Unit 1 People of Achievement 单元话题写作—介绍伟大人物讲义---高中英语人教版（2019）选择性必修第一册.docx

伟大人物介绍写作指导选择性必修一 Unitl People of Achievement单元话题【写作攻略】1.审题：根据题目要求不同分为两类1）指定人物的介绍。题目中会提供一些基本信息供选择使用。2）自选人物进行介绍。2 .时态的选择：对于人物的成就和贡献应使用一般过去时，人物对自己的影响用一般 现在时态。3 .注意1）事实细节的罗列应注重内在联系和适当的过渡。不能是零散信息的简单堆砌。2）防止句式单一3）人物的品格成就应重点突出，可将其贡献对自己的影响联系起来。不必面面俱 到4）词汇的选用尽量精确，不泛泛而谈，特别是形容词，动词短语。【常用表达】夕卜貌：good-looking; funny-looking; ordinary-looking; handsome; charming; beautiful; pretty; white-haired; near-sighted; healthy; bearded; leggy（腿长的）；bony（瘦的）；muscular（肌肉兴旺的; 强壮的）;slim; athletic （体格健壮的）性格：kind-hearted; absent-minded; patient; naughty; smart; intelligent; bad-tempered; attractive; confident; independent; humorous; talkative; modest; serious; friendly; extrovert （夕卜向 的）;untidy; shy; fatherly （慈祥的,父亲般的）;motherly; lovely; manly （强壮的 男子气概 的）；optimistic; innocent; modest; sensitive; reliable; forgetful; sincere兴趣爱好：be good at; be interested in; be fond of; be crazy about; be strict in/with; beabsorbed in; be addicted to; focus on; pay attention to; put one's heart into家庭背景：be born in; spend one's childhood in; live a happy/hard life教育背景：be admitted into/ to a key university; graduate from; receive a doctor's degree主要事迹：serve/work as, devote one's life to; concentrate oneself to; make up one's mind to do; have a gift/talent for成就：set a good example for; be honored/respected as; make great contributions to2016北京卷】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历 史很感兴趣，并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物。请你给Jim回信，内容包括：1 .该人物是谁；2 .该人物的主要贡献；3 .该人物对你的影响。注意：1 .词数不少于50；2 .开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim,Yours,LiHua列提纲找思路1）开头 表示荣幸和 骄傲：delighted; honor; be enthusiastic about; excited; share; interest2）介绍自己喜欢的中国历史人物，说明人物的贡献和对自己的影响：when it comes to; my favorite figure; person; introduce; renowned （著名的 有声望的）；widely; establish （建立 仓ll 办）;masterpiece （杰作）;impact; style; enlighten （启发 开导）;encourage3）结尾：希望朋友能感兴趣：be interested in; tell; send; recommend; work【高考总分值作文例文1】 Dear Jim,I am delighted to hear from you. It's an honor to know you are enthusiastic about Chinese history.When it comes to my favorite figure in Chinese history, it must be Li Bai of Tang Dynasty. He was renowned as the greatest romantic poet. Over 900 poems of him survived and were widely read by later generations. He expressed his emotions in poems directly every time he was frustrated by his unsuccessful career, which formed his unique style of writing. This really enlightens me.Are you interested in Li Bai? Please tell me and ril send you some books.Yours, Li Hua 【高考总分值作文例文2】Dear Jim,I can't be more excited to hear from you since I learn that we share the same interest in Chinese history.Confucius, as my favorite Chinese historical 行eure, in the person I want to introduce to you. As is known to all, he is one of the greatest thinkers and educators in China. He established an educational system and the masterpiece-The Analects recorded his philosophical thoughts. （他 建立了教育体系，论语这部杰作中收录了他的哲学思想）Furthermore, he compiled （编 写 汇编）some classics, which made an enormous impact cm the development of Chinese traditional culture. His thoughts always encourage me to pursue kiwwledqe and I'd like to be a teacher like him one day.I strongly recommend the works of Confucius to you, which, without question, must be what you like.【高考标准答案范文】 Dear Jim,It's great to hear from you. I feel proud knowing your interest in Chinese history.As for my favorite figure in Chinese history, it must be Wei Yuan, a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty. He, in his book, Haiguo Tuzhi （Maps and Records of the World）, introduved modern technologies and ideas to China. That opened our eyes to the world. In fact, he inspires me to major in English in college, tn be a bridge betwien China and the world.Interested in knowing more? I can find you some books! Just let me know.Cheers!Yours, Li Hua2020高考全国I卷】你校正在组织英语作文比赛，请以身边尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛。内容包 括：1 .人物简介；2 .尊敬和爱戴的原因。注意：1 .词数100左右；2.短文题目和首句已为你写好。The person I Respectaround us.There are many respectable people段落构思Para. 1:我们身边有很多值得尊敬的人。其中，我最尊敬的人是钟南山，他因为对战胜 病毒做出的巨大贡献而成为家喻户晓的人物。Para.2:首先，钟南山被认为是一位杰出的科学家，他的研究成果在科学的开展中发挥 着越来越重要的作用。更重要的是，面对新冠肺炎疫情的挑战，他致力于帮助他人，为全社 会做出了巨大贡献。他不仅找到了一个有效的解决方案，而且鼓励无数的志愿者加入他的行 列，这使很多需要帮助的人受益。Para.3:他对工作和对人的奉献精神令人钦佩，这真正激励了我将来成为像他一样的人。【高考总分值作文例文】There are many respectable people around us. Among them, the person I respect most is Zhong Nanshan, who has become a household name for his great contributions to defeating viruses.First of all, Zhong Nanshan is considered as an outstanding scientist, whose research achievements are playing an increasingly signi行cant role in the development of science. Whafs more, faced with the chaHenee of COVID-19, he devoted himself to helping others and made great contributions to the whole society. Not only did he find an effective solution, but he encouraged countless volunteers to join him, which benefited a great many people in need.His dedication to work and to people is admirable, which truly inspires me to become a person like him in the future.【高考总分值作文例文】There are many respectable people around us. Among them, the person I respect most is Zhang Guimei, who has become a household name fur her great contoibutions to promoting ciri's education.First of all, Zhang Guimei is considered as an outstanding educator, whose educational practices are playing an increasingly siqnificaiit role in the development of girls' education. What's more, faced with the challenge of poverty, she devoted herself to helping girls enter high school and made great contributions. Not only did she found the Huaping Girls High School, but she encouraged countless volunteers to join her, which benefited a great many girls in need.Her dedication to educetioc and to students is admirable, which truly inspires me to become a person like her in the future.【高考总分值作文例文】Mr. Liu, aged 58, is my English teacher. He is so humorous, responsible and selfless that I respect and love him very much. To be honest, his assistance has a qrnat impact on me. It was Mr. Liu who made me realize the importance of learning English well.Had it not been fee his guidance and encouragement, I couldn't have won the first place in the city English speech contest. Without his aid, I wouldn't have a good understanding in English. Til definitely remember his kindness and help forever.Mr. Liu is a veiy respectable teacher indeed! I do thank him for what he did for me.