考研英语--黄涛--启航教育.docx

Section IV作文考点及复习技巧1 .英汉思维习惯（直截了当direct= call a spade a spade； indirect转弯抹角）2 .写作的现实与矛盾（wordless, incorrect）3 .写作的“四化”：语言准确化（accuracy）语言多样化（variety）结构清晰化（clarity内容简单化（simplicity）4 .写作的九条原则：语言第一（准确度、广度、难度、亮度）结构第二（关联词）内容第三（要一致）审题看图要认真文体要统一主题要突出方式要多样化首尾要照应考点要覆全第一节高分词汇变化与替换1. More and more young people find it more and more difficult to adapt to the fierce competition.2. More and more children like surfing the internet.Teenagers' surfing the internet is on the increase/rise/drop/decline/.The number of teenagers * surfing the internet is on the rise.3. A more and more harmonious climate is needed with the development of society.There is a growing need /demand for an increasing harmonious climate as our society advances.4. Most people realize that every citizen should have an equal chance to be educated.The vast/overwhclming majority of folks are aware that every citizen should have an equal chance to be educated.5. People began to discuss the issue of middle school students studying abroad.A spirited discussion has sprung up with regard to /as to/conceming the issue of middle school students studying abroad.5.1 firmly support this idea that we should make friends with our neighbors.I am firmly supportive of this idea that we should be on good terms with our neighbors.7. Some people often think everybody should have a sense of responsibility.It is universally acknowledged that everybody should have a sense of responsibility.8. When we talk about whether college students should be involved in business activities, differentpeople have different ideas.一谈到大学生是否应该参加商业活动的问题，不同的人持有不同的观点。When it comes to whether college students should be involved in business activities, ideas/opinions vary from person to person.9. This picture has a deep meaning and indicates a deep social phenomenon too.This cartoon/drawing bears a explicit meaning and is indicative of a profound social phenomenon as well.10. I think we should encourage children to face some hardship. Only like this, they are able to facethe problem they will meet in their lives.-12In my personal sense, children are encouraged to go through some hardship. Only in this manner, are they capable of facing the problem they will confront in their lives.11. We can see from the picture that the runner reaches the finishing line and starts towards a new goal again.As can be seen from the picture /is depicted in the drawing, the runner . line and strives for the next goal once more.12. Nowadays, the trend of becoming old appears to be the biggest problem.Currently, an aging population has become a harsh /severe problem in China.13. So I am full of thanks for your timely help.Consequently I am deeply obliged to you for your timely help.14. In our society, some people think supporting old men is not as important as before.In our fast-developing community, some individuals contend that supporting the old is no longer regarded as momentous as before.15. They think they don't want to look after their parents for having no time.The youngsters maintain that they are unwilling to look after their parents for lack of time.16. There were no our parents. Then, we have no chance to live in this world.But fbr/Without our parents, we would have no chance to come to the world.更多有关作文高分词汇的资料可登陆我博客在“博文”里去找：第二节作文典型错误分析一.谓语动词（时态错误）1. We college students had enough time to take part-time jobs, no matter how busy we were.2. The young people are facing with too many temptations nowadays.3. His fault is satisfy with the past success and pay little attention to the present challenge.4. The importance of cultural communication just let more foreigners know China.