读后续写情感描写语料积累讲义-高三英语写作专项.docx

读后续写情感描写语料积累（直接描写+间接描写）  在读后续写中，情绪描写在展现人物性格，故事发展，价值观方面有重要作用。大部分的读后续写故事，人物是从“负向negative”情绪，最终转化到“正向positive”情绪的。通常可以使用两种方法描写情绪：一、直接描写，即句中直接出现表示情绪的单词或短语。如: To his dismay, he failed to pass the test for the second time.二、间接描写，即通过表情和肢体动作来体现人物的某种情绪。如：He slammed the door behind him before Mon could say a word.直接描写· 语料积累句型1:一阵.情感+来袭(来到某人身上) A flush/flood/wave/ripple/surge/burst of + 情感名词 +sweep over/flood over/rush through+ sb.例句：The audience applauding wildly, she felt a surge of pride rushing through her.观众们疯狂地鼓掌，她感到一股自豪感涌上心头。 Sb exploded into/with+情绪名词；sb glowed with+情绪名词例句： Hearing her named announced as the winner, she exploded into wild joy.听到她被宣布为获胜者，她欣喜若狂。 情绪名词+creep on/upon sb 某种情绪爬上心头例句：A wave of panic crept on Marry and she was rooted to the spot.一阵恐慌向玛丽袭来，她被吓得站在原地不动。 情绪名词+seize/ possess/ take hold of sb 被某种情绪支配例句： Pandora was seized by curiosity and opened the box.潘多拉被好奇心抓住，打开了盒子。句型2:某人深感./被某种感情强烈影响Sb + be overwhelmed/overcome with/by + 情绪名词例句：Overcome with bitter disappointment at his failing to win a prize, he locked himself up in his room. 他对未能获奖感到极度失望，于是把自己锁在房间里。 Sb be overflowing with +情绪名词例句： She was overflowing with love the moment she gathered her little daughter into her arms.当她把小女儿拥入怀中的那一刻，她的心中充满了爱。句型3: 某人是如此.以至于他/她感觉好像 Sb be so+情绪形容词 that sb felt as if/ as though.例句：she was so furious that she felt as though her lungs were to explode.她气得肺都要炸了。间接描写· 语料积累句型1:细化具体表情肢体动作 （以下为一般过去时）表达开心: his face lit up; her lips curved; her eyes twinkled/ sparkled/glowed/shined ；she grinned from ear to ear；jump up and down;表达伤心: tears streamed down her cheeks;  she sobbed, burying her face in her hands;  he stood motionless, staring into space;表达生气: her face turned red; he bit his lip and clenched his fists; I stormed out of the room, slamming the door behind me furiously; glared at sb with furious eyes; 表达内疚/尴尬: her face flushed/ burned; lowered one's head; with one's head drooping/ducking down guiltily; 表达紧张: pace back and forth; palms/hands were sweating; she was biting her nails and tapping her foor impatiently; her voice was shaking/trembling; 句型2: 丰富的比喻句或俚语比喻句：She shook all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles.I feel like all my insides have been drained out and I feel empty and let down.The smile on her face shone like a diamond.I feel like I am floating in an ocean of sadness.Frustrated and panic-stricken, I was stuck in the thick forest justlike a wandering sheep.俚语：Whenhis mother kissed him on the cheek, it seemed as if the baby were on top of the world.  When she discovered she'd got the job she was over the moon.With butterflies in his stomach, he was unable to utter a word.He bounced into the office, full of the joys of spring.句型3:用环境衬托法表达情绪 (有声有色有味）（表达正向情绪）The glistening sunshine was pouring down and all the mountains seemed to glow.Bathed in the golden sunlight and breathing the fresh air, she felt like a free bird.With gentle breeze kissing her cheeks, she walked in the forest like a jolly elf.The sunset cast a glow over village, the birds were tweeting merrily in the trees, and the grass were swaying happily in the wind as if sharing my joy.（表达悲伤、难过）There was a deadly stillness in the house. A heavy silence blanketed the room. The sky is overcast, darkened with gloomy clouds, and the whole world seemed as if it were enveloped in a huge gray quilt.The never-ending darkness consumed everything.Greeted by the smell of freshly-baked bread floating out of someone's house, he was in tears, dragging himself forward, not knowing where he was heading.学科网（北京）股份有限公司