2022-2023学年九年级英语上学期期末易错09 书面表达分类练.docx

09书面表达分类综小贴土高分建议1 .强调再强调，英语要英式。2 .熟记句型，灵活运用。3 .语态时态，确保准确。4 .标点符号，中英不同。5 .始终牢记：巧妇难为无米之炊。期末满分作文必会句型：1 .that引导定语从句。Eg:Here is a touching moment in my life that I will never forget.这是一个感人的时刻，在我的生活 中，我永远不会忘记。2 . even though引导让步状语从句。Each day there are tests to see how well they can work even though they are totally tired out.每天都有测试，看他们能工作得多好，即使他们完全筋疲力尽。3so.that如此以至于。But your Size M is so small that I can't wear it at all and I have to give it to my younger sister.但是你的M码太小了，我根本穿不上，我得把它给我妹妹。4. think引导宾语从句Eg:So I think teenagers should be allowed to go out on weekends所以我认为应该允许青少年在周末外 出。5#如果，引导的条件状语从句。Eg:If I follow these rules ,1 usually get some presents from my parents.如果我遵守这些规则，我通常会 从我父母那里得到一些礼物。6.because引导原因状语从句。Eg: I love watching talk shows because I can learn a lot.我喜欢看脱口秀，因为我能学到很多东西。（2）文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；（3）文章必须包含所有要点，并作适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺In the school hallAny English loverThe Importance of PhysicalExerciseEveryone hopes to live happily in the world.Physical exercise is indispensable （不可或缺的）to ahappy life.卜一.记叙文.假如你是李华，你将主持你们学校英语语言文化节。请根据海报内容，以“Welcome to our schoolEnglish Language Festiva为主题，用英语写一篇短文，介绍学校英语语言文化节的安排，活动内The first week of FebmaryActivities:A English drama showA English film watching> English Scripts Writing （. ompetition容及活动推荐理由。注意:容及活动推荐理由。注意:Ceme and jein vsl（i）文中不得出现真实的校名和人名:（2）要点齐全，语言通顺连贯，条理清晰，书写规范；（3）词数80左右，文章的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。Hi , everyone! Our school will hold a School English Language Festival. Now I am happy to introduce something about it.Welcome to our School English Language Festival and enjoy yourselves!14 .寒假即将来临，中学生英语报发起" My winter holiday”专栏征稿活动，你打算向该报纸投稿，谈谈 你的假期想法。内容包含以下要点：学习1 .仔细计划好学习，2 .多看书，通过阅读3 .复习所学知识，为了生活1 .劳逸结合，如运动，听音乐，2 .空闲时帮助父母亲做家务3 .注意事项：（1）词数：100词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；（2）文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；（3）文章必须包含所有要点，并作适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。My winter holidayHow time flies!The winter holiday is coming.I have some good ideas to spend a meaningful holiday.I am sure I will have a pleasant and full holiday.十二.通知类.写作2021年3月30日，教育部发布了关于进一步加强中小学生睡眠管理工作的通知引起 了家长、学校和社会的广泛关注和热烈讨论。你校英文广播站Our Voice发起学生睡眠情况的专 题调查，请以“We need a good sleep”为题，写一篇英文调查报告。要点：现状原因睡眠不足；作业负担重，.O建议与希望学校减少作业；制定学校作息时间。家长督促按时就寝不熬夜；营造温馨舒适的就寝环境。学生.（至少两点）注意：（1）要求语句通顺，意思连贯。（2）词数100个左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。（3）参考词汇：督促（urge）We need a good sleepAs we know , most of us students don't have enough sleep. To solve the problems and improve our sleep , we should do something and have some changes. I hope all of us can have a good sleep and grow up healthily.十三.演讲稿.科学家是民族的脊梁、国家的骄傲，更是青少年学习的榜样，请以A Great Scientist为题写一篇 英语演讲稿，向全班同学介绍屠呦呦的事迹，内容如下.基本情况L1930年12月30日出生于浙江；2.第一个获得诺贝尔奖的中国女性.主要经历1.1950年毕业于北京大学，大学期间勤奋刻苦，受到同学和老师的好评；2.多年研读医学，尽管困难重重，她从不放弃.主要成就1.努力推进中医运用；2.发现了治疗疟疾的方法，这一发现拯救了许多生命.你的感想注意：1.演讲稿须包括表格内所有要点，并自拟相关内容，可适当发挥；2.词数不少于100字（文章开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数）.参考词汇：Nobel Prize诺贝尔奖 malaria疟疾A Great ScientistDear teachers and friends ,Scientists are the pride of our nation. Today Fm happy to be here to tell you something about my hero Tu Youyou. .That's all for my speech. Thanks for listening.十四.倡议书18.青少年是祖国的未来。我们吁哈县在创建全国文明城市的过程中，举办了”争做好市民”评选活动。 请你以“Being a good citizen”为题，用英语写一篇倡议书，号召同学们争做“好市民' 内容包括以 下要点：1 .在学校：对老师同学有礼貌，努力学习知识，养成良好的学习习惯，爱运动。2 .在家里：经常和父母交流，懂得感恩，分担家务，知错就改。3 .在社会：遵守规则，爱护环境，在公共场合不要大声喧哗，注意人身安全。4 .你的观点Being a good citizenTeenagers are the future of our motherland ,and also the symbol of our city .What should we do to be a good citizen ? 十五.启事19.为庆祝澳门回归20周年，阳光中学英语俱乐部正在招募活动策划.假设你是李明，请根据以下 启事，用英文写一封电子邮件应聘.WE WANT YOU!To celebrate the 20 anniversary of Macao's return to China ,the English Club is planning different activities. We*re going to celebrate it next Friday.Do you have any good ideas for the activities?E - mail us at sunshineschoolgmail. com注意事项：1 .