私家车 广东英语基础写作讲评.ppt

作文评讲基础写作：基础写作：目前城市交通日益拥堵。请就这一话题写一篇短目前城市交通日益拥堵。请就这一话题写一篇短文，分析原因并提出建议。文，分析原因并提出建议。写作内容：写作内容：1背景：背景：20世纪末世纪末21世纪初，越来越多的中国家世纪初，越来越多的中国家庭开始购买私家车；庭开始购买私家车；2009年一年内中国机动车的年一年内中国机动车的数量增加了数量增加了1300万辆。万辆。2原因：私家车为出行带来了便利，很多人有能力原因：私家车为出行带来了便利，很多人有能力购买：购买：3现状：不断恶化的城市交通和频繁的堵车。现状：不断恶化的城市交通和频繁的堵车。4.建议：政府提供更便宜、更方便的公共交通系建议：政府提供更便宜、更方便的公共交通系统，鼓励人们乘坐公交车。统，鼓励人们乘坐公交车。要求：用要求：用5个句子表达所给内容；个句子表达所给内容；将将5个句子组成连贯的短文个句子组成连贯的短文1.20世纪末世纪末21世纪初世纪初 at the end of the 20th century and the beginning of 21st century in the late 1900s and early 2000s2.越来越多的中国家庭开始购买私家车越来越多的中国家庭开始购买私家车More and more families in China buy/purchase private cars.3.2009年一年内中国机动车的数量增加了年一年内中国机动车的数量增加了1300万辆万辆 the total number of vehicles increase by 4.私家车为出行带来了便利，很多人有能力私家车为出行带来了便利，很多人有能力购买：购买：make it more convenient to move around can afford to buy private cars5.不断恶化的城市交通和频繁的堵车不断恶化的城市交通和频繁的堵车worsen the traffic problemtraffic jams/traffic congestion 6.政府提供更便宜、更方便的公共交通系统，政府提供更便宜、更方便的公共交通系统，鼓励人们乘坐公交车鼓励人们乘坐公交车provide a cheaper and more convenient public transport systemencourage people to take buses/ride busesWith more and more Chinese families in China purchasing private cars in the late 1900s and early 2000s,traffic problems have arisen in big cities.或者或者 More and more Chinese families in China purchasing private cars in the late 1900s and early 2000s,because they can afford them and it is convenient for them to drive cars.In 2009,the total number of vehicles increased by more than 13,000,000 in China,which worsened the traffic problems/which gave rise to a series of problems/which brought about a series of problems.There is no doubt that/It goes without saying that private cars bring people convenience when they go out.But with too many cars,the streets seem too narrow and there are always traffic jams during rush hours.或者或者 However,the ever-increasing number of cars has also given rise to a series of problems.For example,too many cars have caused traffic jams.5.I think/From my point of view/In my opinion the government should provide a cheaper and more convenient public transportation system to encourage people to take buses/ride buses.范文：范文：With more and more Chinese families in China purchasing private cars in the late 1900s and early 2000s,traffic problems have arisen in big cities.In 2009,the total number of vehicles increased by more than 13,000,000 in China,which worsened the traffic problems/which gave rise to a series of problems/which brought about a series of problems.People buy private cars in the late 1900s and early 2000s,because they can afford them and it is convenient for them to drive cars.But with too many cars,the streets seem too narrow and there are always traffic jams during rush hours.5.I think/From my point of view/In my opinion the government should provide a cheaper and more convenient public transportation system to encourage people to take buses/ride buses.