中考作文辅导(教育精品).ppt

Which is better?他们在海滩上听音乐。他们在海滩上听音乐。A They listened to the music on the beach.B They enjoyed the music on the beach.Which is better?我希望你能帮助我。我希望你能帮助我。A I wish you can help me.B Im looking forward to your help.Which is better?他们很早就到了。他们很早就到了。A They arrived early.B They arrived as early as they could.Which is better?最后，他的狗得救了，他感到很惊讶。最后，他的狗得救了，他感到很惊讶。A His dog was saved at last.He was very surprised.B To his surprise,his dog was saved at last.A I think learning English is interesting.B I find it really fun to learn English.我认为学英语很有趣。我认为学英语很有趣。我们应该保护环境。我们应该保护环境。A We should protect the environment.B Its our duty to protect the environment.方法二方法二:活用多种句型活用多种句型Writing skills（“写写”的技巧）的技巧）她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。A She is very young.She cant carry the heavy box.B She is too young to carry the heavy box.C She is so young that she cant carry the D She is not old enough to carry the 方法三方法三:妙用关联词妙用关联词Writing skills（“写写”的技巧）的技巧）1.表示并列或递进表示并列或递进:and,as well as,bothand,whats more not onlybut also,neithernor2.表示选择表示选择:or,eitheror3.表示转折表示转折:but,however,althoughthough,after all,anyway4.表示因果表示因果:because,so,therefore,since,for,as a result5.表示条件表示条件:if,unless6.表示对比表示对比:instead,notbut,while,in the same way,on the one handon the other hand7.表示解释表示解释:for example,for instance,such as,that is to say,in other words,to tell the truth8.表示顺序表示顺序:to begin with,firstly,first(of all),second(ly),next,later,since then,from then on,finally,in the end9.表示强调表示强调:also,besides,especially,actually,in fact10.表示结论表示结论:all in all,altogether,in a word,generally speaking,in short关联词关联词(connection words)Lets try_ I am tired,I keep on working till midnight.He didnt go to movies,he went to the concert _.We like doing kinds of sports _ swimming,running and hiking._,he stood up.Then he got out._,he went back._,he smiled.ThoughAlthoughinsteadlikeFirstNextFinallyAt lastI think it is a good idea to live in school when you are senior high school student.From your letter,I know that you have been looked after by your parents so far and now you are old enough to take care of yourself.If you do so,you can learn how to live on your own.Whats more,the students who live with you can help you solve some problems when you have difficulty with your studies.At the same time,it may save you a lot of time so that you can devote yourself to your studies.Living in school also gives you a chance to get along with your classmates.加例子加例子在家里，我经常帮助父母亲干家务活。在家里，我经常帮助父母亲干家务活。I often help my parents do housework,such as washing dishes,folding the clothes,taking out the trash and so on.Lets Do it now!/Dont do it again!As students,we should start from ourselves.Dont wait.Join us now!Start to join us now!Dont put it off!Become a volunteer today!How amazing!I cant wait!Save animals!Save Ourselves!Save our planet!It will be great fun!