英语建议信模.pptx
会计学1英语建议信模英语建议信模Dear Friends,From the forum,Ive learned that many students have some problems in English learning._第1页/共29页写作指导写作指导1.该书面表达任务要求给在英语学习该书面表达任务要求给在英语学习方面遇到困难的同学回帖，实际上就方面遇到困难的同学回帖，实际上就是写一封建议信，介绍自己学习英语是写一封建议信，介绍自己学习英语的经验。的经验。第2页/共29页写作指导写作指导2.该任务是半开放式的书面表达，因此作者要开阔思路，发挥想象。作者可以通过列提纲的方式归纳写作要点，比如：该任务是半开放式的书面表达，因此作者要开阔思路，发挥想象。作者可以通过列提纲的方式归纳写作要点，比如：1）培养学习兴趣；）培养学习兴趣；2）找到适合的学习方法；）找到适合的学习方法；3）勤学好问，多实践。）勤学好问，多实践。第3页/共29页3.作者要注意对信息进行整合，并运用丰富的词语和恰当的句式，避免句式单一，以提高文章的得分点。作者要注意对信息进行整合，并运用丰富的词语和恰当的句式，避免句式单一，以提高文章的得分点。第4页/共29页Dear Friends,From the forum,Ive learned that many students have some problems in English learning.第5页/共29页Here is some advice that may be helpful to you.First,developing an interest in English is important,and seeing simple English movies or listening to English songs are good ways to make you love English.第6页/共29页Second,you must find a proper method that really suits you.In addition,as we all know,practice makes perfect.So,as long as you work hard,listen more,speak more and read more,youll make great progress.I hope these suggestions will help you.yours,Bookworm第7页/共29页点评：点评：1.该句该句Here is some advice that may be helpful to you的使用使文章过渡自然，并且切入主题。的使用使文章过渡自然，并且切入主题。2.过渡词语过渡词语first;second;in addition的准确使用，使文章层次清晰，结构严谨。的准确使用，使文章层次清晰，结构严谨。第8页/共29页点评：点评：3.Practice makes perfect熟能生巧，熟能生巧，这一谚语的引用恰到好处，是文章的这一谚语的引用恰到好处，是文章的一大亮点，也显示了作者丰富的知识一大亮点，也显示了作者丰富的知识储备。储备。第9页/共29页4.as long as条件状语从句强调了学条件状语从句强调了学好英语必须勤学苦练，并且用了并列好英语必须勤学苦练，并且用了并列的谓语，使句子富有节奏感。的谓语，使句子富有节奏感。第10页/共29页建议信的写作指导建议信的写作指导建议信是就某一问题给对方提出建议或者忠告。建议信可以写给某个组织或机构，也可以写给某个人。建议信是就某一问题给对方提出建议或者忠告。建议信可以写给某个组织或机构，也可以写给某个人。第11页/共29页1.合理安排建议信的内容结构合理安排建议信的内容结构写信的目的（包括背景，现状和存在的问题）；建议的内容；表达希望（希望自己的建议能够对对方有所帮助）写信的目的（包括背景，现状和存在的问题）；建议的内容；表达希望（希望自己的建议能够对对方有所帮助）第12页/共29页2.掌握建议信的语言特点掌握建议信的语言特点语气要诚恳，有礼貌；建议内容要详尽具体，不能含糊其辞；可提供的建议通常是多个，因此要注意各个建议之间的衔接语气要诚恳，有礼貌；建议内容要详尽具体，不能含糊其辞；可提供的建议通常是多个，因此要注意各个建议之间的衔接3.熟悉建议信的常用句型熟悉建议信的常用句型第13页/共29页首段常用的句型：首段常用的句型：I am writing to express my views on/concerningYou have asked for some advice concerning and I will try to give you my suggestions.I would like to suggest thatI am writing in reply toIn my opinion,I would say第14页/共29页首段常用的句型：首段常用的句型：I am writing to express my views on/concerningYou have asked for some advice concerning and I will try to give you my suggestions.第15页/共29页I would like to suggest that.I am writing in reply to.In my opinion,I would say.第16页/共29页提出建议时常用的句型：提出建议时常用的句型：In my opinion,it would be beneficial ifI would recommend thatYou do not have to devote all your time toThere is a suggestion as toI suggest that第17页/共29页结尾段常用的句型：结尾段常用的句型：I hope that these suggestions/proposals/recommendations will be helpful/useful/beneficial.I would be happier toI would be ready to further discuss this matter.第18页/共29页Please inform me when you have made a decision.I am looking forward to your reply.I trust you will take my suggestions into account.第19页/共29页Dear_,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to _./I know that _ from_.Backgrounds and problems第20页/共29页Here are a few suggestions/Here is some advice that/on_.First,it is important to _.Then/Second/Also,_.Besides/In addition/Furthermore,it should be a good idea to _.I am sure that/I hope that_.Suggestions,thanks and hope第21页/共29页 Thanks for your consideration.Im looking forward to/Look forward to _.Yours_,_ Signature第22页/共29页写作训练写作训练假设你是高三假设你是高三17班的李华，最近你发现学校里的浪费现象非常严重。请给英语读写园地（班的李华，最近你发现学校里的浪费现象非常严重。请给英语读写园地（English Reading and Writing Space)的编辑投稿反映该现象，并提出自己的建议。的编辑投稿反映该现象，并提出自己的建议。注意：注意：第23页/共29页1.词数词数100左右；左右；2.信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：美德参考词汇：美德virtue;提倡提倡advocate第24页/共29页Dear Editors,I am a student in class One,Grade Three.My name is Lihua._ I am looking forward to your reply.yours sincerely,Lihua第25页/共29页Dear Editors,I am a student in class 17,Grade Three.My name is Lihua.Recently,I have found that the waste on our campus is getting serious,such as the waste of water,food and electrical energy.第26页/共29页Faced with these phenomena,I really feel worried.So here is some advice I hope will help.English Reading and Writing Space is a good medium to advocate that saving is a traditional virtue.第27页/共29页So would you publish more instructive articles on this topic first.Then,some activities such as holding debates or seeing movies about the phenomenon will help students get aware of the harm of wasting and realize the importance of saving.Do you agree with me?I am looking forward to your reply.yours,第28页/共29页
