读后续写：一次难忘的远足讲义-高三英语写作专项.docx

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Mr. Taylor checked again: water, food, bandage, medicines, a compass,and a map wrapped in plastic Bingo! He put all that he prepared for the coming hiking into his backpack.Mr. Taylor was fond of hiking, this time in particular, for it was the first time for him to hike with his two sons, Harry and Joel. Joel liked reading books about explorers and Harry joined the hiking club in his school this term. "It will be an unforgettable experience,definitely.”  he whispered to himself,unconsciously a smile spreading over his face.Harry and Joel, however, argued for the first three miles of their hiking trip.Harry accused Joel of wearing smelly old shoes. Joel blamed Harry for using all of the bug spray(喷雾防虫剂). Harry told Joel he smelled terrible，Joel called Harry a coward(懦夫).“ Will the two of you just quiet down and enjoy our hike together? "their father said. “You're missing all of the beautiful scenery! “ It was true. Neither Joel nor Harry had taken notice of the bear their father had spied at the start of their trip.They hadn't looked up at the eagle he pointed out overhead. Worst of all, they hadn't paid any attention to the turns and twists along the way while they continued their argument.“Joel threw a stick at me!" Harry screamed.“Thats not true! "Joel shouted back.Mr. Taylor could no longer contain his anger. "And both of you need to stop arguing!" he erupted. As he turned to face them, his left foot caught on a root. He slipped backward and down muddy bank, falling into the river that ran alongside the path. Harry and Joel raced to their father's assistance. They helped him up out of the water, and then dragged his wet backpack up onto land.Fortunately, their wet-through father found himself just slightly injured.注意1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好Paragraph 1:But his glasses came off when he fell in the water.Paragraph 2“Just calm down. “Mr. Taylor shouted, "Without my glasses, we need to work together to find our way.”文章大意：本文主要讲了一个热爱远足的父亲Mr. Taylor满怀期待地和两个儿子Joel和Harry一起徒步旅行的故事。旅途一开始两个孩子一直在争吵，错过了沿途的风景，也没注意沿途的路线。父亲正要教训他们的时候，不小心被草根绊倒摔进了河里。所幸他只受了轻伤，却因此丢了眼镜。不难预测，父子三人克服困难，重新上路，并开始享受这次旅途。情节走向 - paragraph 1Fortunately, their wet-through father found himself just slightly injured. But his glasses came off when he fell in the water.dried the clothesdealt with the injuryrealized no one guided the waypanicked blamed/argued again情节走向 - paragraph 2“Just calm down.“Mr. Taylor shouted, "Without my glasses, we need to work together to find our way.find way with the compass and maplearn to cooperateEnjoyed the hike语言积累：1.VERBS & STRUCTURES for inner thoughtrealized no one guided the wayThey were about to set out again when suddenly it occurred to them that they had no idea where to head.It was then that Joel realized that their father could no longer guide the way without his glasses. If only he hadn't missed all the turns and twists along the way while arguing with Harry.What if he hadn't argued with Harry?He wondered if it was possible not to argue with Harry. There was a voice inside him that the answer is a big NO. Why did Dad bring them both when they could never stop arguing?Suddenly a thought went through Joel's mind like electric shock.If Dad lost his glasses, how could they guide the way without any experience of hiking?Unpleasant thoughts crowded in on him. What if they lost their way? Would they encounter any snakes? And there might be wild beasts lying in wait for them!2.Possible sentences for “panicHe had a slight frown on his face00A wrinkle appeared on his forehead0Joel's brows rose into his fore head.He paced up and down.He felt his heart sinking horribly.His palms began to sweat.His heart was beating faster than a galloping horse.His heart was pounding/thudding/thumping3. verbs & sentences for “blame / argueHarry put his hands on his hips, his face turned red and he screamed at the top of his voice,“It's not fair!?He was tongue-tied with anger, his hands trembling.His face was red with rage.4.Enjoyed the hike Low clouds envelop the mountainsides, which are covered with thick grass. counted twelve shades of green from where I stood.(2019年全国卷I) lt was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees,and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven (编织的) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.(2019年6月浙江卷) Earlier that day, when they crossed the mountain, they managed to catch sight of some mountain goats and even a grizzly bear and an eagle.(M3U5)I can well remember that there was a time when a deep blue sky, the song of the birds, moonlight and flowers could never have kept me spellbound.(M1U1)参考答案：But his glasses came off when he fell in the water. Mr.Taylor sighed before he quickly took off his wet clothe sand squeezed the water out. While Harry was spreading the clothes on a huge stone, Joel walked their half-naked father to an opening. Seeing his father wrapping the wound with the bandage, Joel felt strange A thought went through his mind like an electric shock .How could they continue hiking if Dad was unable to see clearly?“ lf only Harry stopped arguing earlier with me!” he grumbled, his brows rising into his forehead.“heard you!” Harry yelled, glaring at him with burning eyes.“Just calm down.“Mr. Taylor shouted,"Without my glasses, we need to work together to find our way.'He mentioned the map and compass before the boys approached reluctantly and fumbled for them in his backpack. lt was not long before they located where they were and headed off. Joel soon found himself an expert at using a compass while Harry learnt to be an excellent map reader. Now and then, pretty birds singing merry songs and flowers blooming with smiles made the kids gasp. Later that day, they managed to catch sight of some mountain goats and even a grizzly bear and an eagle. lt was the highlight of the day and they talked about it for hours, grinning from ear to ear.学科网（北京）股份有限公司