必修五UnitUnitedKingdom基础写作公开课.pptx

Brief rewriting about the UK.If you study British history you may find the country went If you study British history you may find the country went through several different _.The first name England through several different _.The first name England _(refer)to England and Wales,but when the two _(refer)to England and Wales,but when the two countries joined Scotland in 1603,the name Great Britain was countries joined Scotland in 1603,the name Great Britain was given to represent the country.With the _(join)of given to represent the country.With the _(join)of Northern Ireland,the country got the name the United Kingdom,Northern Ireland,the country got the name the United Kingdom,_ was shown to the world in a new flag _(call)_ was shown to the world in a new flag _(call)the Union Jack.the Union Jack.Of the four countries,England is the _(large)and Of the four countries,England is the _(large)and is_(divide)into three zones:the South,the North and the is_(divide)into three zones:the South,the North and the Midlands.Its capital London is the greatest _(history)Midlands.Its capital London is the greatest _(history)treasure of all _ its museums,art collections,theatres,parks treasure of all _ its museums,art collections,theatres,parks and buildings.and buildings.namesnamesreferredreferredjoiningjoiningwhichwhichcalledcalledlargestlargestdivideddividedhistoricalhistoricalwithwith第1页/共15页Useful expressions1.have/with a population of 1.have/with a population of （人口）（人口）2.have/cover/with an area of 2.have/cover/with an area of （面积）（面积）+序数词+largest country in the world （地域）4.be made up of /consist of （组成）5.be located in /lie in/lie to the south of/with on/to its west （位置）6.the temperature/it has a climate（气候和温度）vary fromto=be different fromto 7.developing/developed country（性质）第2页/共15页1.1.中国的面积为中国的面积为9,600,0009,600,000平方公里，人口约为平方公里，人口约为1,400,000,000 1,400,000,000。2.2.中国是世界上第三大国。中国是世界上第三大国。3.3.中国由中国由5656个民族组成个民族组成(nationalitynationality)。4.4.中国位于亚洲东部，东临太平洋。中国位于亚洲东部，东临太平洋。5.5.中国的气候各地不同。中国的气候各地不同。6.6.虽是个发展中国家，但在过去的几十年中国发生了巨大变化虽是个发展中国家，但在过去的几十年中国发生了巨大变化。China is the third largest country in the world.China is the third largest country in the world.China is located in the east of Asia,with the China is located in the east of Asia,with the Pacific Ocean on its east.Pacific Ocean on its east.China has an area of 9.6 million square kilometers and a China has an area of 9.6 million square kilometers and a population of about 1.4 billion.population of about 1.4 billion.The Chinese nation consists of 56 nationalitiesThe Chinese nation consists of 56 nationalities.The climate in China varies from area to area.The climate in China varies from area to area.Though a developing country,China has changed a lot in the Though a developing country,China has changed a lot in the past several decades.past several decades.第3页/共15页基础写作要求：1.根据下面内容用英语写一篇介绍英国的短文。2.用五个句子表达全部内容。Task 2 Using language 英国是由英格兰、苏格兰、威尔士和北爱尔兰组成的联合王国。它是一个岛国，位于大西洋北部。英国国土面积为243,600平方公里，人口约6,200,000，其中90%是城市人口，只有10%是农村人口。该国的气候属于海洋性气候：冬季不过于寒冷，夏季不过于炎热。国内有许多著名的河流，其中泰晤士河是英国第二大河，也是英国最重要的河流。英国是世界发达并且具有多元文化的国家，也是世界上第一个工业化国家。海洋性气候：maritime climate 大西洋：Atlantic Ocean 平方公里：square kilometers 泰晤士河：the Thames 岛屿；岛的：island 多元文化的：multicultural第4页/共15页基础写作解题步骤：1、审，即：审定体裁、题材、人称、时态、结构等；2、编，即：编写要点，按顺序列出；3、写，即：连词成句，连句成文；4、查，即：查内容，查格式，查语法，查书写等。第5页/共15页1、审定体裁、题材：2、审定人称：3、审定时态：4、审定要点：5、审定结构：国家简介第三人称一般现在时人口，位置，特点等整合成5个句子审题提示第6页/共15页Task 2 Using language基础写作要求：1.根据下面内容用英语写一篇介绍英国的短文。2.用五个句子表达全部内容。英国由英格兰、苏格兰、威尔士和北爱尔兰组成的联合王国。它是一个岛国，位于大西洋北部。英国国土面积为243,600平方公里，人口约6,200,000，其中90%是城市人口，只有10%是农村人口。该国的气候属于海洋性气候：冬季不过于寒冷，夏季不过于炎热。国内有许多著名的河流，其中泰晤士河是英国第二大河，也是英国最重要的河流。英国是世界发达并且具有多元文化的国家，也是世界上第一个工业化国家。