高中英语概要写作.pptx

CONTENTS怎么理解概要写作呢？怎么理解概要写作呢？1评卷老师怎么评？评卷老师怎么评？2概要怎么写？概要怎么写？3写概要！写概要！4第1页/共28页1怎么理解概要？怎么理解概要？第2页/共28页概：（概：（）要：（要：（）概要：（概要：（）概概 要要概概 括括要要 点点 概括要点概括要点第3页/共28页2评卷老师怎么评？评卷老师怎么评？第4页/共28页1 1、本题总分为、本题总分为2525分，按分，按5 5个档次给分。个档次给分。2 2、评分时，先根据所写概要的内容和语言初步确、评分时，先根据所写概要的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。或调整档次，最后给分。3 3、词数少于、词数少于4040的和多于的和多于8080的，从总分中减去的，从总分中减去2 2分。分。评分原则评分原则第5页/共28页第6页/共28页4 4、评分时，应主要从以下四个方面考虑：、评分时，应主要从以下四个方面考虑：(1)(1)对原文要点的理解和呈现情况；对原文要点的理解和呈现情况；(2)(2)应用语法结构和词汇的准确性；应用语法结构和词汇的准确性；(3)(3)上下文的连贯性；上下文的连贯性；(4)(4)对各要点表达的独立性情况；对各要点表达的独立性情况；评分原则评分原则第7页/共28页5 5、拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个重要方面，评分、拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个重要方面，评分时，应视其对于交际的影响程度予以考虑。时，应视其对于交际的影响程度予以考虑。6 6、如书写较差以致影响交际，可将分数降低一个档次。、如书写较差以致影响交际，可将分数降低一个档次。评分原则评分原则第8页/共28页3考生怎么写概要？考生怎么写概要？第9页/共28页概要怎么写？概要怎么写？一、从文体入手，分析文章结构，准确把握要点一、从文体入手，分析文章结构，准确把握要点 注意区分事实和观点、重要和次要、普遍与特殊、相关与不相关、原因和结果等逻辑关系。1.记叙文：把握六要素who,when,what(event事件),how(process过程),why 2.议论文：表明论点、论据、结论 3.说明文：the topic-what,the reasons-why,the effects-how,the solutions(解决办法),the conclusion(结论)第10页/共28页概要怎么写？概要怎么写？二、明话题，定顺序，找中心句、高频词、连词，列提纲二、明话题，定顺序，找中心句、高频词、连词，列提纲 根据文章写作顺序(时间、地点、原因),对文章进行分段，找出各段的中心句和高频词以确定要点，再根据连词确定要点的主要和次要关系。最后根据抄写原文列出提纲。第11页/共28页 二.确定要点：三.重组要点：四.连句成篇：概要怎么写？概要怎么写？1.要点一：2.要点二：1.要点：2.要点：一.明确话题：第12页/共28页概要怎么写？概要怎么写？概要写作（满分概要写作（满分25分）分）阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。词左右的内容概要。Getting up early has been regarded as a good habit since ancient times.Many years ago,people thought that if we went to bed early and get up early,we would be energetic(充满活力的充满活力的)the whole day.So,getting up early is of great importance to us all.In fact,morning is the best time of a day.In the morning,the air is the freshest and people are usually in the best conditions(条件条件).Many of us may have the experiences that we memorize some things more quickly and accurately in the morning than any other time of the day.第13页/共28页概要怎么写？概要怎么写？If we do some morning exercise or only take a short walk in the morning,we can build our bodies and become much healthier.Also we will have enough time to make a plan and get ready for our work or study of the day if we get up early.However,if we get up late,we will probably have to do everything in a great hurry.Let us remember getting up early is a good habit and try our best to keep it.If we stick to getting up early every day,we will certainly benefit(受益受益)a lot from it.第14页/共28页写概要写概要!一、判断文体：_二、明话题，定顺序，找高频词、连词、中心句，列提纲明话题，定顺序，找高频词、连词、中心句，列提纲 话题：_ 顺序：_ 高频词:_ 连词:_ 中心句：_ 列提纲：_议论文议论文Get up earlyGet up early原因原因getting up earlygetting up early第15页/共28页概要怎么写？概要怎么写？概要写作（满分概要写作（满分25分）分）阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。词左右的内容概要。Getting up early has been regarded as a good habit since ancient times.Many years ago,people thought that if we went to bed early and get up early,we would be energetic(充满活力的充满活力的)the whole day.So,getting up early is of great importance to us all.In fact,morning is the best time of a day.In the morning,the air is the freshest and people are usually in the best conditions(条件条件).Many of us may have the experiences that we memorize some things more quickly and accurately in the morning than any other time of the day.第16页/共28页概要怎么写？概要怎么写？If we do some morning exercise or only take a short walk in the morning,we can build our bodies and become much healthier.Also we will have enough time to make a plan and get ready for our work or study of the day if we get up early.However,if we get up late,we will probably have to do everything in a great hurry.Let us remember getting up early is a good habit and try our best to keep it.If we stick to getting up early every day,we will certainly benefit(受益受益)a lot from it.第17页/共28页概要怎么写？概要怎么写？分析：分析：论点：论点：_ 论据：论据：_ _ _ _ _ 结论：结论：_Getting up early is a good habit and of great importance to people.Memorize more quickly,build our bodies and become much healthier,have time to make a plan,get ready for work or study.Getting up early can benefit us a lot第18页/共28页Getting up early is a good habit.And we attach great importance to getting up early.原因,morning is the most valuable time of a day,so we can have physical training to keep healthy.Besides,getting up early can let us have enough time to program and prepare to finish doing our work or study of the day.In a word,we will benefit a lot from getting up early.第19页/共28页It is important to get up early for people.In the morning,people can exercise their bodies through walking to keep healthy.Also,peoples memory will improve.Besides,people can make a good preparation/plan for themselves,so they will have enough time to do everything.In a word,getting up early is beneficial to us.第20页/共28页Getting up early in the morning is a good habit and very important,because in the morning we can have a better memory,healthier bodies and better preparation for the day.In addition,morning exercise can help us keep healthy.So,it is beneficial to us.第21页/共28页范例范例 People attach great importance to getting up early.(要点要点1)1)It enables them to have a better memory,healthier bodies and better preparation for the day.(要点要点2 2)If not,people will be busy doing everything.So insist on getting up early which is of great benefit to all people.(要点要点3 3)第22页/共28页写概要写概要!一、判断文体：_二、分析：说明文说明文The topic-whatThe reason-why The effects-howThe solutionsThe conclusionKoalas are unhappy and complainingTourists hugging and taking photosBeing repeatedly awokenGovernment bans the practice Be more kind to animals第23页/共28页写概要写概要!第24页/共28页Koalas are sad and complaining because of tourists hugging and taking photos,which makes them keeping awoken repeatedly.As a result,the government takes measures to ban the practice.So we should be kind to animals.第25页/共28页第二节：概要写作注意事项：注意事项：1.涵盖所有要点（主要点+分要点）2.无语法错误 3.有适当的连词，逻辑关系合理 4.杜绝抄袭文中原句 5.用第三人称 6.客观：无个人观点，不写文中没有的句子 7.准确：体裁，时态，顺序 8.简洁：措词，避免重复记叙文记叙文：who,when,what,how,why议论文议论文：论点，论据，结论说明文说明文：the topic-what,the reasons-why,the effects-how,the solutions,the conclusion第26页/共28页Thanks第27页/共28页感谢您的观看！第28页/共28页