高三英语二轮复习读后续写送给父母的结婚周年蛋糕讲义.docx

Times were hard in the United States during the 1930s. My family could hardly make a living on our farm. Even so, I was determined to help my parents celebrate their anniversary in a special way.Three days before their anniversary, Mother took out her old dresses. They were wrinkled. Sighing, Mother said, “Mens clothes dont change that much, but my dresses are just not in style.” I didnt want Mother to give up the anniversary celebration. Daddy would be disappointed. Also, I knew now what I was going to do for them and they would have to be away for me to do it. I persuaded Mother to changeher dress, and by Friday night, she had finished the dress and pressed it.On Saturday, Daddy went to borrow Mr. Smiths pickup truck, and Mother went to get dressed. By that time I could hardly wait for them to leave so I could start making the cake! Keeping my plan secret had been hard, but Id decided not to tell my younger brothers, Bill and David, until Mother and Daddy were gone. I was afraid they would get excited and let it slip out.Bill, David and I went out to wave good-bye until the truck was far down the road. We started back to the house. “I have a wonderful surprise,” I told them. “While Mother and Daddy are out, we are going to make a cake for them. An anniversary cake.”Bill looked at me skeptically.“A fancy three-layer cake and were going to decorate it.”“Weve never made a cake before,” Bill said. “Were probably going to make a mess and Mother will be upset.”I told them I was the oldest and I was in charge. I got the milk and four eggs and the sugar. The hardest part would be breaking the eggs on the edge of the bowl. I sifted( 筛 ) the flour and baking powder together first. And salt. I particularly remembered that because it seemed strange to put salt in a cake. I put all ingredients together and mixed them. It looked creamy and delicious.P1：I poured it into the baking pan and put it into the oven.  P2：We took their hands and led them to the kitchen.续写思路1. 确立主旨：本文以第一人称展开叙述，主要围绕主人公“我”想给父母庆祝结婚周年庆，所以打算亲自做蛋糕作为惊喜的故事。主旨肯定是表达亲情,同学们在写的时候不妨把故事写的趣味性一些，太平淡没有波折的文章是不够吸引人的！2. 续写难度：总体这篇文章情节还是较容易编排，第一段写制作出蛋糕过程中发生了什么事情；第二段写父母回来后看到蛋糕如何的反应，注意对动作及情感描写进行丰富运用。连句成篇P1：I poured it into the baking pan and put it into the oven.1. No sooner had I finished it than I started to clean up all the mess I had created just now. 2. “Hurry up ! We have to make the kitchen back to what it used to be .” I urged my two younger brothers,Bill and David, to join me in tidying up. 3. With everything settled in the joint efforts , I approached the oven, eager to know if the cake would be ready. 4. “ God,” Bill exclaimed all of a sudden, “I can smell something burning from the oven side, can you ?”5.It dawned on me that It was the cake that turned tan!6. Dashing to the oven, I turned it off as soon as possible and took the cake out cautiously with protective gloves. 7. Whats worse , Mother and Daddy came at the very time, in order to keep the plan ,we three kids immediately rushed to the front door, where my parents just arrived. P2：We took their hands and led them to the kitchen.1. “Dont open your eyes until I say yes ,” I warned with bright smiles . “ Okay, here we are.” 2. With our hands off their eyes, Mother first caught sight of the cake on the table and couldnt help asking, “Did you prepare for us?” 3. Nodding my head, I laughed embarrassedly, “ But it didnt look as nice as what you had made for us before.”4. Mother came forward and patted my shoulder gently, “ Burned though it was , it still a wonderful surprise for me and your Daddy.”5. After hearing what Mother said, I together with my brothers let out a sound, “ Mother and Daddy, wish you a happy anniversary;we love you !”6. Afterwards, we ,of course, didnt forget to enjoy the special cake together.7. Every time I reflect on the day, something warm arises from the bottom of my heartits  love that counts!成品赏析      I poured it into the baking pan and put it into the oven（烤箱). No sooner had I finished it than I started to clean up all the mess I had created just now. “Hurry up ! We have to make the kitchen back to what it used to be .” I urged my two younger brothers,Bill and David, to join me in tidying up. With everything settled in the joint efforts , I approached the oven, eager to know if the cake would be ready. “ God,” Bill exclaimed all of a sudden, “I can smell something burning from the oven side, can you ?” It dawned on me that It was the cake that turned tan! Dashing to the oven, I turned it off as soon as possible and took the cake out cautiously with protective gloves. Whats worse , Mother and Daddy came at the very time, in order to keep the plan ,we three kids immediately rushed to the front door, where my parents just arrived.         We took their hands and led them to the kitchen. “Dont open your eyes until I say yes ,” I warned with bright smiles . “ Okay, here we are.” With our hands off their eyes, Mother first caught sight of the cake on the table and couldnt help asking, “Did you prepare for us?” Nodding my head, I laughed embarrassedly, “ But it didnt look as nice as what you had made for us before.” Mother came forward and patted my shoulder gently, “ Burned though it was , it still a wonderful surprise for me and your Daddy.” After hearing what Mother said, I together with my brothers let out a sound, “ Mother and Daddy, wish you a happy anniversary;we love you !” Afterwards, we ,of course, didnt forget to enjoy the special cake together. Every time I reflect on the day, something warm arises from the bottom of my heartits  love that counts!学科网（北京）股份有限公司