2022届高考英语作文长难句写作技巧课件(29张ppt).pptx

2022届高考作文长难句写作技巧天津朴新 高中英语 罗琳of182学情个人信息姓名：性格：活泼开朗学习情况学段：高三成绩：100/150当前问题英语作文成绩：19/25of183Dear sir or madam,How are you doing?Im Li Hua studying in Chen Guang Middle School.Im extremely glad to learned that you are looking for some good students to teach the students of Hope Primary School from School network.I was meant for such kind of activities.For one thing,I m kind and honest by nature.I m always ready to do whatever I can to help others.Meanwhile,as an outgoing teenager,I usually make other people relaxed when I m communicating with them.What counts most is I have the ability to live independently.I think this activity is helpful to each other.We can improve our English level.Of course.We can enjoy happines about helping other.I am see that I can perfectly live up to your expectations.I would be grateful if you could give me a kind consideration.Look forward to your reply.Yours,Li Huaof184不够用可以复制添加【例题】假设你是晨光中学的机器人兴趣小组组长李津，你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际学校，他曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖。你打算邀请他加入你的团队，参加即将于7月底在天津举行的世界青少学机器人技能竞赛。请根据以下提示代表兴趣小组给他写一封电子邮件。（1）比赛的时间、地点；（2）邀请他的原因；（3）训练计划将发送其邮箱，请他提出建议。参考词汇：世界青少年机器人技能竞赛 the World Adolescent Robotics Competitionof185不够用可以复制添加Dear Chris,I have good news to tell you.The World Adolescent Robotics Competition is going to be launched in Tianjin Childrens Palace at the end of July.I am convinced that it is a wonderful stage for competitors to show their talents.Knowing that you have won several awards in the previous competitions of robotics,I am sure that you are experienced and competitive enough to participate.Besides,I have always been impressed by your initiative and creation in science,which play a significant role in technical invention and research.If we could have you involved in our team,that would be a win-win cooperation.If you are willing to join us,I will send the training program to your email box.Dont hesitate to put forward your advice,which will definitely become our precious property.Im looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Jinof186不够用可以复制添加Dont hesitate to put forward your advice,will definitely become our precious property.I have always been impressed by your initiative and creation in science,play a significant role in technical invention and research.whichwhichof187不够用可以复制添加定定语从句关系从句关系词关系代词that which who whom whose as关系副词where when why 定语从句of188不够用可以复制添加Which：指物，在定语从句中作主语或宾语，作宾语时可省略；引导非限制性定语从句，可指代主句全句内容。关系词作从句中主语：龙卷风很猛烈。The tornado was violent.龙卷风在上周发生。The tornado happened last week.The tornado which happened last week was violent.定语从句of189不够用可以复制添加Which：指物，在定语从句中作主语或宾语，作宾语时可省略；引导非限制性定语从句，可指代主句全句内容。关系词在从句中作宾语：那是那个娱乐项目吗？Is that the entertainment program?你想要看那个娱乐项目。You want to watch the entertainment program.Is that the entertainment program（which）you want to watch?定语从句of1810不够用可以复制添加Which：指物，在定语从句中作主语或宾语，作宾语时可省略；引导非限制性定语从句，可指代主句全句内容。事实上，抽烟是一种不好的习惯，会对人类的健康造成非常不好的影响。In fact,smoking is a bad habit.Smoking does great harm to peoples health.In fact,smoking is a bad habit,which does great harm to peoples health.定语从句of1811步骤：1.在所给题目中划出中心词 如何在作文中写一个定语从句？of1812【例题】假设你是李津，与你以前的外籍教师Mrs.Green 一直保持联系。近日她来信询问你的近况，请根据以下提示给她回复一封邮件。