together.Sincerely,Li Hua 8.12019全国ni】假定你是李华，你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加，内容包 括：1 .时间；.活动安排；.欢迎他表演节目。 注意：1 .词数100左右；.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【解析】随着网络的发展，写电子邮件是中学生经常与朋友沟通的一种方式，这种形式的写作贴近学生生活，使 他们感到熟悉。考生成文时应注意：1.要点要齐全：（1）音乐节的时间活动的安排欢迎朋友表演一个节目2.时态： 以一般将来时和一般现在时为主；3.人称：第二人称为主；4.注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅; 5.适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。【参考范文】Dear Alien,I am writing to invite you to attend the Music Festival to be held from 8： 00 a. m .to 5： 00 p.m. next Sunday in my school.In order to enrich our after-class life, our school is to organize this festival, which is intended to promote Chinese traditional folk music as well as enjoy foreign ones. Not only will you appreciate wonderful folk music items like performances of Erhu and Guzheng, but also you can give a performance to us in person. I hope you can play the piano or sing an English song for us.Looking forward to your coming. I promise it will be a feast for your eyes and ears.Best wishes!Yours sincerely,【高考预测】纵观近几年全国高考试题，预测2022年全国高考试题还会题材贴近考生的学习和生活。历年来全国高考书面表达的题材都非常贴近考生的学习生活，如：就暑假 赴英学习英语向招生大学询问有关情况、邀请外教一起去敬老院陪老人过重阳节、畅想十年后的自己等。写作的体裁主要是应用文。命题形式多为文字提示或文字+图表，以书信为主。利用英语讲好中国故事，宣传中国文化，增强文化自信是未来命题的重要方向。高考评价体系特别重视劳动在日常生活中的重要作用，强调在劳动中体会奋斗的喜悦。【精讲研法】 课堂讲解突破核心考点考点一记叙文型书面表达【例】【山西省长治市第二中学校2022届高中毕业班第三次考试】为了增强学生的劳动意识，你校组织学生改造了校园内的一处废弃花园。请你就此给校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：1 .活动时间与地点；.活动内容（除草、种花等）；.活动的意义。注意：1.词数1。0左右；.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。答案One possible version!To improve students' awareness of manual labor, our school launched an activity to rebuild a deserted garden on campus last Friday. Over 60 students from each class took an active part in the activity, some weeding the flower beds, some sowing seeds and others watering the garden. Our school will set aside some areas that have not been used for some time and make them suitable for students to experience different forms of labor in the future. The project offers students an opportunity to connect with the natural world and respect life.【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一则关于学校劳动活动的报道。1 .词汇积累积极参力口 ： take an active part in一 participate in actively适合的：suitable 一 proper/appropriate 机会：opportunity 一 chance联系：connect with 一 have a connection with2 .句式拓展同义句转换原句：To improve students' awareness of manual labor, our school launched an activity to rebuild a deserted gardenon campus last Friday.拓展句： Aiming to improve students9 awareness of manual labor, our school launched an activity to rebuild a deserted garden on campus last Friday.【点睛】高分句型 1 Over 60 students from each class took an active part in the activity, some weeding the flower beds, some sowing seeds and others watering the garden.(运用 了 独立主格结构作方式状语)高分句型 2 Our school will set aside some areas that have not been used for some time and make them suitable for students to experience different forms of labor in the future.(运用 了 that 引导限制性定语从句)规律方法1：记叙文型书面表达记叙文是以叙述为主要表达方式，以写人物的经历和事物发展变化为主要内容的一种文体，包括记人、 记事方面的故事、日记、游记、新闻、通讯等。记叙文通常要将时间、地点、人物、事件、原因和结果这 六个要素交代清楚。通常使用第一人称或第三人称来写，第一人称主要用于写自传或本人的经历，第三人 称用于写他人的经历或事迹。写作时要注意以下几点：(1)注意不要漏掉信息点，但也不要为了生动而随意添加信息。(2)信息点的表述不一定完全按照题目所给的顺序，可能要适当重组。要特别注意故事发展的线索和时 间顺序等。(3)记叙文写作的时态多数用一般过去时，但也要注意灵活运用其他时态。(4)高考中记叙文的话题通常是与中学生的生活阅历有关，如校园生活、旅游、交通、交友等，因此平 时要注意积累这些方面的词汇。【变式精练】【吉林省长春市2022届高三质量监测(一)】你校正在组织英语作文比赛，请以A role model to learn from 为题，写一篇短文参赛。1 .榜样的优秀品质；.获得的启示。注意：1.词数1。0左右；.题目已为你写好。A role model to learn from【答案】A role model to learn fromA role model for me to learn from is Tu Youyou, a researcher in medicine, who has a positive influence on my growth.I read about her winning the Nobel Prize in a magazine, which was inspiring to me. What impressed me most was that she and the team examined over 2000 old medical texts and 280, 000 plants. Having failed numerous times, they finally succeeded. Later, they even tested on themselves to make sure of safety!I am so moved by her scientific spirit that I am determined to brave the challenges and try different ways to solve my problems. I learn from her that only with devotion and persistence can I overcome difficulties and make a contribution to the society.【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以Arole model to learn from为题，写一篇短文参加学校正在组织的英 语作文比赛。