状语从句在高考写作中的运用公开课.pptx
DearJohn，ItsapitythatIhavetosaysorrytoyou!Itwasnot_IreadyourletterthatIknewyoulovedmesomuchandwantedtomarryme,forwehaventseeneachother_weparted._weareallbusy,Ijusthavetodropafewlinestoyou.ThefactthatyourenotgoodatEnglishdisappointsme,althoughyouloveme.Totellyouthetruth,IcantstandanyonewhocannotspeakEnglishwell.So_happens,Imgladtohavemetyou,andinfact,_timegoesby,youllgraduallyforgetme.BestwishesAliceuntilsinceNow thatwhateverasa dear John letterAdverbial Clause（绝交信）第1页/共32页Iwillnevermarryyou.高考:Never will I marry you.四级:YouarethelastmanIamwillingtomarry.六级:UndernocircumstanceswillImarryyou.GRE:Ifyouwerethelastmanintheworld,Iwoulddefinitelyremainsingle.第2页/共32页写作技能提升：句子润色How to beautify the Adverbial Clause in WritingWhile writing,try to use different forms of verbs and clauses(从句)to make your essay simple,clear,vivid and full of varieties.第3页/共32页2012广东高考基础写作你接受了一项写作任务，要为英语校报写一篇人物介绍。【写作内容】请根据以下信息，介绍一位传奇人物姓 名：Allan Stewart国 籍：澳大利亚出生日期：1915年3月7日世界纪录：2006年获硕士学位时年龄最大学习态度：挑战自我，永远为时不晚。第一个学位：1936年获得第二个学位：医学博士第三个学位：80多岁时决定学习法律，2006年获得硕士学位。第四个学位：2012年通过网络学习获得，善于合理安排学习时间，受到老师表扬。Because he was good at arranging his study time,he got praise from his teacher 第4页/共32页学会使用复合句现象现象学生作文中出现很多错别字学生作文中出现很多错别字原因原因 每天有很多作业做，没有记住生字。每天有很多作业做，没有记住生字。参考词汇：参考词汇：错别字错别字:wrongly-written characters要求：1.1.用状语从句表达表格的原因 2.2.语句间要有连贯性 现象：There are many wrongly-written characters in students compositions.第5页/共32页2.They have so much homework to do every day that they fail to memorize the new characters.1.1.每天有很多作业做每天有很多作业做 2.2.没有记住生字。没有记住生字。They have much homework to do every day.3.With so much homework to do,they fail to memorize the new characters.1.Because they have so much homework to do,they fail to memorize the new characters.第三步：合并句子 They fail to memorize the new characters.第一步：拆分成几个简单句第二步：分别翻译这几个简单句第6页/共32页2011年广东卷 英语作文以下是一本图书的基本信息及相关报道基本信息：书名：Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother作者：Amy Chua，美籍华人，耶鲁大学教授出版时间：2010年内容：作者用中国传统方式教育两个女儿的故事效应：引发中美教育方式孰优孰劣的讨论相关报道：中文版：2011年初开始在中国销售意外反应：多数中国妈妈不赞同作者的做法最新消息：17岁的大女儿已被哈佛和耶鲁录取耶鲁：Yale 哈佛：Harvard写作内容根据以上信息写一篇图书介绍，内容包括：1.图书的基本信息2.图书的相关报道The majority of mothers in China disagree with the author though her 17-year-old elder daughter was lately reported to have got offers from both Harvard and Yale.尽管作者17岁的大女儿已被哈佛和耶鲁录取，多数中国妈妈还是不赞同她的做法。第7页/共32页Highlights of Adverbial Clause while writing1.状语从句与分词之间的灵活转换2.高考状语从句中的倒装3.高考状语从句中的省略4.状语从句与其他从句之间的转换5.Some proverbs:第8页/共32页When I think of the trip to Shanghai,Im impressed most with Mr.Rui.He is my oral English teacher.（2012广东高考读写任务)1.状语从句与分词之间的灵活转换请试试改写下面的句子吧！(改后)Thinking of the trip to Shanghai,Im impressed most with Mr.Rui,my oral English teacher.第9页/共32页1.After I realized the importance of learning,I studied even harder.Realizing the importance of learning,I studied even harder.第10页/共32页2.