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Writing Band 4 Diagnosis:Why many students fail to write well 1.illogicalinwritingandunreasonableinplanning2.simpleinsentencestructure3.limitedinvocabulary4.unavoidableinmistakesofvariouskindsIllogicalinwriting&unreasonableinplanningDirection:Is Diploma Everything?Nowadays,a crazy pursuit for diplomas and certificates is prevailing in our society.Students in school are studying hard for them,and meanwhile a considerable number of adults go back to school for higher diplomas.As far as I am concerned,factors leading to this social phenomenon can be listed as follows.First,with science and technology developing so rapidly today,more knowledge means more opportunities for better jobs and quicker promotion.As an old saying points out,an investment in knowledge always pays the best interest.Therefore,a diploma is always regarded as a passport to personal advancement.Besides this,there is one more point I think I ought to mention.As the largest developing country in the world,if our country is to consolidate its feet on the world stage,it must start right now to lay a solid foundation for the development of its knowledge economy.In conclusion,nowadays people get crazy for diplomats just as a result of intention that they can find a good job.Nonetheless,a diploma does not necessarily mean that you are competent for the job.Hence,a diploma is something but not everything.In other words,what really counts is to be aware how to put what you have learned into practice.SimpleinsentencestructureDifferences in Sentence structure between English and ChineseIn the doorway lay at least twelve umbrellas of all sizes and colors.门口放着一堆伞，至少十二把，五颜六色，大小不一。Confidence important.Confidence is important.Confidence is very,very and very important.Theprettygirl who is standing on the platform quietly,with her shiny hair flowing gently in the breeze,ismyfirstlove,whose sweet smile I will never forget,though I dont think she is the right person for me to marry.Confidence is of vital importance.Confidence is of vital importance.It is of vital importance for young students to be It is of vital importance for young students to be confident.confident.WhetherWhether we can achieve success we can achieve success or notor not dependsdepends,to,to some extent,some extent,on whetheron whether we are confident we are confident or notor not.Confidence is the key to success.Confidence is the key to success.We can live without money while we cannot live We can live without money while we cannot live without confidence.without confidence.英语句子语法逻辑性和主从层次感英语句子语法逻辑性和主从层次感Limited in vocabulary fatheavy overweight plump chubby a big bone sexy voluptuous 增增增增强强强强词类词类词类词类型型型型ICE-GBICE-GBSECCLSECCL频频频频数数数数频频频频率率率率频频频频数数数数频频频频率率率率最高程度最高程度最高程度最高程度词词词词absolutelyabsolutely1131131.991.992 20.050.05completelycompletely76761.271.274 40.100.10totallytotally78781.301.3013130.310.31perfectlyperfectly48480.800.800 00 0entirelyentirely51510.850.851 10.020.02fullyfully28280.470.474 40.100.10小小小小计计计计3943946.686.6824240.580.58加加加加强强强强词词词词veryvery1952195232.5332.5348164816114.67114.67soso4674677.787.7897197123.1223.12reallyreally2782784.634.632142145.105.10tootoo3013015.025.022092094.984.98extremelyextremely63631.051.058 80.190.19highlyhighly26260.430.430 00 0terriblyterribly28280.470.470 00 0小小小小计计计计3115311551.9151.9162186218148.06148.06合合合合计计计计3509350958.5958.5962426242148.64148.64VERYVERY使用使用过过度：度：I I am am a a college college student student and and my my home home is is veryvery far far from from the the college,college,so so I I have have to to live live in in a a dormitory.dormitory.And And one one of of my my dormmates dormmates is is veryvery,a a veryvery energetic energetic girl.girl.She She is is always always veryvery active active in in daytime.daytime.Meanwhile.Meanwhile.She She is is also also veryvery excited excited in in the the night.night.Almost Almost every every day,day,I I sleep sleep with with her her voice.voice.Oh Oh not not voice.voice.Its Its even even noisy noisy because because she she wants wants to to express express her her ideas ideas and and her her excitement excitement in in her her dreams,dreams,its its veryvery terrible terrible for for me,me,because because I I want want to to sleep sleep veryvery well,well,but but she she always always in in the the middle middle night night suddenly suddenly made made a a terrible terrible sound.sound.So So I I always always awaked awaked or or disturbed disturbed by by hers hers dream.dream.I I remembered remembered one one night night I I just just fall fall asleep asleep a a few few moment.moment.Suddenly Suddenly she she made made a a big big voice voice and and then then silent silent and and then then she she sang sang song song she she sang sang a a song song and and its its an an English English song,song,although although itsits veryvery beautiful,beautiful,but but you you know know its its in in the the middle middle night night midnight,midnight,so so I I