作文中秋节介绍.ppt

1.You should make it a rule to leave things _you can find them again.2.-Where did you get to know Miss Yang?-It was at the university _ we studied in the same class.书面表达（共书面表达（共25分）分）Module 4假设你叫张峰假设你叫张峰,你有一个美国笔友你有一个美国笔友Mike，他非常想了解中国的，他非常想了解中国的中秋节，请你给他写一封中秋节，请你给他写一封e-mail，介绍一下中秋节的情况。，介绍一下中秋节的情况。注意：注意：1.词数词数120左右。开头和结尾已经为你写好，不计入总左右。开头和结尾已经为你写好，不计入总词数。词数。2.参考词汇参考词汇:阴历阴历 lunar calendar；象征；象征 symbol;团团圆圆reunion 3.中秋节简介中秋节简介Dear Mike：How are you?I am so glad to tell you something about the Mid-Autumn Festival.Welcome to China to enjoy this festival with us one day.Yours,Zhang Feng时间时间阴历八月十五日阴历八月十五日方式方式赏月、吃月饼、听故事、家庭团聚、共进晚餐赏月、吃月饼、听故事、家庭团聚、共进晚餐象征象征月亮是团圆、运气、财富的象征。月亮是团圆、运气、财富的象征。范围范围中国及其它部分亚洲国家中国及其它部分亚洲国家篇章结构Beginning-General IntroductionBody Part-Major InformationEnding Dear Mike,How are you?I am so glad to tell you something about the Mid-Autumn Festival.It is a traditional festival with a long history in China.It is very popular and is also celebrated in many other Asian countries.The festival falls on the 15th day of August in the lunar calendar and is celebrated in different ways.It is a time to get together with family and friends.People usually have a get-together,enjoying a large meal.In the evening,people talk and eat moon cakes under the beautiful moon.Children prefer to listen to fairy tales about Change or Wugang while the family appreciate the sight of a bright full moon in the open air.The moon is a symbol of reunion,luck and wealth.It is also a custom to express best wishes to people they love at this particular time.Welcome to China to enjoy this festival with us one day.Yours,Zhang Feng It drops on August,the15th in lunar calendar.During the Mid-Autumn Festival,it is a tradition that people appreciate the moon,eat moon cakes and listen to stories.The members of a family also get together to have dinner.The moon is the symbol of reunion,luck and fortune.The traditional festival ranges from China to some other Asian countries.The Chinese who live in every corner of the world celebrate the Mid-Autumn Festival in many ways every year.They pay attention to the meaning of the festival and pass on happiness during the get-together dinner.23分分Dear Mike:How are you?I am so glad to tell you something about the Mid-Autumn Festival.Mid-Autumn Day has a long history in China,and it is usually celebrated on August 15th in lunar calendar.In China,moon has many good meanings.Its a symbol of reunion,fortune and wealth.So during the Day,we have many traditions to do with moon.For example,we usually get together to have dinner,enjoying the moon and listening to stories.Also,we have a traditional food-moon cake.It varies from each to each and usually delicious.Not only is it popular in China,but also in other part of Asia.Welcome to China to enjoy this festival with us one day.Yours,Zhang Feng21分分Dear Mike，How are you?I am so glad to tell you something about the Mid-Autumn Festival.The Mid-Festival is a traditional festival in China which is on August 15th in lunar calender.Usually we get toghther with our family,having dinner and listen stories.Also we eat mooncakes,and enjoy the glorious full moon at the same time.The reason why we think highly of the Mid-Festival is that the moon is the symbol of not only the fortune and wealth but also reunion.We believe that the full moon can bring us good luck and riches in the Mid-Festival.Bacause of the influntial of China,the Mid-Autumn Festival is celebrated in China as well as some other parts of the Asian Countries.Welcome to China to enjoy this festival with us one day.Yours,Zhang Feng18分分出现问题出现问题1、语态、语态&语态语态 1)Mid-Autumn Festival which celebrates on August 15th of lunar calendar is a traditional festival of China.which is celebrated on the 15th day of August in the lunar calendar 2)The mid-Autumn Festival,which was hold on lunar calendar fifteenth August and was widely-celebrated by Chinese.2.