英语必修一unitwriting一封建议信.pptx
Read Xiao Dongs letter on page 7 and answer:What is Xiao Dongs problem?Read the instructions at the top of page 7 and find out what you are required to do.Hes not good at communicating with people.He finds it hard to make friends with his classmates.I Lead in第1页/共16页 ask people their likes and dislikesjoin in discussionsshow interest in others ideasshare his feelings with othersII BrainstormingYour advice for Xiao Dong第2页/共16页generoushelpfulkind warm-heartedgood-temperedtrustworthyII Brainstorming第3页/共16页How to writea letter of advice （建议信）StepWhat should be writtenPart IPart IIPart IIIPresenting the problem（问题）Proposing the solution and explain the reasons(建议与理由)Conclusion（希望与祝福）III Outlining第4页/共16页Dear Xiaodong,Im sorry you are having trouble in making friends.However,the situation is easy to change if you take my advice.Here are some tips to help you:First,why not?If you do this,Secondly,you should/canThen/That way,Thirdly,it would be a good idea ifBy doing this,I hope you will find these ideas useful.Yours,Miss WangOutlining第5页/共16页Dear Xiaodong,I am sorry you are having trouble in making friends.However,the situation is easy to change if you take my advice.Here are some tips to help you.First,why not go and talk to people standing on their own?I agree that this is difficult but that person may be lonely too.If you do this Im sure you will soon have a new friend.Second,you can begin the conversation by asking about their likes and dislikes.That way you will soon find people with the same interests.I think that is a good way to find new friends.Sample 1第6页/共16页 Finally,it would be a good idea if you join in a discussion.You may not feel that this is right,but by doing this you are letting people know how friendly you are.So there should be no problem.It should certainly provide you with some new friends.I hope you find these ideas useful and good luck!Yours Miss Wang 第7页/共16页Dear Xiaodong,Some people like talking with others,but some people are shyIf you fall into the second group,it can be hard to make friends But you can change the situation What are you interested in?If you like basketball,for example,you could talk with some of your classmates who like basketballThe easiest way to start talking to people is to find something you have in commonSample 2第8页/共16页 If you are standing beside a group of your classmates,join in their discussion if you know something about the subject they are discussingBut if you dont,you shouldnt feel afraid to say,for example,“That sounds interesting,what is it about?”Once you start talking to one person,it will get easier to talk to others Find one person you have something in common with,and once you become friends with him,his friends will start talking to you too Good luck!Yours Miss Wang 第9页/共16页Now start to write!When you finish your writing,please swap your letter with your partner and check for mistakes.IV Writing and editing第10页/共16页V AssessmentContent:Are your ideas stated clearly?Do you provide good reasons or supporting details for your ideas?Organization:Are your ideas related to the topic?Is your reasoning logical?Have you used linking words properly?Have you used any sentence patterns provided in the text?Accuracy:Are there any spelling mistakes?Are there any grammatical mistakes?Have you employed high-level words and expressions?Others:Is your handwriting neat and easy to read?第11页/共16页建议信1.建议信是向收信人对某事提出写信人的建议和忠告。2.建议信有可能是写给个人,就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点;也可能是写给某个组织和机构,就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。3.建议信要写出写信的原因、建议的内容、提出建议的理由。提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。注意事项：全文要语言要委婉、礼貌 顾及对方感受。第12页/共16页常用套语-开头常用句式A (照应材料,表明写作意图)1.After I read your letter in the newspaper,I am sorryto know that 2.I am very glad to hear that you want to3.I know you have trouble inafter reading your letter4.I am writing to you for the purpose of-5.You have asked me for my advice with regard toandIll try to make some conductive suggestions.第13页/共16页常用套语-表达建议常用句式B.body1.first firstly secondly then after that in the end finally Meanwhile whats more2.I think it would be more beneficial if you could 3.I would like to suggest/recommend that4.If I were you,I would5.In my opinion,it would be wise to take the following action.6.When it comes to such a situation,I would like to suggest that you can第14页/共16页常用套语-结尾常用句式C.1.I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration.2.I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful.3.I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.4.I feel that it would be beneficial if you stick to it.5.In the end,I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful.第15页/共16页感谢您的观看！第16页/共16页