状语从句与倒装inversion1）.Iwasaddictedtoonlinegames.AndIwasevenabsentfromschool.Iwas_addictedtoonlinegames_Iwasevenabsentfromschool.sothatSo addicted to online games was I that I was even absent from school.2）.She might try.She couldnt get the door open.Although she might try,she couldnt get the door open.Try as she might,she couldnt get the door open.第11页/共32页2009年广东卷英语作文你是校报小记者，最近进行了一次采访。以下是这次采访的情况：时间：上周末对象：眼科医生(eye-doctor)王教授主题：我国中小学生近视(short-sightedness)问题基本信息：(1)发生率：略高于50(2)人数：世界第一专家解读：(1)原因：很复杂(2)治疗：没有哪一种药物能治愈近视(3)建议：不要过度用眼；多参加户外活动(4)特别提示：如何握笔也和近视有关根据以上情况写一篇采访报道，并包括如下内容：1采访的时间、对象和主题；2中小学生近视的发生率及人数；3专家解读。原因很复杂，以致于没有哪一种药物能治愈近视。He also pointed that the causes for short-sightedness are so complicated that no medicine can cure short-sightedness.第12页/共32页1.Dont speak until you are spoken to.2.He was a swimmer when he was a child.3.She stood at the gate as if she was waiting for someone.4.Ill buy a TV set if it is necessary.5.Though it is cold,he wore a shirt.（）（）（）（）（）3.点击高考状语从句中的省略Ellipsis第13页/共32页 :什么时候可以省略?怎么省略?在含有状语从句的复合句中在含有状语从句的复合句中若从句的主句是it或与主句的主语相同，且在谓语中含有be时，常省略从句的主语和be。1._ (在北京的时候),I paid a visit to the Summer Palace.2._(除非修理),the machine is of no use.3._(如果有必要的话),you can help us to do something.4.A girl stood at the gate of the school as if _ _(跟老师讲话).When/While in BeijingUnless repaired talking with a teacherIf necessary第14页/共32页4.状语从句与其他从句之间的转换4.Iwontbelievewhathesays.（nomatterwhat状语从句）5.Whenhespoke,hefeltmoreandmoreexcited.(themorethemore)No matter what he says,I wont believe.The more he spoke,the more excited he felt.第15页/共32页1.有志者事竟成。Wheretheresawill,theresaway.2.读万卷书不如行万里路Amillionmilesisbetterthanamillionbooks3.入乡随俗.WheninRomedoastheRomansdo.4.万事开头难Allthingsaredifficultbefore theyareeasy.5.只要不灰心，就一定能成功.As long as you dont lose heart,youll succeed.5.Useful proverbs:第16页/共32页Try to make your sentenceAfter class try to search for such beautiful and vivid sentences in your textbooks,OK?第17页/共32页写作中状语从句的经典错误1.Ididntgiveup.Becausemymotheroftentoldme,wherethereisawill,thereisaway.”2.Sheworkedsohardthatcouldcatchupwithothers.3.Onlywekeepoptimisticcanwesucceed.4.Whenhehesitating,amancameuptohim.第18页/共32页写作中状语从句的几个常见错误:1.Ididntgiveup.Becausemymotheroftentoldme,wherethereisawill,thereisaway.”2.Sheworkedsohardthatcouldcatchupwithothers.3.Onlywekeepoptimisticcanwesucceed.4.Whenhehesitating,amancameuptohim.,becauseshe whenwas1.只有从句，没有主句2.从句中缺少主语3.缺少从句的连接词4.从句中的谓语不完整第19页/共32页summary：1.先阅读写作内容，将从句剥离出来，弄懂句子意思.2.写作中用状语从句优化句子3.避免使用状语从句时出现的错误.4.研读范文中从句的使用5.适当使用含状从的名言警句6.Practicemakesperfect!第20页/共32页以下是网上走红的“低碳哥”的基本情况时间：2011年人物介绍：“低碳哥(Low-carbonBrother)”，用行动宣讲环保概念的年轻人主要做法有：1.捡起废纸，用空白一面写字。2.不开灯看电视，还把电视亮度调到最低（minimum）。3.上班骑自行车，不开车等。【写作内容】根据以上“低碳哥”的基本情况，写一篇介绍，内容包括：1.“低碳哥”的简要介绍及走红的时间；2.他的主要做法及你的看法。【写作要求】只能用5个句子表达全部内容。【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。第21页/共32页HomeworkTranslationontheprintedmaterial.第22页/共32页2012年高考基础写作评分说明：基础写作主要考查考生语言结构的应用能力；能够用正确、规范的语言表达特定的内容。本试题要求考生根据所提供的信息，使用5个句子表达写作内容所提供的全部内容。命题思想是希望考生在表达这些内容时能够：正确使用动词不定式、分词短语、介词短语等来整合信息。正确使用复合句，比如：定语从句、宾语从句、状语从句等。