高中英语书面表达五步法.pptx
Do you like writing?What is the students common reaction to writing a composition？Just Relax！第1页/共49页高考作文高分卷的特点外在美：第一印象很重要！书写清楚，字母匀称，词、行间距适当，卷面整洁。结构美：有合理的段落层次，多为3段式，条理清晰；每段有每段的主题。词汇美：词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。句式美：运用得当的高级句式结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉。第2页/共49页养眼的养眼的第3页/共49页第4页/共49页第5页/共49页第6页/共49页第7页/共49页当批到下午两点看当批到下午两点看到了它们到了它们第8页/共49页太挤了太挤了第9页/共49页太乱了太乱了第10页/共49页太空了太空了第11页/共49页太潦草了太潦草了第12页/共49页太花了太花了第13页/共49页太没谱了太没谱了第14页/共49页老师最恨的作文老师最恨的作文第15页/共49页大锅，标点呢？段呢大锅，标点呢？段呢？第16页/共49页姐，你长发及腰的字体姐，你长发及腰的字体难掩你每句都错的事实难掩你每句都错的事实啊！啊！第17页/共49页神，你别抄阅读理解行不神，你别抄阅读理解行不？俺们也会看试卷的！？俺们也会看试卷的！第18页/共49页老师最喜欢的作文老师最喜欢的作文第19页/共49页Great minds think alike!第20页/共49页一点提示一点提示第21页/共49页很容易改进的字很容易改进的字第22页/共49页笔笔第23页/共49页笔笔第24页/共49页答题不可越界答题不可越界第25页/共49页1.审题审题2.列提纲列提纲3.连词成句连词成句4.连句成篇连句成篇5.润色修正润色修正写作的五个步骤写作的五个步骤：（体裁，时态，结构，要求）（体裁，时态，结构，要求）（重点词组）（重点词组）（简单句）（简单句）（衔接词）（衔接词）（更高级的句法和单词）（更高级的句法和单词）See?Writing is not so tough.Let s have a try!第26页/共49页作文题目作文题目：20082008年奥运会落幕，一家英文报刊年奥运会落幕，一家英文报刊在其网站上征集奥运会后如何综合利用体育场在其网站上征集奥运会后如何综合利用体育场馆的建议。假设你叫张华，是该报的一名读者，馆的建议。假设你叫张华，是该报的一名读者，请给该报编辑部写一封信，谈谈你的建议和理请给该报编辑部写一封信，谈谈你的建议和理由由内容包括内容包括向公众开放，用于健身向公众开放，用于健身租给体育公司，创造经济效益租给体育公司，创造经济效益开辟成旅游景点，吸引游客开辟成旅游景点，吸引游客哈哈，哈哈，不是李华了！不是李华了！第27页/共49页 1.单词拼写或用错：单词拼写或用错：Give you some advise.They can attact visitors.adviceattract学生常犯错误：学生常犯错误：第28页/共49页 We may given it to the PE company.The sport stadiums is very great and is highly spoken of by the foreigners.3.主谓一致问题：主谓一致问题：give2.时态语态问题：时态语态问题：areare第29页/共49页 Many people can use them to strong our body.I am writing to make some advice for how to make full use of the sports stadiums.5.介词短语运用问题：介词短语运用问题：4.词性混淆问题：词性混淆问题：strengthenon第30页/共49页信息信息2信息信息3信息信息4开头开头正文正文结尾结尾体裁体裁人称人称时态时态 要求要求结构结构字数字数内容内容一般现在时一般现在时Para.1Para.2Para.3抓要点抓要点,120个左右个左右信息信息1信息信息50808年奥运会刚刚落幕年奥运会刚刚落幕.征集奥运会后如何综合利征集奥运会后如何综合利用体育场馆的建议用体育场馆的建议.你想写一些建议你想写一些建议.向公众开放，用于健身向公众开放，用于健身总结，意愿总结，意愿书信格式书信格式租给体育公司，创造经济效益租给体育公司，创造经济效益开辟成旅游景点，吸引游客开辟成旅游景点，吸引游客第一第一,三人称三人称Step1：审题：审题第31页/共49页Step2：列提纲：列提纲Para1.开头开头0808年奥运会刚刚落幕年奥运会刚刚落幕.征集奥运会后如何综合利用体育场馆的建议征集奥运会后如何综合利用体育场馆的建议.你想写一些建议你想写一些建议.08年奥运会刚刚落幕.the 2008 Olympic Games were hosted in Beijing.征集奥运会后如何综合利用体育场馆的建议.after the Olypmic Gamescollect some advice how to make best use of the stadiums.你想写一些建议contribute some suggestions to you第32页/共49页Para2.正文正文 向公众开放，用于健身向公众开放，用于健身租给体育公司，创造经济效益租给体育公司，创造经济效益开辟成旅游景点，吸引游客开辟成旅游景点，吸引游客向公众开放，用于健身向公众开放，用于健身.be opened to the people/public be used forstrengthen their bodies租给体育公司，创造经济效益租给体育公司，创造经济效益.be rented to Sport companies which organize matches Make money/profits开辟成旅游景点，吸引游客开辟成旅游景点，吸引游客 be used astourist attractions Attract touristsStep2：列提纲：列提纲第33页/共49页Para3：总结，意愿：总结，意愿 结尾结尾 In my opinion/as far as I am concerned./from my point of view.I would appreciate it if you take into considerationStep2：列提纲：列提纲第34页/共49页Step3：连词成句：连词成句Para.1:The 29th Olympic Games were hosted in Beijing with a great success.I hear you are collecting some advice on how to make the best of the stadiums.I would like to contribute the following suggestions to you.