高中英语人教版必修-第三册(2019)-读后续写-公开课.pptx
CONTINUATION WRITING浙 江 省 萧 山 中 学浙 江 省 萧 山 中 学 陆 佳陆 佳HOW TO MAKE YOUR WRITING VIVID,CREATIVE AND ATTRACTIVE?His face is flushing.His throat is tighteningHis voice is rising.He is slamming a fist on the table.He is angry.She pulls her collar up,tightens her scarf,shoves her hands deep into her pockets,turns her face away from the biting wind.She is cold.He yawns,groans,and stretches.His eyes look puffy.His shoulders slump.Another character might say,“Didnt you sleep last night?You look shot.”He is tired.SHOW,DONT TELLUse imagery:Imagery is a language that paints a vivid picture in the mind of the reader,often by appealing to the five senses:sight,sound,smell,taste and touch.Tell:Joey missed his father.Show:Joey hadnt seen his father for a long,long time not since he was in kindergarten.He couldnt remember his fathers face very well.But at night,he could still hear him say,“Good night,Joey.I love you.”a)From the description,how do you know that Joey misses his father?b)Which of the five senses does the description appeal to?Sight,sound.Tell:Alvin hated his grandfather.Alvin hated his grandfather.Show:Alvin hated the way his grandfather was always watching.The slack,distorted mouth,twisted to one side after last years stroke.The thin arms,bulging veins he couldnt look at him anymore.He thought he could smell him though a waft of stale piss.a)From the description,how do you know that Alvin hated his grandfather?b)Which of the five senses does the description appeal to?Sight,smell.Tell:Old Mr.Chan was hot and tired.Old Mr.Chan was hot and tired.Show:Old Mr.Chan used a tissue to wipe the sweat from his face.He got ready for the slow,steep walk up the stairs.Every day,its the same,he thought.a)From the description,how do you know that old Mr.Chan is hot and tired?b)Which of the five senses does the description appeal to?Sight,touch.APPRECIATIONJoey was afraid.It was said that there would be a storm，and the lights went out at that time.The lights suddenly went out.In the darkness,the wind and rain grew louder and seemed closerJoey sat still,his heart beating fast.It made a thump,thump,thump noise in his chest.APPRECIATIONAlvins mother was angry.She hit Alvin.It was very painful.She had moved so quickly,her hand going back and across in one movement,slapping his left cheek with a crack that silenced the room.The pain hung hot on his cheek.APPRECIATIONBill was frightened.He thought someone was behind him.It seemed a shadow had fallen over him.But there was no shadow.His heart had given a great jump up into his throat and was choking him.Then his blood slowly chilled and he felt the sweat of his shirt cold against his flesh.READING:THE GIFT OF THE MAGI1.One dollar and eighty-seven cents.That was all.And sixty cents of it in the smallest pieces of money-pennies.Three times Della counted it.One dollar and eighty-seven cents.And the next day would be Christmas.2.She cried for a while,stood by the window and looked out dully at a gray cat walking along a gray fence in a gray back yard.3.Suddenly Della turned from the window and stood before the glass mirror there.Her eyes were shining,but her face had lost its color within twenty seconds.Quickly she pulled down her hair and let it fall to its full length.4.Now,they had two possessions which they valued.One was Jims gold time piece,the watch that had been his fathers and his grandfathers.The other was Dellas hair.5.staring at the mirror,Della found _6.Where she stopped,the sign read:Madame Sofronie.Hair Goods of All Kinds.Then,down came the beautiful brown waterfall of hair.7.Twenty dollars,said Madame,lifting the hair with an experienced hand.8.The next two hours,Della looked in all the stores to choose a gift for Jim.She found it at last.It was a chain-simple round rings of silver.It was perfect for Jims gold watch.She gave the shopkeeper twenty-one dollars and hurried home.9.At seven oclock that night the coffee was made,and the pan was hot and ready to cook the meat.Della held the silver chain in her hand and sat near the door.Then she heard his step and she turned white for just a minute.She whispered:Please God,make him think I am still pretty.”Paragraph 1:The door opened,and Jim stepped in._Paragraph 2:Inside Jims package were the the gift for Della-_READ FOR CHARACTERS DellaJimcoupleREAD FOR SETTING1.One dollar and eighty-seven cents.That was all.And sixty cents of it in the smallest pieces of money-pennies.Three times Della counted it.One dollar and eighty-seven cents.And the next day would be Christmas.2.She cried for a while,stood by the window and looked out dully at a gray cat walking along a gray fence in a gray back yard.3.Suddenly Della turned from the window and stood before the glass mirror there.Her eyes were shining,but her face had lost its color within twenty seconds.Quickly she pulled down her hair and let it fall to its full length.4.Now,they had two possessions which they valued.One was Jims gold time piece,the watch that had