高中英语写作情景作文基础.pptx

情景作文（20分）审题：人称，时态，事件假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华，校报英文版正在开展“续写雷锋日记”活动。请根据以下提示信息，将你所做的一件好事以日记形式记述下来，向校报投稿。注意：1.适当加入细节使前后文连贯。2.词数不少于80。第1页/共101页It seems that/it seemed that他似乎认不出我了。看起来好像他们迷路了。看来美国的快餐是世界上最受人欢迎的。It seems that he cant recognize me.It seemed that they lost their way.It seems that American fast food is the most popular in the world.came over to help themTemple of Heavenadvise sb.to do sth.wave good bye to sb.take bus No.915 走过去帮忙天坛建议某人做某事跟某人说再见乘915路公交车第2页/共101页第3页/共101页假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华，校报英文版正在开展“续写雷锋日记”活动。请根据以下提示信息，将你所做的一件好事以日记形式记述下来，向校报投稿。注意：1.适当加入细节使前后文连贯。2.词数不少于80。1).早上，走在路上，我看见两个游客在看地图，看起来好像迷路了，我上前询问是否可以帮忙。2).他们正寻找天坛，不知道怎么去3).我带他们到了附近的车站，建议他们乘坐20路车，直接带他们到那里。4).车到站了；挥手说再见；我感到很自豪第4页/共101页Saturday,June 2 Fine This morning,when I was walking on the street,I saw that two travelers were reading a map,looking puzzled.It seemed they were lost.I went up to them and asked how I could help.They told me they were looking for the Temple of Heaven.I led them to the nearby bus stop and advised them to take Bus No.20,which could take them there directly.They appreciated my help greatly.Before long,the bus came.We waved good-bye to each other.Seeing them on the bus,I felt a kind of satisfaction.第5页/共101页 I think the white pencil,looking proud and delighted,is laughing at the black pencil by saying“Youre nearing the end!”the black pencil,on the other hand,remains calm.The white pencils words let him fall into deep thoughts.He clearly remembers he has been used in writing and drawing.Its true that hes approaching the end but he has been living a memorable life and there has rarely been a dull moment.In reality,we should learn from the black pencil:not to mind what others say so long as we are confident in what have done.第6页/共101页假如你是李华，你校将邀请澳大利亚野生动植物保护专家做一个英语报告，请你根据以下要点写60词左右的通告稿，在校园广播中广播。1.Topic：濒危物种与野生动植物保护2.Lecturer：Dr.Hopskins3.Time：10月18日下午4点30分；4.Place：学校报告厅（Lecture Hall）5.Tips:准时参加；可以问问题；紧记一些细节的事实；报告结束后播放有关动物保护的片；第7页/共101页Book2 U41.濒危物种2.报告表明了野生动 植物保护的重要性3.农民无情的猎杀 野生动物4.我们应该关注野生动物 居住的地方，并且欣赏 他们是如何居住在一起的5.这将是难忘的经历Book2 U41.endangered species2.The report shows the importance of wildlife protection.3.The farmers hunt the wild animals without mercy.4.We shoud pay more attention to the place where wild animals live and appreciate how they live together5.It will be unforgettable experience第8页/共101页你曾经听过关于野生动植物保护的报告吗？你可以获得到具体的关于野生动植物保护的事实。同时你可以针对主讲人所说的内容问问题你需要充满好奇心，只有你问许多不同的问题，你才能获得你需要知道的信息。我期待着看到你Have you ever heard a report about wildlife protection.You can acquire the detailed facts about wildlife protection.Meanwhile you can ask questions depending on what the reporter says.You need to be curous.Only if you ask many different questions will you acquire all the infromation you need to know.Im looking forward to seeing you第9页/共101页假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为响应绿化祖国的号召，你班四月十二日去郊区植树，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍植树活动的全过程，给某英文杂志的“绿色行动”专栏写一篇以“Green Action in Our Class”为题的英文稿件。提示词：郊区 suburbsIt was the fist timethat I had doneIt was no pleasure/good doing sthI wonder if it was because.that Iv grown crazy about everything to do with nature.kept me spellbound第10页/共101页 Green Action in Our Class April 12 is memorable because it was the first timethat our class had bicycled suburbs to plant trees onthat day,which was a meaningful experience.In themorning,we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees,talking and laughing all the way.The blue sky andsongs of birds kept me spellbound/It was nopleasurewasting of time,so we began to work as soon as wearrived there.Some were digging holes.Some werecarrying and planting young trees.Others werewatering them.After getting the work done,weput up a board reminding people to protect the trees.Before leaving,we took some photos to record ourgreen action.Seeing the lines of trees,we all had asense of achievement.We feel its our duty to protectand beautify our environment.