英语Unit1Backtoschool表达作文巧升格学案.docx

UNIT 1 Back to schoolGuided writing表达作文巧升格口文体指导倡议书倡议书属于应用文的一种，由标题、称呼、正文、结尾、落款五部分组成。一般用将来 时或般现在时。题目常会给出标题、称呼、结尾、落款这四部分，考生只需完成正文即可。 这类写作的正文包括倡议的目的、内容以及呼吁。基本框架1 .开头一一点明发出倡议的目的；2 .主体一一详细说明倡议的内容；3 .结尾一一对特定对象发出呼吁。注意事项：该体裁观点鲜明，情感真挚。观点鲜明，显示着说话者对一种理性认识的肯 定，也显示着说话者对客观事物见解的透彻程度，能给人以可信性和可靠感，情感真挚才能 打动人，引起共鸣。常用词块1. Nowadays, .As high school students, what should we do?现在，作为高中生，我们应该做些什么呢？2. In order to . I think we should try our best to do whatever we can.为了我认为我们应该尽最大努力。3. Now I would like to call on everyone to pay attention to.现在我想要呼吁大家关注4. In my opinion, we should . Only in this way can we .在我看来，我们应该只有用这样的方法我们才能5. It would be better if .如果，那就更好了。6. It is high time that we 是我们的时候了。7. As long as we work together, we can.只要我们团结，就能。8. If you are willing to ，please.如果你愿意，请常用语句精彩开头1. What I* m talking about today is my dream.我今天要谈论的是我的梦想。2. It's nice to speak about what we can do for our school, and I think each of us can do something.很高兴谈谈我们能够为学校做些什么，我认为我们每个人都可做到。3. It, s my honour to stand here and say something about friendship.很荣幸站在这里谈论关于友谊的话题。4. Nowadays, people in big cities are complaining about the heavy traffic. 现在，生活在大城市里的人们在抱怨严重的交通阻塞。5. Good listening can always show respect, promote understanding, and improve interpersonal relationship.善于倾听能够显示出对于别人的尊重，促进相互理解.，改善人际关系。正文佳句1. As we al 1 know, failure is the mother of success, but few people can realy understand what the saying means.我们都知道失败是成功之母，但是很少有人真正理解这句格言的真谛。2. Now i f you ask me what I want to be when I grow up, I wi 1 say wi thout hesitation that I want to be a teacher, particularly an English teacher!如今你若问我长大想干什么，我会亳不犹豫地回答：我想当个老师，尤其是当一名英语 老师！3. Today I also have a dream-to make our country stronger and more prosperous. 今天我也有一个梦想一一让我们的国家变得更加强大，更加繁荣。4. From this point of view, we can see more and more people tend to offer help to those in trouble.从这个角度来看，我们可以看到越来越多的人倾向于帮助那些处于麻烦中的人。5. No one can deny the fact that exercising regularly and keeping a balanced diet benefit our health greatly.没有人能够否认这一事实：经常锻炼和保持均衡的饮食对健康非常有益处。6. The thing we should do is to protect the facilities in our school.我们应该做的是保护好我们学校的设施。余味结尾1. If everyone does one thing for our school, I believe we will turn our school into a better place to study and live in.如果每个人都为学校做些事情，我相信我们学校会变成一个更有利于大家学习和生活的地方。2. In my opinion, we should try to develop healthy eating habits to build up a strong body. Only in this way can wo have enough energy to study better.在我看来，我们应该尽力养成健康的饮食习惯来强身健体。只有这样我们才能够拥有足 够的精力以便于更好的学习。3. As long as we work together, we can make the impossible possible.只要我们众志成城，一切皆有可能。4. If you cherish it, you will have a successful life!珍惜它，你就会拥有成功的生活。越来越多的汽车进入了我们的家庭，改善了我们的生活，但同时也带来了很多问题，如 堵车和车祸，给家庭和社会带来了极大的危害。请你以学生会的名义，就交通安全问题用英 语给全体学生写一封倡议书。内容包括：1 .遵守交通规则，如走人行道/过斑马线；2 .别在街道或马路上玩耍；3 .劝父母不要酒后驾车。注意：1 .词数80左右；2 .可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：斑马线zebra-crossing【学生习作】Dear schoolmates,More and more cars are coming into our families and we are happy that they have greatly improved our life. But unluckily, they have also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents.Traffic safety is everybody's business. We must obey the rules. For example, we must walk on the sidewalks, when we cross zebra-crossing, stop, look right and left , and then go across fast. Don't play on the road. We can tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights, not to taik and laugh while they are driving. Cars are coming into our life, but we can be safe to drive on roads and walk on sidewalks only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody* s business.The Students, Union点评：1 .文章主体结构安排欠合理.：第 二段可以分成两段。2 .句式较为单调：有些句子可以 适当整合以提升句子质量，增强 表达效果。3 .词汇选择以初级词汇为主：应 多用一些高级词汇。【升格作文】Dear schoolmates.With more and more cars coming into our families, we are happy that they have greatly improved our life. But unluckily, they have also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents.Traffic safety is everybody, s business. We must obey the rules. For example, we must walk on the sidewalks, when we cross zebra-crossing, stop, look right and left, and then go across fast. Don* t play on the road. We can tel 1 our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights* not to talk and laugh while driving. Let, s take immediate action!The Students' Union 学以致用假定你是某国际学校的学生李华，你校正在开展“创建美丽校园”的活动。请你用英语 给全校学生写一封倡议书。要点包括：1 .创建美丽校园的重要性；2 .校园内存在的不文明现象；3 .你的态度。注意：1.词数80左右（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）；4 .可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear fellow students,I* m writing to call on everyone to take an active part in building a beautifulcampus,Yours»Li Hua【参考范文】Dear fellow students.I'm writing to call on everyone to take an active part in building a beautiful campus.As we know, we spend most of our time on campus. An attractive campus can make our learning pleasant and as a result improve our grades. However, some students can be seen running on the lawn, picking flowers. Some even spit in public or throw rubbish everywhere.It' s t ime we did something to change the situat ion. I think everyone is responsible for the beauty of our campus and if each of us avoids doing anything improper, our campus will no doubt become more beautiful. Every effort matters. Let* s take action now!Yours，Li Hua