应用文写作讲评：关于“校园书画展”的新闻报道讲义-高三英语写作专项.docx

应用文写作讲评：关于“校园书画展”的新闻报道讲义新闻报道是日常生活中最为常见的一种文体，一般在举办活动之后，作为总结和记录会形成一篇报道。新闻需要有时效性，报道则要客观概括，内容客观，题材时新，语言简练是新闻报道的三大特征。新教材对新闻报道类文章也有大幅度的增加。应用文写作：假如你是李华，上周末你参观了学校举办的“长松长歌”书画展。请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括：1.展览意义；2.参观过程；3.收获感想。新闻报道类非常显著的特征就是要提炼标题，在首段利用导语对整个事件进行概括。该题要求学生对展览意义、参观过程以及收获感想进行描写，最终形成新闻报道。整篇文章分成三个段落，内容非常详实，结构清晰，语言严谨，客观真实地报道了整个活动的过程，并在最后添加了情感体会。首段的导语，学生用了较为常见的Last week witnessed the great success.无灵主语表达。对活动的时间、地点、事件、意义和结果做了简要概括。主体部分要求写参观过程。学生通过使用现在分词opening to the public，非限制性定语从句which added color to the feast，从句省略while wandering以增加句式的多样性。另外，学生对一些词汇的掌握和使用也可以看出这组的功底，如specialist, celebrity, collid into, step along the footprint of the long history, self-restraint, descendent等。第三段感受收获中，作者提到have a deep dive into, created a perfect platform, release our stress, remind us of写到这次活动的深刻意义和体会。范文An Ode to Yiyuan Art Exhibition Successfully HeldOn March 25, the opening ceremony of An Ode to Yiyua art exhibition was successfully held in Chunhui senior high school, marking the 145th birth anniversary Jing Hengyi, a great artist and the first principal in Chunhuis history.President Li presided over the ceremony and delivered a welcome message to the leaders and guests present for the event, while the artist representative Prof. Yang delivered their respective and gratitude messages on behalf of guests to the organizers and volunteers. During the exhibition, a great number of art lovers gathered in the school gym to appreciate the works created by Yiyuan and his friends. While the works displayed at the exhibition represent a variety of styles, artistic perspectives and paintings and oriental ink drawings, they all expressed the mind and spirit of those noble characters.The exhibition played an important role in building a platform for artistic exchanges between the past and present. It gave an opportunity to everyone who was related to Chunhui to commemorate the first principal as well as to strengthen the relationship for the schoolmates.学科网（北京）股份有限公司