模拟训练40篇（适用新高考卷山东卷）-2021年新高考读后续写快速突破公开课.pdf

读后续写精选011.（2020.河北高三月考）阅读下面材料.，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Three hippopotamuses（河马）were snuggled close together.And they were frightened.A lionwas sitting close by,too.Everything was shaking all around them.“Oh no,here it comes!”said one of the hippos.An animal with very large teeth soared down from the sky!It went for the lion,but missed!This was not the first time the animal had made such a visit.In fact,it often came and wentwithout warning.“We have got to get out of here,said another hippo.“Yeah,and go where?asked the lion.No matter where we go,that thing follows us.”Then suddenly strange noises could be heard close by!They all feared the worst But this time,it was simply much friendlier animals that were heading their way.The hippos and lion had neverseen them before.The group included several giraffes and one little red fox.Like the giraffes,the little red fox felt nervous to be so close to a lion and hippos.But he wasa friendly little fox and introduced himself.He soon realized,however,that his new friends weremore nervous than he was.The hippos and lion were still talking about the animal with large teeththat came down from the sky.And they were surprised to hear that the giraffes and little red foxhad never seen it.“Ladies and gentlemen,not to fear/9 said the little red fox.4What needs to happen here isquite clear?*“And what is that?”asked the lion,“We need to stick together,said the little red fox.The little red fox said that by sticking together they could perhaps reason with the animal第1页with large teeth.“A little courage goes a long way,“said the little red fox.And then everything all around started to shake.“Oh my,run for it!”said the little red fox.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答The little red fox ran as fast as he could.Meanwhile,Frani dropped two coins into a claw machine（夹娃娃机）.【答案】The little red fox ran as fast as he could.He jumped on one of the giraffes back as it stood upto run.Then he climbed up its long neck to hide.The little red fox was so scared that he forgotwhat the hippos had told him and the giraffes:the animal with large teeth always came down fromthe sky.第2页Meanwhile,Frani dropped two coins into a claw machine（夹娃娃机）.She carefully movedthe joystick straight ahead.Then she tapped it twice towards the left.Below were three hippos andone lion.And sitting right behind them were several giraffes.Those would all make fine newfriends for Frani,but it was the little red fbx that she longed to take home.Frani moved the clawdown towards the little red fbx.And then,she grabbed him!As she took the little red fbx out of themachine,Frani gave him a big hug.Frani grandfather was next to her,smiling and then took herand the little red fox out for ice-cream.【分析】本文以童话玩具动物为线索展开，讲述了玩具动物被人用机器抓起时的遭遇及其心理变化。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“小红狐狸尽快地跑。”可知，第一段可描写小红狐狸为避免被抓所做的努力。由第二段首句内容“与此同时，Frani把两枚硬币扔进了一个夹娃娃机里”可知，第二段可描写Frani抓到了小红狐狸。2.续写线索：逃跑躲藏害怕被抓带走新奇相处3.词汇激活行为类逃跑：escape/run away/stand up to run躲藏：hide oneself/go into hiding被抓：get caught/get grabbed情绪类害怕：be scared/be afraid/be frightened第3页新奇：meet strange people/make new friends【点睛】高分句型 llThe little red fox was so scared that he forgot what the hippos had told him and thegiraffes:the animal with large teeth always came down from the sky.（so.that 句型，结果状语从句）高分句型 2 Those would all make fine new friends for Frani,but it was the little red fox that shelonged to take hom e.（由关系代词that引导的限制性定语从句）高 句 型 3 Franis grandfather was next to her,smiling and then took her and the little red fbxout for ice-cream.（现在分词作状语）2.（2020荆门市龙泉中学高三期中）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Michelle was 5 years old when she heard her mom and dad talking about her little brotherJack,only an infant（婴儿）.He was very sick and they were completely out of money.Only a verycostly operation could save Jack,but there was no one to whom they could turn fbr the moneyneeded.She heard her daddy say to her tearful mom,“Only a miracle can save him now.Hearing the words,Michelle went to her bedroom and took all the coins from her littlemoney box.After counting the coins three times,she slipped out of the room and made her way tothe drug store 6 blocks away.She waited for a long time before the pharmacist（药齐狮）turned around and asked her,“What do you want?”“Well,its about my brother,M Michelle answered,44He5s really sick.And I want to buy amiracle.”“1 beg your pardon?said the pharmacist.“His name is Jack.And he has something very bad growing inside his body.And my daddysays only a miracle can save him now.So how much does a miracle cost?第4页“We dont sell miracles here,little girl.I am sorry,but I cant help you.the pharmacist said.“Listen,I have the money to pay for it79 With these words,Michelle poured out all the coinsfrom her pocket.At this time,a well-dressed man behind Michelle stooped down stairs and asked the little girl,“I am selling the miracle you want.Tell me how much money you have.”“One dollar and eleven cents,“Michelle answered in a low voice,Thats all the money Ihave.But I can get some more if I need to.”“Well,smiled the man,“a dollar and eleven cents.The exact price of a miracle for your littlebrother.Show me the place where your brother lives.