读后续写练习写作指导 讲义-高三英语二轮复习写作专项.docx

试题原题读后续写（满分25分）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。I ran after the train, shouting, “Hey mister, cant you see me?” It was hopeless, as no conductor is going to slow down for a 60-year-old man who got to the station several minutes late. They absolutely didnt know how important that day, that train ride was to me! I was on my way to an interview for what could have been the opportunity of a lifetime.I threw both my hat and my art case down in depression, and sat down on the nearest chair, wiping (擦掉) the sweat from my face and breathing heavily. I would have to wait a whole day for the next train, and by then my appointment with the gallery owner would have given up on me. Perhaps it was for the best. It was, after all, the first time in 40 years anyone had shown such an interest in my art. Maybe if the gallery owner had seen all my paintings, he would have changed his mind about offering me space on his walls.Disappointment filled my soul. Should I dial the gallery and get an interview on a different day? But Pierre Gianni was the owner of the most well-known gallery in New York City. Why would he give a rare second chance to an elderly nobody when he had the newest, coolest young artists to choose from?Come to think of it, perhaps these insecurities were the very reason I had never been offered a show before. I was too afraid to try. I found countless excuses not to offer my work up to be seen and perhaps criticized. I told myself it would hurt too much if I failed, but the truth was that I had never tried.Finally, I gathered all my courage to dial the gallery, only to find my antique cell phone had broken down. It was at the very moment that I was in total despair and decided to go home.注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。   Suddenly I felt a touch on my shoulder. _   The next morning I got to the gallery on time._试题分析写作分析1.人物（角色）：I：a 60-year-old artist, who never tried to show the work up to be seen in case of being hurtPierre Gianni: the owner of the most well-known gallery in New York City（续写部分可以考虑）a stranger：出现在续写部分（应该是个好心人）2.主题：人与自我（社会）本文以故事发展为线索展开，讲述在赶往面试的路上，作者因没赶上火车而沮丧。更让作者失望的是，他不知道画廊老板皮埃尔是否会对他的画感兴趣，给他展出的机会。当作者鼓足勇气给皮埃尔打电话时，却发现手机坏了。这时，一位老人走过来把手机借给作者。让作者欣慰的是，皮埃尔同意推迟面试。在第二天的面试中，皮埃尔表示对作者的画很感兴趣，并计划一个月后让作者展出。3.续写情节安排： 第一段：Suddenly I felt a touch on my shoulder.（与开头句衔接）转身看到一个同龄的老人，带着同情的眼神递给我他的手机，深入交谈让我更加有勇气给画廊老板打电话（与下文开头句衔接）老板Pierre同意将会面推迟一天第二段：The next morning I got to the gallery on time.（与开头句衔接）让我感动的是Pierre亲自到画廊门口迎接我他的热情消除了我的疲倦和担心，最终他答应我的作品在他的画廊展出六十年来，第一次对自己充满信心，当然得感激Pierre的慧眼下水作文  Suddenly I felt a touch on my shoulder. Turning around, I saw a gentleman of the same age, a sympathetic expression in his eyes. Before I could say something, he handed me his mobile phone, saying that he had been showing his concern about me for quite a long time and that I must have met something challenging. A further conversation strengthened my courage to make the phone call to Pierre. Then came the exciting moment: the gallery owner agreed to postpone the appointment. Fortunately, I also grasped the luck to take an express train. (87 words) The next morning I got to the gallery on time. What made me moved was that Pierre came to meet me at the entrance to the gallery by himself. His warm welcome wiped away all my tiredness and nervousness. Opening my art case, I showed my works to him with great care. After a seemingly year-long examination, he eventually gave me the golden opportunity, promising to offer me space on his walls for a whole seasonal exhibition. It was the first time in my 60 years life that I gained my full confidence thanks to Pierres appreciation. (87 words)参考范文Paragraph 1: Suddenly I felt a touch on my shoulder. I turned around and saw an old man smiling gently at me. He told me that he had noticed the trouble I was in and offered to lend me his phone. I wanted to express my heartfelt gratitude to him, but words got stuck in my throat. Taking the phone he passed to me, I managed to collect myself and plucked up my courage to dial Pierre. After what seemed like an eternity, the phone was picked up. To my great relief, Pierre agreed to postpone the interview.  (88 words)Paragraph 2:  The next morning I got to the gallery on time. I was staring at its grandeur when Pierre approached and welcomed me warmly. Several minutes later, with trembling hands I opened my art case and showed him my paintings one by one. Pierre fixed his eyes on my works with interest, listening to me attentively. Time ticking by, I grew more and more confident and excited. He loved my works! They were scheduled to be exhibited one month later! I was never more certain that what seems far beyond is simply a leap away if you dare to give it a try. (92 words)学科网（北京）股份有限公司