校园生活篇公开课.docx
Passage 1高分示范-校园生活篇阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Mo was waiting in the Mo was waiting in the corridor outside her class. She was feeling sick. She had two exams that day and physics was first .She really hated physics. It was her worst subject. Terry Looked back at her from the front of the line, and then looked away quickly. Mo thought she looked guilty. She didn't have a problem with physics she didn't have a problem with anything .Miss Perfect!"Hi, Mo, it's your favorite exam today, "said Nima, laughing as she joined the line .Terry was looking at Mo again. "So what's wrong with her?” asked Nima."l thought you were friends." “Yes, so did I," said Mo." But she hasn't spoken to me for two weeks now. She promised to help me review for the physics exam too, but then she's ignored all my calls and texts .And when I rang her house, her mum just told me she was busy. She's forgotten who her friends are!" said Mo angrily. "Are you listening to me?" Mr. Reed was talking to the class and the other students were going into the exam room. Mo gave Nima a worried look and followed them.Mo couldn't answer question number five. She looked up and saw Terry sitting two rows in front of her. Mo couldn't believe it! Terry was holding her phone on her knee under the table and reading from it. Is that how Terry always got such good grades? She felt really angry at Terry, but she didn't know what to do. She thought about t e 11 i n r the teacher, but what would everyone else think of her? "Stop writing and put your pens down" said Mr. Reed as he started to collect the exam papers. Oh no, Mo hadn't answered two of the questions. She was going to fail again!Mo wanted to talk to Terry at lunch time, but she couldn't find her anywhere. The next exam was history. That was Mo's favourite subject but she wasn't feeling good. Mo went to the library to study, but she couldn't concentrate. She didn't know what to do about Terry. She thought about telling a teacher, but everyone would hate her if she did that. "It wasn't fair!” she thought. "Terry was getting good grades by chouting all that time. " thought Mo. Just then, Mr. Reed walked past her table. " Mr. Reed. ”Mo was sitting behind Terry again in the history exam that afternoon. Mo was feeling terrible. Why had she told Mr. Reed? But it was too late now. And anyway, Terry didn't want to be her friend! Mr. Reed wanted her to look at him and nod if she saw that Terry was cheating in the exam.注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150词左右；.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；2 .续写局部分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:She was working on the last question when she saw that Terry had her phone under the tableParagraph 2:Mo was walking towards the school gate, when she heard footsteps behind her.Stepl:解题思路体裁：记叙文时态：一般过去时原文核心内容解读：Mo和Terry是一对好朋友，Mo不擅长物理，Terry原本容许Mo 帮她辅导，但是连续两个星期，Terry都不接M。的 也不回她的短信。M。认为Terry已 经忘了她这个朋友。当M。在考试时发现Terry看手机时，她内心纠结、矛盾，最后她准备 报告老师，我们将续写她即将报告老师之后的情节。Step2:文章脉络When: when having examsWhere: in the exam roomWho： Mo, Terry, Mr.ReedWhat: Terry looked at her phone during the examStep3：写作思路思路一：M。在一番纠结之后告诉老师，结果Terry被老师证明真的作弊了。两个人友 谊的小船说翻就翻。一个学期的冷战后，Terry懂得了 M。这么做是为了她好。两个人和好 如初，一起努力进步。思路二：M。在一番就纠结之后告诉了老师，Terry被叫出了考场，M。的心里很不安。 放学后，Terry找到了 Mo,跟她解释了自己不理她的原因-她父亲生病了。并且今天有一场 十分重要的手术，所以她不顾考场纪律看手机，就是想知道父亲的情况。最终两个人和好如 初。我们选择第二条思路：因为它的情节出乎意料又在情理之中，使文章跌宕起伏，增强文 章可续性。高分范文（陈梦梦）