feel feel veryvery terrible,terrible,so so I I trembled trembled in in the the bed bed and and after after that that I I feel feel veryvery veryvery threatened,threatened,so so I I made made a a noisy noisy a a noise noise too too and and wanted wanted to to wake wake her her up up and and and and then then I I will will go go to to sleep sleep again.again.But But its its veryvery its its veryvery difficult difficult for for me me to to wake wake her her up up because because she she is is in in her her dream dream and and veryvery deeply.deeply.So So it it makes makes me me veryvery angry.angry.Every Every night night I I always always find find that that in in the the morning morning that that my my eyes eyes were were very,very,were were veryvery poor,poor,so so I I want want I I always always want want to to say say to to her her that that you you are are veryvery active,active,too too active active to to let let me me go go sleep.sleep.So So please please made made your your dream dream silently.silently.作文中最常用的作文中最常用的10个个2词词块：词词块：序号序号搭配性质搭配性质2 2词词丛词词丛频数频数%1 1代词短语代词短语It isIt is3,6193,6190.360.362 2名动短语名动短语I thinkI think1,7781,7780.180.183 3名词短语名词短语Computer gamesComputer games1,4701,4700.140.144 4名词短语名词短语Mobile phoneMobile phone1,2021,2020.120.125 5动词短语动词短语There areThere are9859850.100.106 6代词短语代词短语Each otherEach other9689680.100.107 7名词短语名词短语Generation gapGeneration gap9419410.090.098 8名词短语名词短语My opinionMy opinion9359350.090.099 9介词短语介词短语For exampleFor example8578570.080.081010名词短语名词短语Kind ofKind of7317310.070.07作文中最常用的作文中最常用的10个个4词词块：词词块：序号序号搭配性质搭配性质4 4词词丛词词丛频数频数%1 1介词短语介词短语With the development ofWith the development of4474470.040.042 2名词短语名词短语More and more peopleMore and more people3183180.030.033 3介词短语介词短语On the other handOn the other hand2782780.020.024 4介词短语介词短语At the same timeAt the same time2242240.020.025 5动词短语动词短语Pay more attention toPay more attention to1251250.010.016 6介词短语介词短语In our daily lifeIn our daily life1241240.010.017 7副词短语副词短语As we all knowAs we all know1081080.010.018 8介词短语介词短语For a long timeFor a long time1081080.010.019 9介词短语介词短语In the western worldIn the western world98980.010.011010副词短语副词短语All over the worldAll over the world95950.010.01作文词长比较作文词长比较 三个三个语语料料库库差异差异显显著的常用著的常用动词标动词标准准频频数数对对比比序号序号序号序号常用常用常用常用动词动词动词动词中国学生中国学生中国学生中国学生外国学生外国学生外国学生外国学生美国学生美国学生美国学生美国学生1 1GetGetGetGet3434343420202020-2 2LearnLearnLearnLearn30303030-3 3SpeakSpeakSpeakSpeak23232323-4 4TellTellTellTell20202020-5 5ReadReadReadRead19191919-6 6StudyStudyStudyStudy18181818-7 7DevelopDevelopDevelopDevelop17171717-8 8SeeSeeSeeSee1111111114141414212121219 9FeelFeelFeelFeel-171717171010ShowShowShowShow-16 16 16 161111 Believe Believe Believe Believe-14 14 14 141212ComeComeComeCome-11 11 11 11makelet enable ensure allow help make it possible/impossible/easy/hard for sb.to do sth.The plane makes it possible for me to cover 500 kilometers an hour.享受公费医疗be entitled to free medical care 我够不到那个苹果。I cannot get the apple.I cannot reach the apple.The apple is beyond my reach.红旗、红茶、红糖、红豆 黄教授ChinglishKeeping pets has these advantages and disadvantages,but there are so many people like it.In their oppinion,pets always make a lot of noises affect their rest.Everything has two sides.Keeping pets is also.Everything has two sides.so does keep pets.But every coin has two sides.The same to keeping pets.Unavoidable in mistakes of various kinds 1.Spelling 2.Grammar3.Appropriatenesssociety development modern success achieve success succeed be successful in my opinion 今天我不能上学了，因为我病了。I cannot go to school today.Because I am ill.I cannot go to school today,because I have fallen ill.I dont want to stay with you because I am lonely.I dont want to stay with you,because you are too realistic.Nowadays,more and more people like to raise Nowadays,more and more people like to raise pets.for examplepets.for example:dogsdogs、catscats They always They always bring us helpness and happiness.bring us helpness and happiness.Suppose you have a dog,Suppose you have a dog,whenwhen you feel sad or you feel sad or loney,you can say something to it,loney,you can say something to it,if if you do this you do this you may feel better.you may feel better.One day,a male cat comes out.The female one One day,a male cat comes out.The female one might follow the male one,and never go back.might follow the male one,and never go back.Suppose you have a dog.When you feel sad or lonely,you can say something to it.If you do this,you may feel better.A Collection of Good Sentence Structure CET-4GoodSentenceStructure1:“therebe”GoodSentenceStructure1:“therebe”1。Thereisabundantevidenceindicatingthat+简单句（主语谓语）简单句（主语谓语）Thereisabundantevidencefromawiderangeoffieldsindicatingthattheearthanduniversearebothbillionsofyearsold.Accordingtoarecentsurvey,ThelatestsurveyshowsthatAnrecentinvestigationshowsthat2008年12月：Limiting the use of disposable plastic bags 1。