高考基础写作王燕娇、苏俏红、杨青.ppt

一、写作亮点探析一、写作亮点探析一、连接词一、连接词 并列：as well as,also 递进：besides,apart fromin addition,whats more,further more,moreover 转折：however,yet,on the contrary on the one handon the other hand,因果：because of,since,for the reason that 结果：finally,thus,as a result,in all,in a word 让步：although,in spite of,despite (09年高考)他说原因很复杂，没有哪一种药物可以治愈。他建议不要过度用眼He said that.He also suggested that(08年高考)：射击在1896年第一次成为奥运项目；在1904年和1928年中断；However,（09年高考）他给了建议.特别提示，近视和握笔姿势有关He saidHe also suggested.whats more（07年高考）：对于我，我的偶像是爱迪生，因为他 发明了很多东西。For myself,.because.（11年高考）：多数中国妈妈不同意作者的做法，作者的17岁的大女儿已被哈佛和耶鲁录取。Although the majority of 写作亮点探析写作亮点探析二、词组多样性二、词组多样性（09年高考）与与相关相关 be connected with be related to be associated with be linked to have something to do with（07年高考）以某人为偶像以某人为偶像 choose/take/regard sb.as an idol(07年高考）占有比例占有比例 sth.hold/cover/take up*%写作亮点探析写作亮点探析 三、高考题中的说明文说明文常用表达法 某时候某些人就某些问题在某个对象中 做了某个调查 Last week/,sb.do/conduct/make a survey/research among sb.on some topic.Last week/，sb.have an interview with sb.on/about some topic it is said/reported that the data/survey shows that According to the data/survey 做了调查：做了调查：调查结果：调查结果：写作亮点探析写作亮点探析四、常用表达法四、常用表达法 并列句（并列句（and,but)复合句（定从、状从、名从）复合句（定从、状从、名从）非谓语非谓语 强调句强调句 被动被动 倒装倒装 写作亮点探析写作亮点探析 复合句：复合句：例例1.吸烟人数约吸烟人数约3.5亿，其中男性亿，其中男性75，女性：，女性：25 There are 350 million people smoking recently and male hold 75 percent while the female hold 25 percent.(改定从）改定从）There are 350 million people smoking recently,among whom the male hold 75 percent and the female hold 25 percent.例例2.我们负担过重的原因是面临着高考。我们负担过重的原因是面临着高考。The main cause of our heavy burden is the pressure from the college entrance examination.（改定从）（改定从）The reason why we bear heavy burden is that we are faced with the 表从定从写作亮点探析写作亮点探析 例例3：王教授说产生近视的原因很复杂，现在还没有一种药物能：王教授说产生近视的原因很复杂，现在还没有一种药物能 够治愈它。够治愈它。Professor Wang said the reason of short-sightedness is complicated and still there is no cure for it.(改状从改状从）Professor Wang said that since the reason of short-sightedness is complicated,there is still no cure for it.例例4.他建议我们不要用眼过度。他建议我们不要用眼过度。He suggested that school children should avoid overusing their eyes.（改同位语从句改同位语从句）He gave us a suggestion that school children should avoid overusing their eyes.写作亮点探析写作亮点探析 非谓语非谓语例例1.射击最初只是生存工具，到射击最初只是生存工具，到19世纪才发展成一项体育运动。世纪才发展成一项体育运动。（08广东）广东）Shooting was used as a means of survival originally and it developed into a sport only in the 19thcentury.Shooting,originated as a means of survival,developed into a sport only in the 例例2.中小学近视率略高于中小学近视率略高于50%，占世界第一，占世界第一 Slightly more than 50%of the school children in our country are short-eye sighted,which ranks the first in the world.Slightly more than 50%of the school children in our country are short-eye sighted,ranking the first in the world.强调强调&倒装倒装（08年高考）射击到年高考）射击到19世纪末才发展成为一项体育运动。世纪末才发展成为一项体育运动。1.Shooting developed into a sport only in the 19th century.2.Shooting didnt developed into a sport until the 19th century.(notuntil句型句型)3.It was not until 19th century that shooting developed into a sport.(it wasthat强调句强调句)4.Not until 19th century did shooting develop into a sport.(not untildid倒装倒装)写作亮点探析写作亮点探析被动被动例例1.总而言之，这次活动深受好评。总而言之，这次活动深受好评。speak/think highly of sth.In all,this activity was spoken/thought highly of.例例2.他建议学生不要用眼过度。他建议学生不要用眼过度。School children are advised not to overuse their eyes.写作亮点探析写作亮点探析二、基础作文特点分析二、基础作文特点分析1.分值分值：15分2.话题话题：贴近生活，社会热点问题 -广东07-11年高考英语基础写作话题3.写作要求写作要求：只能使用5个句子表达全部内容4.评分标准评分标准：句子结构准确、信息内容完整、篇章结 构连贯话题07 08091011偶像 奥运比赛项目射击介绍学生近视情况禁烟图书介绍平时多积累平时多积累热点词汇热点词汇三、解题步骤三、解题步骤 看首句 看【写作内容/要求】看信息点2.分析整合信息点，划分句子3.写（确定时态、语态和句子间的关系）4.检查（拼写）1.审题2011年广东高考题年广东高考题 以下是一本图书的基本信息及相关报道以下是一本图书的基本信息及相关报道基本信息：基本信息：（1）书名：）书名：Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother（2）作者：）作者：Amy Chua，美籍华人，耶鲁大学教授，美籍华人，耶鲁大学教授（3）出版时间：）出版时间：2010年年（4）内容：作者用中国传统方式教育两个女儿的故事）内容：作者用中国传统方式教育两个女儿的故事（5）效应：引发中美教育方式孰优孰劣的讨论）效应：引发中美教育方式孰优孰劣的讨论相关报道：相关报道：（1）中文版：）中文版：2011年初开始在中国销售年初开始在中国销售（2）意外反应：多数中国妈妈不赞同作者的做法）意外反应：多数中国妈妈不赞同作者的做法（3）最新消息：）最新消息：17岁的大女儿已被哈佛和耶鲁录取岁的大女儿已被哈佛和耶鲁录取 耶鲁耶鲁Yale；哈佛：哈佛：Harvard 写作内容写作内容 根据以上信息写一篇图书介绍，内容包括：根据以上信息写一篇图书介绍，内容包括：1.