作文08 2021年黑龙江龙东卷（作文+同类作文+素材积累）-备战2022年中考英语作文+万能模板+热点素材.docx

2021年中考满分作文特快专刊作文08黑龙江省龙东卷，真题在线1 a（黑龙江省龙东地区（农垦森工）2021年中考英语试题）题目为了有效地控制新冠疫情的蔓延，2021年我国实施了免费接种疫苗的政策。请根据提示列出接种疫苗 后的注意事项。提示词:wine（酒）内容包括：1 .三天之内不洗澡；2.多喝水，不喝酒；3.多吃水果和蔬菜；4.不吃鱼类和蛋类；5.适当的户外运 动，不熬夜。题目同学们都知道安全的重要性，在生活中危险无处不在，你知道如何保护自己的安全吗?请结合自己的 实际生活，谈谈看法。提示：1.家庭安全；2.校园安全；3.户外安全As we all know, danger is everywhere in our life（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。）1 .必须包含所给的全部要点及内容，可适当发挥。2 .文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名。3 .字数80100。开头已给出，不计入总词数。How can we make ourselves safeAs teenagers, to learn how to make ourselves safe is especially important.【参考范文】How can we make ourselves safeAs teenagers, to learn how to make ourselves safe is especially important. Here are some of my suggestions.First, we are supposed to be careful when making friends online, which may bring us unnecessary troubles. Second, 】emembe】 never to go swimming on our own in the rive】o】lake because doing that will probably put ouiselves into dangerous situations. Besides, in orde】 to eat healthily and safely, we'd better eat less junk food and not ea food that goes bad, for they will do harm to our health. At last, when traveling oulside, take care of our personal things and call the police for help in time if we are in danger.In short, safety must come first!【考题解析】.题干解读：为了迎接第二十三个全国中小学生安全教育日的到来，学校组织了以“普及安全知识，确保生 命安全”为主题的征文活动。要求结合所给的材料，介绍一下我们怎样做才能使自己安全？1 .写作指导：本文是有关安全方面的作文，我们可以用“三步法”来写。第一步：开篇点题，简明扼要地说 明安全的重要性。第二步：提出建议，少吃或不吃垃圾食品；网上交友要慎重；不要独自去河里游泳；外 出时，看好个人物品；遇到危险求助于警察。第三步：总结概括，首尾呼应，点明安全第一。相似题每年三月的最后一个星期一是“全闭中小学生安全教育日”。为了提高同学们的安全意识，学校决定在 毕业前再举行一次以安全教育为主题的班会。请根据所给提示，就日常生活中需要注意的安全写一篇英语 发言稿。提示：1上学、放学途中的安全；2校园里的安全；3.家里的安全。要求：1.80词左右，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2.语法正确，语句通顺、流畅；3文中不得出现 真实姓名、校名。Hello, everyone! The last Monday in March every year is National Safety Education Day of Primary and Middle School Students. As middle school students, we shouldSafety is important. We should always keep it in mind.Thank you!【参考范文】Hello, everyone! The last Monday in March every year is National Safety Education Day of Primary and Middle School Students. As middle school students, we should pay more attention to safety. To be safe, we must follow rules.When we go to school or go home from school, we must follow the traffic rules For example, we must walk on walk-side. When we cross zebra-crossing, stop and look right and left, then go across the road fast. We mustn*t run through red lights when crossing the road. Don't play football on the road. At school, don't push when we go upstairs or downstairs, or we may hurt ourselves or others. Never use sharp things like the knife when we play with our classmates. We should get on well with our classmates. Don't fight with them, or well be hurt.At home, we should be careful when we use electricity. If there is a fire or a thief, we should call the police for help in time. Also, food safety is important. Never eat the food that goes bad.Safety is very important. We should always keep it in mind.Thank you!【考题解析】本文属于话题作文，就日常生活中如何注意安全提一些建议。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上 下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时 态、主谓一致,特别使用一些亮点词句,如 pay attention to, follow the traffic rules, play with, get on well with, fight with, in time 以及祈使句 stop and look right and left 以及 don't play football on the road 等，增强逻辑关 系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。【点睛】写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放 的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及 简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自 然。修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构 是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。相似题下图描述了李华今年春节得到压岁钱(lucky money)之后，他和父母对于如何花压岁钱产生的不同观点。请 根据图片提示，用英语写一篇100词左右的短文。要求：1 .完整叙述图片内容。2 .结合自己的实际陈述个人观点。