雅思写作句子应对策略概述.pptx

简单句的基本句型 1、Colors fade,temples crumble,empires fall,but wise words endure.句型1：S+V全球一体化时代(The era of globalization)已经来临。The era of globalization has already come.人们对此热门话题(hot topic)的观点不一。Notions about this hot topic differ widely.随着经济的迅速发展，环境也在不断恶化(deteriorate)。The environment has been deteriorating along with the rapid development of economy.第1页/共24页简单句的基本句型2、Information is power./Failure is the mother of success.句型2：S+V+C对互联网的立法管制(Legislative regulation)是政府的职能。Legislative regulation of the Internet is one of the functions of the government.死刑(capital punishment)的废除是个具有争议的事件。The abolition of capital punishment is an issue of controversy.环境保护和保护生物多元化(biodiversity)对于发展中国家是个奢侈的东西。Environmental protection and the preservation of biodiversity are very much a luxury of developing countries.网上一些信息是误导人的(misguiding)和带有欺骗性的(cheating)。Some information on the Internet is misguiding and cheating.第2页/共24页简单句的基本句型3、The last straw breaks the camels back.句型3：S+V+O在表明观点之前，我将探讨一下这具有争议的(controversial)事件的正反方。Before presenting my view,I will explore both sides of this controversial issue.资助艺术浪费我们有限的公共资金(public funds)。Art funding lavishes our limited public funds.收藏品和展品反映了文化和社会的多元化(diversity)。Collections and exhibitions reflect the cultural and social diversity.过分沉迷于(Overindulgence)电脑游戏导致肥胖(obesity)和近似(myopia)。Overindulgence in computer games leads to obesity and myopia.第3页/共24页简单句的基本句型4、He showed me the photo.He showed the photo to me.句型4：S+V+O+O反对者向我们展示了具有说服力的证据(convincing)。The opponents show us some convincing evidence.通过为社会做贡献，学生从兼职中获得一种成就感。Part-time jobs give students a sense of achievement through contributing to society.间隔年(A gap year)为中学毕业生提供了一个宝贵的机会去认清自己的职业兴趣和目标。A gap year offers high school graduates a valuable opportunity to identify their career interests and goals.第4页/共24页简单句的基本句型5、The stressful life makes many people sick.句型5：S+V+O+C克隆技术(cloning technology)可能使人变得多余(redundant)、可替代(replaceable)甚至是处于灭绝的境地。The cloning technology can make humans redundant,replaceable and even extinct.互联网使我们很容易接触到全世界最新的讯息。The Internet enables us to have easy access to the latest information worldwide.专家建议政府拆除市区里的旧房子来改善城市形象(the city image)。Experts advise the government to demolish the old buildings in the downtown area to promote the city image.第5页/共24页句子由简单到复杂的方法 首先必须接受一个事实：雅思写作实战中不是说自己想写出几个复杂的句子就可以写出几个复杂的句子的，也不是说想用哪种句式就能用到哪种句式的句子复杂的程度全部由思维的深刻程度决定再复杂的句子结构也只是表达自己缜密思维的一种工具第6页/共24页思维在先，句子结构在后。这也符合英语语法中出现复杂结构的基本前提：表达的需要比如：1、我的思维：21世纪的世界以高度的人口流动(population mobility)为标志。我的英语句子：The world in the 21th century is marked by high population mobility.第7页/共24页2、我的相对复杂的思维：因为贫困(poverty)，许多人为了生存(making a living)的目的而倾向于偷窃或抢劫，这很大程度上增加了犯罪的比率(the crime rate)。我的英语句子：Because of poverty,many people tend to steal or rub with the purpose of making a living,which highly increase the crime rate.第8页/共24页3、我的更复杂的思维：我们必须承认一些国家，特别是那些贫穷的国家，也许在花费大量的金钱在这个方面有困难，但是他们能够组织集资活动(fundraising activities)以使那些富裕的社会成员能捐资给公共设施(public facilities)，比方说博物馆。我的英语句子：We have to admit that some countries,especially poor ones,may have difficulty spending a large sum of money in this respect,but they are able to organize fundraising activities so that wealthy members of society can donate money to public facilities such as museums.第9页/共24页对于图表作文而言亦是如此，比如：简单的表达：The number of A increased.复杂的表达：The number of A increased over the period covered by the chart,climbing up in two stages to reach the high point of exactly 50,000 by the year of 1998,from a starting point of 20,000 in 1991.第10页/共24页那么，如何使自己复杂的思维通过复杂的英语结构准确表达出来呢？或者说英语的句子由简单到复杂的方法有哪些呢？第11页/共24页方法一：增加修饰成分英语语法中的修饰成分主要有：1、简单的修饰成分：形容词、副词、介词短语The overuse or scarcity of some resources on the earth is a problem.The overuse or scarcity of some resources on the earth is a severe problem.In addition to searching for a shelter for future generations,space programmes contribute to the well-being of the earth in some other aspects.In addition to searching for a shelter for future generations,space programmes contribute considerably to the well-being of the earth in some other aspects.第12页/共24页2、相对复杂的修饰成分：非谓语动词（动词不定式、动名词、分词）There are a number of facts which indicates that this position is right.There are a number of facts indicating that this position is right.3、最复杂的修饰成分：从句（定语从句、状语从句）Without enough money to visit the clinic,hospitals or buy drugs,people are less likely to enjoy their living.If people cannot afford the high cost of visiting the clinic,hospitals or buying drugs,they are less likely to enjoy their living.方法一：增加修饰成分第13页/共24页方法一：增加修饰成分It is suggested that public money of a city should be concentrated in projects like public facilities,and these public facilities are more likely to bring immediate benefits to the public.It is suggested that public money of a city should be concentrated in projects like public facilities,which are more likely to bring immediate benefits to the public.