汉化表达汉化表达 In addition,we also listen to the story which is related to the legend of the moon and eat a big dinner with families because it is a very important day when all members of family get together.3.并列结构并列结构 And the mid-autumn festival has connection with moon because moon is considered to be the symbol of reunion,fortune and wealthiness/lucky.4.名词单复数名词单复数 It is one of the most important traditional festival.They are also attract many peoples attention.主讲扣住要点中秋节简介中秋节简介时间时间阴历八月十五日阴历八月十五日方式方式赏月、吃月饼、听故事、家庭团聚、共进晚餐赏月、吃月饼、听故事、家庭团聚、共进晚餐象征象征月亮是团圆、运气、财富的象征。月亮是团圆、运气、财富的象征。范围范围中国及其它部分亚洲国家中国及其它部分亚洲国家佳句赏析（主扣信息点）佳句赏析（主扣信息点）1.时间时间阴历八月十五日阴历八月十五日1)The festival falls on the 15th day of August in the lunar calendar and is celebrated in different ways.2)Mid-Autumn Festival,on August 15th in lunar calendar,is a traditional festival with a long history in China and other Asian countries.同位语同位语3）定语从句）定语从句月亮是团圆、运气、财富的象征。月亮是团圆、运气、财富的象征。1)In addition,moon is a symbol of reunion so that most people who stay away from home will go back home to stay with family.2)And the mid-Autumn Festival has connection with moon because moon is considered to be the symbol of reunion,fortune and luck3)At that time,all the people of one family will stay together,having the supper and watching the big circle bright moon in the sky.方式方式 赏月、吃月饼、听故事、家庭团聚、共进晚餐赏月、吃月饼、听故事、家庭团聚、共进晚餐1)It is a time to get together with family and friends.People usually have a get-together,enjoying a large meal.In the evening,people talk and eat moon cakes under the beautiful moon.Children prefer to listen to fairy tales about Change or Wugang while the family appreciate the sight of a bright full moon in the open air.2)During the Mid-Autumn Festival,it is a tradition that people appreciate the moon,eat moon cakes and listen to stories.The members of a family also get together to have dinner.构句构句1.三大从句三大从句2.定语从句定语从句3.名词性从句名词性从句4.状语从句状语从句2.非谓语动词非谓语动词3.强调句强调句4.倒装句倒装句5.With 的复合结构的复合结构Module 5 写作要求王军霞是我国历史上出色的田径选手，生在农村的她由于家庭生活条件艰苦，从小就养成了吃苦耐劳的优良品质，再加上马俊仁教练对她科学及严格的训练，她终于成为了中国的“东方神鹿”。1996年亚特兰大奥运会，王军霞成为世界冠军。在获得了许多荣誉之后，她去了辽宁大学学习法律，并且去美国深造。此外，她还开设了一家生产健身设备的工厂。请根据以上信息，以“A Great Sports Personality-Wang Junxia”为题，介绍王军霞的事迹并简单讲讲你的感想。不得逐字翻译。词数120-150.整个写作过程：整个写作过程：1.审题：审题：2.体裁体裁-记叙文记叙文3.时态时态-一般现在时，一般过去时，现在完成时一般现在时，一般过去时，现在完成时4.人称人称-第三人称第三人称 2.2.文章的结构文章的结构Beginning-General IntroductionBeginning-General IntroductionBody Part-Body Part-事迹事迹Ending-Ending-感想感想2.遣词遣词 王军霞是一名运动员，写她的文章自然应王军霞是一名运动员，写她的文章自然应与与体育运动体育运动有关，同时还应包括一些有关，同时还应包括一些人物人物描写描写的词汇的词汇。Sports personality,coach,athlete,strong-willed,hard-working,character,train,the world champion,achievement,honor,be satisfied with,further education,make a progress.2.造句造句排除母语的干扰，采用地道的句式，切忌中文式的英语。排除母语的干扰，采用地道的句式，切忌中文式的英语。非谓语动词非谓语动词定语从句定语从句名词性从句名词性从句状语从句状语从句倒装句倒装句A Great Sports Personality-Wang Junxia Wang Junxia was a famous Chinese athlete.Born into a poor peasant family,she lived a hard life,which made her hard-working and strong-willed.It was this character that made her a successful athlete.Ma Junren,her coach,was very strict with her.Meanwhile,he used such a scientific method to train her that she soon made great progress.In 1996,Wang became the world champion at the Atlanta Olympic Games.Since then,because of her great achievements in sports,she has received many honors of China and the world.Successful as she was,she wasnt satisfied with what she achieved.After studying law in Liaoning University,she went to America for further education.She also started a factory to produce bodybuilding facilities.I admire Wang so much.Her spirit of being eager to learn is worth learning.1.born into a poor peasant family:过去分词短语做状语过去分词短语做状语2.强调句型结构强调句型结构3.suchthat4.as 倒装句倒装句下水试游下水试游:Focus on Making Sentences1.1.因为深受老师的话的感动，因为深受老师的话的感动，他决心把英语学好。他决心把英语学好。2.Deeply moved by his teachers words,he made up his mind to learn English well.3.3.2.2.虽然他学习很刻苦，但是考试却没有通过。虽然他学习很刻苦，但是考试却没有通过。4.Hard as he worked,he didnt pass the exam.5.3.一方面他英语学的很好，另一方面他也很乐意帮一方面他英语学的很好，另一方面他也很乐意帮助别人。助别人。6.For one thing he is good at English,for another thing he is willing to help others.