高三英语二轮复习读后续写：妹妹的毕业典礼学案.docx

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。I always dreamed of giving someone a surprise,one that will be remembered for a lifetime. You know, the kind you seeon TV or read in stories. Well, thanks to a little determination, some luck,and a generous helping of Christmas Spirit, my dream became a reality.My family is Canadian, although my sister moved down to Australia a few years ago to further her study. She was graduating just before Christmas. However, due to my own school schedule backhome, I would not be able to make it in time for her graduation. She was understandably disappointed, and I felt guilty that I wasn't able to be there for her on this most special occasion.While I was talking to my school advisor about my term paper the week before my sister's graduation, our conversation drifted toward Christmas plans. When I mentioned that I would be missing my sister's graduation by less than 48 hours, she commented, “Well, if you want to go, I have no problem with it, so go ahead!"On hearing the words, I couldn't believe my luck! I nearly jumped for joy. “Just make sure you get permission from administration, she added. What she said immediately made my heart sink. The administration at my school was well-known for denying any sort of time-off requests, let alone last-minute requests, which would undoubtedly draw nothing but anger. I almost didn't bother asking, because Iknew it would be a waste of time and I didn't feel like a thorough punishment.Plus, I knew the answer already: no. But something in me decided to try, justin case. Maybe it was the hope that the Christmas Spirit would somehow affect the administrative office at this time of year.When I returned home to find the reply fromthe administration in my email box, I prepared myself for disappointment.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2,至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3,续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。I took a deepbreath, opened the and started to read.                                                                                       .                                                                                                                                                                                .                                                                                                                                                                                .                                                                                                                                                                                .                                                                                                                                                                                .With theticket, I couldnt wait to call my sister but suddenly an idea occurred to me.                                    .                                                                                                                                                                                 .                                                                                                                                                                                .                                                                                                                                                                                .                                                                                                                                           【答案】I took adeep breath, opened the e-mail, and started to read. It was an approval! I got the permission! I rubbed my eyes and couldnt believe my luck. I was extremely shocked, failing to contain my excitement. The only explanation that I could possibly come up with was that the Christmas Spirit had been lurking in the heart of the administrator when she read my last-minute request. Immediately, I called the airline. Miraculously, even during the busy Christmas season, I was able to change my ticket to arrive the day before mysisters graduation.With the ticket, I couldnt wait to call my sister but suddenly an idea occurred to me.Wouldnt it be so much more fantastic if I could surprise her? On my way to Australia, I kept picturing what a state of shock my sister would be in! The instant I arrived at her house, I knocked at the door with my hands trembling. When the door opened, there stood my sister, dumbfounded. I threw my arms around her, saying “I made it! Happy graduation and merry Christmas!” Tears of joy started welling up in her eyes and falling down her cheeks. My presence at her graduation and my surprising arrival was not  only the best Christmas present for her but also the very surprise that would be remembered for my lifetime.【解析】【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者因为自己的学习日程安排，将错过妹妹的毕业典礼，在妹妹毕业前一周，作者得到导师的许可，可以去参加妹妹的毕业典礼。作者向学校行政部门发邮件请假，作者回到家，看到了学校行政部门回复的邮件，做好了失望的准备。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“我深吸了一口气，打开电子邮件，开始阅读。”可知，第一段可描写作者得到了学校行政部分的许可，之后给航空公司打电话，将票换到了妹妹毕业的前一天。由第二段首句内容“拿着票，我迫不及待地想打电话给我妹妹，但我突然想到一个主意。”可知，第二段可描写作者决定给妹妹一个惊喜，作者到达之后，妹妹非常开心。2.续写线索：得到许可惊讶换票计划惊喜妹妹喜悦出席典礼3.词汇激活行为类想出：come upwith/think of打电话：call/phone设想：picture/imagine/visualize情绪类惊讶的：shocked/surprised/astonished喜悦：joy/happiness/pleasure【点睛】【高分句型1】The only explanation that I could possibly come up with was that the Christmas Spirit had been lurking in the heart of the administrator when she read my last-minute request.（由关系代词that引导定语从句，由连接词that引导表语从句，由连接词when引导时间状语从句）【高分句型2】My presence at her graduation and my surprising arrival was not only the best Christmas present for her but also the very surprise that would be remembered for my lifetime.（由关系代词that引导定语从句） 学科网（北京）股份有限公司