邮件须包括具体活动设计，可自由发挥，要求符合情境、语句通顺、意思连贯：2 .词数在90个左右，邮件的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数：3 .邮件不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息：4 .邮件内容必须写在答题卡的指定位置上.十六.其他应用文写作20.无锡第一中学的校园双语广播电台Fun Teenagers Radio有一个有关电影的栏目，该栏目四月份 的主题为“我最喜欢的电影明星”.假如你是电台主持人Juicy,你最喜欢的电影明星是莱昂纳多迪 卡普里奥(LeonardoDiCaprio)，请你根据栏目主题并结合所给信息写一篇英文主持稿.内容提示 如下：国籍美国出生时间1974年11月11日才能很有表演天赋；被誉为最伟大的男演员之一.主要成就2015年在电影“荒野猎人"(The Revenant)中成功地主演一位猎人，并因此获奥斯卡最佳男演员奖.远远超越电影界，1997年创立自己的慈善组织(organization)，开始致力于保护环境,作为一名动物爱好者他注意事项：1 .主持稿须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；2 .最后一个要点须用2 - 3句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥；3 .词数在90个左右，主持稿的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；4 .主持稿内容必须写在答题卡指定的位置上.-.兴趣爱好.请根据你校的校刊MY FAVOURITE TV PROGRAM栏目的征稿内容，写一篇英语短文刊投稿。What TV program do you like best? You can write to the column MY FAVOURITE TV PROGRAM. l.What TV program is your favorite? Why?1 .How do your parents feel about your favorite TV program?2 .What influence do TV programs have on your life and study ?I'm looking forward to hearing from you.Mike Smith 对所有要点逐一陈述，可适当发挥。词数：90词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）My favourite TV program 参考范文：My favourite TV programMy favorite TV program is sports .especially basketball.（喜欢什么）I often play basketball with my classmates after school.When my father is free ,he will also play basketball with me ,because my father thinks playing basketball is a good sport and it is good for our health.（高分句型一）I think so.（父母 看法）I used to be very weak ,and I am often ill in hospital ,and it will delay my study.But now I am much stronger ,and I have more time to study and make greater progress.（影响）I want to spend more free time exercising ,and I hope more people can spend their free time on sports. （高分句型二）二.人物介绍.升入初三后，你又结识了一些朋友，你对谁印象最深刻呢？请你以"The friend who has impressed me most”为题写一篇英语短文来给大家介绍一下吧。提示：（1） What is he/she like?（2） What art form does he/she like best? And why?（3） What type of TV programs does he/she like best? And why?（4） How does he/she influence you? （ one point）（5） What do you think of him/her?要求：（1）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；（2）必须包括所有要点内容，并适当发挥；（3）语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清晰，书写规范；（4）词数100词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。The friend who has impressed me mostThe friend who has impressed me most is.参考范文：The friend who has impressed me mostThe friend who has impressed me most is Wang Gang.（高分句型）（引出话题）He is tall and strong.（他的长相）He is so humorous that I never feel bored when he is with me.（高分句型一）He is also helpful and helps me a lot.We often have a good time together.（为什么我对他印象深刻）He likes singing.Because he sings very well.（艺术形式） He likes watching news programs.Because he can learn a lot from it.（电视节目）One Sunday last year ,we went to climb Zijin Mountain together.I was so careless that I fell over on the way to the mountain.Wang Gang helped me all the way and finally sent me to the hospital.I was very grateful to him.（通过例子说明他为什么给我印象这么深刻）So I think he is a very good person. （如何认为的）We will graduate from junior high soon.I want to say JWang Gang ,you are my best friend.I will remember you forever.I hope your dream will come true soon." （高分句型二）.学校团委举行新团员联谊活动，需要每位团员详细介绍自己。假如你是新团员Timmy ,请根据下 面内容，写一篇短文介绍一下你的情况。年级九年级品质富有爱心；一丝不苟。爱好L听民乐，因为有较强的地方特色；2.看访谈节目，（原因自拟）最喜爱的明星成龙（JackieChan），通过努力获得成功。被许多人看作是一位超级明星，不仅因他在动 作影片方面的成功，而且也因在慈善事业的 努力。梦想1 .成为动物保护者，能近距离观察印度老虎的生活。2.帮助那些处于危险的动物，（措施自拟 两点）要求：L所写内容必须包括以上所有信息，并适当发挥；2 .文章不少于90个词，开头已给出，不计入总字数；3 .语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；4 .文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。动物保护者：bestiarianHello ,everyone!It's my honor to be a member of the Youth League.