海洋性气候：maritime climate 大西洋：Atlantic Ocean 平方公里：square kilometers 泰晤士河：the Thames 岛屿；岛的：island 多元文化的：multicultural第7页/共15页信 息 整 合内容安排1.组成；位置2.面积；人口3.气候4.河流5.国家性质 表达方式consist of/be made up of/be located in/with on its northcover an area of/have a population of/with 结构a maritime climatethere be/考虑among which 引导定语从句表达“其中”1.developed/multicultural/industrial country第8页/共15页你也可以把所有要点翻译出来，再用各种你也可以把所有要点翻译出来，再用各种连词、短语和句型组合成五句话基础写作。连词、短语和句型组合成五句话基础写作。The UK consists of England,Wales,Scotland and Northern Ireland.The UK is an island country,which lies in the north of Atlantic Ocean.The UK has an area of 243,600 square kilometres and a population of 6.2 million.90%of the British live in the city,but only 10%are from the countryside.It has a maritime climate-winters are not too cold and summers are not too hotThere are many famous rivers in the UK.Thames is the second longest one.Thames is the most important river in the country.The UK is a developed and multicultural country.It is also the first industrial country in the world.第9页/共15页UK is the worlds developed and multicultural country,is also UK is the worlds developed and multicultural country,is also the worlds first industrialized countriesthe worlds first industrialized countries.It consist of England,It consist of England,Scotland,Wales and Northern IrelandScotland,Wales and Northern Ireland.UK is a island country,UK is a island country,which is located in the north of Atlantic Oceanwhich is located in the north of Atlantic Ocean.It has an area of It has an area of 243600 square kilometers and with a population of 6200000243600 square kilometers and with a population of 6200000.The 90%of the city population,only 10%of the conturysideThe 90%of the city population,only 10%of the conturyside.The temperature of UK is maritime climateThe temperature of UK is maritime climate.So the cold in So the cold in winter,summer is not too hotwinter,summer is not too hot.There are many famous rivers in There are many famous rivers in homehome.River Thames is not only the second longest river in UK,River Thames is not only the second longest river in UK,but also is the most important river in UKbut also is the most important river in UK.学生习作a aandandfirst industrialized one in the world.first industrialized one in the world.consistsconsistsanan,90%of whom live in the cities and,90%of whom live in the cities andclimateclimate,as a result,winter is not too cold and,as a result,winter is not too cold andThere are many famous rivers in UK,with River Thames There are many famous rivers in UK,with River Thames being the second longest and the most important one in the being the second longest and the most important one in the country.country.only 10%from the countryside.only 10%from the countryside.第10页/共15页Sample writing The United Kingdom consists of England,Scotland,Wales and Northern Ireland and it is an island country,which is located in the North Atlantic Ocean.Britain covers an area of 243,600 square kilometers and its population is about 6.2 million,with ninety percent living in the cities while only ten percent in the countrysideIt has a maritime climate-winters are not too cold and summers are not too hotAs is known to all,there are many famous rivers in Britain,among which the Thames is the second largest and the most important river in the country.In addition,Britain is a developed and multicultural country as well as the first industrial one in the world.第11页/共15页 Correct any mistakes in your partners composition if there are any.第12页/共15页Homework1.Recite the sample writing.1.Recite the sample writing.2.Write a brief introduction to China 2.Write a brief introduction to China according to the translations we have done.according to the translations we have done.第13页/共15页第14页/共15页感谢您的观看！第15页/共15页