英语写作汉堡式段落Hamburger Paragraph final.pptx

Do You Know?ParagraphMainideaDetailwhatthestoryorparagraphismostlyaboutsentencesthatsupportthemainideaagroupofsentencesthatincludesamainideaanddetails第1页/共14页Introduction SentenceMain IdeaDetailsClosing Sentence第2页/共14页Top BunIntroductory SentenceThe introductory sentence introduces the reader to the topic of your paragraph.Try to make it exciting!On warm summer days,I love trying to catch butterflies.I have so much fun running around in my backyard chasing after the pretty butterflies that go zooming by!If I am lucky enough to catch one,I never keep it for very long.After all,butterflies belong in their natural habitat.I surely cant wait until next summer so that I can grab my net and catch some butterflies!第3页/共14页Be sure to add at least three reasons,examples,or main points that support the introductory/topic sentence.These reasons,examples,or points are the lettuce,tomato,cheese,and meat of the paragraph.MAIN POINTS,REASONS,OR EXAMPLES第4页/共14页Be sure toA good paragraph includes details that DESCRIBE or TELL ABOUT the main points or reasons.Details should be“delicious”or interesting.When you write a hamburger paragraph,compare your details to all of the yummy parts of a hamburger such as:*Lettuce*Tomato*Cheese *Meat(Elaboration)第5页/共14页Again,your elaboration should describe or tell about your main points.They should stick to the topic.Which detail doesnt quite belong?I really love my brother!His name is Jeff and he is super funny.One of my favorite things to do with my brother is play video games.He always beats me!Sometimes my sister cries at night.Maybe my brother will play a video game with me tonight!第6页/共14页How would a hamburger taste if it had ketchup,mustard,mayonnaise,pickles,lettuce,tomatoes,barbecue sauce,Swiss cheese,spicy cheese,and olives on top?Too much,right?A writer can add too much detail to a paragraph as well.Paragraphs should be about 5-8 sentences long.If your paragraph is pages and pages long,you will eventually lose the interest of your reader.第7页/共14页My favorite school lunch is chicken nuggets with mashed potatoes.One reason why I love this lunch so much is that it tastes so great!I also love being able to smell the yummy nuggets hours before its even lunch time.The creamy mashed potatoes and gravy just slide down my throat.I cant WAIT until the next chicken nugget day!第8页/共14页So far we have learned that a hamburger paragraph needs a top bun or INTRODUCTORY sentence.The introduction should introduce the reader to your topic.We also learned that good paragraphs contain three to six supporting sentences that tell more about the introductory sentence.These main points,examples,or details can be compared to the ingredients of a hamburger,such as the lettuce,tomato,cheese,and hamburger patty.But whats missing?Hmm 第9页/共14页Bottom BunConcluding SentenceThe bottom bun of a hamburger helps hold all of the ingredients together.It works with the top bun to keep the meat,cheese,tomato,and lettuce from falling on the floor!The concluding sentence of a paragraph helps hold all of the sentences together!It works with the introductory sentence to keep the details from falling apart.The concluding sentence should be interesting and let your reader know that you are finished writing.It wraps everything up!第10页/共14页Myhometownisfamousforseveralamazingnaturalfeatures.First,itisnotedfortheWheatonRiver,whichisverywideandbeautiful.Also,ontheothersideofthetownisWheatonHill,whichisunusualbecauseitisverysteep.ThethirdamazingfeatureistheBigOldTree.Thistreestandstwohundredfeettallandisprobablyaboutsixhundredyearsold.Thesethreelandmarksaretrulyamazingandmakemyhometownafamousplace.第11页/共14页Myhometownisfamousforseveralamazingnaturalfeatures.First,itisnotedfortheWheatonRiver,whichisverywideandbeautiful.Oneithersideofthisriver,whichOneithersideofthisriver,whichis175feetwide,aremanywillowtreesis175feetwide,aremanywillowtreeswhichhavelongbranchesthatcanmovewhichhavelongbranchesthatcanmovegracefullyinthewind.Inautumnthegracefullyinthewind.Inautumntheleavesofthesetreesfallandcovertheleavesofthesetreesfallandcovertheriverbankslikegoldensnow.riverbankslikegoldensnow.Also,ontheothersideofthetownisWheatonHill,whichisunusualbecauseitisverysteep.EvenEventhoughitissteep,climbingthishillisnotthoughitissteep,climbingthishillisnotdangerous,becausetherearesomefirmdangerous,becausetherearesomefirmrocksalongthesidesthatcanbeusedasrocksalongthesidesthatcanbeusedasstairs.Therearenotreesaroundthishill,stairs.Therearenotreesaroundthishill,soitstandsclearlyagainsttheskyandcansoitstandsclearlyagainsttheskyandcanbeseenfrommanymilesaway.beseenfrommanymilesaway.ThethirdamazingfeatureistheBigOldTree.Thistreestandstwohundredfeettallandisprobablyaboutsixhundredyearsold.Thesethreelandmarksaretrulyamazingandmakemyhometownafamousplace.第12页/共14页1.Peoplecanavoidburglariesbytakingcertain1.Peoplecanavoidburglariesbytakingcertainprecautions.precautions.2.Thereareseveral2.Thereareseveraladvantagesadvantagestogrowingupinasmalltogrowingupinasmalltown.town.3.MostUSuniversitiesrequirea550pointTOEFLscore3.MostUSuniversitiesrequirea550pointTOEFLscoreforanumberofforanumberofreasonsreasons.4.Fixingaflattireonabicycleiseasyifyoufollowthese4.Fixingaflattireonabicycleiseasyifyoufollowthesestepssteps.5.Thereareseveralenjoyable5.ThereareseveralenjoyablewayswaystotravelbetweenthetotravelbetweentheUSandQueretaro.USandQueretaro.6.Effectiveleadershiprequiresspecific6.Effectiveleadershiprequiresspecificqualitiesqualitiesthatthatanyonecandevelop.anyonecandevelop.7.IndustrialwastepouredintoPearlRiverhasledto7.IndustrialwastepouredintoPearlRiverhasledtodramaticdramaticchangeschangesinitsabilitytosupportmarinelife.initsabilitytosupportmarinelife.8.InordertofullyexplorethewreckoftheTitanic,8.InordertofullyexplorethewreckoftheTitanic,scientistsmustaddressseveralscientistsmustaddressseveralproblemsproblems.第13页/共14页