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典型错误例析四十、典型错误例析四十、典型错误例析中式英语中式英语(误误)Good good study,day day up.(正正)Study hard and youll make progress every day.(误误)I very like listen music and every day I also will see some newspapers.(正正)I like listening to music very much and every day I read some newspapers as well.(习惯性动作用一般现在时习惯性动作用一般现在时)(误误)I dont know I should do what.(正正)I dont know what I should do【方法点拨方法点拨】要减少中式英语必须做到：要减少中式英语必须做到：(1)养成用英语养成用英语思维进行写作的习惯，注意中西文化差异所带来的不同思维进行写作的习惯，注意中西文化差异所带来的不同表达；表达；(2)平时多归纳总结、纠正汉式英语；平时多归纳总结、纠正汉式英语；(3)多读原汁多读原汁原味英语。原味英语。巩固练习：找出并改正下列各词句中的错误。巩固练习：找出并改正下列各词句中的错误。1.Chinese have 1.3 billion population.2.Everywhere can see this kind of tree.3.Li Ping in the morning has 5 classes,afternoon has 2 classes.China has a population of 1.3 billion.We can see this kind of tree everywhere.Li Ping has five classes in the morning and two classes in the afternoon.4.Her age is very young.5.Study hard will sure succeed.6.He happened a serious accident last year.7.They each other help with finish their homework.She is very young.Studying hard,you will be sure to succeed.A serious accident happened to him last year.They help each other with their homework.8.We first want have rich experience applicants.9.His English made rapid progress./His English exam failed.10.The volunteers age must over 18 years old,have good body and have devote spirit.The applicants with rich experience are preferred.He made rapid progress in his English./He failed in his English exam.The volunteers must be over 18 years old,in good health and willing to devote.11.This road doesnt allow beyond 120 kilometers per hour.12.The Chinese government has decided to develop the central and western.Drives are not allowed to drive at the speed of more than 120 kilometers per hour on this road.The Chinese government has decided to develop the central and western areas of China.(误误)In the bedroom there are a bed,a desk and a chair.(正正)In the bedroom there is a bed,a sofa,a desk and a chair.【方法点拨方法点拨】关系不一致主要是指主谓一致、关系不一致主要是指主谓一致、时态一致，主谓、动宾搭配、介词搭配等。时态一致，主谓、动宾搭配、介词搭配等。巩固练习：找出并改正下列各词句中的错误。巩固练习：找出并改正下列各词句中的错误。1.He closed the door and hurries away to class.He closed the door and hurried away to class.关系不一致关系不一致2.In spite of its small size,the camera can take good pictures.3.If I were you,I wont do that.4.He had apologized for what he has done to his mother this morning.In spite of its small size,we can take good pictures with the camera.If I were you,I wouldnt do that.He apologized for what he had done to his mother this morning.5.We must to shoulder our responsibility of taking care of our parents.6.Parents need to have a proper attitude of encouraging children with cash.7.I am watching TV while he reading books at that moment.We must shoulder our responsibility of taking care of our parents.Parents need to have a proper attitude towards encouraging children with cash.I was watching TV while he was reading books at that moment.词性混用词性混用(误误)60%of the students against the idea of entrance fees.(正正)60%of the students are against the idea of entrance fees.(误误)Two days past before his letter arrived.(正正)Two days passed before his letter arrived.【方法点拨方法点拨】谓语动词分为动作或状态。形谓语动词分为动作或状态。形容词修饰名词；副词修饰动词、形容词、容词修饰名词；副词修饰动词、形容词、副词或者整个句子。副词或者整个句子。巩固练习：找出并改正下列各词句中的错误。巩固练习：找出并改正下列各词句中的错误。1.I have no difficult in finding your home.2.John always does his homework careful.3.Fortunate,people are beginning to realize how seriously the pollution is.I have no difficulty in finding your home.John always does his homework carefully.Fortunately,people are beginning to realize how serious the pollution is.重复累赘重复累赘(误误)The box is too heavy for the weak boy to carry it.(正正)The box is too heavy for the weak boy to carry.(误误)We hope to improve our work better.(正正)We hope to improve our work.【方法点拨方法点拨】有些英语单词本身自带某个意思，有些英语单词本身自带某个意思，或由于语法需要不能再出现某一单词，如果或由于语法需要不能再出现某一单词，如果学生基本功不够扎实，就常常出现造句累赘学生基本功不够扎实，就常常出现造句累赘现象。现象。巩固练习：找出并改正下列各词句中的错误。巩固练习：找出并改正下列各词句中的错误。1.Mary married with John.2.I returned back the book to you at 6:00 a.m.3.My most favorite song is“Hand in Hand”.4.The train is entering into the tunnel.Mary married John.I returned the book to you at 6 a.m.My favorite song is“Hand in Hand”.The train enters into the tunnel.选词或搭配不当选词或搭配不当(误误)Tom was in such a hurry that he forgot his schoolbag on the bus.(正正)Tom was in such a hurry that he left his schoolbag on the bus.【方法点拨方法点拨】平时记忆单词时，注重词语搭配。平时记忆单词时，注重词语搭配。巩固练习：找出并改正下列各词句中的错误。巩固练习：找出并改正下列各词句中的错误。