高三英语二轮复习读后续写：逆境和勇气-游泳冠军的逆袭学案.docx

游泳冠军的成功逆袭（八校统考）Mike licked the last of the mint chocolate chip ice cream. It was almost time to leave. He jumped into the car with his parent sand headed off to the Olympic-sized pool for the big swim meet.When his race came up, Mike was confident. He was strong and swift. Mike climbed out the pool, smiling. He had just won first place, making him the fastest boy in his age group."Congratulations, son," his father said. His mom gave him a hug, even though he was soaking wet.A week later, it was time for another swim meet. Like before, Mike decided to enjoy his favorite ice cream flavor. Mike remembered that the last time he had won a race, he also ate mint chocolate chip ice cream first. Maybe he'd win again.Hes taken first place again in his race. Mike was feeling pretty good. As it turned out, Mike decided to have some mint chocolate chip Ice cream before every one of the next few swim meets. He began to think of it as his lucky charm. After several months of placing in the top positions of every race he swam, Mike was feeling unbeatable. And he wouldnt admit it, but all that ice cream was adding a few pounds to his athletic swimmer's build.It didnt take long after that for Mike to start coming in second place-and then third-and then last place in his races. The lucky mint chocolate chip ice cream had lost its magic.On the day of his next swim meet, his mother sat down at the table with him. “Mike, we all love ice cream, but it's not healthy for your body to eat so much of it. Maybe it's time to quit the sweet treats for a while, especially before you go swimming.Mike unwillingly agreed. He went to the swim meet, and didnt perform well. His father offered to go running with him a few days a week to help him feel better and strengthen his muscles. The extra weight soon disappeared, and Mike found himself breathing easier at swim practices.It was the last meet of the season, and Mike wasnt sure what to expect. He felt healthy again, but he didnt know if he still had any speed in the pool.Para 1 As he dove into the water, he kicked his legs and stretched his arms as far as he could.Para 2 His Jaw dropped as he realized he had beaten his own best time, and everyone elses too.  游泳冠军的成功逆袭（八校统考）好词好句：1. 朝.出发head off to        2. 游泳比赛swim meet3.诚如结果所显示as it turned out        4.护身符lucky charm       5. 感到无敌feel unbeatable                     6.不情愿地同意了reluctantly agreePara 1 大情节【比赛过程】（Mike 对手 父母 观众等）Plot 1【追赶但仍落后】In the beginning he was left behind though he swam tooth and nail.Plot 2 【胜利因素】He felt his energy nearly running out when his moms cheers rang from the audience. Scenes of the past monumental training and tolerance for getting rid of ice cream rose before his eyes./Memories of past monumental training and tolerance for getting rid of ice cream flashed across his mind.Plot 3【恢复精神 获得胜利】1)Restoring his strength and confidence and pushing himself forward,he caught up with his competitors one by one, leaving them behind.2)Working on his moderate-sized breath,continuing alternating rotating his arms and kicking his legs harder and quicker, he propelled himself forward like a dolphin at sea. Eventually he reached the lane marker/deck edge/his destination,leaving his competitors behind.He held onto the pool wall, rose to the surface and looked up the results on the screen.Para2 大情节【比赛结束】 （赛后人物 Mike 父母 队友 新闻记者）Plot 1【激动自豪 疲惫一扫而过】His efforts finally paid off. Looking at the new record he set, he felt refreshed without a trace of exhaustion/he felt a burst of tremendous excitement and palpable pride welling up in him/overwhelming him.Plot 2 【母亲高兴鼓励】His mom approached him, gently stroked his head and encouraged him: “ Congratulations! You deserve your champion!”Plot 3 【感谢母亲】Throwing himself into her arms with tears blurring his eyes, he exclaimed: “ Ive made it, mom. Thank you indeed.” Plot 4 【反思 影响/向记者分享经验】From then on, 1)he came to realize only through perseverance and self-discipline could he fulfill  his potential and work magic rather than through so-called lucky charm.2)he realized what really counted was not lucky charm but perseverance/that his perseverance was the contribution to his renewed success(the recipe for his success).3)The unforgettable training and swimming meet set him thinking: what really matters is conquering himself not conquering the competition.4) He shared his recipe for success in the competition-perseverance and tolerance in the interview from the local newspaper.  A year later, he was honored to be chosen youngest member of national team, carving out a place as a national champion in swimming.(游泳冠军的成功逆袭 八校统考 下水文）Para 1 As he dove into the water, he kicked his legs and stretched his arms as far as he could.In the beginning, he was left behind though he swam tooth and nail. He felt his energy nearly running out when his moms cheers rang from the audience. Scenes of the past training and tolerance for getting rid of ice cream rose before his eyes. Working on his moderate-sized breath,continuing alternating rotating his arms and kicking his legs harder and quicker, he propelled himself forward like a dolphin at sea. Eventually he reached deck edge,leaving his competitors behind. He held onto the pool wall, rose to the surface and looked up the results on the screen.(97)  Para2 His Jaw dropped as he realized he had beaten his own best time, and everyone elses too. His efforts finally paid off. Looking at the new record he set, he felt refreshed without a trace of exhaustion. His mom approached him, gently stroked his head and encouraged him: “Congratulations! You deserve your champion!” Throwing himself into her arms with tears blurring his eyes, he exclaimed: “Ive made it, mom. Thank you indeed.” From then on, he realized what really counted was not lucky charm but perseverance. A year later, he was honored to be chosen youngest member of national team,carving out a place as a national champion in swimming. (100)学科网（北京）股份有限公司