英语学习英语四级作文讲练.pptx

会计学1英语学习英语四级作文讲练英语学习英语四级作文讲练记叙文记叙文n n要求考生写一篇记叙文，描述事件发生的时间、地点、原因、人物及结果，最后对事件进行简单分析。这类题型，通常分为三个步骤来写：第1页/共46页第一段、总结描述第一段、总结描述n n交代清楚故事涉及的人物、时间、地点：n n主题句 第2页/共46页第二段、具体描述第二段、具体描述n n具体描述事件发生的原因、经过和结果n n起因经过结果第3页/共46页第三段、对事件的分析第三段、对事件的分析n n分析句1+分析句2+分析3 第4页/共46页实战演练 Directions：For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic The Day My Classmate Fell Ill.1、简单描述一下这位同学生病的情况；2、同学、老师和我是如何帮助他的；3、人和人之间的这种相互关爱给我的感受是.第5页/共46页 模板模板 第一段：开篇句：About _ Oclock one evening in _,_.扩展句：_.(展开描述一下事件)第6页/共46页 第二段：主题句：Without hesitation,_.It wasnt long before _.扩展句：1、One _.2、Another _.3、Our teacher _.第7页/共46页 第三段：第三段：结尾句：结尾句：Is _?Who can tell?But _.Is _?Who can tell?But _.扩展句：扩展句：1 1、When _,people showed _ When _,people showed _ spirit regardless of _.spirit regardless of _.2 2、This kind of care between persons is This kind of care between persons is the very kind giving,unselfish and priceless the very kind giving,unselfish and priceless devotion or sacrifice.devotion or sacrifice.3 3、And it is just because of this care that And it is just because of this care that we can have warm families,a happy life and a we can have warm families,a happy life and a beautiful world.beautiful world.第8页/共46页范文About nine Oclock one evening in May,my roommate Li Ming was lying in bed,trembling with cold and having a cough.His head was aching so intensely that he kept groaning.His forehead felt very hot.We took his temperature.It was 38.5.Without hesitation,I dialed 120.It wasnt long before an ambulance arrived.One roommate brought a blanket for him.Another supported him in the ambulance.Our teacher insisted on giving him some money.Is he a suspected SARS patient?Who can tell?But we didt retreat.When the savage SARS was spreading,people showed fearless spirit regardless of dangers to their own health.This kind of care between persons is the very kind giving,unselfish and priceless devotion or sacrifice.And it is just because of this care that we can have warm families,a happy life and a beautiful world.第9页/共46页 议论文议论文 一、对立观点型一、对立观点型二、比较利弊型二、比较利弊型三、问题解决型三、问题解决型四、热点话题型四、热点话题型五、阐述主题型五、阐述主题型第10页/共46页对立观点型1：Some people believe (argue,recognize,think)that 观点1.But other people take an opposite side.They firmly believe that 观点2.As for me,I agree to the former/latter idea.There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief.First of all,论据1.More importantly,论据2.Most important of all,论据3.In summary,总结观点.As a college student,I am supposed to 表决心.或 From above,we can predict that 预测.第11页/共46页对立观点型2：People hold different views about X.Some people are of the opinion that 观点1,while others point out that 观点2.As far as I am concerned,the former/latter opinion holds more weight.For one thing,论据1.For another,论据2.Last but not the least,论据3.To conclude,总结观点.As a college student,I am supposed to 表决心.或 From above,we can predict that 预测.第12页/共46页对立观点型3：There is no consensus of opinions among people about X（争论的焦点）。Some people are of the view that 观点1，while others take an opposite side,firmly believing that 观点2。As far as I am concerned,the former/latter notion is preferable in many senses.The reasons are obvious.First of all,论据1。Furthermore,论据2。Among all of the supporting evidences,one is the strongest.That is,论据3。A natural conclusion from the above discussion is that总结观点。As a college student,I am supposed to 表决心.或 From above,we can predict that 预测.第13页/共46页比较利弊型比较利弊型n n引出主题，陈述正面观点（1、2、3）负面观点（1、2、3)。n n利弊对比，并陈述原因（1、2、3）。n n陈述自己观点（提供论据并举例），并给出解决办法（展望）。第14页/共46页问题解决型问题解决型n n引出问题（数据或举例，突出其严重性）n n分析其成因（1、2、3)。n n解决办法（1、2、3)。