【参考范文】It's important to save money and put it to good use in life.After this Spring Festival,LiHua got a lot of lucky money,he and his parents had different opinions about how to use it.His mother wanted him to buy some books because reading can bring him some knowledge and his father thought he should give it away to the poor students in need to get education,but he hope to buy something nice to eat or some fun toys.Anyway I think he can save it in a bank and then take it out when using it.Also,we should use it to do something meaningful instead of thinking about buying some food or toys .【考题解析】试题分析：本篇习作成功地完成了写作任务，表达顺畅，结构连贯，字数符合要求。能够准确运用时态， 做到了要点全面，语法正确，上下文意思连贯，还适当发挥了想象。短语的使用使得文章很生动，例如 spend.on., in order to, help them to go to school o而多种句式的运用则是本文的亮点,例如,The spring festival is the loveliest in China, which is comes in February.； He thinks he should spend lucky money on delicious food.； His father thinks he should give the money to the poor children in order to help them to go to school.o可以说，这是一篇非常优秀的习作。相似题下面的图中描述了李华放学后在家学习的情景。请根据图片提示，用英语写一篇100词左右的短文。 内容包括：1.完整叙述图片内容；2.简要陈述个人观点。要求：L可进行适当发挥；2.不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。【参考范文】One day, when Li Hua came home from school, he found his mother was not at home. He felt free. He put down his schoolbag and brought his favorite food from the refrigerator-hamburgers and cola which are not allowed to eat. He enjoyed his delicious food while playing games and listening to music. He felt very happy. But he left his homework behind. At about 7 o'clock, his mother came back. She was veiy angry when she saw Li Hua make the house messy. At this time, Li Hua also realized his mistakes and began to do his homework.As for me, I will do homework first. I think learning is the most important thing for us. We should study first and then relax ourselves in our spare time. We should learn self-discipline. We shouldn't always rely on parents.【题目解析】.题干解读：文章是一篇看图作文。主要是描写李华放学后自己在家的学习情况，从图中要抓住重要信息 不自律的行为，从而衬托后面要提出的个人的意见观点，要注意写作时可以用一般过去时描写，多使 用第三人称描写，要注意语言的连贯性。1 .例文点评：文章分两段描写。第一段主要描写图片所给出的一些信息，他在家的学习情况；第二段主要 写自己的观点看法。文章结构完整思路清晰，语言表达准确连贯，意思通俗易懂。2 .高分亮点：短语：put down； be allowed to do； listen to； leave.behind； begin to do； rely ono句型：when引导的时间状语从句；which引导的定语从句；I think+宾语从句；and引导的并列句。相似题下面的图片描述了李平上周收留流浪狗的故事。请根据图片内容，为校刊“英语园地''写一篇约100 词的英语短文，完整描述图画情景，并表述自己对此事的看法。参考词汇：a stray dog流浪狗 give.a bath给洗澡【参考范文】Last Friday, on the way home from school,Li ping found a dirty stray dog lying beside the dustbin.lt was so weak that he couldn't open its eyes.He felt sorry for the puppy dog and carried him home immediately.After feeding him food and milk,he gave it a bath.He was so glad to see the dog recover.lt was so lovely and Li ping wanted to keep it.After discussing the situation with his parents,he decided to adopt it.We should learn from Li Ping to protect animals. Animals are our most loyal friends.【考题解析】1、题干解读：这是一篇看图写作，一共四幅图。写作文时，认真读图，可知四幅图描述了李平上周收留 流浪狗的故事，并表述自己对此事的看法。2、例文点评：描述故事时，主要以第三人称为主；时态主要以一般过去时为主；将重点放在对图画内容 的描写上，不能遗漏图画中的主要信息。同时也需要描写自己对此事的看法。3、高分亮点：短语：on the way home； feel sorry； want to do sth； decide to do sth； learn from。句型：It was so weak that he couldn't open its eyes； After discussing the situation with his parents,he decided toadopt ito【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的 表达，例如 on the way home； feel sorry； want to do sth； decide to do sth； learn from 以及状语从句等；然后 紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、 因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标 点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要 求等。相似题短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。