第11页/共101页 Do you have iphone?And do you know Steve Jobs?Steve Jobs is the hero I admire most.He was born in San Francisco,February,1955.He graduated from Homestead High school in 1972.And then he attended Reagan College,but he didnt go on studying after one term.Because his family hadnt enough money to afford him.But he didnt give up!He went on studying by himself.In 1976,he created a company named Apple.Although he faced so many challenges,he believed that his hard work could make him succeed.第12页/共101页 Where there is a will,there is a way.In 2009,he was called the best chief executive officer in USA in ten years.Finally,he died in October,2011.I think he is great!Dont be afraid of difficulties!Just believe yourself.第13页/共101页 Steve Jobs was born in San Francisco,America,February,1955.He graduated from Homestead high school in 1972.Then,he entered Reagan College.But after one term,since he couldnt afford the school fee,Jobs didnt continue his study.Though he was in such a situation,he still insisted on study.In 1976,Jobs started the apple Company with his friends.At that time,he was only 21.How wonderful he was!Jobs was pretty sure that facing all kinds of challenge only by working hard can he succeed.第14页/共101页 In 2009,Jobs was chosen as America Chief executive officer in 10 years.Steve Jobs died in October,2011.I really admire him and also learned the spirits of perseverance from him.I will remember this in the rest of my life.第15页/共101页1 出生：1955年2月，美国旧金山San Francisco2.1972年毕业于Homestead高中;大学：里德学院Reagan College.Steve Jobs was born in San Francisco,America,February,1955.He graduated from Homestead high school in 1972.Then,he attended Reagan College.第16页/共101页3.一学期后因为经济原因而休学，但他坚持学习 4.1976年与朋友创办苹果公司（Apple）面对各种挑战，相信只有努力才能成功One term later,because of lack of money,he dropped school.But he continue study.In 1976,he and his friend created“Apple”.Facing kinds of challenges,he believed only by hard can he succeed.第17页/共101页5.2009年，被评选为十年内美国最佳行政总裁（Chief executive officer）6.逝世日期：2011年10月。In 2009,he was selected as the best Chiefexecutive officer in ten years.He was dead in October,2011.第18页/共101页Worried about the time available,Zhang Pingyu had made a list of the sites she wanted to see in London.My first delight is to London.It is a pity that the industrial cities(built in the 19th century)do not attract visitors.What interested me most was the scenery.Pingyu had a photo taken standing in front of the gate.She finished the day by looking at th outside of Buckingham Palace.Oh,she had so much to tell her friends.You must keep your eyes open if you are going to make your trip to the United Kingdom enjoyable and worthwhile.She felt very proud of herself.第19页/共101页1.很遗憾建于很遗憾建于19世纪的工业城市不吸引游客。世纪的工业城市不吸引游客。2.你一定让你的眼睛睁大你一定让你的眼睛睁大,如果你要使你去伦敦的如果你要使你去伦敦的旅游有意思和有价值。旅游有意思和有价值。3.她通过看白金汉宫外面结束了这一天。她通过看白金汉宫外面结束了这一天。4.令我最感兴趣的是风景。令我最感兴趣的是风景。5.PINGYU站在大门前照了一张相。站在大门前照了一张相。6.哦！她有很多东西要告诉朋友。哦！她有很多东西要告诉朋友。7.她对自己很骄傲。她对自己很骄傲。第20页/共101页1.Worried about the time available,youd better make a list of the sites you wanted to see in Wuzhen.2.People may wonder different words are used to describe Wuzhen such as magic,beautiful,ancient and so on.You can clarify this question if you vist Wuzhen.3.Although,nationwide,Wuzhen is not as large as other famous sites in China,it is calledthe town of fish,rice and silkby poople.4.If you look around Wuzhen,you will find its beauty.You must keep your eyes open if you are going to travel to Wuzhen enjoyable and worthwhile.5.For historical architecture,you have to go to Wuzhen,there you will find out more about Wuzhen history and culture.