been his fathers and his grandfathers.The other was Dellas hair.READ FOR SETTINGC Christmas is approachinghristmas is approachingSend gifts to each otherREAD FOR PLOT1.One dollar and eighty-seven cents.That was all.And sixty cents of it in the smallest pieces of money-pennies.Three times Della counted it.One dollar and eighty-seven cents.And the next day would be Christmas.2.She cried for a while,stood by the window and looked out dully at a gray cat walking along a gray fence in a gray back yard.3.Suddenly Della turned from the window and stood before the glass mirror there.Her eyes were shining,but her face had lost its color within twenty seconds.Quickly she pulled down her hair and let it fall to its full length.4.Now,they had two possessions which they valued.One was Jims gold time piece,the watch that had been his fathers and his grandfathers.The other was Dellas hair.What was the current situation of Della and Jims family?READ FOR PLOT1.One dollar and eighty-seven cents.That was all.And sixty cents of it in the smallest pieces of money-pennies.Three times Della counted it.One dollar and eighty-seven cents.And the next day would be Christmas.2.She cried for a while,stood by the window and looked out dully at a gray cat walking along a gray fence in a gray back yard.3.Suddenly Della turned from the window and stood before the glass mirror there.Her eyes were shining,but her face had lost its color within twenty seconds.Quickly she pulled down her hair and let it fall to its full length.4.Now,they had two possessions which they valued.One was Jims gold time piece,the watch that had been his fathers and his grandfathers.The other was Dellas hair.What was the current situation of Della and Jims family?They live in extreme poverty.They live in extreme poverty.READ FOR PLOTChristmas:time for giftsFeeling?frustrated;disappointedNo money for gifts 1.One dollar and eighty-seven cents.That was all.And sixty cents of it in the smallest pieces of money-pennies.Three times Della counted it.One dollar and eighty-seven cents.And the next day would be Christmas.2.She cried for a while,stood by the window and looked out dully at a gray cat walking along a gray fence in a gray back yard.3.Suddenly Della turned from the window and stood before the glass mirror there.Her eyes were shining,but her face had lost its color within twenty seconds.Quickly she pulled down her hair and let it fall to its full length.4.Now,they had two possessions which they valued.One was Jims gold time piece,the watch that had been his fathers and his grandfathers.The other was Dellas hair.HOW DID THE AUTHOR VIVIDLY SHOW THE FEELING?1.One dollar and eighty-seven cents.That was all.And sixty cents of it in the smallest pieces of money-pennies.Three times Della counted it.One dollar and eighty-seven cents.And the next day would be Christmas.2.She cried for a while,stood by the window and looked out dully at a gray cat walking along a gray fence in a gray back yard.3.Suddenly Della turned from the window and stood before the glass mirror there.Her eyes were shining,but her face had lost its color within twenty seconds.Quickly she pulled down her hair and let it fall to its full length.4.Now,they had two possessions which they valued.One was Jims gold time piece,the watch that had been his fathers and his grandfathers.The other was Dellas hair.HOW DID THE AUTHOR VIVIDLY SHOW THE FEELING?1.One dollar and eighty-seven cents.That was all.And sixty cents of it in the smallest pieces of money-pennies.Three times Della counted it.One dollar and eighty-seven cents.And the next day would be Christmas.2.She cried for a while,stood by the window and looked out dully at a gray cat walking along a gray fence in a gray back yard.3.Suddenly Della turned from the window and stood before the glass mirror there.Her eyes were shining,but her face had lost its color within twenty seconds.Quickly she pulled down her hair and let it fall to its full length.4.Now,they had two possessions which they valued.One was Jims gold time piece,the watch that had been his fathers and his grandfathers.The other was Dellas hair.HOW DID THE AUTHOR VIVIDLY SHOW THE FEELING?repetitionimagery1.One dollar and eighty-seven cents.That was all.And sixty cents of it in the smallest pieces of money-pennies.Three times Della counted it.One dollar and eighty-seven cents.And the next day would be Christmas.2.She cried for a while,stood by the window and looked out dully at a gray cat walking along a gray fence in a gray back yard.3.Suddenly Della turned from the window and stood before the glass mirror there.Her eyes were shining,but her face had lost its color within twenty seconds.Quickly she pulled down her hair and let it fall to its full length.4.Now,they had two possessions which they valued.One was Jims gold time piece,the watch that had been his fathers and his grandfathers.The other was Dellas hair.READ FOR PLOTDid Della come up with a solution?1.One dollar and eighty-seven cents.That was all.And