2016年全国高考英语应用文写作训练——道歉信 (共26张PPT).ppt

2016年全国高考英语应用文写作训练道歉信(共26张PPT)celebrate the precious moment 庆庆祝祝这这珍珍贵贵的的时时刻刻the final examinations 期末考期末考试试be around the corner 即将到来即将到来appointment 约约会会accept sb.sincere apology 接受某人真接受某人真诚诚的道歉的道歉a face-to-face talk 一次面一次面谈谈for my healths sake 为为了我的健康了我的健康keep to sb.word 遵守承遵守承诺诺further ones studies 进进修；修；继续继续学学习习【必备词语】1.I am so sorry for my mistake and I am now writing to apology for my carelessness.1.apology改为apologize2.Much to my regret I was unable to keep my promise to attend your birthday party last Saturday so I had to stay at home to look after my sick mother.2.so改为because【单句改错】每句只有一个错误3.I feel terrible sorry for missing the chance of attending your graduation ceremony.3.terrible改为terribly4.I very sorry to inform you that I did not manage to complete the book report you assigned last week.4.very前面加am5.Please forgive me for my careless and the inconvenience that I may have caused.5.careless改为carelessness【单句改错】每句只有一个错误6.Again,I do hope that you can understand my situation and accept my apologize.6.apologize改为apology 7.I am really sorry,but Ive lost the book that you lend me when I stayed with you in June.7.lend改为lent8.I would like to buy a new copy of that book and post them to you.8.them改为it【单句改错】每句只有一个错误9.My mobile phone ran out of battery,because I didnt get your text messages.9.because改为so10.I got the message you leave at the hotel when I got back there late on Thursday.10.leave改为left【单句改错】每句只有一个错误【20132013山东卷改编：未及时回复而道歉山东卷改编：未及时回复而道歉】假假如如你你是是新新华华中中学学的的学学生生李李华华，你你的的美美国国朋朋友友TomTom一一周周前前给给你你发发电电子子邮邮件件，询询问问你你暑暑假假里里的的打打算算，但但你你因因准准备备期期末末考考试试未未能能及及时时回回复复。请根据以下要点给他回封邮件：请根据以下要点给他回封邮件：1.1.未及时回信的原因；未及时回信的原因；2.2.你假期的打算（如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等）你假期的打算（如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等）【真题满分佳作赏析】满分佳作（一）满分佳作（一）Dear Tom,Im terribly sorry I couldnt reply to your email which you sent me a week ago immediately.I was so occupied with the final exams.As for the coming summer holiday,I will first do a part time job in a fast-food restaurant.Not only will I earn some money but I will also gain some social experience through it.And then I will go on a trip to Sichuan,where there are a great number of places of interest.Finally,Ill go to Yaan to work as a volunteer.There is no doubt that children there are badly in need of help.I hope what I will do will make a great difference to them.Best wishes.Yours sincerely,Li Hua满分赏析满分赏析先先用用Im terribly sorry对对未未能能及及时时回回信信道道歉歉，terribly加加强强了了道道歉歉的语气。的语气。接接着着简简单单讲讲明明原原因因；be occupied with sth./doing sth.(忙忙于于某某事事/做做某某事事)的的运运用用体体现现了了作作者者的的语语言言功功底底，不不是是用用简简单单的的词词汇汇busy，可可给评卷老师留下好印象。给评卷老师留下好印象。Not onlybut also 连连接接并并列列句句，属属于于本本书书在在“写写作作基基础础”部部分分训训练练的的句句型型。注注意意：not only在在句句首首，谓谓语语动动词词要要用用倒倒装装形形式式；gain some social experience的运用也体现了作者平时注意积累语言素材。的运用也体现了作者平时注意积累语言素材。满分赏析满分赏析运运用用了了where引引导导的的定定语语从从句句修修饰饰地地点点，使使句句式式避避免免简简单单化化；places of interest(名名胜胜古古迹迹)也也运运用用得得当当，考考生生需需注注意意积积累累，否否则则只只能生造出中式英语。