第21页/共101页6.To their credit,the people in Wuzhen do work together to make it famous in China.7.You find population settled in Wuzhen,with a number of 60,000.8.You can finish the day by appreciating the beautyful scene of the water town in Jiangnan.It is just like a natural museum of ancient architecture.Oh,you must have much to tell your friends after your visiting!9.Our first delight is to London.第22页/共101页假如你是李华,你校将在寒假举办外国人学汉语的短期学习班，并为学员安排周末“北京一日游”活动。作为志愿者，请根据下边信息，向他们介绍旅游活动安排，并提出出行建议。开头已为你写出.One-day Tour in Beijing Place to visit:the Forbidden City,the Temple of Heaven,the Summer Palace Price:70 Transport:bus Lunch:traditional Chinese food Time to start:8:30 am Time to return:5:30 pm Ladies and gentlemen,Attention,please.Id like to introduce to you the one-day tour for the coming Saturday._第23页/共101页1 五台山位于山西忻州市东部。五台山位于山西忻州市东部。2 伦敦面积约伦敦面积约245000平方公里，人口约平方公里，人口约6千万千万3中国有中国有5000多年的历史多年的历史4桂林有温暖气候，充足阳光和雨水桂林有温暖气候，充足阳光和雨水(climate)5 乌镇是鱼米丝绸之乡乌镇是鱼米丝绸之乡(be well known)6 镇子由沿着河建造的房子组成镇子由沿着河建造的房子组成(consist of/be made up of)Wutai mountain lies in east of Xinzhou,Shanxi province.London covers an area of 245,000 square kilometers,with a population of 60 million.Guilin has warm climate,enough rain and sunshine.China enjoys a history of over 5,000 years.Wuzhen is well-known as“the town of fish,rice,and silk”.The town consists of old houses built along the river.第24页/共101页你可以乘火车先去杭州再坐汽车去往乌镇，非常方便。所以下次你有假期，为什么不去乌镇那？You can catch a train to Hangzhou first and take a bus to Wuzhen.Its convenient.So next time you have a holiday,why not try to visit Wuzhen?第25页/共101页第26页/共101页第27页/共101页第28页/共101页Have you even been to Wuzhen?If not,you should pay a visit.第29页/共101页字一定要写的好看 印象分要点一定要保证写的正确 及格分写作前先确定时态，人称提前打个草稿最后自己读一遍检测原则：第30页/共101页某旅游手册想吸引游客来参观，根据下列要点，用英语写一篇100词左右的短文介绍浙江的乌镇。1 乌镇位于浙江省桐乡县的北部。面积71.19平方公里，人口60,000.2 温暖气候，充足阳光和雨水,乌镇是鱼米丝绸之乡。3 1000多年的历史，镇子由沿着河建造的房子组成。4 我们能够欣赏到江南水乡的美景，似古建筑自然博物馆。5 交通便利：游人可以乘火车到杭州，之后乘公交去乌镇。第31页/共101页 Wuzhen lies at the north of Tongxiang County of Zhejiang Province.The town covers an area of 71.19km,with a total population of 60,000。Because of its warm climate,enough rain and sunshine,Wuzhen is well-known as“the town of fish,rice,and silk”.Wuzhen enjoys a history of over 1,000 years.The town consists of old houses along the river.第32页/共101页We can appreciate the beautiful scene of a water town in Jiangnan.It is just like a natural museum of ancient architecture.You can catch a train to Hangzhou first and take a bus to Wuzhen,its very convenient.So next time you have a holiday,why not try to visit Wuzhen?第33页/共101页Writing第34页/共101页1.Where is the Forbidden City?2.The origin of its name?3.How many parts is it divided?4.When does it begin and when was it completed?5.How many emperors had ruled there?第35页/共101页1.Where is the Forbidden City?The Forbidden City lies in the center of Beijing,north of Tiananmen Square.It has 9,999 buildings,which are surrounded by a six meter-deep moat and a ten-meter-high wall.第36页/共101页2.The origin of its name?The Forbidden city got its name by forbiddening common people to enter unless they were given permission.第37页/共101页3.How many parts is it divided?The city is divided into two parts,the Outer Court and the Inner Court.第38页/共101页4.When does it begin and when was it completed?The building of the palace began in 1407,the 5th year of the Yongle rule.It was not completed until 1420.第39页/共101页5.How many emperors had ruled there?Until the last emperor of China was driven from the Inner Court in 1924,fourteen emperors of the Ming Dynasty and ten emperors of the Qing Dynasty had ruled there.第40页/共101页 北京，16,410.54平方公里,人口：约2千万.北京位于华北平原北端，东南与天津相连，为河北省所环绕。中国第二大城市，中华人民共和国的首都、中国中心城市，中国政治、文化和国际交流中心。北京有着3000余年的建城史和850余年的建都史，是“中国四大古都”之一，拥有众多名胜古迹.第41页/共101页去年暑假你去了加拿大著名的水上公园（the World Water Park）。