第23页/共32页Possibleversion：AyoungmancalledLow-CarbonBrotherbecameahitontheInternetin2011，whosuggestslivingalow-carbonlifewithactions.Healwayspicksupsomewastepaperonthestreet，usingtheblanksidetowritesomethingandgoestoworkbybikeinsteadofdriving.Besides,whileheiswatchingTV,healwaysturnsdownthebrightnesstotheminimumandturnsoffthelight.Somepeoplethinkwhatheisdoingisjustashowbecausenoonecanlivesuchasimplelifewithsomanymoderninventionsaroundus，butasfarasIamconcerned,Istronglysupporthisideaandhisbehavior.Althoughwhatheisdoinghasnohugeeffectonglobalwarming,heatleastcanenjoyahealthylife.第24页/共32页08年基础写作背景：射击最初只是生存工具，背景：射击最初只是生存工具，1919世纪末才发展成为一项体育运动。世纪末才发展成为一项体育运动。18961896：第一次成为奥运项目：第一次成为奥运项目19041904：中断：中断19281928：中断：中断19321932：重回奥运会：重回奥运会19681968：第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛：第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛现状：稳步发展，现状：稳步发展，18961896奥运会只有三项射击项目，现今有奥运会只有三项射击项目，现今有1717项。项。After shooting was canceled in 1904 and 1928,it returned to the Olympics in 1932.Although shooting develops steadily now,it only includes 3 events in 1896,while 17 recently.第25页/共32页07“谁是你的偶像”调查报告根据以上数据，写一篇短文，包括以下内容：1调查时间、调查问题以及调查对象；2男女生在以明星为偶像方面的差异；3“父母”在男女生偶像中的排序差异；4男女生在以伟人为偶像方面的异同；5你的偶像及理由。你的偶像及理由。Basic writing because第26页/共32页5 5你的偶像及理由。你的偶像及理由。As for myself,Liu Wei,an armless Pianist,is my idol because he never gives up his dreams and always insists on what he enjoys.Liu Wei is one of the men for the 2011 Moved Honorary Men.第27页/共32页不是人人都能学好英语，小学生同时学汉语和英语反而会影响汉语学习。学会运用复合句第一步：拆分成几个简单句第一步：拆分成几个简单句不是人人都能学好英语。不是人人都能学好英语。小学生同时学汉语和英语。小学生同时学汉语和英语。这会影响汉语学习。这会影响汉语学习。第二步：分别翻译这几个简单句第二步：分别翻译这几个简单句 Not everyone is good at learning English.Children from primary school learn English and Chinese at the same time.This will affect their Chinese study.A little bit harder,have a try!第28页/共32页 Not everyone is good at learning English.Children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time.This will affect their Chinese study.第三步：合并句子第三步：合并句子 If children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time,this will affect their Chinese study方法方法1 1：because not everyone is good at learning English.第29页/共32页 Not everyone is good at learning English.Children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time.This will affect their Chinese study.第三步：合并句子第三步：合并句子 That children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time will affect their Chinese study because not everyone is good at learning English.方法2第30页/共32页DearJohn，ItsapitythatIhavetosaysorrytoyou!ItisnotuntilIreadyourletterthatIknowyoulovemesomuchandwanttomarryme,forwehaventseeneachothersinceweparted.Nowthatweareallbusy,Ijusthavetodropafewlinestoyou.ThefactthatyourenotgoodatEnglishdisappointsme,althoughyouloveme.Totellyouthetruth,IcantstandanyonewhocannotspeakEnglishwell.Sowhateverhappens,Imgladtohavemetyou,andinfact,astimegoesby,youllgraduallyforgetme.BestwishesAlice（a dear John letter 绝交信）第31页/共32页谢谢您的观看！第32页/共32页