（1）简要介绍自己的学习和生活；（2）告知你已成为八月底在津举办的第十三届全运会的志愿者，并介绍为此所做的准备（如深入了解天津等）；（3）希望她有机会重访天津。The 13th National Games书信类of1813步骤：2.在主句/从句中描述它的基本情况或客观事实。例如：活动：举行的时间、地点、与作者的关系或仅仅是单纯的发生 现象：发生的时间、地点、作者的看法或仅仅是单纯的发生 人物：与作者的关系（远近亲疏）物品：客观描述其特点（外形、种类、出品）of1814【例题】假设你是李津，与你以前的外籍教师Mrs.Green 一直保持联系。近日她来信询问你的近况，请根据以下提示给她回复一封邮件。（1）简要介绍自己的学习和生活；（2）告知你已成为八月底在津举办的第十三届全运会的志愿者，并介绍为此所做的准备（如深入了解天津等）；（3）希望她有机会重访天津。第十三届全运会在八月底举行。The 13th National Games is to be held at the end of this August.基本情况书信类of1815步骤：3.在主/从句中描述其功能、作用、影响、与作者的关系及其他优劣势。of1816【例题】假设你是李津，与你以前的外籍教师Mrs.Green 一直保持联系。近日她来信询问你的近况，请根据以下提示给她回复一封邮件。（1）简要介绍自己的学习和生活；（2）告知你已成为八月底在津举办的第十三届全运会的志愿者，并介绍为此所做的准备（如深入了解天津等）；（3）希望她有机会重访天津。我已经成为第十三届全运会的志愿者。I have been a volunteer for the 13th National Games.书信类of1817【例题】假设你是李津，与你以前的外籍教师Mrs.Green 一直保持联系。近日她来信询问你的近况，请根据以下提示给她回复一封邮件。（1）简要介绍自己的学习和生活；（2）告知你已成为八月底在津举办的第十三届全运会的志愿者，并介绍为此所做的准备（如深入了解天津等）；（3）希望她有机会重访天津。The 13th National Games is to be held at the end of this August.I have been a volunteer for the 13th National Games.书信类of1818【例题】假设你是李津，与你以前的外籍教师Mrs.Green 一直保持联系。近日她来信询问你的近况，请根据以下提示给她回复一封邮件。（1）简要介绍自己的学习和生活；（2）告知你已成为八月底在津举办的第十三届全运会的志愿者，并介绍为此所做的准备（如深入了解天津等）；（3）希望她有机会重访天津。The 13th National Games is to be held at the end of this August.I have been a volunteer for the 13th National Games.I have been a volunteer for the 13th National Games is to be held at the end of this August.书信类of1819 假如你是李华，你的美国网友David给你写信，询问近年来多次袭击中国华北的雾霾情况。请你给他写封回信，感谢他的关注，简述雾霾的危害并谈谈你的看法。参考词汇：雾霾smog1.1.在所给题目中划出中心词在所给题目中划出中心词书信类of1820 假如你是李华，你的美国网友David给你写信，询问近年来多次袭击中国华北的雾霾情况。请你给他写封回信，感谢他的关注，简述雾霾的危害并谈谈你的看法。参考词汇：雾霾smog2.2.在主句在主句/从句中描述它的基本情况或客观事实。从句中描述它的基本情况或客观事实。自去年冬天以来，雾霾已经发生了很多次。Since the winter last year，the smog has occurred a lot of times.书信类单纯的发生of1821 假如你是李华，你的美国网友David给你写信，询问近年来多次袭击中国华北的雾霾情况。请你给他写封回信，感谢他的关注，简述雾霾的危害并谈谈你的看法。参考词汇：雾霾smog3.3.在从句中描述其功能、作用、影响、与作者的关系及其他在从句中描述其功能、作用、影响、与作者的关系及其他优劣势。优劣势。雾霾人们的健康造成了很大的危害。The smog has done great harm to peoples health.书信类of1822 假如你是李华，你的美国网友David给你写信，询问近年来多次袭击中国华北的雾霾情况。请你给他写封回信，感谢他的关注，简述雾霾的危害并谈谈你的看法。参考词汇：雾霾smog Since the winter last year，the smog has occurred a lot of times.The smog has done great harm to peoples health.Since the winter last year，the smog has occurred a lot of times，which has done great harm to peoples health.自去年冬天以来，雾霾已经发生了很多次，对人们的健康造成了很大的危害。书信类of18231.在所给题目中划出中心词2.在主句/从句中描述它的基本情况或客观事实。3.在从句中描述其功能、作用、影响、与作者的关系及其他优劣势。作文定语从句三步骤of1824练习：(例题)假定你是李华，想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸(papercutting)艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：(1)展览时间、地点；(2)展览内容。书信类of1825练习：假定你是李华，想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸(papercutting)艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：(1)展览时间、地点；(2)展览内容。The paper-cutting exhibition will be held.中国剪纸展将会举行。You can have a clearer picture of Chinese culture at the paper-cutting exhibition。从剪纸展中你可以更清楚地了解中国文化。The paper-cutting exhibition will be held,from which you can have a clearer picture of Chinese culture.将会举行中国剪纸展，从中你可以更清楚地了解中国文化。书信类of1826作业：假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。你的美国笔友Chris正在学习汉语，他得知“中国诗词大会”在CCTV播出，非常感兴趣，便写信给你，希望你介绍相关情况及更多了解中国文化的途径。请根据以下提示给他写一封回信。(1)简单介绍“中国诗词大会”引起的反响；(2)介绍了解中国文化的途径(如阅读相关书籍、利用媒体资源等)；(3)表达对Chris学习中国文化的祝愿。书信类THANK YOU