图书的基本信息图书的基本信息 2.图书的相关报道图书的相关报道写作要求写作要求 只能用只能用5个句子表达全部内容个句子表达全部内容评分标准评分标准 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯基本信息：基本信息：（1）书名：）书名：Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother（2）作者：）作者：Amy Chua，美籍华人，耶鲁大学，美籍华人，耶鲁大学 教授教授（3）出版时间：）出版时间：2010年年 A book Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother,whose writer Amy Chua is a Chinese American and professor in Yale University,was published in 2010.（4）内容：作者用中国传统方式教育两个女儿）内容：作者用中国传统方式教育两个女儿的故事的故事 In it,the writer described how she brought up her two daughters in traditional Chinese ways.（5）效应：引发中美教育方式孰优孰劣的讨论）效应：引发中美教育方式孰优孰劣的讨论 The publication of the book caused heated discussion about which educational method is better-the Chinese one or the American one.相关报道：相关报道：（1）中文版：）中文版：2011年初开始在中国销售年初开始在中国销售 The Chinese version of the book began to be sold in China at the beginning of 2011.（2）意外反应：多数中国妈妈不赞同作者的做）意外反应：多数中国妈妈不赞同作者的做 法法（3）最新消息：）最新消息：17岁的大女儿已被哈佛和耶岁的大女儿已被哈佛和耶 鲁录取鲁录取 Although the majority of Chinese mothers disapproved of what the writer did,the latest news revealed that the 17-year-old elder daughter was already admitted to Harvard University and Yale University respectively.A book Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother,whose writer Amy Chua is a Chinese American and professor in Yale University,was published in 2010.In it,the writer described how she brought up her two daughters in traditional Chinese ways.Thepublication of the book caused heated discussion about which educational method is better-the Chinese one or the American one.The Chinese version of the book began to be sold in China at the beginning of 2011.Although the majority of Chinese mothers disapproved of what the writer did,the latest news revealed that the 17-year-old elder daughter was already admitted to Harvard University and Yale University respectively.四、真题演练四、真题演练你是校报小记者，最近进行了一次采访。以下是这次采访的情况：时间：上周末 对象：眼科医生(eye-doctor)王教授 主题：我国中小学生近视(short-sightedness)问题 基本信息：(1)发生率：略高于50 (2)人数：世界第一 专家解读：(1)原因：很复杂 (2)治疗：没有哪一种药物能治愈近视 (3)建议：不要过度用眼；多参加户外活动 (4)特别提示：如何握笔也和近视有关 写作内容 根据以上情况写一篇采访报道，并包括如下内容：1采访的时间、对象和主题；2中小学生近视的发生率及人数；3专家解读。写作要求 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。评分标准 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。1.审题：2.划分句子：3.确定时态：4.完成句子首句：采访内容：时间：上周末 对象，主题，基本信息，专家解读所写信息：1）采访的时间、对象和 主题；2）中小学近视的发生率及 人数；3）专家解读。句子联系紧密的可合为一句。上周末客观事实仍用一般现在时Last weekend,I interviewed/had an interview with eye-doctor Professor Wangabout/on our countrys primary and middle students short-sightedness.It is said/reported that slightly morethan/over 50%students,which ranks the No.1 in the world,are short-sighted.Professor Wang said that the reason of short-sightedness is complicated and that there is still no cure for short-sightedness.He also suggested that we should not overuse our eyes and do more outdoor exercises.1.表建议:suggest/advise that+宾从（should do）虚拟语气 give sb.a suggestion advise sb.（not）to do 2.take part in activities 参加活动 do/take exercises Whats more,since the holding of pen has something to do with the short-sightedness,we need to pay attention to using the pen.和有关have something to do withbe connected with be related tobe associated with be linked to介词介词数据表达1.百分比和分数：1）百分比+n.；百分比+of+the+neg.50%students;50%of the students2)n.+hold+百分比eg.Among the smokers,the male hold 75percent and the female hold 25 percent.3)上升了 increase by 上升到increase to 下降了 decrease by 下降到decrease to4）分数：基数词（分子）+序数词（分母）分子大 于等于2,分母加seg.2/3 two thirds2.具体数字：1）there be 句型 eg.There are 350 million people smoking in the world recently.2)数字+n.eg.About 350 million people smoke in the world recently.3.日期：in+年/月 eg.in 1920;in July on+具体的一天 in the+年代 eg.in the 1920s Summary1.基础写作亮点探析2.基础写作特点分析3.基础写作步骤1）审题 看首句 看【写作内容/要求】看信息点2）分析整合信息点，划分句子3）写（确定时态、语态和句子间的关系）4）检查（拼写）4.09真题讲解Homework:广州一模基础写作