高三英语二轮复习专题能力提升练 二十八 短文改错.1 含答案.docx

专题能力提升练二十八限时40分钟下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或 修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）画掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。1I went hiking to a mountain with some friend last summer holiday. It was a good trip at the beginning but something unexpected was happened on the half way. One of my friends suddenly felt a terrible painful in his stomach and he couldn't move forward any further. Nobody knows what to do. One girl tried to call her mum with her cell phone and there was no signal in the mountain area. Unluckily we brought a tent with us. We put up and let him rest in it. He took some medicine, drank some water, and eating some food. After a while, he felt more better and we walked on. We all enjoyed ourselves at the top of the mountain, talking and laughing.safeIfs so hard to make a decision.1 .【解析】第二句中on玲in。月份前面用介词in。2 .【解析】第三句中andfor。either. . or或者或者，是固定短语。3 .【解析】第四句中hasfhave。both作主语，谓语用复数。4 .【解析】第五句中butfso。根据句意，在家睡得好，是因果关系。5 .【解析】第六句中student玲students。根据前面56可知，此处 应该用复数。6 .【解析】第七句中goodfwell。此处修饰动词sleep,用副词well。7 .【解析】第九句中eatfeating。enjoy后接动名词形式。8 .【解析】第十句中去掉a。fun是不可数名词，不能加不定冠词。9 .【解析】第十一句中have后加to。have to不得不。句意：如果我 住在家里，就不得不骑车去上学。10 .【解析】第十二句中safely玲safe。此处由and连接作表语，所以 用形容词。答案:I went hiking to a mountain with some friend last summer holiday. It was a goodfriendstrip at the beginning but something unexpected happened on the half way. One ofin my friends suddenly felt a terrible painful in his stomach and he couldn't movepainforward any further. Nobody knows what to do. One girl tried to call her mum withknewher cell phone and there was no signal in the mountain area. Unluckily we broughtbutLuckilya tent with us. We put A up and let him rest in it. He took some medicine, drank someitwater, and eating some food. After a while, he felt more /nk)re better and we walkedateatemuch on. We all enjoyed ourselves at the top of the mountain, talking and laughing.1 .【解析】第一句中的friend玲friends。考查名词。从some可知用 名词复数。2 .【解析】第二句中的at玲in。考查介词。at the beginning后面接of; 而in the beginning是单独的状语。3 .【解析】第二句中去掉happened前的was。考查语态。因为happen 没有被动语态。4 .【解析】第三句中的painful玲pain。考查名词。形容词terrible后 接名词。5 .【解析】第四句中的knowsfknew。考查时态。整篇文章的时态 是过去时，故此处用一般过去时。6 .【解析】第五句中的and玲but。考查并列连词。此处表示转折关 系。7 .【解析】第六句中的Unluckily玲Luckily。考查副词。幸运的是，我 们带了一顶帐篷。8 .【解析】第七句中put后加it。考查代词。我们搭起了帐篷，it此 处指代the tento.【解析】第八句中的eatingfate。考查动词。and连接三个并列的 动作，应保持一致，故用ate。9 .【解析】第九句中的morefmuch或去掉more。考查比较级。better 本身就是比较级了，故去掉more或改为much,修饰比较级。About one year before, we got a lovely dog named Dexter. He enjoys watching my elderly neighbor in her garden. Although he won't let her to touch him, he always keeps an eye on her.One afternoon I heard Dexter calling strange. When I reached the door to check on him, his calling stops, so I headed back to kitchen. Just as I did, his calling started again. I stepped outside to find Dexter sit next to my elderly neighbor who had fallen. He didn't have the strength to get up and shout for help. Dexter didn't leave her sides until help arrived. With Dexter, she might not have been found in time. 答案：About one year before, we got a lovely dog named Dexter. He enjoys watchingagomy elderly neighbor in her garden. Although he won't letr to touch him, he always keeps an eye on her.One afternoon I heard Dexter calling strange. When I reached the door to checkstrangelyon him, his calling stops, so I headed back to Akitchen. Just as I did, his callingthethestopped started again. I stepped outside to find Dexter sit next to my elderly neighbor whosittinghad fallen. He didn't have the strength to get up and shout for help. Dexter didn'tSheorleave her sides until help arrived. With Dexter, she might not have been foundsideWithoutin time.1 .