第15页/共46页第16页/共46页n npollution of environmentpollution of environment These days we often hear that(our living conditions are These days we often hear that(our living conditions are getting more and more serious because of the destruction of our getting more and more serious because of the destruction of our environment).It is common that(many trees and animals are environment).It is common that(many trees and animals are near extinction,and the all-important food chain has been near extinction,and the all-important food chain has been destroyed.).destroyed.).Why does such circumstance occur in spite of social Why does such circumstance occur in spite of social protects?For one thing,(the population of the world is protects?For one thing,(the population of the world is increasing so rapidly that the world has been so crowded.).For increasing so rapidly that the world has been so crowded.).For another,(the overuse of natural resources has influenced the another,(the overuse of natural resources has influenced the balance of natural ecology).What is more,since(the industrial balance of natural ecology).What is more,since(the industrial revolution),it is naturalrevolution),it is naturalthat(a great number of factories have been springing up like that(a great number of factories have been springing up like mushrooms.The smoke and harmful chemicals released from mushrooms.The smoke and harmful chemicals released from factories also pollute the environment).factories also pollute the environment).To solve the problem is not easy at all,but is worth trying To solve the problem is not easy at all,but is worth trying.We should do something such as(planting more trees,.We should do something such as(planting more trees,equipping cars with pollution-control devices and learning to equipping cars with pollution-control devices and learning to recycling natural resources)to improve the present situation,and recycling natural resources)to improve the present situation,and I do believe everything will be better in the future.I do believe everything will be better in the future.第17页/共46页第18页/共46页第19页/共46页The impact of TelevisionThe impact of Television n nIn recent years,with the development of science and In recent years,with the development of science and technology,80 percent of all homes in China have satellite technology,80 percent of all homes in China have satellite TV,offering as many as 50 channels.It has caused a heated TV,offering as many as 50 channels.It has caused a heated debate on(the impact of television on children).Many debate on(the impact of television on children).Many parents are worried about the impact of so much televisionparents are worried about the impact of so much televisionon children.on children.The factors for(parents worry is that children are indulged in The factors for(parents worry is that children are indulged in television and spend too much time on it.).First of all,(with somany television and spend too much time on it.).First of all,(with somany programs to choose from,children are not getting as much exercise programs to choose from,children are not getting as much exercise as they should).Then,there comes a case that(some studies have as they should).Then,there comes a case that(some studies have show that excessive watching of television by millions of children has show that excessive watching of television by millions of children has lowered their ability to achieve in school).Moreover,(the effect on lowered their ability to achieve in school).Moreover,(the effect on childrens minds are more serious than the effect on childrens bodies childrens minds are more serious than the effect on childrens bodies).Especially when(the children are too small to judge what).Especially when(the children are too small to judge what programs are suit to them).programs are suit to them).Indeed,these unique points can be connected to remind Indeed,these unique points can be connected to remind parents that(they should pay close attention to and take more parents that(they should pay close attention to and take more responsibilities for supervising their childrens TV viewing).In this responsibilities for supervising their childrens TV viewing).In this way,children will not be influenced too deeply.way,children will not be influenced too deeply.