1 .词汇积累影响：effect一influence大量的：plenty ofnumerous感动：touch一move决心做某事： make up one's mind= be determined to.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句： Later, they even tested on themselves to make sure of safety!拓展句：Later, what is astonishing is that they even tested on themselves to make sure of safety!【点睛】高分句型 1 I read about her winning the Nobel Prize in a magazine, which was inspiring to me.（运用 了 which 弓| 导的非限制性定语从句）高分句型 2 I am so moved by her scientific spirit that I am determined to brave the challenges and try different ways to solve my problems.（运用 了 so.that.句式） 考点二说明文型基础写作【例】【2022届吉林省白山市高三一模】假定你是李华，今年你就要步入大学了。你的英语老师让你们写一篇关于大学生活的作文。请你以“How to Spend My University Life”为题写一篇作文，内容包括：1 .你想要什么样的大学生活；.具体的计划。注意：1 .词数100左右；.短文题目已为你写好。答案One possible version:How to Spend My University LifeBy this September, I shall have been a college student, which makes me thrilled and a little nervous. What I want is to spend a fruitful university life. Accordingly, I have drawn up the following plans.Firstly, I am supposed to learn to be independent, especially in study. Secondly, setting aside some time for my hobbies is of equal importance. Finally, I will make many friends, through which I am capable of fostering my communicative ability.In a nutshell, I have been prepared for my life in university and I firmly believe that it will be delightful and fruitful.【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇题目为“How to Spend My University Life”文章。1 .词汇积累激动的：thrilled- very excited 因 此:accordingly一consequently 制定：draw up一work out有能力做某事：be capable of-be able to.句式拓展同义句转化原句： What I want is to spend a fruitful university life. 拓展句：All I want is to spend a fruitful university life.【高分句型 1 By this September, I shall have been a college student, which makes me thrilled and a little nervous. (运用了 which引导的非限制性定语从句)【高分句型 2 Secondly, setting aside some time for my hobbies is of equal importance.(运用 了 动名词作主语)【高分句型 3 Finally, I will make many friends, through which I am capable of fostering my communicative ability.(运用了介词+关系代词引导定语从句)规律方法2：说明文型基础写作说明文是用简洁的文字介绍事物的特性、构造、变化、结果的文章。高考中，说明文常见的话题有： 产品介绍、地点描述、方位描写、变化分析、购物指南和操作说明等。近几年的说明文主要是即时性的说 明文。写这类文章需注意以下几点：(1)首先要读题审题，弄清需要介绍的内容，把握信息要点，不可遗漏也不能添加。(2)写作内容要条理清楚、层次分明。说明科技方面的内容常用定义法、比较对比法、分类法和因果法 等；说明自然环境方面的内容常用时空次序法和分类法等。(3)时态常用一般现在时，若是介绍其历史，要用一般过去时；语态可能用到被动语态；若是介绍地 点环境等，要善于运用there be结构。【变式精练】【2022届四川省成都市第七中学高三下学期二模】在刚刚结束的2022年北京冬奥会上，中国冬奥健儿取得 佳绩。某英文报开设了“我最喜爱的中国运动员”专栏。请用英语写一篇短文投稿，介绍你最喜爱的中国运动员。1 .该运动员的基本信息：2 .该运动员的主要成绩.你喜欢他/她的原因。注意：1 .词数1。左右；2,可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【答案】 There are many sports stars at home and abroad, and my favorite sports star is Sun Yang.Sun Yang, born in Hangzhou on Dec 1, 1991, is a Chinese swimming star, who we Chinese are proud of.Besides winning two gold medals in London Olympic Games, he also won the third place in the men's 4x200 meters freestyle relay in the Barcelona World Championships. Whafs more, Sun Yang was awarded the best male swimmer of 2013 World Championships, becoming the first Asian swimmer to win such an award in history.It's his persistence and determination to fulfill his dreams in the field of swimming that inspires me to work hard consistently and have a passion fbr him. From the bottom of my heart, I'm crazy about him.【解析 1这是一篇应用文。要求考生以“我最喜爱的中国运动员”为题，向某英文报投稿，介绍自己最喜爱的 中国运动员。1 .词汇积累：许多： many一a variety of对感到自豪：be proud of-take pride in实现：fulfill-achieve激励，鼓舞：inspire-encourage2,句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：There are many sports stars at home and abroad, and my favorite sports star is Sun Yang.拓展句：There are many sports stars at home and abroad, among whom Sun Yang is my favorite.高分句型1Sun Yang, born in Hangzhou on Dec 1, 1991, is a Chinese swimming star, who we Chinese are proud of.（运用 了 who引导的非限制性定语从句）高分句型2It's his persistence and detennination to fulfill his dreams in the field of swimming that inspires me to work hard consistently and have a passion for him.（运用 了 强调句） 考点三应用文型书面表达【例】【2022届安徽省江南十校高三下学期3月一模联考】你校正在组织一场英语演讲比赛。请以Value PE classes为主题，自拟标题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：2 .体育课的重要性；.部分学生忽视体育课的现状；.你的建议。注意:1 .词数100左右；.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Hello, everyone!My friends, lets attach great importance to PE classes!