读后续写：Old Jim's Magic 讲义-高考英语二轮复习.docx

(2021浙江开学考) Old Jim was without doubt the best hair stylist I'd ever known. He designed every haircut so artistically that it would be an understatement (低估）to say the magics created by him were “beautiful”. But there was one strange thing about his shop: there was no mirror in it, so customers were kept in suspense (悬念）until they reached home. I entered Old Jim's hairdresser's, sad and disappointed, having just been rejected a role in the school play. I was ordinary-looking and boring, and that's why they didn't want me I was convinced. “I want to be beautiful,” I said to Old Jim, tears almost dropping. After having a haircut, I thanked him again and walked out through the door, his words remaining in my head: “There's magic in your new hair. Now start your journey to beauty.” Sunlight dropped down through the overlapping leaves above my head as I walked on the street. I shook my head but didn't feel a difference. I could only slightly feel that something was different, like a little voice that had long been suppressed (抑制）that desired to be heard. Suddenly, I heard someone calling out to me. “Susan! Susan” I turned around. It was Jennifer, the most popular girl in the whole school. “It really is you, Susan. You look great today!” 'Thanks.” Jennifer was everything I wanted to be. What a sweet victory to get such admiration from a girl like her! We had a conversation on school and parted at a crossing, where she turned left and I right. As I walked, I could see a boy walking toward me. We went to the same school but hadn't talked to each other much. If it weren't for the new hair, I would have looked down and pretended not to see him. I had always been shy.  Paragraph 1:But at that point, I intended to test out Old Jims magic. Paragraph 2: At the sight of home, I started to go faster, desperate to see my new hair in the mirror in my room._原文大意：讲述了作者被学校的戏剧拒绝了一个角色，又伤心又失望，于是在发型师吉姆那里理了发，但是发型师的店里没有镜子。作者走出理发店后，感到自信并且勇敢地和自己喜欢的男孩打了招呼。作所最后回到家发到头上除了多了一个蝴蝶结，并没有什么不同。段落读写：个由第一般首句内容“但那时，我想试试老吉姆的魔法。”可知，第一段可描写作者因为新发型的关系勇敢和男孩打了招呼，他们进行了交谈。由第二段首句内容“一看到家。就开始加快速度，急切地想在房间镜子里看到新的发型。”可知，第二段可描写作者看到自己新发型后的反应。语言积累：1. I waved at the boy with butterflies in my stomach.2. Hearing my greeting, he waved back, a slightly surprised smile crossing his lips3. I do look better with this new hair。4.  As I walked on briskly, my ears were filled with mellifluous songs from birds and rhythmic sounds of leaves dancing in the summer breeze.5. Now see what Old Jims magic had done! 6. I rushed upstairs, my heart pumping furiously .【参考范文】But at that point I intended to test out Old Jim's magic.I waved at the boy with butterflies in my stomach. Hearing my greeting, he waved back, a slightly surprised smile crossing his lips. We continued our conversation on our separate ways. It all happened so naturally without any of the awkwardness that usually accompanies meeting new people. l had never expected it to be so easy to surmount my shyness. I do look better with this new hair. l thought, a smile growing on my face. As ! walked on briskly,my ears were filed with mellifluous songs from birds and rhythmic sounds of leaves dancing in the summer breeze.At the sight of home.I started to go faster desperate to see my new hair in the mirror in my room. Now see what Old Jim's magic had done! After a twenty-minute walk home, I was fresh, alive, and radiant with joy. I rushed upstairs, my heart pumping furiously. I couldn't wait to see my beautiful new hair.And here I stood in front of the mirror taken by surprise. My hair was bobbed the bangs disheveled from running. In short,not much had been lone, except for a tiny velvet bow over my left car.相似练习：A Vacation with My MotherI had an interesting childhood. It was filled with surprises and amusements,all because of my mother -loving, sweet, yet absent-minded and forgetful. One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota,and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way. As the first day of our trip approached,David,my eight-year-old brother, and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends. Who knew if we'd ever see them again? Finally, the moment of our departure arrived,and we loaded suitcases,books, games, camping equipment,and a tent into the car and bravely drove off. We bravely drove off again two hours later after we'd returned home to get the purse and traveler's checks Mom had forgotten.David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was driving while Dad slept:" You stand outside the door and play lookout(放哨)while I go,and I'll stand outside the door and play lookout while you go. " I had terrible pictures in my mind:"Honey, where are the kids?""What?! Oh,Gosh. I thought they were being awfully quiet." We were never actually left behind in a strange city, but we weren't about to take any chances.On the fourth or fifth night,we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Why didn't we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there? David and I became nervous. To our great relief, Dad turned down the idea. Mom never could understand our objections(反对)If a strange family showed up on her front doorstep,Mom would have been delighted. She thinks everyone in the world is as nice as she is. We finally found a vacancy in the next town Paragraph1:The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us.Paragraph 2:We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.【参考范文】Paragraph1:The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. We decided to camp along the river. The views there were surprisingly beautiful-the warm sunshine, the fresh air, the clean water. We sat on the grass, enjoying the splendid nature【高分句型一，现在分词enjoying作状语】 However，when Dad was about to put up our tent, he was disappointed to find that it had been left in the hotel.Well, Dad had to go back to fetch it to continue our camping.【要点一，我们在帐篷露营的情景】Paragraph 2:We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. Every time we got to a new place, Mom would cheer up like a child【高分句型二，every time作连词引导时间状语】.She would get off the car excitedly,laughing and dancing around.Together we enjoyed the modern sights in the big cities, the historical buildings in the small towns and the amazing scenery in nature.When we came back to the hotel after the tiring but excellent visit,Mom would hug us and kiss us on our faces.How sweet she was! Absent-minded and forgetful as she was, she never forgot to express her love to us【高分句型三，as尽管，句子用部分倒装，引导让步性状语从句】。【要点二，我们旅途欣赏美丽风景，心情愉快】 ·解析【高分句型一】We sat on the grass, enjoying the splendid nature.我们坐在草地上，欣赏大自然的壮丽。现在分词enjoying作状语【高分句型二】Every time we got to a new place,Mom would cheer up like a child.每次我们到了一个新地方，妈妈都会像孩子一样高兴起来.every time作连词引导时间状语【高分句型三】Absent-minded and forgetful as she was, she never forgot to express her love to us.尽管她心不在焉，健忘，但她从未忘记向我们表达她的爱as尽管，句子用部分倒装引导让步性状语从句.学科网（北京）股份有限公司