第20页/共46页阐述主题型阐述主题型n n引出主题并加以解释。n n举例（1、2）论证主题中心思想。n n结合自身，突出主题并进行展望。第21页/共46页 图表式作文图表式作文 一、图表说明 二、分析图表（原因）三、趋势预测第22页/共46页 It is obvious in the graphic/table that the rate/number/amount of Y has undergone dramatic changes.It has gone up/grown/fallen/dropped considerably in recent years(as X varies).At the point of X1,Y reaches its peak value of(多少).第23页/共46页 What is the reason for this change?Mainly there are (多少)reasons behind the situation reflected in the graphic/table.First of all,(第一个原因).More importantly,(第二个原因).Most important of all,(第三个原因).第24页/共46页 From the above discussions,we have enough reason to predict what will happen in the near future.The trend described in the graphic/table will continue for quite a long time (if necessary measures are not taken括号里的使用于那些不太好的变化趋势).第25页/共46页第26页/共46页套句总结套句总结 第27页/共46页开头n nRecently,the problem of has aroused peoples concern.最近,问题已引起人们的关注.n nInternet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.互联网已在我们的生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色.它给我们带来了许多好处,但也产生了一些严重的问题 第28页/共46页n nNowadays,(overpopulation)has become a problem we have to face.如今,(人口过剩)已成为我们不得不面对的问题了.n nIt is commonly believed that/It is a common belief that 人们一般认为 n nMany people insist that 很多人坚持认为n nWith the development of science and technology,more and more people believe that 随着科技的发展,越来越多的人认为n nA lot of people seem to think that 很多人似乎认为 第29页/共46页引出不同观点引出不同观点:n nPeoples views on vary from person to person.Some Peoples views on vary from person to person.Some hold that.However,others believe that.hold that.However,others believe that.人们对人们对的观点因人而异的观点因人而异.有些人认为有些人认为.然而其他人却认为然而其他人却认为n nPeople may have different opinions onPeople may have different opinions on人们对人们对可能可能会有不同的见解会有不同的见解.n nAttitudes towards(drugs)vary from person to person.Attitudes towards(drugs)vary from person to person.人人们对待吸毒的态度因人而异们对待吸毒的态度因人而异.n nThere are different opinions among people as to There are different opinions among people as to 关于关于.人们的观点大不相同人们的观点大不相同.n nDifferent people hold different attitudes toward(failure).Different people hold different attitudes toward(failure).对对(失败失败)人们的态度各不相同人们的态度各不相同.第30页/共46页结尾结尾 n nTaking all these factors into consideration,we naturally come to the conclusion that 把所有这些因素加以考虑,我们自然会得出结论 n nTaking into account all these factors,we may reasonably come to the conclusion that 考虑所有这些因素,我们可能会得出合理的结论 n nHence/Therefore,wed better come to the conclusion that 因此,我们最好得出这样的结论 第31页/共46页n nThere is no doubt that(job-hopping)has its drawbacks as well as merits.毫无疑问,跳槽有优点也有缺点.n nAll in all,we cannot live without But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.总之,我们没有是无法生活的.但同时,我们必须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能出现的新问题.第32页/共46页提出建议提出建议:n nIt is high time that we put an end to the(trend).It is high time that we put an end to the(trend).该是我们该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了停止这一趋势的时候了.n nIt is time to take the advice of and to put special It is time to take the advice of and to put special emphasis on the improvement of emphasis on the improvement of 该是采纳该是采纳的建议的建议,并对并对的进展给予特殊重视的时候了的进展给予特殊重视的时候了.n nThere is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of the problem of 毫无疑问毫无疑问,对对问题应予以足够的重问题应予以足够的重视视.n nObviously,.If we want to do something,it is essential Obviously,.If we want to do something,it is essential that that 显然显然,如果我们想做某事如果我们想做某事,很重要的是很重要的是 n nOnly in this way can we Only in this way can we 只有这样只有这样,我们才能我们才能n n It must be realized that It must be realized that 我们必须意识到我们必须意识到 第33页/共46页预示后果预示后果:n nObviously,if we dont control the problem,the chances are that will lead us in danger.