【参考范文】Value PE classesHello, everyone! Physical education, one of the five dimensions of education, is an important component of quality education. As a major carrier of PE, PE classes can undoubtedly bring us numerous benefits, such as cultivating physical qualities, strengthening team spirit and deepening the concept of lifelong exercise.Unfortunately, some students ignore PE classes, during which they simply bury themselves in homework or just idle the time away. What a pity!It's high time we valued and actively participated in PE classes. We should not only do physical exercise but learn sports knowledge. Only in this way can we establish good exercising habits and accumulate sports culture, thus laying a solid foundation for lifelong sports and the spread of Chinese culture.My friends, lets attach great importance to PE classes!【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你校正在组织一场英语演讲比赛。请以Value PE classes为主题，自拟 标题写一篇发言稿参赛。1 .词汇积累培养：develop一cultivate部分：part一component打发时间：kill timeidle time away重要性：significance>importance.句式拓展2 ,可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【思路点拨】本文要求写一封邮件，主要考查考生基本的语言表达能力，整体难度不大,属于应用文。写作时应注意:1.要点要齐全:阐明写信事由,简明扼要并导入话题即可;(2)征求建议，这是写作的重点, 要浓墨重彩，态度诚恳;(3)表示感谢2时态:以一般现在时为主3恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅4适 当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文的档次。【参考范文】Dear Chris,In order to spread splendid Chinese culture and display something representative of my country, my school intends to hold a theme class meeting, which is to be posted on an English website later. Now I am in earnest need of your practical advice.It's widely acknowledged that China boasts abundant and unique culture with its long history, ranging from themed exhibitions of artworks and calligraphy to folk dances and local operas. Besides, its tea culture and traditional handicrafts hold worldwide appeal. To add a different flavour and give our culture an international touch, I wonder which ones are most suitable and attractive to you foreign friends? Which ones cater to your desires and gain the most popularity?I am assured that your suggestions will definitely contribute to better promotion of the grace and glamour of our culture. I am looking forward to your earliest reply.Yours,Li Hua2J2021 .全国乙卷【2021 全国高考乙卷】你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Be smart online learners为题写一篇发言稿参赛， 内容包括：1 .分析优势与不足；.提出学习建议。注意：1 .词数100左右；.题目和首句已为你写好。参考范文one possible version:简单句变复合句原句：Physical education, one of the five dimensions of education, is an important component of quality education. 拓展句：Physical education, which is one of the five dimensions of education, is an important component of quality education.高分句型 1 As a major carrier of PE, PE classes can undoubtedly bring us numerous benefits, such as cultivating physical qualities, strengthening team spirit and deepening the concept of lifelong exercise.（运用 了动名词作宾语） 高分句型 2 Only in this way can we establish good exercising habits and accumulate sports culture, thus laying a solid foundation for lifelong sports and the spread of Chinese culture.（运用 了 部分倒装）规律方法3：应用文型基础写作应用文是指在日常生活和工作中为某种具体的实用目的而写的文体，主要有书信、通知、海报、演讲 稿、倡议书、请柬、请假条、便条、日记、启事、祝辞、履历表等。应用文的语言力求平实、准确、简洁。 由于应用文的使用广泛而频繁，其表达的内容结构严谨、易于理解掌握，所以写作时要注意以下几点： 正式的应用文有比较规范的格式，但高考中的基础写作至今尚未考查过格式，只要求准确地表达正文内 容。注意时态，如日记常用过去时态，通知、请柬通常要用将来时态，而履历表用现在时态。应用文的写作往往有一些特定的习惯语句或套话，这些语句在考试中可能会被考查到，所以要重点掌握。【变式精练】【2022届山西省晋中市高三3月一模】假定你是校学生会主席李华，学校将举办以“美丽校园”为主题的短 视频大赛。请你用英文写一篇通知，告知国际班的学生，内容包括：1 .比赛目的和时间；.视频时间和要求；.欢迎参加。注意：1 .词数100左右（格式已给出）；.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Notice【答案】参考范文NoticeIn order to record the beauty of our campus, a short video contest is to be held next Friday.The short video should be related to our campus and school life. Besides, subtitles and music can be added to make it more colorful. All the short videos must be made within three minutes and in MP4 form, which should be uploaded to the campus website by this Sunday. The top ten with the most likes will be rewarded afterwards.We hold the belief that you may display your wonderful talents through this contest. Looking forward to your participation.The Students9 Council【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以校学生会主席李华的身份，用英文写一篇通知，告知国际班的学生 学校将举办