一次性塑料袋被广泛使用There is abundant evidence indicating that disposable plastic bags are used everywhere,in department stores,in supermarkets and even in rest rooms.Many university students More and more A number of A considerable number of A relatively small number of A great number of A majority of An overwhelming majority of An increasing number of People Baby/infant/infantry Child/kid/youngster Teenager/adolescent Young people/(youth)/adultMiddle-aged people Elderly people/the senior citizen Old people Lay-off workers/white-collared/the retired Practice 2:2008年6月：Recreational activities1.1.娱乐活动多种多样2.2.娱乐活动可以使人们受益，也可能有危害性3.3.There is a general tendency that a majority of universities authorities manage to provide the students with recreational activities of various kinds.2.ThereisnoagreementamongpeopleontheissuewhetherorThereisnoagreementwhetherweshouldliveinthecityorinthecountry.Topic:On the Spring Festival Gala 有人喜欢看，有人认为应该取消There is no agreement whether the Spring Festival Gala should be cancelled or not.3.so that As far as I am concerned,the Spring Festival Gala should be held in the future.For one thing,the programs are so interesting that it provides us with an opportunity to chat,laugh and drink heartily with our family members on the eve of the Spring Festival.For another,the programs are so various that they appeal to/attract kids,teenagers,middle-aged people and the old.Make Enable sb.to do sth.Allow Help sb.do sth.Force sb.to do sth.Drive 4.,which enables sb.to do sth.AconsiderablenumberofpeoplehavetoworktogetherforthesuccessoftheSpringFestivalGala,whichmakesitpossibleformanypeopletohavejobsoftheirown.The major reasons why I decide to do so can be listed as follows.The benefits can be listed as follows.First of all,缺乏师资，（学习知识）离开父母，更加自立I have to live without the help of my parents,I have to live far away from my parents,which makes it possible for me to be much more independent than ever.Finally,环境恶劣，锻炼意志Working in the western areas(remote areas)in our country enables to be strong in will because it is tough for me to work there.It is so tough for me to work there that it enables me to be strong in will.Examples 5.Take _ for example.It is _ that enables him to do sth.CooperationTake Liu Bei and Sun Quan who tried to fight against Cao Cao for example.It is the cooperation between them that enables them to win the battle in Chibi.Take me a graduate candidate in Nanjing Normal University for example.It is internet that enables me to gain access to the reference books and reading materials I am searching for.be informed of what has happened home and abroadto keep contact with my friends in primary school and secondary school to enjoy entertainments to hold video conferences Example7.Take the lovely children who live in the remote areas of our country for example.It is the help of the people from big cities that enables them to go to university.8.Another case in point is the elderly who cannot take care of themselves.Without the other peoples help,they would live a miserable and lonely life when they are getting older and older.Take the athlete Sang Lan who failed in one of the Olympic Games for example.It is confidence that enables her a disabled person to live a carefree life.Take Yao Ming(who is)one of the most well-Take Yao Ming(who is)one of the most well-known athletes in China for example.It is known athletes in China for example.It is confidence that enables him to be the top confidence that enables him to be the top basketball players in the world.basketball players in the world.Another case in point is the lovely kids who live in Another case in point is the lovely kids who live in the remote areas.Without confidence,the remote areas.Without confidence,their their chances ofchances of being enrolled in university being enrolled in university would be would be rather slimrather slim.On the contrary,with confidence,they.On the contrary,with confidence,they would would be more likely tobe more likely to be elites in a wide range be elites in a wide range of fields.of fields.People from all walks of life People from all walks of life 6.Whetherornotdependsonwhetherornot.Whetherwecanachievesuccessornotdependslargelyonwhetherwecancommunicatewithotherseffectivelyornot.expressmyselfWhetherwecanachievesuccessornotdependslargelyonwhetherwecanbeoptimistic/persistent/catchholdoftheopportunityinfrontofusornot.7.Nothingis+erthanto+VNothingismoreimportantthantoreceiveeducation.Nothingismoreimportantthanlife.Nothingismoreimportantthantoprotectourenvironment.Nothingismoreimportantthantoprotecttheintellectualpropertyrights.8.cannotemphasizetheimportanceoftoomuch.Wecannotemphasizetheimportanceofprotectingoureyestoomuch.Amancannothavetoomanyties.9.ifPleasecallmeimmediatelyifyoucomeupwiththesolutiontothefinancialproblem.Withoutcleanwater,theareacannotsustainlifeofanykind,corn,livestockorhuman.10.aslongasAmericantroopswillnotleaveIraqaslongasBushisthepresidentofU.S.A.Wewillattainourgoalonedayaslongaswekeeppracticingallthetime.11.OnlywhencanwedoOnlywhenwerealize(areclearlyawareof)thegravityoftheproblemcanwetryeverymeanstopersuadetheauthoritiesconcernedtosolvetheproblemasquicklyasp