托福综合写作模板-反驳类.pptx

Common Mistakes in Integrated Writingdevilkin模板使用问题正确：第2,3,4段首句是对全段的囊括错误：列举lecture中的一个细节To begin with,the professor says that the temperature at that time is much higher than today.According to the reading passage,the cold winter made it hard for plants to live so that dinosaurs would have to migrate to find food.The professor argues that its a good grown condition at that time because the sun shines 24 hours make it warmer and there are lots of vegetable in the winter for dinosaurs to eat.There is no need for them to migrate.正确：第2,3,4段中先写passage中的观点，然后再写lecture不同意以及为什么不同意。错误：第2,3,4段先写lecture的观点和细节，然后写passage中的观点。Also,the professor says that the found of the skeletons doesnt mean it migrated.They might stay in groups to achieve extra protection from predators.The professor gives an example of a kind of animals to live in a herd to protect themselves.The reading opinion is that edmontosaurs live in herds so the migrate to the south.反驳中的方法IBT integrated writing 中一般涉及两种反驳方法，ie.Professor 反驳passage时一般两种方法：1.驳论据本身 2.驳论据到论点的推理特别需要注意的是在写第二类反驳方法的时候，切忌写成第一类T-rex:PassagelectureFast runnernot a fast runner?立1.teeth marks on theeat everything when skeleton of small hungryeat dead dinosaursanimals2.Bone structure like tigersthin bone wall3.Relative K run fasthead much biggerthan KsEdmontosaur:PassagelectureMigratenot migrate1.diet:no food in winter nutritious dead plants from summer when 24 hour sunshine2.Live in herdherd cannot prove migration3.Can run long distancejuveniles cannotLastly,the professor rebuts the readings point that T-rex is close to another kind of dinansaur and that type run fast,by starting that that kind of dinosaur has small head that professor points out that T-rex has big head.Finally,the prof disproves the readings idea that the fact that T-rex and K and cousin and K ran fast can show that T-rex could also run fast.The prof points out that K has a relatively smaller head,while T-rexs head is much too big to support when running.In the lecture,the speaker casts doubt on the reading passages idea that the edmontosaurs migrate to survive when winter comes.The speaker thinks that the reading passages idea is incorrect.To begin with,the speaker asserts that edmontosaurs diet cannot support the migration hypothesis.According to the reading passage,edmontosaurs eat plants.However,plants cannot grow during the cold winter,thus they have to migrate to find food.On the contrary,the speaker states that the temperature of arctic area is much warmer than todays and the 24-hour sunlight provide a really good conditon for plants growing.Also,in the winter,there is lots of nutrients in the dead plants,so edmontosaurs dont have to move to another area.Second,the speaker rebuts that living in herd doesnt mean that edmontosaurs migrate.In the lecture,the execavaion shows that edmontosaur lives in herd and it helps them migrate.The speaker says that animals might live in herd for other purpose.It can protect them from predators.There is another kind of animals which live in herd but do not migrate.Third,the speaker claims that not all the edmontosaurs have the phsical capability to run fast in long distances.According to the lecture,edmontosaurs can run fast,thus they can easily migrate to the warmer area.The speaker says that juvenile edmontosaurs cannot run as fast as the adult edmontosaurs.They will slow the speed of whole herd but edmontosaur will not let the juveniles leave behind because they cannot survive on their own.Therefore,they will not migrate.