提示词：手提电脑laptop【参考范文】Yesterday afternoon, Xiao Lin and Xiao Gang from Class 3 Grade 4 had a talk. They showed off the Children's Day gift. Xiao Lin's mom bought him a telephone and Xiao Gang's dad bought a laptop for him. They were very proud. Other students envied them very much. But I think it is not proper to compare with each other. The main task of students is studying. So their attention should be focused on study. Of course their parents can buy some gifts for the holiday, but I think the gift must be suitable for their children, such as books, school things, dictionaries and so on., which are good for them. Things like cell phones and laptops are of little use to primary school students, just distracting them.【考题解析】这篇短文要求我们观察图片，将图片中发生的场景用英语表达出来，是一篇看图作文。首先学生们应仔细 观察图片，了解图片中发生的场景，弄清楚它主要想传达的意思，然后用英语将这些内容表达出来。审题 可知，这篇短文的内容应主要包括两个部分：首先要描述图片中发生的事情；其次对该事情阐述自己的观 点和看法。短文应主要使用一般现在时和一般过去时，第三人称来叙述，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时应注意：首先短文内容应符合图片表达的意思，不能会错意，写偏、写错；可以根据图片信息适当发 挥，使文章更加充实、完整。其次要注意英语句式表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能根据汉语思维逐词翻 译，写汉语式的英语。用从句子的整体结构出发，写完整的句子。句式结构可以简单句为基础，穿插并列 句或复合句结构。为提升作文水平，应注意应用高级词汇和复杂结构。同时语句之间使用恰当的衔接成 分，使文意连贯、自然。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求以及图片信息，介绍了图片中发生的事情，并对这件事发表 了自己的看法。短文有以下几个优点：首先短文内容符合题目要求，作者通过观察图片，正确了解了图片 传达的信息，确定了文章的中心。文章内容完整、充实，叙述清晰、有层次。作者观点明确，理由充分。 其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般过去时和一般现在时、第三人称来叙述，正确使用了谓 语动词的形式，注意了过去式，尤其是不规则动词过去式的变化，语法规范，用词准确。最后短文中句式 结构文章，符合英语的表达习惯，简单句、并列句、复合句交替应用，文章富有节奏的变化。短文中还使 用了丰富的句型， 如 Xiao Lin's mom bought him a telephone and Xiao Gang's dad bought a laptop for him.、But I think it is not proper to compare with each other. > Of course their parents can buy some gifts for the holiday, but I think the gift must be suitable for their children, such as books, school things, dictionaries and so on., which are good for them.、 Things like cell phones and laptops are of little use to primary school students, just distracting them.等。题目仔细观察图片，展开合理想象，然后写一篇短文。提示词：volunteer; the old people's homes要求：1 .话题作文和图示作文任选其一。2,词数:80100之间。3.字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。题目为材料作文。围绕疫苗接种后需要注意的事项写一篇短文。题目为一篇材料作文。围绕“如何保 护自己的安全”写一篇短文。题目题目要求根据提示词语和图片提示，写出一篇有关参加志愿者活动的作文，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。满分范演题目In order to effectively control the spread of COVID-19, China carries out a policy of free vaccination in 2021. There are a few things to look out for after vaccination.First, don't take a shower in three days. Next, drink more water, and don't drink wine. Third, eat as many fruits and vegetables as possible. Fourth, don't eat fish and eggs. Last but not least, do outdoor sports properly, don't stay up late, and get plenty of sleep.题目As we all know, danger is everywhere in our life and safety is the first. So it's necessary to know some ways to protect us.Don't let children play in the kitchen at home, because they may burn themselves. Ifs easy to slip and fall on a wet floor. Be sure to keep the bathroom floor dry after having a shower or bath. Don't take any knife to school, because it may hurt your classmates by accident. When you go across the road, you must obey the traffic rules. Don't let the children go swimming alone.T hope these tips can help you.题目Last week, several of my classmates and I took part in a volunteer activity held by the community.We went to the old people's homes by bus. There, we learned about the health situation of the old people and helped them clean up. Some cleaned the yard and some cleaned the room, such as sweeping the floor and cleaning the table and so on. We were busy all afternoon. We were tired, but we were happy.I will take part in such activities in the future.2021年龙东地区考题形式较前几年没有变化，同样是一个小作文再从材料作文和看图作文中选择一个 进行写作。题目主要采用一般现在时，多用祈使句句式。分为两段式：第一段引出主题；第二段介绍需要 注意的事项。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。题目主要采用一般现在时。从 生活安全，学校安全和户外安全等方面，结合实际生活提出自己的想法和观点。写作时保持主谓一致性， 逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。题目写作时要图片内容紧密联系起来，用第一人称来写作，时态以一 般过去时为主，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。1. In order to effectively control the spread of COVID-19, China carries out a policy of free vaccination in 2021.