参考范文：Hello ,everyone!It's my honor to be a member of the Youth League.Fm in Nine Grade.（年 级）I am full of love.Fm very careful.（品质）1 have many hobbies.I love listening to folk music ,because it has strong local characteristics.! love watching talk shows because I can learn a lot. （爱好）（高分句 型一）My favorite star is Jackie Chan because he succeeded through hard work.He is regarded by many as a superstar ,not only because of his success in action films ,but also because of his efforts in charity.（最喜爱的明星）My dream is to be a bestiarian ,because I can have a close look at Indian tigers.I also want to help those animals in danger.（高分句型二） We should not buy animal fur.We should not cut down trees.We should protect animal homes.（梦想）三.书信类4.假如你是李华，是九年级一班的班长，在学校英文校刊KIDS MAG上看到学校迎春晚会的节目 征集令，请根据征集令的内容，用英语给校刊写一封信，至少推荐三个节目。Spring Festival Gala at Moonlight Middle SchoolHi ,The Spring Festival is around the corner.This year ,our school will hold our own Spring FestivalGala.Now we want some great ideas from you.What programmers would you like to see in the show? l.We need something really "Chinese'1； 2.The programmers must be suitable for students. 注意：1 .内容涵盖所有要点（并给出理由），可适当发挥。2 .词数80左右（已给出文章开头，不计入总词数）。3 .文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。Dear Sir or Madam ,Pm really looking forward to our wonderful show and here is my advice.参考范文：Dear Sir or Madam ,I'm really looking forward to our wonderful show and here is my advice.（点题）I want to see something that makes people relax and laugh ,such as dramas ,story - telling ,songs ,dance and so on. （高分句型）These programs should show traditional Chinese culture.For example ,the content of the dramas should be related to ancient Chinese stories.The songs are best sung in praise of the motherland.Besides ,the programmers must be suitable for students.（建议）I hope our own Spring Festival Gala will be a great success.（高分句型二）（希望）.假设你是男生Andrew,梦想成为一名演员。可是父母不支持。请你根据以下要点，用英文给你的 英国好友Simon写一封信，诉说你的烦恼。我的想法父母的想法想当演员，有表演天赋不是好的职业学习赫本，为慈善出力学习最为重要参加选拔，想进俱乐部纯粹浪费时间我的打算（至少一点）参考词汇：赫本：Hepburn注意：（1）词数在80100词之间，开头已给的部分不计入总词数；（2）短文中应包括所有要点，并适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺；（3）文章不得出现真实地名、校名和人名。Dear Simon ,How are you doing? I miss you a lot.I tell my parents about my dream in the future ,but I don't get any support from them.I am looking forward to hearing from you!Yours, Andrew 参考范文：Dear Simon ,How are you doing ? I miss you a lot.I tell my parents about my dream in the future ,but I don't get any support from them.（弓I 出话题）I want to be an actor.I have a gift for acting.I want to learn from Hepburn and work closely with charity.I'm good at telling stories and writing exciting plays.I want to join the drama club and have a chance to see how TV programs are recorded.（高分句型一）（我的想法） But my parents don't think acting is a good career.And they think learning is the most important for me.So they think I'm a waste of time.（高分句型二）They also think that actors seem mysterious ,but quite stupid.（父母的想法）I'll talk to my parents again.TIl try to get them to agree with me.Can you give me some advise?（我的打算）I am looking forward to hearing from you!（期待）Yours , Andrew 四.计划与愿望. 一个民族有自己的“民族梦”，一个国家有自己的“国家梦”，同样，每个人也应有属于自己的“美丽梦 想”。最近，你班就”我们的梦想”展开了一次讨论。下面是你们小组的谈论情况汇总，请根据所给 要点写一篇英语短文，向英语校刊投稿。NameDreamTony想当一个社会工作者，尤其是帮助孩子们解决青少年问题，曾经：（举一例给青少年的帮助）Amy比起做导演更想当演员，她在校戏剧社（Drama Club）担任主角，2018年首次在电视上亮相.I擅长解谜，梦想成为一名侦探，查明一切真相.1 hope+宾语从句。Eg:I hope we all take an active part in this meaningful campaign.我希望我们都能积极参与这个有意义 的运动。I hope your dream will come true soon.我希望你的梦想很快实现。5 . by doing sth通过做某事By eating up the food on plates , we can not only save food and money but also produce less waste.通过 吃完盘子上的食物，我们不仅可以节省食物和钱，而且产生更少的浪费。1.1 fs one's honor to do sth做某事是一个人的荣幸。It's my honor to stand here to share my opinion.我很荣幸能站在这里分享我的观点。10Jt takes sb some time to do sth 做某事花了 某人一些时间.But it takes students too much time to chat online.