读后续写语篇练习大火中救老人-高考英语二轮复习.pptx

高考英语读后续写语篇练习1大火中救老人题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part 1题目呈现3续写原文The event that stands out in Toms memory happened one morning when Tom was only ten years old.He was at home with his elder sister Jane.Tom was doing his homework when he heard raised voices.At first he thought nothing of it since customers in the motorcycle shop directly below their flat often became loud,but he soon realized this time it was different.“Quick!Quick!Remove the motorcycles from the shop.”someone yelled.Then a thick burning smell filled the air.When Tom opened the front door of their flat to investigate,a thick cloud of smoke greeted him.The motorcycle shop had caught fire and people were running and crying.Jane,who had been playing the violin in her room,hurried to the living room.They rushed out of the door and along the corridor(走廊)through the smoke.They were heading towards the stairway at the far end of the corridor when Jane stopped in her track.She turned around and headed back the way they came.Tom had no idea what she was doing,but he followed her.4续写原文Jane had suddenly remembered the lady in her 70s who lived next door to them,who they called Makcik,Malay for auntie.Jane began banging on Makciks door,but got no answer.As the smoke thickened around them,Tom could see many of their neighborssome still in their pyjamas(睡衣；宽长裤)running for safety.The thought of fear crossed his mind.“She might have run for safety like everyone else!”Tom cried.However,Jane refused to give up.“I know Makciks still inside.”She said she was familiar with Makciks daily routine and was certain she would still be sleeping.She pounded the door.“Go downstairs.Go now!Go!”5段首句Paragraph 1:Tom noticed the flame was reaching up.Paragraph 2:Luckily,some neighbors passing by stopped and offered help.6Part 2题目分析7点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点8续写建议第一段：迈克找到了孩子们一对大约八九岁的兄弟姐妹。他先到了男孩身边，当他转向女孩时，他不得不把手伸进水里，抓住她的头发，把她拉回来。迈克侧身从激流中游到清澈的水中，开始把它们带进来。当我找到他们的母亲时，迈克在齐腰深的水中。这些孩子非常疲惫，无法走路，所以迈克背着他们。他每只胳膊下都有一个。我转身对他们妈妈说：“嘿，会没事的，他们很安全。”我看到恐惧开始从她身上消失。插9续写建议第二段：汤姆注意到火焰正在蔓延。他被恐惧冻僵了，站在原地。他明白情况的严重性，紧紧地握住了简的手。这时，两人都在咳嗽，眼睛刺痛。时间似乎静止了，尽管他们可能只在那里呆了两三分钟。汤姆恳求简尽快逃跑。简试图保护自己的鼻子免受呛人的烟雾，摇了摇头。她不停地敲门。汤姆突然哭了起来。10Part 3范文呈现11范文呈现Luckily,someneighbors passingbystoppedandofferedhelp.AsenseofstrengthimmediatelyreplacedthemountingfearandanxietyinJanesmind.ShetoldthemMs.Makcikmustbestillintheroom.Theyforcedthedooropenwithalltheirmight.Sureenough,Makcikwaslyinginbed,unconscious.Shewascarrieddownstairsandthenrushedtothehospital,whereshefinallycametoherself.PeopleintheneighborhoodfeltrelievedandJaneandTomsjoywasimmense.12范文呈现ThenthemotherglancedbackandgotherfirstgoodlookatMike,aswellashistattoos.Andacrazythinghappened.Isawanewkindofpanicwashoverherasthoughtheressomenew,equallydangerousthreatonherkidslivesbecauseofthetattoosonMikesarms.SherusheduptoMikeandsnatchedherkidsandturnedupthebeach.Notevenathank-you.Mikejustglancedatme,shrugged,and jogged back to his tower.As I jogged back to my tower,Ipromised myself Id never let my own fear or prejudice prevent me fromrecognizingaheroonlybecauseIdontseefriendlyappearanceinhim.13Part 4努力方向14高级结构名词性从句高级结构三连动虚拟语气形容词做状语无灵主语15定语从句状语从句（包含倒装句）强调句副词做状语非谓语（包括独立主格）16低头是题海，抬头是前途。终将上岸，阳光万里!祝大家前程似锦!