读后续写：不想做家务的男孩 讲义-高三英语写作专项.docx

读后续写作为新高考英语的创新题型出现，主要考查学生对英语的综合运用能力和创新性思维能力。具体而言，读后续写要求考生在给定的时间内读懂原文，并能把握原文的关键信息和语言特点；在续写部分做到想象合理，衔接连贯，内容饱满；在语言应用上，强调语言使用的丰富性和准确性，要求考生灵活使用高级词汇和复杂句式。在行文逻辑方面，要求考试进行合理的想象，并恰当地使用一定的衔接手段，使行文连贯。俗话说：镜子不擦起灰尘，人不劳动变废人。身为父母，应该明白一屋不扫，何以扫天下的道理，要有意识地采用适当的方法让孩子养成做家务的习惯，这对培养孩子的独立解决事情的能力，责任感，和磨练孩子的意志是大有裨益的，最终达到促进孩子成长和懂得感恩的目的。读后续写材料：Arthur was messy. He didnt try to make messes, neither did he try to clean up much. His socks never made it into the hamper (洗衣篮). And he only picked up his toys when Mom threatened to throw them away. Most days, Mom followed Arthur around the house and cleaned up after him. She brushed the crumbs (碎屑) into her hand and threw them away after meals. She picked up his socks and made sure they got washed, dried and folded neatly before going back in the drawer.One day, Mom asked Arthur to pick up his toy trains. He was reading a comic book and he was still reading, saying nothing. The trains had been on the living room floor since the morning.“You know what, Arthur? Im not going to ask you again. Im done cleaning today.” And with that，Mom put her feet up on the sofa and picked up a book to read.At dinner time, Arthur noticed that there was a big pile of crumbs at his place at the table. After dinner, Arthurs feet felt cold. He went to his room and opened his drawer, but the drawer was empty. “Mom, where are my socks?” Arthur called.“There werent any socks in your hamper, so I didnt wash them,” Mom said. Arthur felt unhappy. Now his feet would be cold, unless he wanted to wear dirty socks from the floor. He decided to stay barefoot.When it was time for bed, Arthur said good night to Mom and turned to go upstairs. Arthur stepped right on his toy train in his bare feet. “Ouch!” cried Arthur. “That really hurt !”注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答案卡的相应位置作答。He tuned to mom for help However, Mom was still reading and said nothingHaving put away the toy train he caught sight of the dirty socks文本解析：主题语境：人与自我中的做人与做事文章大意：通过所给文章，我们不难看出主人公Arthur总是把房间弄到乱七八糟（Arthur was messy）而且又不爱收拾房间（neither did he try to clean up much. His socks never made it into the hamper）。只有当妈妈威胁要扔掉玩具时，他才捡起玩具。.（ And he only picked up his toys when Mom threatened to throw them away.）他妈妈刚开始对他这种行为是很宽容的，总是跟在他后面整理东西。（Most days, Mom followed Arthur around the house and cleaned up after him. She brushed the crumbs into her hand and threw them away after meals. She picked up his socks and made sure they got washed, dried and folded neatly before going back in the drawer）。直到有一天，他妈妈下定决心要惩罚Arthur，于是不再给他整理东西了。Arthur找不到自己的东西，没有袜子穿，脚还踩到自己乱丢的东西上弄疼了（Arthur stepped right on his toy train in his bare feet. “Ouch!” cried Arthur. “That really hurt !”）情节走向：续写第一段的首句：He tuned to mom for help However, Mom was still reading and said nothing。看到妈妈无动于衷，按照常理Arthur应该很生气，生气时会做什么呢？会说什么呢？结合续写第二段首句Having put away the toy train，那么本段最后应该要写他主动收拾玩具火车这个行为，在这个过程中，他会有什么感悟呢？续写第二段的首句：Having put away the toy train he caught sight of the dirty socks.看到脏袜子后，一个本能的反应是洗袜子。Arthur在这之前，从来没洗过袜子。坐在旁边的妈妈此时会怎么做呢？妈妈洗？还是妈妈教他洗？结合所给文章，妈妈是想给他一个教训，那么极有可能是妈妈教他洗袜子。妈妈看到Arthur的这种变化，会作何感想呢？参考答案：He tuned to mom for help However, Mom was still reading and said nothing Seeing his mothers response, he stood rooted to spot, his eyes blazing with anger and tears pouring down his cheeks. "Why are you so cold!" He shouted. But mom just closed the book staring at him, stating calmly, "All of your pain results from your bad habits.". On hearing this, he stormed out of the room, slamming the door furiously behind them. After what seemed like ages, he gradually calmed down. He then bent down to pick up the toy train with difficulties and put it in the box, aware that the work was anything but easy.Having put away the toy train he caught sight of the dirty socks. It suddenly occurred to him that it was also his duty to do the washing on his own Having collected the socks, he sank them in water, locking his eyes on them without knowing what to do. Just as he was racking his brains, his mom came over and told him how to wash them softly. Beaming with relif, Arthur sprang into his moms warm embrace Stroking Arthurs hair, Mom smiled with satisfaction for his kicking the bad habit and his big step to growing up.学科网（北京）股份有限公司