读后续写：我对儿子的承诺 讲义-高三英语写作专项.docx

南通三模（202105）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。After watching my son Todd run in an annual race, I made my usual comment,“Todd, I could walk faster than those women run." Todd laughed as he knew I wasn't a runner."Listen,Mom, I want you to show by your actions. How about you running with me next year at this race?”Without thinking, I quickly agreed to this challenge.But when it was almost time for this race to occur,Todd wasn't going to be running.He was sent to Africa as a soldier for three years. A few of his friends knew this“challenge"I had agreed to with Todd. They started to encourage me to run the race. I hadn't trained or anything.Quite frankly, I had almost forgotten I said I would do it.I decided I should keep my promise to Todd and run the race. The first thing I did was go out and buy some running clothes. I might as well look good, was my thought, even though I hadn't trained at all.The day of the race came. I was not well prepared,but I started off. It wasn't long before some guy on the roadside started to run next to me. I wasn't in the talking mood.However, this guy was very talkative. He kept making remarks on how tired he was, and I must be tired too. The race was over, and this guy's wife won! I was just happy to finish and keep my promise to Todd.I came home, and my neighbor asked about the race.I told him what had happened and how this guy would not shut up his negative talk. My neighbor laughed and set me straight,'"Kay, don't you know what this guy was doing? He thought you were the competition (竞争对手) by the way you were dressed. He wanted his wife to win.”Oh really!?注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。This guy's attitude built a fire in me for the  next race!  The race began on a cold day and I saw this guy  and his wife.    题型分析：以人物为线索，冲突明显，易读懂，重在细节（心理和动作描写），这对学生来说有点难。浅层信息：Who:I, my son Todd,the guy, his wife, my friendWhen:After watching my son run in a race,next year, the day of the race, when I came home, on a cold dayWhere:on the runwayWhat:a guy interrupted me deliberately in a raceWhy:The guy wanted his wife to win本篇情节和情感线索为履行承诺，作者在为准备的情况下参加了跑步比赛。在跑道上一个男人不断说消极的话干扰我，最终那个男人的妻子赢得了比赛。作者觉得履行了对儿子的承诺很开心，知道后来邻居告诉了我真相。续写必须要回答的问题：Para1:1. What would I do next?2. What did I do to prepare?3. What was the result?4. How did I feel about the coming race?Para2:5. What was my performance in the race?How did I feel?6. What did the guy do or say?7. What was my response?8. What was the outcome of the race?9. Possible version1:Para 1 This guys attitude built a fire in me for the next race!  I was determined to defeat his wife the next time. Dramatically, I received my son Todds letter, in which he told me about this striking performance in the army and enquired about the race. Hearing the news, I firmed my determination (I was more determined) to win the next race,making that guy and his wife admire me. Shortly afterwards, I bought some new running clothes to (let me) look more professional and instantly buried myself in practicing.Para 2 The race began on a cold day and I saw this guy and his wife. I notice their attention was attracted by new running clothes. Then I grinned to them on purpose, which made them more nervous. When we stood beside the starting line,it seemed that they couldnt conceal their sweat. During the race, the guy ran beside me and talked to me as usual. Out of his expectation, I didnt respond to him and kept running at a high speed. Before long, he was tired out and stopped, while I arrived at the finish line and came first. I was overwhelmed with joy because I could also let my son take pride in me. Possible version2 Para 1 This guys attitude built a fire in me for the next race!  I told the whole thing to my son. He grinned, saying, “Oh, really? It sounds like he isnt a kind man. Mom, you must prove yourself to that guy. I trust you.” I hung off and made a decision that I must win the next race. Since then, I went running every day, even on weekends.Though it was very tiring, I struggled to continue. I was full of energy as long as I imagined the scene that I would be awarded a gold medal. It was not until then I realized I was an aggressive woman. Finally, the race came.Para 2The race began on a cold day and I saw this guy and his wife. They were talking proudly about their last years achievements.They guy took a glance at me and smiled. I left them alone, buried in doing warming-up exercises. When the race started, the guy ran next to me and kept making remarks on how tired he was again! I didnt look at him throughout the race. A flood of energy welled up in my body and I headed for the destination firmly. Ultimately, I did it! After the race, the guy walked straight to me,saying, “You are a qualified runner. Congratulations!” I was excited but Icalmly said, “Thank you.” (said thanks to them) Those who sow with tears must reap with laughter. (You reap what you sow. /No pains, no gains)  Possible version 3. Para1 This guys attitude built a fire in me for the next race!  So, out of everyones expectation, I tried out for the next race. From then on, I changed my mind, I was not just for fun this time, I wanted to win the race and prove myself. Hence, I devoted myself to training every day. Sometimes when I was too tired to hold on, the guys words seemed like invisible hands, pushing me towards the direction. So I was back on my feet and trained even harder. With the assistance of my sons friends, my level improved quickly, and I was well-prepared to be the winner.Para 2The race began on a cold day and I saw this guy and his wife. They laughed merrily as if they already had been the winner. Suddenly , the guy glanced at me, and said to his wife, loudly, “Oh,dear, look at the woman who is well-dressed. It seems she has high skills, but in fact, she is the person with a low level, haha! A flow of anger running towards my face.I quickly walked towards the man and said, “Well. Lets bet who will be the winner this time,OK?” “Absolutely! (Absolutely my wife will win!)” the man agreed (claimed). The race started. I was running like a horse. As expected, I was the winner. With embarrassment written on the guys face, he apologized to me and I said, “Never look down on a hard-working person!”  学科网（北京）股份有限公司