读后续写：救人型（故事构造“三部曲”）-2023年新高考英语读后续写提分技能 模拟题.docx

读后续写（新高考专用）模拟题08L （2022.河北.邯郸一中模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段， 使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。The whole class burst out laughing as Mohi rushed into the classroom. He was a strange sight. His half-buttoned white shirt revealed a red striped pajama top underneath, and instead of white school shoes, he had on a pair of bright green sandals that were two sizes too big. The physics teacher's hand froze in the middle of writing a formula on the blackboard.Mohi mumbled/Sorry, teacher/ and scuttled（'快步疾走）to his seat. Mr. Tan glared at the rest of the students. The chuckles quickly faded away. Mohi's classmates always looked forward to Mondays. Nine times out of ten, they would be entertained by Mohi' slate arrival and his odd appearance which usually included inappropriate clothing. That day, it was the pajama top and green sandals.Mohi lived just a street away from the school. He walked to school daily. Students passing by in buses would yell his name in unison （一起）just to see him jump and stop in his tracks. When he spotted the merry bunch in the bus, he would wave good-naturedly. Although Mohi was likable, he was too lost in his own thoughts to make friends. His classmates found him amusing but they ignored him most of the time. Only Hamed, who sat next to Mohi, tried to be his friend.The following Monday, Mohi did not turn up at school. His classmates were a little disappointed but quickly forgot about him. After school, Hamed decided to walk over to Mohifs house to check on him. As he approached the gate, he could hear violin music. Mohi must be listening to music, he thought. The gate was not locked. Hamed let himself in. He called Mohi*s name a few times but there was no response. The music played on. Hamed peered in through a window. His eyes widened in surprise. In the middle of the living room, Mohi was playing the violin. His eyes were closed in concentration as he drew the bow over the strings expertly. He played flawlessly （完美无壬度土也），so much so that it sounded like a recording. Hamed left quietly.the sofa and added.注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右；.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。“Great! Mum's got a bad headache but I'm going to help her cook dinner. See you soon!” Breanna sent her dad a quick reply.Another message from her father drew Breanna attention.参考答案：“Great! Mum s got a bad headache but Pm going to help her cook dinner. See you soon!” Breanna send her dad a quick reply. As Breanna opened the door of the refrigerator, she heard her mother sigh again. The shelves of the refrigerator had been almost empty for too long. Her mother said, “Oh, I think maybe we have tomatoes and carrots tonight, honey. Could you get those out for me?” While her mother pushed two more headache tablets into her hand, Breanna started cutting the carrots Just the way her mother had shown her.Another message from her father drew Breanna s attention. She stared at the new message: Red, round and sweet, Seed of love and what I love to eat. Her dad loved entertaining her with riddles and rhymes! Was this about dinner? Breanna went through all the fruits she could think of that were red. Suddenly, Breanna remembered a story her father told her about a fruit regarded as a vegetable. It used to be called a love apple and now it is called tomato. Breanna felt very delighted that she got her father's real message.【解【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了 Breanna的爸爸外出加班赚钱，她的妈妈在家准备晚餐，而 她又开始头疼了，Breanna的爸爸发来了短信说很快会回来，她很开心，妈妈痛苦地从沙发 上站起来准备做晚餐。【详解】.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“太好了！妈妈头痛得厉害，但我要帮她做饭。再见！ ”布里安娜很快 给她爸爸回了信。”可知，第一段可描写Breanna帮妈妈准备做晚饭的食材。