能生造出中式英语。运运用用了了There is no doubt that(毫毫无无疑疑问问)这这样样的的万万能能句句型型；be badly in need of help(急需帮助急需帮助)这一短语也给评卷老师眼前一亮。这一短语也给评卷老师眼前一亮。make a difference(起作用、产生不同起作用、产生不同)这一短语也是增分点。这一短语也是增分点。本篇句句高级、词词地道，怎能不拿满分？本篇句句高级、词词地道，怎能不拿满分？满分佳作（二）满分佳作（二）Dear Tom,How is everything going?I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of answering your letter in time.You know,Ive been preparing for the final exams these days.Now,I am writing to tell you my plans for the summer vacation.To start with,doing a part-time job is my dream because not only can I earn money by myself,but also it will broaden my horizons.In addition,it is a fabulous choice to visit some famous scenic spots in order to enjoy some appealing scenery.What is more,I will do some voluntary work to enrich my life.I sincerely apologize again for my mistake.By the way,whats your plan to spend your summer vacation?Yours sincerely,Li Hua 满分赏析满分赏析第一句为朋友式的日常问候，符合朋友间书信的特点。第一句为朋友式的日常问候，符合朋友间书信的特点。I feel terribly sorry for 用来引出道歉的内容，句型运用得当。用来引出道歉的内容，句型运用得当。本本段段用用了了to start with,in addition,whats more等等连连接接词词，使使行行文文连连贯贯；not onlybut also也也是是必必须须学学会会运运用用的的高高级级句句型型；broaden my horizons也也体体现现了了作作者者平平时时勤勤于于积积累累，能能给给阅阅卷卷老老师师留留下下良良好好的的印象。印象。It is a fabulous choice to(是是极极佳佳的的选选择择)一一句句是是难难得得的的高高级级表表达；达；appealing(吸引人的吸引人的)一词也体现了语言能力。一词也体现了语言能力。最最后后一一段段，作作者者再再次次用用I sincerely apologize again for表表达达了了真真诚诚的道歉；并询问了对方的暑期计划，符合真实交际情境。的道歉；并询问了对方的暑期计划，符合真实交际情境。【模拟真题模拟真题1：道歉不能赴约：道歉不能赴约】作文原题作文原题 假假设设你你是是李李华华，前前天天是是你你的的外外国国朋朋友友Anne的的生生日日。你你本本答答应应要要参参加加她她的的生生日日聚聚会会，但但你你当当时时正正忙忙着着准准备备期期末末考考试试，忘忘了了赴赴约约。请请写写封封信信向向Anne表表达达你你的的歉歉意意，说说明明原原因因，并提出并提出补补救的方法。救的方法。【模仿翻译】作文翻译作文翻译亲爱的亲爱的AnneAnne，我十分抱歉我未能参加你前天的生日派对。我十分抱歉我未能参加你前天的生日派对。你邀请我去生日派对真是太有心了。我理应来与你庆祝这珍贵你邀请我去生日派对真是太有心了。我理应来与你庆祝这珍贵的时刻。但是期末考试就在眼前，所以我忙于准备考试，以致我忘的时刻。但是期末考试就在眼前，所以我忙于准备考试，以致我忘记了约会。我希望你能理解我的情况并原谅我。有没有可能我和你记了约会。我希望你能理解我的情况并原谅我。有没有可能我和你在考试后进行一次私人的见面？在考试后进行一次私人的见面？我十分遗憾错过了相聚的机会。请再次接受我真诚的道歉。我十分遗憾错过了相聚的机会。请再次接受我真诚的道歉。你真诚的，你真诚的，李华李华Dear Anne,I am indeed very sorry that I didnt attend your birthday party the day before yesterday.It was nice of you to invite me to your birthday party.I should have come and celebrate the precious moment with you.But the final examinations are around the corner,so I was so busy preparing for the exams that I forgot the appointment.I hope you can understand my situation and forgive me.Is it possible for you and me to have a private meeting after the examinations?It is much to my regret that I missed the chance to get together.Once again,please accept my sincere apology.Yours truly,Li Hua【模拟真题模拟真题2：道歉不能赴约：道歉不能赴约】作文原题作文原题假假如如你你是是李李华华，你你和和你你的的外外籍籍老老师师Mrs.Brown约约好好明明天天下下午午要要一一起起讨讨论论你你英英语语学学习习中中遇遇到到的的问问题题，但但是是你你临临时时有有其其他他的的事事而而不不能能赴赴约约，请请你你给给Mrs.Brown写一封道歉信。内容包括：写一封道歉信。内容包括：1.对对她表示歉意；她表示歉意；2.说说明明原原因因：你你的的医医生生打打电电话话给给你你，通通知知你你明明天天下下午午去去医医院院谈谈体体检结检结果；果；3.你想与你想与Mrs.Brown另另约约在本周六。在本周六。