二.主谓一致和代词（指代错误）5. Every aspect of the Chinese lives have changed in the past decade.6. One of the serious problems human beings are faced with are water shortage.7. Getting up early benefit us in more than one way.7.1 shall meet with lots of difficulties, but 1 think I can overcome it.三.逻辑主语与后面的主语不一致错误9. At the age of six, my father began to give me English lessons.10. So to solve this problem, it needs everyone to make great effort.11. Compared the two pictures we can conclude that the flowers in a green-house are too weak tobear harsh environment.12. Confronted this situation, we should develop a rational attitude towards it.四.平行结构错误13. A young folk should strike a balance between being himself and to follow the cult.-1314. Nowadays people not only eat enough, but also eat better.15. His spoken English is better than all his classmates.五.名词错误16. College student is confronted with various stress and tension.17. Internet provides us with many useful infbnnations.六.连接词语错误18. Because some college graduates could not find a better job, so they decided to continue to pursue a second degree.19. Although an opportunity is rare, but we must strive to seize it.20. There is, as is vividly illustrated in this picture, a young man is asking his barber to cut his hairin David Beckham's style.21. China opened the door to the outside world, more and more people visit China and become interested in Chinese culture.22. As the saying goes,“time is money. In my personal sense, time is even more precious than money. When money is spent, we can earn it back. When time is gone, it will never return. This is the reason why we must value our time.七.拼写、表达、搭配错误23. We students should leam/study as much knowledge as possible.24. In order to serve for the people well in the future, I should study hard now.25. TV now plays an important role in our daily life. Because we cannot live without it.26. The fishing ships are many more in 1995 than in 199027. My solutions to this problem have several ways.28. When old problems are solved, new problems will rise.29. I'm determined to study much more harder than last term.30. In the past two decades, our country has taken place great changes.九.词性错误31. We should develop China's economic, and lead our country to a rich, strong nation.32. Our world will bright if everyone shows love to others.33. The increasing population effects on our environment.十.句子成分错误34. People think go to the movie will cost a lot of money.35. The picture shows an American girl who wearing the traditional Chinese costume.36. The best way show love is to help those need help in their life.37. As it is universally acknowledged, knowledge is power.38. More and more people deeply believe smoking does harm to health, wastes money.十一.标点符号错误39.1 won't lose my heart, instead, I'll study harder.40.1 can do whatever I like in the library. For example: reading, traveling, or doing exercises.-14-第三节作文经典句型练习一.It +被动语态4-that.1 .人们普遍认为，广泛的文化交流在许多方面对各国人民有好处。that extensive cultural exchange does good to people form various nations in many ways.2 .人们通常认为，一个人如果没有在现实生活中经历逆境和困难，他意志就决不能变得足够坚强。It is generally accepted that without experiencing hardships and difficulties in real life one can never become strong-minded enough.3 .人们必须承认，就青少年来说，一个充满竞争的环境对于生活技能的锻炼来说是必要的。It must be admitted that a competitive environment is necessary fbr the practice of life skills onthe side of teenagers.4 .不可否认的是，旅游业的过度发展可能会破坏某些风景区的生态平衡。It cannot be denied that the overgrowth of tourism may disturb the ecological balance of some scenic resorts.5 .众所周知，体育锻炼能够提高和增进我们的身心健康。