第14页/共24页方法二：使用平行结构增加细节 Particular attention should be paid on those people whose health problems are attributed to their poor personal living their poor personal living habitshabits.Particular attention should be paid on those people whose health problems are attributed to their poor personal living habits,such as smoking,drinking,substance use or inactive lifestyle.Accompanied by technological development,many problemsmany problems have arisen and intensified.Accompanied by technological development,many problems,such as over-exploitation of natural resources,intense use of artificial fertilisers and reliance on automobiles,have arisen and intensified.第15页/共24页方法三：句子中的名词性结构（主语、宾语、同位语、表语、宾语补语）使用复杂的结构 1、相对的复杂结构：非谓语动词（动词不定式、动名词）To be informed is the public right.Learning foreign languages widens our mind and extends our vision.2、最复杂的结构：名词性从句（主语从句、宾语从句、同位语从句、表语从句、宾语补语从句）It is known to us that Chinese people invented the compass.We all know that Chinese people invented the compass.The fact is that Chinese people invented the compass.The fact that Chinese people invented the compass is true.Call me what you like.第16页/共24页方法四：依照英语句子语法中的原则，写特殊结构的句子（非常规语序的句子）句尾重心原则：形式主语、形式宾语、分隔不定式词组：I regard it as my responsibility to see that the vast amount of money he accumulated is used for the good of humanity.动名词词组：We think it useless arguing with him.主语从句：That he will win is certain.It is certain that he will win.宾语从句：We think it important that we should put education in the first place.第17页/共24页方法四：依照英语句子语法中的原则，写特殊结构的句子（非常规语序的句子）分隔：Just then I noticed,for the first time,that Monsieur Hamel wore his fine green coat.Do not,for one repulse,forgo the purpose that you resolved to effort.Devote some of your leisure,I repeat,to cultivating a love of reading good books.An order has come from Berlin that no language but German may be taught in the schools of Alsace and Lorraine.He is truly happy who makes others happy.You know that a stream which moves slowly can be waded very easily,but if water is moving very rapidly,as in a mountain stream,the force is great enough to carry you off your feet.第18页/共24页方法五：使用特殊意义的结构表达特殊的强调含义 倒装、there be句型Upon the education of people of this country the fate of this country depends.（介词短语前移）Her appearance all admired,while her personality few praised.（宾语前移）A scandal I call it.（宾语补语前移）Very strange it seemed.（表语前移）Like self-awareness,this is also very difficult to achieve,but I think these are the two factors that may be the most important for achieving happiness.Throughout the century,the largest quantity of water was used for agricultural purposes.With a population of 176 million,the figures for Brazil indicate how high agricultural water consumption can be in some countries.第19页/共24页方法五：使用特殊意义的结构表达特殊的强调含义全部倒装（full inversion）（主谓倒装）Out flew a bird from teachers chalk-box./Up they climbed,almost out of breath.In books are embalmed the greatest thoughts of all ages.部分倒装（partial inversion）（助词倒装）Nothing is there more friendly to a man than a friend in need.Little did they realize that they had made an important discovery in science.但是，如果否定词是用来修饰主语的，不倒装：Scarcely a drop of rain fell last month.Only when you need books,can you think them in sufficient.但是，修饰主语时不倒装：Only a life lived for others is a life worthwhile.第20页/共24页方法五：使用特殊意义的结构表达特殊的强调含义分裂/强调句It is conflict and not unquestioning agreement that keeps freedom alive.It is not because things are difficult that we do not dare;it is because we do not dare that they are difficult.It is a good tongue that says no ill,and a better heart that thinks none.there be句型There is a book on the table.存在：exist,remain,live,run fly,stay,seem,stand,lie,remainOnce upon a time there lived an old man.产生：happen,occur,appear,come,enter,follow,fly,arrive,arise,rise,pass,rush,emerge,spring upThere happened an accident like that.第21页/共24页方法六：句子的叠加(并列复合句、使用衔接结构)Fast food might not vary significantly throughout a country.Traditional foods are diversified due to ethnic diversity.Fast food might not vary significantly throughout a country,butbut traditional foods are diversified due to ethnic diversity.第22页/共24页方法六：句子的叠加(并列复合句、使用衔接结构)As suggested above,the fast food,although cheap and convenient,has its shortcomings.A diet high in fast foods can increase a persons risk of gaining weight and other health problems.As suggested above,the fast food,although cheap and convenient,has its shortcomings andand a diet high in fast foods can increase a persons risk of gaining weight and other health problems.第23页/共24页感谢您的观看！第24页/共24页