sixty cents of it in the smallest pieces of money-pennies.Three times Della counted it.One dollar and eighty-seven cents.And the next day would be Christmas.2.She cried for a while,stood by the window and looked out dully at a gray cat walking along a gray fence in a gray back yard.3.Suddenly Della turned from the window and stood before the glass mirror there.Her eyes were shining,but her face had lost its color within twenty seconds.Quickly she pulled down her hair and let it fall to its full length.4.Now,they had two possessions which they valued.One was Jims gold time piece,the watch that had been his fathers and his grandfathers.The other was Dellas hair.READ FOR PLOTDid Della come up with a solution?1.One dollar and eighty-seven cents.That was all.And sixty cents of it in the smallest pieces of money-pennies.Three times Della counted it.One dollar and eighty-seven cents.And the next day would be Christmas.2.She cried for a while,stood by the window and looked out dully at a gray cat walking along a gray fence in a gray back yard.3.Suddenly Della turned from the window and stood before the glass mirror there.Her eyes were shining,but her face had lost its color within twenty seconds.Quickly she pulled down her hair and let it fall to its full length.4.Now,they had two possessions which they valued.One was Jims gold time piece,the watch that had been his fathers and his grandfathers.The other was Dellas hair.READ FOR PLOTDid Della come up with a solution?She thought she could sell her hair for money.1.One dollar and eighty-seven cents.That was all.And sixty cents of it in the smallest pieces of money-pennies.Three times Della counted it.One dollar and eighty-seven cents.And the next day would be Christmas.2.She cried for a while,stood by the window and looked out dully at a gray cat walking along a gray fence in a gray back yard.3.Suddenly Della turned from the window and stood before the glass mirror there.Her eyes were shining,but her face had lost its color within twenty seconds.Quickly she pulled down her hair and let it fall to its full length.4.Now,they had two possessions which they valued.One was Jims gold time piece,the watch that had been his fathers and his grandfathers.The other was Dellas hair.READ FOR PLOTDid Della come up with a solution?She thought she could sell her hair for money.Her hair was the value/wealth of their familyTELLSuddenly an idea occurred to her that she could sell her hair,though she was sad at this thought.Suddenly Della turned from the window and stood before the glass mirror there.Her eyes were shining,but her face had lost its color within twenty seconds.Quickly she pulled down her hair and let it fall to its full length.SHOWimageryLets practice!beautiful determinedsadimageryStaring at the mirror,Della found _Show,dont tell.Staring at the mirror,Della found her beautiful hair fell about her rippling and shining like a cascade of brown waters.It reached below her knee and made itself almost a garment for her.And then she did it up again nervously and quickly.Once she faltered for a minute and stood still while a tear or two splashed on the worn red carpet.On went her old brown jacket,on went on old brown hat.With a whirl of skirts and with the brilliant sparkle still in her eye,she fluttered out the door and down the stairs to the street.ripple逐渐扩散cascade小瀑布garment衣服falter蹒跚，摇晃splash泼洒，溅 whirl急转sparkle闪耀的光，亮点flutter匆忙急赶READ FOR PLOTChristmas:time for giftsFeeling?frustrated;disappointedNo money for giftSell hair for gift 5.With a quick motion and brightness still in her eyes,she danced out the door and down the street.6.Where she stopped,the sign read:Madame Sofronie.Hair Goods of All Kinds.Then,down came the beautiful brown waterfall of hair.7.Twenty dollars,said Madame,lifting the hair with an experienced hand.8.The next two hours,Della looked in all the stores to choose a gift for Jim.She found it at last.It was a chain-simple round rings of silver.It was perfect for Jims gold watch.She gave the shopkeeper twenty-one dollars and hurried home.9.At seven oclock that night the coffee was made and the pan was hot and ready to cook the meat.Della held the silver chain in her hand and sat near the door.Then she heard his step and she turned white for just a minute.She whispered:Please God,make him think I am still pretty.”READ FOR PLOTWhat gift did Della buy for Jim?5.With a quick motion and brightness still in her eyes,she danced out the door and down the street.6.Where she stopped,the sign read:Madame Sofronie.Hair Goods of All Kinds.Then,down came the beautiful brown waterfall of hair.7.Twenty dollars,said Madame,lifting the hair with an experienced hand.8.The next two hours,Della looked in all the stores to choose a gift for Jim.She found it at last.It was a chain-simple round rings of silver.It was perfect for Jims gold watch.She gave the shopkeeper twenty-one dollars and hurried home.9.At seven oclock that night the coffee was made and the pan was hot and ready to cook the m
