读后续写：Be myself 讲义-高三英语写作专项.docx

试题呈现：阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Be yourself and always follow your heart. Never let anyone change who you are. This is the lesson I have learned from my childhood experience when I figured out I wasnt invited to the party, Bridget's party.One morning, I got off the bus and saw my friends except me hugging under the tree where we used to stand. The circle seemed tighter as I approached; the white invitation cards being hastily stuffed into backpacks gave it away. I knew as well as the entire universe that Bridgets party was this weekend. Bridget was the most popular girl in our class. She was thin and beautiful, always wearing fabulous clothes and fine makeup.Why hadnt she invited me? My feet were too big? No, Maybe. My face was broken out? Why did she invite every person in my group except me? I tried to think of any interactions Id had with Bridget recently. A few days earlier, wed been partners during a sixth period project. I was determined to get the project done and she was absorbed in looking at fashion magazines. She barely spoke to me except to say, “Youre so serious. You know, you should smile more.”Soon, I had overheard all the details about the party. They were going swimming. It was a sleepover(在外过夜，聚会). They were renting scary movies and were going to stay up all night. Each time someone mentioned the party, I smiled weakly and nodded, with my stomach in knots.When having my favorite English class, I found myself just unable to concentrate on the short stories we were supposed to be reading in class. Maybe she didnt invite me because of my coat. It is pretty ugly compared to some of the other girls coats. I should have bought another color. Maybe I should smile more but I just can't get into smiling at people unless I know them really well. But I just couldn't pretend to be the person I wasnt. I felt sick. 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。At lunch, my friend Kate who had been invited came over to me, trying to show off.                                                                     I was about to let it go when Bridget invited me as a substitute for a girl who couldn't come.                                                              文章大意： 该文讲述了作者未像其他人一样，收到朋友Bridget聚会的邀请，内心经历了一番痛苦和纠结。续写段落分析：续写第一段：At lunch, my friend Kate who had been invited came over to me, trying to show off. 本段写什么？本句的关键词是“受邀的Kate 过来炫耀”，那么续写的点包括：炫耀什么？（invitation cards，clothes or presents for Bridget）我的反应（尴尬的笑，一丝的失落和嫉妒）Kate的神情描写（兴奋，亦或是优越感）。根据续写第二段开头“I was about to let it go ”，说明Kate大概率已经离开，所以末句可以写Kate的离开。续写第二段：I was about to let it go when Bridget invited me as a substitute for a girl who couldnt come. 当我正要不理会的时候，突然Bridget过来邀请我代替一个不能参加聚会的女孩。本段写什么？首先是作者脑海中的反应：接受还是拒绝？忽然想到曾经一起做过的课题，明白了Bridget和自己不是同频的人，追求不同，最后礼貌地拒绝 Bridget 惊讶的反应和生气、郁闷地离开结尾的升华（呼应文章第一段）。 语言积累；未收到邀请嫉妒又失落I had to admit the dress was quite beautiful and elegant, but clear pride on her face made me both sick and jealous. Honestly, I felt a huge sense of loss at that time. 努力掩饰尴尬Yet I managed to force a weak smile and pretended to appreciate it. At the same time, I said falsely,“Nice.” After what seemed to be ages, Kate finally left with a sense of satisfaction, and I breathed a sigh of relief.朋友的虚伪Bridget stood there, wearing a fake smile and waiting for my "yes" . 坚定的拒绝：Suddenly the project we shared occurred to me. I had my answer , so I rejected politely but firmly , "Sorry, I have another appointment ." 参考范文：At lunch, my friend Kate who had been invited came over to me, trying to show off. Spreading the invitation letter just in front of my eyes, she said with pride that she was greatly honored to be receive the invitation from the most popular girls party, which she believed that would surely be an wonderful party. This undoubtedly set me in a rather awkward situation. However, I hold back my tears, saying nothing but wish her an fun time at the party. Deep down, an innner voice told me that if it was due to our distinctive attitudes to the shared project, it isnt a big deal to me at all and her party was not worthy of my attention neither.I was about to let it go when Bridget invited me as a substitute for a girl who couldn't come. She passed the card to me, anticipating me to accept it in excitement. For a while, I had an strong sense of seeing it as I was eager for. But almost automatically, an inner idea came into my mind again and again, reminding me to say no, “You are special and unique. So dont be pessimistic.”Looking straight into her eyes, I declared firmly and confidently, “Thanks for your invitation, but I have something more rewarding to do with at present. Nevertheless, wish you a fun time.” I was aware of that friends should in no case be treated differently, but be angels who lend a hand when our wings were broken.学科网（北京）股份有限公司