1.Peter is a warm-hearted person,so everybody likes to have friends with him.Peter is a warm-hearted person,so everybody likes to make friends with him.2.Mr.Smith said an interesting story at the beginning of the meeting.3.Its cold outside,please dress your overcoat.4.I accepted your letter yesterday.5.When he at home,he costs all his time to play computer games.Mr.Smith told an interesting story at the beginning of the meeting.Its cold outside,please put on your overcoat.I received your letter yesterday.When he is at home,he spends all his time playing computer games.(误误)I am tired,I must go to bed.(正正)I am tired,so I must go to bed.【方法点拨方法点拨】英语句子特点之一重英语句子特点之一重“形合形合”，句子的各个部分由各种关联词联在一起。而句子的各个部分由各种关联词联在一起。而汉语句子重汉语句子重“意合意合”，句子前后连接主要是，句子前后连接主要是通过上下文的逻辑意义来实现，很多学生在通过上下文的逻辑意义来实现，很多学生在写作时往往忽略这一点而造成句子的错误。写作时往往忽略这一点而造成句子的错误。关联词用法错误关联词用法错误巩固练习：找出并改正下列各词句中的错误。巩固练习：找出并改正下列各词句中的错误。1.You practise more reading,you will improve your reading ability.2.China is still a developing country,most people cant afford a car yet.The more you practise your reading,the more you will improve your reading ability.或：或：If you practise more reading,you will improve your reading ability.China is still a developing country,so most people cant afford a car yet.3.I arrived at the station,the train had left.4.His living room seemed empty,there were only two chairs,a desk and a bed.5.The children are playing in the distance,their parents are chatting with each other on the playground.When I arrived at the station,the train had left.His living room seemed empty,for there were only two chairs,a desk and a bed.The children are playing in the distance,whose parents are chatting with each other on the playground.或：或：The children are playing in the distance while their parents are chatting with each other on the playground.6.Because he was very tired,so he went to sleep as soon as he got home.7.Though he was almost exhausted,but he still kept working.He was very tired,so he went to sleep as soon as he got home.Though he was almost exhausted,he still kept working.非完整句子非完整句子(误误)There were forty foreigners came to visit our school.(正正)There were forty foreigners who came to visit our school.(正正)Forty foreigners came to visit our school.(误误)Without a friend will feel lonely.(正正)Without a friend one will feel lonely.【方法点拨方法点拨】一个句子至少包括主语和谓语两部一个句子至少包括主语和谓语两部分分(除祈使句外除祈使句外)，如果把句子的某一部分当成，如果把句子的某一部分当成一个句子，就会导致非完整句子。一个句子，就会导致非完整句子。巩固练习：找出并改正下列各词句中的错误。巩固练习：找出并改正下列各词句中的错误。1.The woman talked to you just now is our English teacher.2.I cant imagine what life would be like if have not any TV sets.3.Although rained,we went on working.The woman who talked to you just now is our English teacher.I cant imagine what life would be like if we had not any TV sets.Although it was raining,we went on working.4.China,which is the third largest country in the world.5.Without friend will feel lonely.6.This part contain 9 province and 3 autonomous regions,have 5,400,000 km2.China is the third largest country in the world.Without friend,you will feel lonely.This part contains nine provinces and three autonomous regions,covering an area of 5,400,000 km2.句子缺乏统一性句子缺乏统一性(误误)Being an honest man,Tom worked very hard.(正正)Being an honest man,Tom never tells a lie.【方法点拨方法点拨】这种问题多表现在前后句意不连这种问题多表现在前后句意不连贯，所以平时做练习时多注意逻辑思维能力贯，所以平时做练习时多注意逻辑思维能力方面的培养。方面的培养。巩固练习：找出并改正下列各词句中的错误。巩固练习：找出并改正下列各词句中的错误。1.She must be ill because I saw a doctor going into her room.She must be ill because I saw her going to see a doctor.2.I was born and grew up in Hangzhou in 1953.(误误)Rose falls in love with John is in love with Mary.(正正)Rose falls in love with John,while John is in love with Mary.【方法点拨方法点拨】句子无论长短，在安排上要合乎逻辑，句子无论长短，在安排上要合乎逻辑，衔接自然，使句内之间过渡自然、层次分明。而学衔接自然，使句内之间过渡自然、层次分明。而学生在习作中常出现指代不明、未用过渡词语、非平生在习作中常出现指代不明、未用过渡词语、非平行结构和语义不完整的分割句等错误。行结构和语义不完整的分割句等错误。I was born in 1953 and grew up in Hangzhou.句子缺乏连贯性或指代不明句子缺乏连贯性或指代不明巩固练习：找出并改正下列各词句中的错误。巩固练习：找出并改正下列各词句中的错误。1.Every university has many rules and regulations and they must obey them.2.At the age of 10,Toms mother died.Every university has many rules and regulations and the students must obey them.When Tom was 10,his mother died.标点符号误用标点符号误用 标点符号是一种变相文字，是书面表达不标点符号是一种变相文字，是书面表达不可缺少的重要手段，很多学生不了解标点符可缺少的重要手段，很多学生不了解标点符号的用途以及英汉标点的差异，结果出现错号的用途以及英汉标点的差异，结果出现错误。尤其要注意的是，在英语中，一个小点误。尤其要注意的是，在英语中，一个小点就代表一个句号，所以平时训练时一定要注就代表一个句号，所以平时训练时一定要注意标点符号的正确使用。意标点符号的正确使用。(误误)China Dailyis a great help to the English learners.(正正)China Daily is a great help to the English learners.(误误)Li Ping is not old enough,he can not join the army.(正正)Li Ping is not old enough.He can not join the army.Li Ping is not old enough to join the army.