应用文练习写作指导之邀请信讲义--2023届高三英语写作专项.docx

应用文练习写作指导之邀请信 讲义假定你是李华，你校摄影俱乐部征集以“中国航天”为主题的短视频，你打算邀请 你校的交换生Thomas一起制作，请给他写一份邮件，内容包括：1 .作品要求；2 .你对作品的设想。注意：1 .写作词数应为80左右；2 .请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear Thomas,Yours,Li Hua【审题】体裁：邀请信时态：一般现在时为主，对相关作品的设想用第三人称人称：因为是自己向对方发出邀请，所以通常以第一人称为主；介绍相关作品时 用第三人称交际对象：交换生好友Thomas （语气亲切自然）主题语境：校摄影俱乐部举办“中国航天”主题的短视频征稿活动，“我”是在已经 了解相关要求的情况下，向对方发出邀请，即找队友，并就作品要求以及相关设想和 对方进行探讨。对题目进一步剖析：邀请信的体裁无论是在模拟考还是高考真题中，出现的频率 都很高，不同的是承载的交际内容以及文化，这道题以中国航空为主题进行考察，同 时结合了短视频投稿作品这样在生活中常见的东西，还与人教版必修三Unit4Space exploration宇宙探索有一定结合性。这道题迎合了“源于生活，高于生活”的书面表达 主旋律，又结合教材内容，不失为一道佳题。此外，在高中教材的其他版本中也有很 多有关宇宙探索，如译林版选必三Unit2Out of this world；外研版选必一 Unit5Revealing nature等等还有很多。以下截取人教版Unit 4Space exploration Reading and Thinking的部分有关中国航 空的内容，仅供参考。China's space programme started later than those of Russia and the US, but it has made great progress in a short time. China became the third countiy in the world to independently send humans into space in 2003, when Yang Liwei successfully orbited Earth in the Shenzhou 5 spacecraft. Then Shenzhou 6 and 7 completed a second manned orbit and the first Chinese spacewalk, followed by the vehicle Jade Rabbit being sent to the moon to study its surface. After that, China launched the Tiangong 2 space lab into space and Tiaiizhou 1 to dock with it. This signalled one step fiirther in China's plan to establish a space station in the future. More recently, China has sent Chang'e 4 to explore the surface of the far side of the moon to make measurements and observations.中国的太空计划起步晚于俄罗斯和美国，但中国在短时间内取得了巨大进展。2003年， 杨利伟乘坐神舟五号成功绕地球飞行，中国成为世界上第三个实现载人航天的国家。此后, 神舟六号和七号分别完成了第二次载人飞行以及中国人的第一次太空行走，随后,“玉兔”月 球车被送上月球研究其表面。之后，中国将天宫二号空间实验室送入太空，天舟一号与其交 会对接。这标志着中国在未来建立空间站的计划又向前迈进了一步。最近，中国发射嫦娥四 号探测月球背面，以进行测量和观察。【要点剖析】要点1：作品要求。短视频的要求可以从作品要求控制时长，清晰度(resolution), 以及紧扣主题等本身要求。还可以从投稿方式，如需要投稿的网址和邮箱等，在截止 日期之前投稿方面入手等。要点2：你的作品的设想。主要从自身的主观想法入手，如作品预计要如何拍摄， 在哪里拍摄，主要呈现出什么内容，也可以适当增加原因，即为什么要从这些方面入 手。由于这道题的背景是对方还未确定答应邀请的情况下，所以最好适当增加作品的 吸引力以使得对方愿意接受，而不是直截了当地告知对方要怎么做。【谋篇布局】首段：开门见山，表明写作目的，即邀请对方和自己一起合作投稿。（朋友之间 可以先问好）参考句式：1. How is everything going? I'm writing to convey a sincere invitation to you.2. How's it going? Would you like to join me in.?3. How have you been these days? I think it would be a great idea if you could participate in.中段：主要写两个要点作品要求和对作品的设想。尾段：期待对方接受自己邀请，期待对方的回复。参考句式：1. I will be waiting expectantly for your reply for joining me.4. If you are interested in it, please let me know and ril send you more relevant information.5. Do you have a great passion for it? I'm looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.【下水文1】Dear Thomas,How's it going? I'm writing to convey a sincere invitation to you to cooperate with me in making a short video revolving around “China Aerospace.The entry, limited to five minutes, is supposed to be submitted to the school website prior to November 31st. Since China's space industry has made remarkable achievements over the years, I especially hope that the work would show the resplendence of China's aerospace, from Shenzhou 5 to Chang'e 4. In addition, such activity can yet be regarded as a golden opportunity for you to have another insight into China.Would you like to drop me a line to let me know if you are interested in it?Yours,Li Hua【下水文2】Dear Thomas,How's everything going? Our school photograph club is seeking short videos concerning China Aerospace. Would you mind making a short video with me?There are some requirements for short videos. Except for the limit on the theme, we are demanded to keep the video to 5 minutes. In my view, we can shoot a short video of stars attached with the words of our vision of space. Setting our foot on our vision, we can turn to the introduction of China Aerospace.Would you like to do me a favor? I keenly anticipate your reply.Yours,Li Hua 【范文】Dear Thomas,To celebrate the inspiring progress Chinese space industry has made, our school's photography club is collecting short videos on the relevant topic. Therefore, I'm writing to invite you to make one with me.The video is supposed to be limited to 10 minutes and show the advances in our space industry. To impress the viewers, I'm considering including the history of our space exploration and some outstanding astronauts in the video.I know you are keen on space exploration and it would be a precious opportunity to deepen our understanding. I'm looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua