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5.2 考研小作文：“三步走”和“五要素”“三步走”帮你帮你搞定小作文CONTENS目录三步走1五要素2写作技巧3三步走PARTONE“三步走”帮你搞定书信类小作文4怎么想？如何做？注意什么？“三步走”之一Directions:Your friend Wang Lin is going to open a company of his own,write a letter of congratulations to him based on the following notes.1)Its Wangs dream to start his own business.2)He has done a lot for that and deserves what he has achieved.3)You express all your good wishes to him.Write your letter with no more than 100 words.Write it on ANSWER Sheet 2.Do not sign your name at the end of the letter;use Li Ming instead.You do not need to write the address.题目要求投诉信 书信类祝贺信询问信 介绍信 推荐信祝贺信 感谢信邀请信道歉信建议信确定文体7祝贺信 提纲式怎么想？+8如何做：“三步走”表明意图1说明缘由2表达祝福3dreamdeservewishes示范观摩如何做范文分析祝贺信DearWangWei，IamsothrilledtolearnyouaregoingtoopenyourowncompanythatIcannotwaitbuttowriteyoualettertocongratulateyoursuccess.*表明意图，阐述了第一个关键词dream。*可以用thrilled或delighted替换happy/glad等常见词汇范文分析祝贺信Itswonderfulthatyouhaveachievedyourgoal.Yearsofyourhardworkhasfinallypaidoff,whichprovesonceagainthatwherethereisawill,thereisaway.Asyourfriendwhohavewitnessedalleffortsyouvemade,Iamnotsurprisedthatyouhavecometothisfar,becauseitsalwaysbeenyourdreamtostartabusinessofyourown.*围绕第二个关键词deserve来说明写信理由；*句采用paraphrase的策略对提纲中的第二句话反复论证。句式多变，避免重复。范文分析祝贺信加分亮点Itswonderfulthat 真 是 太 棒 了achievedyourgoal 实现目标payoff 取得成功witness 见证makeefforts做出努力Buildingastartupcanberiskyandinvolveamultitudeofuncertainties,butIbelieveyoucanmakeit.Congratulationsagainonyourachievementsandwisheverysuccessinyourcareer.*围绕第三个关键词wishes表达祝福；*用startup代替company；amultitudeof替换manysincerelyLiMing范文分析祝贺信14DONOT对齐方式注意！提纲中句子DONOTDONOT字数15三步走表明意图1说明缘由2表达祝福3说明祝贺缘由，表示祝贺说明祝贺缘由，表示祝贺夸奖才能，说明当之无愧夸奖才能，说明当之无愧再次祝贺，取得更大成功再次祝贺，取得更大成功16“五要素”自（自（From）日期（日期（Date）主题（主题（subject）致（致（To）正文（正文（body）12345备忘录/报告类Directions:TheEnvironmentalprotectionclubisgoingtoorganizesomeactivitieswiththethemeof“CreatingaGreenCultureandBuildingaLow-carbonCampus.Astheleaderoftheclub,youareaskedtowriteamemototheclubmemberstoexplaintheimportanceandarrangementsofthisactivities.写作范文备忘录写作范文备忘录五要素To：AllclubmembersFrom：LiMingDate：January7,20XXSubject:CreatingaGreenCultureandBuildingaLow-carboncampus.Wearegoingtolaunchaseriesofactivitiestopromotealowcarbonlifestyle,specifically,toadvocateenergyefficiency.Wasteminimizationandrecycling.Agreenlifestyleisapotentialandpresentformulaforahealthierandmorehabitableenvironment.Toattractmorestudentstoadoptthislifestyle,wewillholdlecturestointroducethenewlifestyleandhostanexhibitiononrecyclingtocourageencouragesstudentstomakethemostoftheirpossessions.Inaddition,wewillhandoutleafletstoeverydormitory,recommendingstudentstoswitchoffunusedlightsandotherelectronicequipment,torecyclepaper,batteriesandplasticbottles,andtotravelbybicycle,busorsubway.Allclubmembersarerequiredtotakepartintheaboveactivities,otherbrilliantideasaboutouractivityplansarewelcome.“三步走”帮你帮你搞定小作文SUMMARY小结三步走1五要素2写作技巧3Thank you!