第35页/共49页Para.2:The stadiums can be opened to the public.The public can strengthen their bodies.The stadiums can be rented to sport company which organize matches.It can make more profits.They can be used as tourist attraction.It can attract many visitors.Step3：连词成句：连词成句第36页/共49页Para.3:From my point of view,we should do what we can to make full use the stadium.I would appreciate it if you would take my advice into deep considerationStep3：连词成句：连词成句第37页/共49页Step4：连句成篇：连句成篇 I heard you are collecting some advice on how to make the best of the stadiums after the 29th Olympic Games were hosted in Beijing with a great success.Here I would like to contribute the following suggestions to you.First of all,the stadiums can be opened to the public.The public can strengthen their bodies.Secondly,The stadiums can be rented to sport company which organize matches.It can bring in much more profits.last but not least,they can be used as tourist attraction.It can attract many visitors.From my point of view,we should do what we can to make full use the stadiums.I would appreciate it if you would take my advice into deep consideration第38页/共49页二二.使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档三三.巧用倒装增强句子表现力巧用倒装增强句子表现力四四.尝试多样尝试多样化表达方式化表达方式一一.使用较高级词汇使文章增加吸引力使用较高级词汇使文章增加吸引力强调句强调句With短语复合结构短语复合结构定语从句定语从句名词性从句名词性从句各种状语从句各种状语从句被动语态被动语态Step5：润色修正：润色修正第39页/共49页润色修正润色修正 I heard you are collecting some advice on how to make the best of the stadiums after the 29th Olympic Games were hosted in Beijing with a great success.1.With复合结构复合结构 With the 29th Olympic Games hosted successfully,I heard you are collecting some advice on how to make the best of the stadiums 第40页/共49页2.2.定语从句定语从句 First of all,the stadiums can be opened to the public.People can strengthen their bodies there.润色修正润色修正 First of all,the stadiums can be opened to the public,where they can strengthen their bodies conveniently.（适当增加修饰性的副词）（适当增加修饰性的副词）第41页/共49页润色修正润色修正3.3.非谓语动词非谓语动词 Secondly,the stadiums can be rented to sport company which organize matches.It can bring in much more profits.Secondly,the stadiums can be rented to sport companies which organize matches,bringing in much more profits.（现在分词作结果状语）（现在分词作结果状语）第42页/共49页润色修正润色修正4.状语从句状语从句 last but not least,they can be used as tourist attraction.It can attract many visitors.last but not least,they can be used as tourist attraction.Because many of them are so well designed with strong Chinese features that they will surely attract visitors from all over the world.第43页/共49页润色修正润色修正5.5.倒装句倒装句 只有当我们充分利用这些体育馆时，才能让它们的存只有当我们充分利用这些体育馆时，才能让它们的存在有意义。在有意义。Only when we make full use of the stadium can we let stadium make sense.第44页/共49页 With the 29th Olympic Games ended successfully,What we should do now is how to make full use of the stadiums.I heard you are collecting some advice on how to make the best of them.Here I would like to contribute the following suggestions to you.First of all,the stadiums can be opened to the public,where they can strengthen their bodies conveniently.Secondly,the stadiums can be rented to sport companies which organize matches,bringing in much more profits.last but not least,they can be used as tourist attraction.Because many of them are so well designed with strong Chinese features that they will surely be attractions for visitors from all over the world.From my point of view,we should do what we can to make full use of the stadiums.Only when we make full use of the stadium can we let stadium make sense.I would appreciate it if you would take my advice into deep consideration第45页/共49页1.认真审题2.勾勒题纲3.连词成句4.连句成篇5.润色修改第46页/共49页HomeworkHomework第47页/共49页假假如如你你叫叫孙孙军军，是是红红星星高高中中的的学学生生，要要给给市市长长写写一一封封信信，反反映映学学校校门门前前交交通通拥拥挤挤现现象象，包包括括以以下要点下要点：参考词汇:穿行 thread ones way 天桥 overpass 问题问题建议建议学学校校和和一一所所小小学学毗毗邻邻，对对着着大大街街，高高峰峰期期交交通通繁繁忙忙；加加之之孩孩子子小小,家家长长接接送送。交交通通更更拥拥挤挤；学学生生过过街街在在车辆中穿行危险。车辆中穿行危险。政政府府应应采采取取措措施施,如修天桥等如修天桥等。第48页/共49页感谢您的观看！第49页/共49页