那里给你留下难忘的印象。今天英语课学习“主题公园”，老师让你们以“An Unforgettable Experience”为题，写一篇英语作文，描述这段游水上公园的经历（不少于80词）。Contents:fine weather,with some of your friends very big,over 200 items of water activities things you do in the park:take a yacht(游艇),enjoy the scenery,white-knuckle ride,go down from height of 25 feet your feeling第42页/共101页Try to correct them!I could went down from a height of 25 feet.I could go down form a height of 25 feet.In general,we all happy.In general,we were all happy.Liu JiaqiThe water park is so big that it is over 200 items of water activities.The water park is so big that it has over 200 items of water activities.We played many water activities there.First of all,we were took a yacht.We played many water activities there.First of all,we took a yacht.第43页/共101页An unforgettable experience The World Water Park in Canada is one of the most beautiful parks in the world.I was very lucky to have got a chance to have a wonderful day in the park.When I entered the park,I was shocked by its large area.There are over 200 items of water activities such as water ball,boat-riding,write-knuckle ride and so on.Thanks to the sunny day,I played many items of water activities with some of my friends.First of all,we took a yacht to enjoy the beautiful scenery.After a white-knuckle ride,we amused ourselves by going down from a height of 25 feet place.Time flied!We left the water park tired but excited.第44页/共101页Tele-educationWhy some people are against itWhy the speaker supports itMeasures Some poor people have no access to itStudents cant contact teachers directlySome poor people have no access to itStudents cant contact teachers directlySome poor people have no access to itStudents cant contact teachers directlySome poor people have no access to itStudents cant contact teachers directly第45页/共101页Tele-education Over the past decade,tele-education has become very common in learning.Many learners welcome it as a great way to learn the subjects(that they like in remote areas).It also provides a wider range of choices as to teachers and lessons.On the contrary,some people are against it because of the following reasons:It makes it impossible for some poor people to have access(通路，入门)to it.Some other students said that they couldnt contacet teachers directly.However,everything has two sides.How to avoid such problem is what we should think about.Designing programs to help teachers and students to contacet each other may be the good way to have teachers and students talking face to face.第46页/共101页假如你是红星中学高二（1）班的学生李华，利用国庆长假期间去了海南岛。请根据以下要点提示，以Traveling to Hainan Island为题，用第一人称为学校英文报写100字左右的短文，可以适当增加细节和发挥。1.旅游受到人们的欢迎，去了海南岛2.领略了自然美景，交朋友3.天气，下雨，看电视4.感受5.反思（下次注意什么）1.Recently,traveling is more and more popular.During the holiday,people prefer to traval around China.2.欣赏美景 接近自然 放松心灵 交朋友 appreciate the beautiful scenery get close to nature refresh your spirit make friends4.I felt that the experience was.because.5.We should.in advance next time.I hope to.第47页/共101页 It seems that travel is becoming more and more popular these days.I went to Hainan Island for the National Day vacation.I experienced the beauty of nature as I breathed the fresh air and listened to the sound of sea waves.At the same time,I made a lot of friends.But the weather there changed often and during following few days,I was almost trapped in the room because of the rain.I had nothing much to do except watching TV,which made me feel a bit bored.Next time,I ll take some books with me so that I can spend the time reading books when its impossible to go outdoors.第48页/共101页 It seems that travel is becoming more and more popular these days.I went to Hainan Island for the National Day vacation.I experienced the beauty of nature as I breathed the fresh air and listened to the sound of sea wave