It is well known to us all that physical exercises can improve and enrich our physical and mental well-being.二 It is +形容词+ that.6 .显而易见/不言而喻/毫无疑问，这种情况是直接由于过度的紧张和压力而造成的。that the situation is caused directly by excessive tension as well as stress.7 .人们对这个有争议的问题持不同的态度，这是可以理解的/不可避免的。It is comprehensible / understandable (inevitable) that people's attitudes are divergent/different on this controversial issue.8 .很难想象/相信我们年轻人竟然如此沉溺于这个虚拟的网络世界里。It is unimaginable (incredible/unbelievable) that we youngsters should be much addicted to the virtual net world.三. It is +形容词+ for sb.( sth.) to do sth.9 .大家积极参加体育锻炼非常而要。因为体育锻炼不仅我们的身体有好处，而且对我们的心理和性格也有好处。It is obvious (self-evident, clear, undeniable, apparent), fbr they will do good not only to our body but also to our mind and personality.10 .现在大学生毕业时很难找到一个理想的工作，特别是那些学基础课程专业的学生，比如历史和数学。upon his graduation, especially those majoring in fundamental courses such as history and mathematics.-15-11 .现在非常迫切需要采取紧急措施来控制非法毒品在青少年中大幅度蔓延。It is highly imperative that urgent measures should be done to control the widespread use of illegal drugs among teenagers.四.as /along with/Coupled with “随着”句型12 .随着经济的快速发展，中国人民的生活标准-经大大提高，许多家庭能够买得起房子和汽车。Along with the rapid growth of economy, the living standards of the Chinese people have been greatly improved. Houses and cars are within easy reach of （买得起） many families.13 .随着每年培养的大学生越来越多，求职市场的情况正变得愈加严峻。each year, the situation in the job market is getting tighter and tighter.14 .随着工业和农业的不断进步，缺水的问题也将越严重。As industry and agriculture advances, the problem of water shortage will be the more serious.15 .随着中国进一步开放和扩大与其它国家的教育交流，出国留学在中学生中正越来越流行。As China opens further to the outside world and increases its educational exchange with other countries, going abroad to study is increasingly fashionable among middle school students.五.Therebe句型16 .在过去十年里，年轻已婚夫妇想生孩子的数量已出现了明显的下降趋势。In the past ten years there has been a marked decline in the number of young married couples who want to have children.17 .近来，关于是否要克隆人类出现了热烈的讨论/辩论。In recent years, there has been a heated /spirited debate/controversy concerning whether human beings should be cloned.18 .现在仍然有许多孩子因为贫困而不能上学。There are still quite a number of children who cannot afford to go to school because of poverty.19.随着因特网业的发展，越来越多的人会上网冲浪。As the Internet industry develops, there will be an increasing number of folks surfing on the web.20.现在人们对孩子不得不要承受的学习和心理上的沉重负担表现出越来越多的担忧。, both academic and psychological, which our children have to bear.六.表示“使变得”的句型 make +宾语+形容词 make+形容词+ fbr sb. to do sth.21 .信息技术的广泛引用会使我们的工作和生活更加方便和丰富。The widespread introduction of modem information technology will make our work and life more convenient and colorful.22 .最重要的是，我们应该不断地加强我们的环保意识，使我们的世界成为适合人类居住-16-的美好家园。Most importantly, we should increasingly heighten our environmental awareness and23 .现代交通意味着让人们出门旅行更加快捷、方便和舒适。 Modem transportation means making it highly fast, convenient and comfortable for people to travel far away from home.24 .先进的医学科技使得人类的寿命更长，遭受各种疾病越少。Advanced medical science has made it possible for human beings to lead a much .七.so that （以便）/sothat （如此以致）句型25.青少年是如此喜欢时装以至他们花大量钱来买时髦的衣服。 Teenagers are so keen about fashions that they spend large amounts of money on fashionable clothes.26.我们青年人应该学会以恰当的方式来减轻压力以便我们能够更好地适应这个竞争社会。we can better adapt to the competitive society.八.非限制性定语从句27.有些人可能沉溺于网上冲浪，这会危害他们的身心健康。Some people may be addicted to netsurfing, which impairs their physical and mental health.28 .越来越高的离婚率将引发一系列的问题，这已受到大众的极大关注。 The increasingly high divorce rate will cause a series of problems, which .九.用分词结构扩展内容29 .由于人们没有意识到地球上的水资源是有限的，因此人们每天浪费了大量的水。 People,are limited, waste a greatamount of water every day.30 .