由第二段首句内容“她父亲的另一条信息引起了布里安娜的注意。”可知，第二段可描写 Breanna的爸爸发来的是谜题，Breanna猜谜题。1 .续写线索：打开冰箱切胡萝卜看到谜题猜中谜题.词汇激活行为类打开：open/unfold切：cut/chop盯 着：stare at/gaze at得到：get/receive情绪类叹气：sigh/suspire高兴的:delighted/happy【点睛】高分句型 1While her mother pushed two more headache tablets into her hand, Breanna started cutting the carrots, just the way her mother had shown her.（由连接词 while 引导的时间状语从 句和that引导的定语从句，省略了引导词that）高分句型 2Breanna went through all the fruits she could think of that were red.（由关系代词 that 引导的定语从句）注意：1 ,续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph 1 When Teacher's Day came around, Hamed had a plan.Paragraph 2 As the last note ended, there was a moment of silence.参考答案：When Teacher's Day came around, Hamed had a plan. It was the tradition of the school to have a concert for the teachers. Every class had to contribute an item. Hamed convinced the class to let Mohi perform. Short of ideas, the class agreed. On the day of the concert, both the teachers and students were surprised to see the schoofs clumsiest student walking on stage with a violin. When he started to play, the audience fell silent. Jaws dropped.As the last note ended, there was a moment of silence. Then the audience erupted into thunderous applause. After the performance, shy and silent as Mohi was, he gave Hamed a big hug. Love may be silent, but it was always there. Since then, Mohi and Hamed have been best friends. With the encouragement of Hamed, Mohi has pursued his dream of being a musician. Not only do friends keep us company but also help us to be a better self.【解析】【导语】文章以人物为线索展开，讲述了笨拙且不修边幅的Mohi一直是同学们的笑料，但好友Hamed 发现了 Mohi的小提琴天赋，在Hamed的举荐下，Mohi在教师节音乐会上进行了表演，Mohi 得到了同学们的认可并成了轰动一时的名人。【详解】.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“当教师节来临的时候，哈默德有了一个计划。”可知，第一段可描写Hamed说服全班同学让Mohi表演，Mohi的表演惊艳四座。由第二段首句内容“最后一个音符结束时，大家进行了片刻的沉默”可知，第二段可描写表 演结束后Mohi得到了大家的掌声并和Hamed成为好朋友。1 .续写线索：贡献节目Hamed说服同学让Mohi表演老师和同学感到惊讶大家 为Mohi鼓掌Mohi给Hamed 一个拥抱在Hamed的鼓励下，Mohi追求梦想.词汇激活：行为类贡 献：contribute/devote说服：convince/persuade给一个拥抱:give sb. a hug/embrace sb.追求：pursue/go in for情绪类惊讶的：surprised/astonished害羞的：shy/bashful【点睛】高分句型 1 When he started to play, the audience fell silent, （when 引导时间状语从句）高分句型 2Not only do friends keep us company but also help us to be a better self. （not only 置于句首，使用部分倒装）2. （2022.江苏泰州.一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构 成一篇完整的短文。One afternoon after school, Mary and her brother,Keith,were eating at a cafe near their home. That afternoon, they had to share their table with another person. That person was a young lady in her twenties. After eating, she went to the restroom. Without realizing, she had left her handphone on the table. Five minutes later, she came out and walked out of the cafe without looking back.Mary saw the handphone on the table. She quickly told KeithKeith, the girl left behind her handphone.Keith looked at the handphone. It took his breath away. It was one of the latest models on the market. Keith had always wanted a handphone. But his parents had told him, “You don't need one. You can always use the house phone/9He stared at it for some minutes. Then he said slowly,pausing on every word JI want to take the handphone.Mary could not believe her ears. She merely stared at her brother. "You can't! What if the owner comes to look for it?”Having made the decision,Keith quickly grabbed the handphone and put it in his schoolbag. Then, he took Mary's hand and led her out of the cafe quickly.Once back home, Keith locked his house door with trembling hands. Inside his room, he took out the piece of beauty. Oh, he liked it so much. Now he had his own handphone. Soon, he was polishing it happily.But Mary told him, "Keith, you cannot keep the handphone. What will you tell Father about this? He will ask you how you got the handphone.Keith said quickly, “I will say a friend lent it to me.Mary said, "Now you are lying too." Oh dear! When had Keith turned so dishonest?Then Mary saw a house phone number on the plastic cover of the handphone. "This is the girl's phone number. Why don't we just call this number? We will talk to her and ask her to come and take back her handphone., She was trying to talk some sense into him.