【解析】第一句中before玲ago。before常用于过去完成时，ago常 用于一般过去时。2 .【解析】第三句中去掉t。let后面接省略to的动词不定式作宾语 补足语。3 .【解析】第四句中strange玲strangely。此处用副词作状语，修饰动 词 callingo.【解析】第五句中stops玲stopped。此处叙述一件过去的事，故用 过去时态。4 .【解析】第五句中kitchen前加the。此处特指自家的厨房。5 .【解析】第七句中sitfsitting。find sb. doing发现某人正在做，现 在分词作宾语补足语。6 .【解析】第八句中He玲She。根据下文的didn't leave her可知邻居 是女性。7 .【解析】第八句中and>or。否定句中and要用or替代。8 .【解析】第九句中sides玲side。根据句意，狗没有离开她的旁边。 只能是一边，故用单数。9 .【解析】第十句中WithfWithout。根据句意，如果不是这条狗的 话，她就不会被及时发现。3People often have troubles getting used to a new culture. They are usually curious when they first arrive in a foreign country. Therefore, if they stay for a long time, they may start to feel difference stages of culture shock. They can feel alone or sad because he can't deal with the local people. How quick people get used to culture differences may be depend on the way they learn. That/s a problem if they can't speak the language. On other hand, some can study the situation and make good guesses about the culture. When they finally began to understand some of the language and make some new friends, they will gradually enjoy themselves and feel satisfying. 答案：People often have troubles getting used to a new culture. They are usuallytroublecurious when they first arrive in a foreign country. Therefore, if they stay for a longHowevertime, they may start to feel difference stages of culture shock. They can feelalonedifferentlonelyor sad because he can't deal with the local people. How quick people get used totheyquicklyculture differences mayNe depend on the way they learn. That's a problem if they can't speak the language. On A other hand, some can study the situation and makethegood guesses about the culture. When they finally began to understand some of thebeginlanguage and make some new friends, they will gradually enjoy themselves and feel satisfying .satisfied.【解析】第一句中 troubles玲trouble。have trouble(in)doing sth.做 某事有困难，是固定短语。1 .【解析】第三句中Therefore玲However。根据句意，上句和本句之 间是转折关系。2 .【解析】第三句中differencefdifferent。此处修饰名词,用形容词。3 .【解析】第四句中aloneflonely。alone独自电 单独地；lonely孤 独地，寂寞地。根据句意，他们感到孤独。4 .【解析】第四句中he玲they。主句的主语是they,根据句意，后面 的原因状语从句主语也应该是theyo.【解析】第五句中quickfquickly°quickly修饰动词短语get used to。5 .【解析】第五句中去掉be。此处depend on表示"取决于"，无需被 动。6 .【解析】第七句中On后面加the。on the other hand另一方面，是 固定短语。7 .【解析】第八句中began玲begin。本文是一篇说明文，全文用一般 现在时和将来时，根据语境，此处用现在时。8 .【解析】第八句中satisfyingfsatisfied。此处用过去分词形式的形 容词作表语，表达人的心理变化。4My junior high school has come to an end. I'm going to study in the senior high school on September. I can live either at school and at home. But I can't decide because both has advantages and disadvantages. At home, I have my own room, but I can have a good sleep. However, I have to share one room with 56 student at school. Maybe I can't sleep good. It's a problem. Although I can have better food at home, I enjoy eat with my classmates. I think it's a great fun and I can make more friends. If I live at home, 111 have ride to school. It's a waste of time and not safely. It's so hard to make a decision.答案：My junior high school has come to an end. Tm going to study in the senior high school on September. I can live either at school and at home. But I can't decideinorbecause both has advantages and disadvantages. At home, I have my own room,buthavesoI can have a good sleep. However, I have to share one room with 56 student atst udentsschool. Maybe I can't sleep good. Ifs a problem. Although I can have better food atwellhome, I enjoy eat with my classmates. I think it、a great fun and I can make moreeatingfriends. If I live at home, I'H have A ride to school. It's a waste of timeand not safely. to