公民有权利知道真相和约束名人，从而形成一种公众舆论。 Citizens have the right to know the truth and supervise the celebrity, thus forming a public opinion.31 .由于父母亲对孩子寄予极大希望，所以当他们得知其孩子考试不及格时，他们再也抑制不住自己极度的失望和生气了。Having placed great expectations on their son, they couldn't hold back huge disappointment and anger when they learnt their son's failure to pass the test.32.随着生活水平的提高，越来越多的人们开始购买汽车来满足工作和生活的需要，也就恶化了交通问题。, a growing number of folks begin to buy cars to meet the needs of work and life, thereby worsening the traffic problems.-17-十.结论句型33 .只要我们采取有效的措施，由老龄化社会所引发的问题将会减少到最小程度。 As long as we take effective measures, the problems caused by the aged society will be reduced to the smallest extent.34 .只要我们马上明智地采取行动，我们一定能够解决当前的这个紧迫的问题。, we are bound to solve the present severe problem.35 .只要政府和个人做出努力，就一定能找到一个解决这个问题的方法。 As long as the government and individuals strive hard, there will certainly be a way to solve this problem.36 .从提供的所有证据来看，我们可以稳妥地得出如下结论，体育锻炼对青少年的心理和智力的发展都有益。Judging from all evidence offered, we can safely come to the conclusion that physical exercises are beneficial to the psychological and intellectual growth of teenagers.37 .简而言之，在优先考虑发展经济的时候，应该做出大的努力来加强伦理和道德教育。 In short (In a word/All in all/To sum up), great efforts should be made to enhance ethic and moral education when high priority is given to the economic development.38 .只有当这些措施付诸实践的时候，缺水的问题才能得到解海It is only when these measures are put into practice that the shortage of water can be solved.39 .只仃当这个问题得到有效地解决时，我们才能维持个稳定和谐的社会。Only when this problem is solved effectively can we maintain a stable and harmonious society.40 .如果各行各业的人们足够关注这个问题，我们城市的生活将一定更加荚好。, our life in the city will certainly be more enjoyable.第四节写作基本功句30一.主语1 .找到问题出现的原因将会大大地帮助你减少压力和紧张。 will greatly help you reduce stress as well as tension.2 .很难想象没有因特网我们的生活会是什么样子。It is difficult to imagine what life would be like without the internet.3 .鼓励大学毕业生去西部工作是一个明智的决策。It is a wise decision to encourage college students to work in west China.4 .从他的行为中可以清楚看到，他不讲道德。 he has no morality.5 .最重要的是我们应该意识到这个问题的严重性。 we should be aware of the seriousness of this problem.6 .越来越多的国家欢迎不同的文化证明了我的观点。The fact proves our opinion that an increasing number of countries welcome different cultures.-18-7 .大学生是否应该参加社交活动是个有争议的话题。college students should participate in business activities.二、谓语8 .我们年轻人应该行为举止恰当，有礼貌。We youths should conduct ourselves properly and have good manners.9 .这些行为应该受到道德和舆论的谴责。morality and public opinions.10 .应该采取有效的措施来阻止这种不良现象的发生。三、宾语11 .政府应该在这个问题的解决中扮演重耍的角色。12 .人们深信，学校应该减轻压力，家庭应该重建和谐，政府应该加大投入。Folks are convinced that schools should reduce pressure, that families should rebuild harmony and that the administration should increase financial investment.13 .这对于开阔人们的眼界是很有好处的。It is beneficial for broadening people,s horizon/vision.14 .现在许多人无视公共规章，我们应向公众呼吁树立公德心。Currently an increasing number of folks disregard public rules/regulations.四、表语15 .我认为这个事实是不言而喻的。16 .这些措施似乎很合理。五、定语17 .有很多因素导致了这个问题。18 .良好的社会风气能促进家庭的和谐及社会的进步。Favorable public moral climate can enhance the harmony of families as well as the social advance.19 .大学应该提供实践课程，这对社会有利。Colleges ought to provide practical courses, which is conducive to the whole society.20 .性别歧视是现代社会的耻辱，我们每个人都有责任解决它。Sex discrimination is a shame for modem society, which all of us are duty-bound to eliminate.六、状语21 .有了坚定的决心，人就能够克服他所遇到的任何困境和危险。With a strong determination,-19-one is able to overcome whatever hardships and dangers he may encounter.22 .没有他无私的帮助，她不可能度过这次难关。Without his selfless assistance, she wouldn't have pulled through this difficulty.23 .远离亲人朋友，人会觉得孤独。Living for from relatives and friends, people will feel lonel