注意：1 .续写词数应为15。左右；2 .请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。That night, Keith turned over in bed from time to time.Mary was very happy to hear that.参考答案:That night, Keith turned over in bed from time to time. He had difficulty sleeping, uncertain about what he should do. Of course, he liked the new handphone. However, he was feeling sorry for the owner. When he thought how sad the young lady would be at the loss of her handphone, he was full of guilt and shame. The next morning, after a long and restless night, he was determined to return the handphone to the owner. After school, he told Mary, “I am going to phone the owner.”Mary was very happy to hear that. Back home, they phoned the owner's house phone. A girl answered the phone. Kevin asked, "Are you the owner of the handphone? I'm Keith. I have your handphone. Can you come and get it? ” The girl replied 'Yes' excitedly, expressing her gratitude repeatedly. Ten minutes later, she was at the same cafe to meet Keith. Handing back the handphone to her and seeing her smile happily, Keith realized that honesty was indeed the best policy.【解析】本文以玛丽和她的弟弟基思捡到一部手机为线索展开，讲述了玛丽和她她的弟弟在咖啡馆吃 饭时，无意中捡到了一个女孩落在桌上的手机。基思非常喜欢这部最新型号的手机，尽管玛 丽阻止，他还是把手机带回家了。玛丽发现手机塑料盖上有一个电话号码，她劝说基思打这 个电话联系女孩。基思经过思想斗争，意识到诚实才是最重要的，终于打了那个电话，他们 相约在那个餐馆见面，把手机还给那个女孩。【详解】1 .段落续写 由第一段首句内容“那天晚上，基思不时在床上翻身。”可知，第一段可描写基思经过思想 斗争，意识到自己把别人的手机据为己有是不正确的行为，决定给女孩打电话。由第二段首句内容“玛丽听到这个消息很高兴。”可知，第二段可描写玛丽听说基思归还手 机非常高兴，他们通过电话联系女孩，约在了同一家咖啡馆见面，归还了手机。2 .续写线索：基思经过思想斗争打电话给女孩相约在咖啡馆归还手机感悟 到诚实才是最好的策略.词汇激活行为类犹豫不决：uncertain/ hesitate充满：be full of/ be filled with决心做某事：be determined to do /decide to do情绪类羞耻：shame / abashment高兴地：happily /delightedly【点睛】高分句型1He had difficulty sleeping, uncertain about what he should do.（运用 了连接代词 what 引导的宾语从句）高分句型2Handing back the handphone to her and seeing her smile happily, Keith realized that honesty wasindeed the best policy.（运用了 that引导的宾语从句）3. （2022.重庆市育才中学一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段， 使之构成一篇完整的短文。Chris Dykstra hadn't expected what began as a casual walk around the neighborhood with the family one night led to a journey of friendship.Chris Dykstra, a traffic manager in Shorewood, Illinois had noticed a few raccoons （浣熊） wandering around his garbage. However, he didn't think too much of it. One night when his wife Julie was taking their four children for a walk after dinner, they tracked the raccoons back to their neighbor's roof. A further investigation showed that the raccoons had chewed a hole in the neighbor's roof and were living in her attic （I资楼）.The couple had lived in their current home for five years. Yet they had very little contact with the neighbor. They knew her first name was Dorene and that she liked to watch their children play in the backyard, and thafs about it.Concerned for their neighbor's well-being, Julie decided to knock on the door to make their neighbor aware of the raccoons living in the attic. Julie knocked on the door and rang the doorbell, but no one answered. She decided to ask the local police department to do a wellness check on their neighbor.Two police officers and an animal control officer visited the neighbor's home to conduct a wellness check. This time the neighbor Miss Dorene Shock opened the door. Miss Shock was surprised to see someone check in on her. The officers made her aware of the raccoons in her attic.Having been told the whole thing, Miss Shock welcomed Julie into her house. After touring the house, Julie learned that Miss Shock lived a poor life. Her home barely had any furniture, and she even didn't have a TV set. Besides, her house was in need of additional repairs and updates including new light bulbs.