很明显,如果我们不能控制这一问题,很有可能我们会陷入危险.n nNo doubt,unless we take effective measures,it is very likely that 毫无疑问,除非我们采取有效措施,很可能会 n nIt is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation.很紧迫的是,应立即采取措施阻止这一事态的发展.论证 n nFrom my point of view,it is more reasonable to support the first opinion rather than the second.在我看来,支持第一种观点比支持第二种观点更有道理.第34页/共46页n nI cannot entirely agree with the idea that 我无法完全同意这一观点.n nPersonally,I am standing on the side of 就个人而言,我站在的一边.n nI sincerely believe that 我真诚地相信 n nIn my opinion,it is more advisable to do than to do.在我个人看来,做比做更明智.n nFinally,to speak frankly,there is also a more practical reason why 第35页/共46页给出原因给出原因:n nThis phenomenon exists for a number of reasons.First,Second,Third,这一现象的存在是有许多原因的.首先,第二,第三,n nWhy did?For one thing For another.Perhaps the primary reason is 为什么会?一个原因是 令一个原因是或许其主要原因是.n nI quite agree with the statement that the reasons are chiefly as follows.我十分赞同这一论述,即,其主要原因如下:第36页/共46页列出解决办法列出解决办法:n nHere are some suggestions for handling Here are some suggestions for handling 这是如何处理某这是如何处理某事的一些建议事的一些建议.n nThe best way to solve the troubles is The best way to solve the troubles is 解决这些麻烦的解决这些麻烦的最好办法是最好办法是 n nPeople have figured out many ways to solve this problem.People have figured out many ways to solve this problem.人人们已找出许多办法来解们已找出许多办法来解决这个问题决这个问题决这个问题决这个问题.批判错误观点和做批判错误观点和做法法:n nAs far as something is concerned,.As far as something is concerned,.就某事而言就某事而言,n nIt was obvious that It was obvious that 很显然很显然,.,.n nIt may be true that,but it doesnt mean that It may be true that,but it doesnt mean that 可能可能是对的是对的,但这并不意味着但这并不意味着 n nIt is natural to believe that,but we shouldnt ignore that It is natural to believe that,but we shouldnt ignore that 认为认为.是很自然的是很自然的,但我们不应忽视但我们不应忽视.n nThere is no evidence to suggest that There is no evidence to suggest that 没有证据表明没有证据表明 第37页/共46页如何连接如何连接 n n表强调 still,Indeed,apparently,oddly enough,of course,after all,significantly,interestingly,also,above all,surely,certainly,undoubtedly,in any case,anyway,above all,in fact,especially.Obviously,clearly.n n表比较 like,similarly,likewise,in the same way,in the same manner,equally.第38页/共46页n n表对比表对比 by contrast,on the contrary,while,by contrast,on the contrary,while,whereas,on the other hand,unlike,instead,whereas,on the other hand,unlike,instead,but,conversely,different from,however,but,conversely,different from,however,nevertheless,otherwise,whereas,unlike,yet,nevertheless,otherwise,whereas,unlike,yet,in contrast.in contrast.n n表列举表列举 for example,for instance,such as,for example,for instance,such as,take for example.Except(for),to take for example.Except(for),to illustrateillustrate.第39页/共46页n n表时间 later,next,then,finally,at last,eventually,meanwhile,from now on,at the same time,for the time being,in the end,immediately,in the meantime,in the meanwhile,recently,soon,now and then,during,nowadays,since,lately,as soon as,afterwards,temporarily,earlier,now,after a while.n n表顺序 first,second,third,then,finally,to begin with,first of all,in the first place,last,next,above all,last but not the least,first and most important.第40页/共46页n n表可能 presumably,probably,perhaps.n n表解释 in other words,in fact,as a matter of fact,that is,namely,in simpler terms.n n表递进 What is more,in addition,and,besides,also,furthermore,too,moreover,furthermore,as well as,additionally,again.n n表让步 although,after all,in spite of,despite,even if,even though,though,