作文翻译作文翻译亲爱的亲爱的BrownBrown夫人，夫人，我非常遗憾地告诉您我非常遗憾地告诉您明天下午我将无法和您见面讨论我英语学明天下午我将无法和您见面讨论我英语学习的问题，因为我要在同一天看医生。习的问题，因为我要在同一天看医生。今天早上，我的医生打电话给我，希望和我面对面讨论我前些今天早上，我的医生打电话给我，希望和我面对面讨论我前些天进行的健康检查结果。为了我的健康，我必须说我可能会失言了。天进行的健康检查结果。为了我的健康，我必须说我可能会失言了。您可以考虑我的情况并理解我吗？您可以考虑我的情况并理解我吗？我的确希望和您进行讨论，因此如果我们可以在星期六见面，我的确希望和您进行讨论，因此如果我们可以在星期六见面，我将无尽感激。我保证会按时到达。我将无尽感激。我保证会按时到达。你的，你的，李华李华Dear Mrs.Brown,I am terriblely sorry to tell you that tomorrow afternoon I will be unable to meet you to talk about the problem about my English study because I have to see the doctor on the same day.This morning,my doctor called me,hoping to have a face-to-face talk with me about the result of my health examination on the other day.For my healths sake,I have to say that I may fail to keep to my word.Would you please consider my situation and try to understand?I do hope to have a discussion with you,so I would be very grateful to you if we could meet on Saturday.I promise to be there on time.Yours,Li Hua【2010山东卷改编：因故不能赴约而道歉山东卷改编：因故不能赴约而道歉】假假设设你你是是新新华华中中学学的的学学生生李李华华，你你和和在在上上海海上上学学的的英英国国朋朋友友Tom约约好好下下周周末末去去北北京京旅旅游游，但但你你因因故故不不能能赴赴约约。请请根根据据以以下下要要点点用用英英语语给他写一封电子邮件：给他写一封电子邮件：1.表示歉意；表示歉意；2.解释原因；解释原因；3.另约时间。另约时间。Dear Tom,Nice to hear from you.Sincerely yours,Li Hua【全真考场】【20102010山东卷改编：因故不能赴约而道歉山东卷改编：因故不能赴约而道歉】Dear Tom,Nice to hear from you.But Im sorry to tell you that I cant make it to Beijing with you next weekend as we planned beforehand.You see,a couple of days ago,my cousin Li Ming,who has been to Australia to further his studies,called and said that he would be coming back next weekend,and I will have to pick him up at the airport.After all,its been more than one year since we saw each other.Im terribly sorry for that.Anyhow,I sincerely hope that we can fix another time for a trip to Beijing,when I will show you around the places of historical interest there.Looking forward to hearing from you.Sincerely yours,Li Hua【模拟真题：道歉不能参加活动模拟真题：道歉不能参加活动】假假如如你你是是李李华华，国国际际学学校校的的教教师师PaulPaul邀邀请请你你星星期期六六参参加加该该校校举举行行的的“中中国国文文化化日日”活活动动。但但你你的的爷爷爷爷突突然然生生病病住住院院，你你要要和和父父母母一一起起去去医医院院探探视视，不不得得不不拒拒绝绝他他的的邀邀请请。请请根根据下列要点用英语给据下列要点用英语给PaulPaul写一封电子邮件。写一封电子邮件。要点：要点：1.1.谢绝邀请；谢绝邀请；2.2.说明理由；说明理由；3.3.预祝活动成功。预祝活动成功。Dear Paul,Dear Paul,Yours,Yours,Li HuaLi Hua【模拟真题：道歉不能参加活动模拟真题：道歉不能参加活动】Dear Paul,Thank you very much for inviting me to attend the“Chinese Culture Day”to be held at your school this Saturday.I have been looking forward to it.I believe it will give your students more ideas about Chinese culture.However,much to my regret,I shall not be able to make it now.My grandpa suddenly felt ill and is in hospital.I will visit him with my parents on Saturday.Im awfully sorry for the sudden change of plan and feel it a great pity to miss the opportunity to be with your students.I wish the activity to be a great success and hope I will have another chance to join you in the future.Yours,Li Hua 全国高考英语二轮突破此此课件下件下载可自行可自行编辑修改，修改，仅供参考！供参考！感感谢您的支持，我您的支持，我们努力做得更好！努力做得更好！谢谢!