但是它花费学生太多的时间在网上聊天。11 . It is+形容词to do sth.做某事是的。Second ,it's also good to bring a gift such as some flowers or fruit.第二，带一些礼物也很好,.while引导时间状语从句。You'd better say that the food is delicious while you are eating.当你吃的时候，你最好说食物很美味。12 .when引导的时间状语从句。He is so humorous that I never feel bored when he is with me.他很幽默，和我在一起时我从不觉得无 聊。14.who引导的定语从句。My mother is a primary school teacher who graduated from a normal university.我的母亲是名小学 教师，毕业于一所师范大学。15 .疑问词+不定式结构作宾语I'm writing to offer you some advice on how to learn Chinese well.我写信给你给你一些关于如何学好 中文的建议。16 . no matter how无论怎样Finally , no matter how difficult it is , we shouldn't give up our dreams.最后，不管有多困难，我们都不应该放弃我们的梦想。".Although引导的让步状语从句。Although I am not very good at it J will continue to practice.虽然我不是很擅长，但我会继续练习。18. which引导的定语从句。为了实现梦想，我认为（至少两点）要求：1 .表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；2 .必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；3 .词数：100个词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；4 .不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。Our dreamsRecently ,we have held a discussion to talk about our dreams.Here is the report about our ideas.参考范文：Our dreamsRecently ,we have held a discussion to talk about our dreams.Here is the report about our ideas.Tony wants to be a social worker ,especially to help children solve their problems.Last year ,a student in his neighborhood couldn't fall asleep every night because of too much stress.When he heard this ,he had a talk with him and encouraged him to do exercise together.（高分句型一）Two weeks later ,the student slept well and thanked him a lot. （Tony 的梦想）Amy prefers being an actor to being a dirctor.She plays the lead role in the School Drama Club.She made her first appearance on TV in 2018.She is talented in acting. （Amy 的梦想）I am good at solving mysteries.I dream to be a detective and can find out the truth.I hope we can live in a peaceful world by helping the people in need.（高分句型二）（我的梦想）I think if we want to realize our dreams ,we should be kind ,warm - hearted ,and be willing to help others.What!s more ,each of us should work hard and improve ourselves.Then we can do what we can to help others.（要怎么做）五.日常生活7.我们常说，生活和未来由自己创造，但如何才能实现呢？请根据以下提示，以Be Our Personal Best 为题，写一篇文章。Be Our Personal Best健康生活锻炼身体，健康饮食；合理规划，学会放松；提升自我虚心好学，乐于合作；（自拟一点）坚持梦想不畏困难，勇敢面对；（自拟一点）注意:1 .词数90词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2 .语句通顺，意思连贯，适当发挥；3 .请勿提及真实校名、姓名等信息。Be Our Personal BestIt is we who shape our own life and future , but how can we make it? I want to share my viewswith you.Believe in ourselves , and we can be our personal best.参考范文:Be Our Personal BestIt is we who shape our own life and future , but how can we make it? I want to share my views withyou.First of all , we should have a healthy lifestyle. We should exercise every day and eat healthy food.（每 天锻炼，健康饮食）We should plan our work or study reasonably.（合理规划学习或工作）When we feel stressed , we should learn to relax.（学会放松）Second , we should strive to improve ourselves.（提 升自我）We should also learn from others who are better than ourselves.And we should be ready to cooperate with others and read more good books.Finally , no matter how difficult it is , we shouldn't give up our dreams.（高分句型一）（坚持梦想）Don,t be afraid of difficulties and face them bravely. What's more , we should learn to share your difficulties with your family and friends.（高分句型二）And theycan help you solve them.Believe in ourselves , and we can be our personal best.8. Granny Li lives alone in Sunshine Community.You are one of her neighbours who want to do something for her during the coming Spring Festival.Please write down your plan according to the pictures below.注意：（1） 80词左右，语句流畅通顺；（2）结合所给图片发挥想象，并作适当发挥；（3）文中不得出现你的真实姓名；参考范文：Grandma Li is our neighbor.She lives alone in Sunshine Community.The Spring Festival is coming.We are going to do something for