【亮点】inorder to表目的,短语carry out：实施。2. First, .Second,.Third, .Last but not least.【亮点】First, .Second,.Third, .Last but not least表歹举。3. When you go across the road, you must obey the traffic rules.【亮点】when引导的时间状语从句。4. Last week, several of my classmates and I took part in a volunteer activity held by the community.【亮点】过去分词作定语修饰volunteer activityo相似题你班计划本周末乘大巴车到西山(West Hills)交R游，你校交换生吉姆愿意一同前往。假如你是李华, 请你用英语写一个电子邮件，将活动事宜告知吉姆。1 .时间：周日上午8点至下午4点.活动内容：爬山，摘樱桃(cherries)2 .注意事项：守时；自带午餐；确保安全注意：1 .词数：90左右;.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2 .开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim,Yours,Li Hua 【参考范文】Dear Jim,We're going on a trip to the West Hills this Sunday. Here is some information about the trip.We're going to meet at the school gate before 8 o'clock, and go there by bus. Well climb up the hills and enjoy the beautiful scenery there. You must be careful and keep away from any danger. Please remember to bring your lunch.After lunch, well go down to a local farm to pick the sweet cherries before we go back home at 4:00 p. m.Have a nice trip!Yours,Li Hua 【考题解析】L题干解读：该题目属于电子邮件写作。在写作时应根据题目要求介绍活动的时间，具体内容及注意事 项。2.写作指导：本文用第一人称来写作；时态采用一般将来时为主；介绍活动的时间，具体内容及注意事项 叙述完整，条理清晰。相似题你的好友David感冒了，你写信告诉他一些注意事项，提一些合理的建议。60字左右。Dear David,I am sorry to hear that you have a cold.Yours【参考范文】Dear David,I am sorry to hear that you have a cold. You should see a doctor. And you should take medicine on time. You also should take more exercise, because it is helpful to your health. You had better drink more hot water .Don't forget to wear more! And you should have a balanced diet, and eat more fruit and vegetables. It is important to keep healthy.I hope you will be better soon.YoursLihua【考题解析】试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍好友生病了，给他提出注意事项和一些建议。结合所给材料，可知 本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，二人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为动宾结构，注意 一些常见句式的应用，比如：You should； because it is； You had better； It is importantto;I hope等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序， 符合逻辑关系，注意文后要表达希望好友尽快恢复健康的愿望。【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头表达对好友生病了而感到难过，接下来介绍他应注意事项和 一些建议，最后表达希望好友尽快恢复健康的愿望。此处用了 take medicine, take more exercise, is helpful to, forget to, have a balanced diet等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。考点：提纲作文。相似题假如你是阳光中学的学生陆明，你在学校网站上看到国际部学生Thompson的求助信，请根据求助 信的内容，用英语给他写一封电子邮件，介绍你校图书馆的借阅要求及注意事项。Help NeededI'm Thompson, an international student from Britain. I would like to know how to borrow books from the school library. Should I bring my student's card with me? How long can I keep a book? I wonder if you can provide any tips on borrowing books.Please e-mail me at Thompson2005gmail. com. Thank you!Thompson 注意事项：1 .邮件须包括图书馆的借阅要求及注意事项，要求符合情境、语句通顺、意思连贯；.词数在90个左右，邮件的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；2 .邮件不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息；.邮件内容必须写在答题卡的指定位置上。【参考范文】Fve read your letter and I'm writing to tell you how to borrow books from the school library.First of all, you should bring your students card with you and show it to a librarian, or you won't be allowed to borrow any books. Then, you can ask the librarian for help if you can't find the book you want. What's more, keep it in mind that you must return the books in time. You can keep them for two weeks. However, if yon can't finish reading the books, it is necessary for you to renew them. After you have borrowed the books, don't lend them to others.I sincerely hope the tips can be of help to you. Please email me if you have any other problems.Yours faithfully,Lu Ming【考题解析】1、题干解读本题目属于记叙文写作，根据收到的电子邮件写回信，所以写作格式按照邮件格式。第一段写答应对方的 请求；第二段介绍借书的具体程序；第三段结束语。2、例文点评例文采用三段式结构；时态采用一般现在时为主，其他时态为辅；人称采用第二人称为主；对借书的流程和 注意点的描述很细致、很有条理，包括：需要学生证，咨询图书管理员，不要延期，不要借给别人。3、高分亮点短语:be allowed to; show sth. to sb.; what's more; keep it in mind； lend sth. to sb.句