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Chris and his wife knew this was an opportunity to help a neighbor in need.Several days later, Chris and his wife came across Miss Shock and had a chat with her.参考答案:Paragraph 1:Chris and his wife knew this was an opportunity to help a neighbor in need. They decided to do something for the neighbor. They agreed to pay for raccoon removal and roof repairs. Julie took notes of all the light bulbs in the home that needed replacing and purchased new ones. Chris installed the new light bulbs on the weekend. They even purchased a television for Miss Shock, who was very grateful.Paragraph 2:Several days later, Chris and his wife came across Miss Shock and had a chat with her. They learned that Miss Shock almost had no family or friends and was very lonely. She spent nearly all of her spare time in a spare bedroom sitting on a couch and listening to the radio. The couple thought they could be Dorene's friends and it was convenient fbr them to visit each other often since they were neighbors. So they became regular visitors to Dorene's house. The children brought Dorene great joy. "It is a great thing to help someone in our community/9 they said.【解析】【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了 Chris Dykstra和妻子散步时发现浣熊到了邻居的屋顶，随 后他们让当地警察局给他们的邻居做一次检查，后来发现Miss Shock家里很贫穷于是救济 帮助Miss Shock友爱的故事。【详解】.段落续写：.由第一段首句内容“克里斯和他的妻子知道这是一个帮助有需要的邻居的机会。”可知， 第一段可描写克里斯主动帮助邻居。,由第二段首句内容“几天后，克里斯和他的妻子遇到了 Shock小姐，并和她聊天。”可知， 第二段可描写Miss Shock与克里斯和他的妻子谈心。2,续写线索：帮助相遇谈心亲密感悟3.词汇激活 行为类.同意：agree/approve/consent/subscribe.购买：purchase/buy情绪类.感谢：be grateful/thank for/show one's appreciation/show one's gratitude.感到孤独的：lonely/alone/single/solitary【点睛】高分句型 1. Julie took notes of all the light bulbs in the home that needed replacing and purchased new ones.（运用了 that引导的限制性定语从句）高分句型 2. They even purchased a television for Miss Shock, who was very grateful.（运用 了 who引导的非限制性定语从句）4. （2022全国重庆南开中学模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写 两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。It was six o'clock when Breanna heard her mother's phone receive a text message as it's at on the kitchen bench. "Mum, I bet it's Dad!” Breanna said and jumped up from the sofa, books spilling out in front of her. She had been deciding which story her dad would read in one of his funny voices fbr the night. Breanna mum rubbed her temples （太B日穴）and sighed softly. "Honey, would you mind seeing if that's Daddy? I've got a bad headache but I want to start cooking a lovely meal fbr us to enjoy tonight.“Sure, mum J Breanna skipped into the kitchen to check the phone. Her dad had been away for two whole nights working on a malfunction （故障）at his company's warehouse that was at risk of theft. Breanna felt sure he'd been able to act like a superhero and save the day but did it have to take so long? She picked up the phone and read the message, "Just leaving now 一 can't wait to see you both. Breanna confirmed excitedly, "It's from Daddy! He's on his way home!Her mother managed a weak smile as her daughter clapped her hands with joy. It had been four months since she'd lost her job and with only one income to support the family. Her husband had taken on as many shifts and extra duties as he could to make ends meet. Times were tough and he was working long hours, but it made the time Breanna spent with her daddy even more special. "Oh, that's wonderful news. Now let's see what I can find to eat J her mother rose painfully from