读后续写：关于警察和小偷的两个异曲同工的暖心故事 讲义-高三英语二轮复习写作专项.docx

一 读后续写原文广东一模 On a freezing morning of December, two police officers were patrolling the streets. Suddenly, the walkie-talkie（对讲机）on Alan, one of the officers, rang. “The cake shop near the City Museum has reported a burglary（窃案）. Please rush to the scene immediately”, said the electronic voice.The two policemen quickly arrived at the shop, only to find that the scene showed no sign of crimes at all. Curiously, they checked the monitor and found that a thin woman broke open the window and climbed into the store at 5: 20 a. m. Instead of searching around, she walked straight into the storage room, stole cheese, chocolate, butter and other ingredients for a cake, and then ran away down the road.Both policemen felt quite confused about her behavior. One of the le shop assistants identified the thief as Clara, a single mother who lived nearby. She has an eight-year-old boy to take care of and lives in poverty.Moments later, the two officers arrived at Claras house. Bob, another officer, pulled out a gun and was about to break in. But Alan told him to put the gun away and knocked gently.The door opened and out came a very thin woman. From the outline of her figure, Alan recognized that she was exactly the thief. The woman, Clara, immediately understood the situation when she saw the two policemen. She buried her face in her hands and sat down on the floor.At that very moment, a childs voice broke the silence, “Mom, is anyone coming my birthday? Invite them in, please.”After hearing the boys words, Clara stood up and begged in a low voice, “Officer, I did steal those things, but theres nothing else I could do. Its my babys birthday, and Ive got neither job nor money. Please dont take those things away. Ive just used them to make him a cake.”注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Looking into the womans teary eyes, Alan understood and walked into the house._Bob nodded thoughtfully and asked, “What about the things she stole?” _二原文大意：名师导学这篇文章讲述了12月一个寒冷的早晨，两名警察在街上巡逻，发现一家蛋糕店发生盗窃，经过调查发现是一位名叫克拉拉的单身母亲所为，为了给她刚刚八岁的儿子过生日，克拉拉恳求警官不要拿走偷了的那些东西，并且认为她只是拿了一些做蛋糕的材料而已，小男孩邀请警官进去一起过生日·····三、续写第一段段尾要和第二段首句内容有效衔接由第二段首句的信息推测出第一段情节发展的方向，来保证第一段结束句与第二段首句的紧密衔接。根据题目提供的第二段首句“Bob nodded thoughtfully and asked, What about the things she stole? (鲍勃若有所思地点点头，问道: 那她偷的东西呢?) 结合第一段首句，可以预设的第段段尾一定要描述讨论如何处理盗窃之事。学生案例4请阅读以下段落，思考段尾是否和第二段首句内容一致。Para. 1: Looking into the woman s teary eyes ，Alan understood and walked into the house. Beside an old table sat a lovely boy in a shabby wheelchair!Upon seeing their coming in, the little figure yelled excitedly,“Welcome to my birthday. My mother is making a cake for me. They rushed out of the house to find Clara, who was still crying and brought her in. They looked at the child and said.Happy birthday to you.” Then they sang birthday songs together, losing themselves in the oceans of happiness.名师点评 该生使用了多样且丰富恰当的词汇，语法结构完整，表达比较流畅，有效地使用了语句间衔接手段，文中只是重墨描述警官和小男孩一家为小男孩庆生的场景，但段尾情境处理不够妥当与第二段首句Bob nodded thoughtfully and asked,“What about the things she stole?"在接不当。即刻修改 Para.1: Looking into the woman s teary eyes, Alan understood and walked into the house. Beside an old table sat a lovely boy in a shabby wheelchair. Upon seeing their coming in,the little figure yelled excitedly, “welcome to my birthday. My mother is making a cake for me.” They rushed out of the house to find Clara, who was still crying and brought her in. They looked at the child and said,“Happy birthday to you.” Then they sang birthday songs together, losing themselves in the oceans of happiness. After that, the two had to wave good-bye and on their way back Alan murmured they had better not arrest Clara.参考答案；Looking into the woman 's teary eyes, Alan understood and walked into the house. There were no more possessions except for some time-worn furniture, even no fireplace in such weather. At the sight of Alan, the boy, whose face was brightly red with cold, could barely contain himself.“Would you like some cake, sir?”he smiled eagerly.“I would. But I'm on duty. I just come over to say Happy Birthday to you, kid! ”Coming out of the house, Alan gestured Clara in and walked away.making Bob at a loss.“But we haven't finished yet, sir!Alan turned around and firmly said.“We can't get her, at least not today.”Bob nodded thoughtfully and asked, "What about the things she stole?The bill is on me.Alan volunteered. After returning to the cake shop, he explained the incident to the shop owner and then paid for the stolen materials. Afterwards,Clara took the initiative to go to the police station, asking for her punishment. What the officer had done made her feel ashamed of her theft. She said that she would improve her life by her own efforts and would no longer do anything illegal again.Everything settling down, Alan and Bob continued the patrol and it seemed not that cold ever after.完形填空   As temperatures approached 90 degrees in New York City last July 4th,three police officers went into a Whole Foods Market to get something cold to drink. What they walked into was    1   .Once inside, they were   2    by a store security guard who asked for help with a(n)    3    thief. The woman in question didnt have the    4    of a career criminal. She was obviously    5   ,and her cheeks were wet with tears.The officers looked inside her bag.“All we saw was    6    of food. We didnt see anything else,” Cuevas said. “Im hungry,” she    7    quietly. Caught on the spot, the woman no doubt    8    to be put to jail for the crime of being hungry while poor. But the officers had other ideas. “Well    9    her food,” Sojo told the    10    security guard.Thered been no    11    among the three men, no    12    to see whether they were all in. It went unsaid.    13   , they picked up the womans bag and    14    her to a cash register, where each chipped in$10 to pay the tab. She would not be    15    today.All the woman could do was silent    16    in gratitude. Covering her face with a handkerchief and    17    her tears, she repeated, “Thank you.”She wasnt the only one touched by this act of kindness. A man at the store posted a photo of what hed    18    on Twitter.But    19    was never what the officers sought. 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