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好。Paragraph 1:Holding the mans hand firmly,Michelle took him home.Paragraph 2:When asked why he chose to help the family,the man detailed.第5页【答案】Paragraph 1:Holding the mans hand firmly,Michelle took him home.The little girl walked in such ahurry that she even forgot to introduce herself to the man.Her parents were too suiprised tobelieve their eyes.That well-dressed man turned out to be a surgeon,specializing in neural surgery.Later,the little brother was taken away.The operation was completed with payment of one dollarand eleven cents.And it wasnt long before Jack was home again and doing well!Michelle wasmore than happy.Now she knew the exact price of a miracle:one dollar and eleven cents,plus thefaith of a little girl.Paragraph 2:When asked why he chose to help the family,the man detailed.kiWhen I was young myself,Iwas once in the same situation as the little baby.The little girl reminded me of my own sister.Itwas she who saved my life.Deeply impressed by her innocence,I was determined to help thefamily out of trouble.It doesnt matter how much money she actually had with her.What mattersis her faith,a faith in the existence of miracles.”【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，一个小女孩听到父母说弟弟病重，只有“奇迹”才能救弟弟，便把自己存的钱拿了出来，偷偷到药店为弟弟买“奇迹”。小女孩感人的一幕正好被一名医生看到，这位医生为小女孩的弟弟做了手术。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“米歇尔紧紧地握着他的手，把他带回家“可知，第一段可医生被米歇尔带回家后发生的故事。由第二段首句内容“当被问到为什么他选择帮助这个家庭时，他详细地说了出来“可知，第二段可描写医生为什么会帮助他们。2.续写线索：回家帮助疑问解释感悟第6页3.词汇激活行为类走路：walk相信：believe完成：complete帮助：help情绪类非常高兴：be more than happy决定：be determined to【点睛】高分句型 1 The little girl walked in such a hurry that she even forgot to introduce herself to theman.（由 such.that引导的结果状语从句）高分句型 2 And it wasnt long before Jack was home again and doing well!（由 before 弓|导的时间状语从句）高分句型 3J When asked why he chose to help the family,the man detailed.（|i why 弓 I 导的宾语从句及状语从句的省略句）3.（2020河北高三月考）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。A few seconds remained and the score was tied.Players gathered near the goal.SuddenlyDevin saw a clear opening to the goal.He struck the ball hard and held his breath as it flew towardthe upper corner of the net.Goal!Three seconds later,the judge blew the whistle.Game over.第7页Championship game,here we come!*said Tara,slapping hands with Devin.Cant wait tillThursday.Devin grinned.Thursday would be hugethe big soccer game in the afternoon,and theschoofs autumn concert in the evening.Ms.Poltis had chosen Devin to sing a song alone.Great work,Coach said as the team gathered.Be here by 6:30 on Thursday to warm up.Its a night game,Coach explained.Under the lights.Devins heart sank.The concert was at 7:00.Same time as the game.He couldnt possibly doboth.His teammates were super excited.They were on the edge of a title.He couldnt disappointhis team by skipping the game.That night,Devin lay in bed,staring at the ceiling.The lyrics struck him and he began tosing:No matter how hard the struggle,I will never let you down.He liked the song,and he appreciated how kind Ms.Poltis always was.Devin knew thewords by heart,but the thought of singing alone made him tremble.Sometimes he was nervousabout participating in sports,too,but that always went away as soon as a game started.Hed neversung a solo before.It was a relief to know he didnt have to now.The soccer game was a perfectexcuse.But so was Ms.Poltis.It was long time before he fell asleep.注意：(1)所续写短文的词数应为150左右；(2)续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Paragraph 1The next morning,Devin went straight to the music room.第8页Paragraph 2On Thursday evening,Devin felt a little nervous to see so many people in the concert hall.【答案】The next morning,Devin went straight to the music room.MI am not the best singer and Ihave to.n Devin hesitated with his eyes fixed on the floor.Ms.Poitis smiled warmly,nI chooseyou because you work hard,like the person in the song.So dont be nervous!1 Devin raised hishead and looked at her,tears welling up in his eyes.It was at that moment that Devin made hisfinal decision.Later that day,Devin went to his coach and teammates.Unexpectedly,theywelcomed him and promised that they would spare no effort to win the title.On Thursday evening,Devin felt a little nervous to see so many people in the concert hall.Devin took a deep breath and stepped onto the stage.The bright light coming on,Devin calmeddown and sang with confidence.Devin handled the solo perfectly.Hardly had he finished the lastword of the song when a wave of applause erupted from the audience.Devin smiled at Ms.Poitisand felt proud of the choice he had made.No matter how hard the struggle,you have to make adecision and never let yourself down.【分析】本文以人物的心理活动为主要线索展开。Devin所在的足球队周四晚上有一场比赛，他们有望获得冠军。同时，周四晚上学校举行秋季运动会，Devin有独唱节目。Devin面临着艰难的选择。最终，Ms.Poitis的话让Devin做出了选择：他参加了秋季音乐会，并成功地进行了独唱。通过这件事，Devin明白了一个道理：无论多么艰难的挣扎，你都要做出决定，永远不要让自己失望。【详解】1.段落续写:第9页由第一段首句内容“第二天早晨，Devin直接去 音乐教室”可知，第一段可描写在音乐教室里发生的事情。同时结合第二段首句“星期四晚上，看到这么多人在音乐厅里，德文有点紧张。“可知，第一段还要叙述Devin下定决心参加音乐会的内容。由第二段首句内容“星期四晚上，看到这么多人在音乐厅里，德文有点紧张。“可知，第二段可描写Devin在音乐会上的表现和他的心理活动等方面的内容。2.续写线索：面临选择去音乐教室下决心参加音乐会登上舞台表演成功感悟3.词汇激活行为类抬头：raise ones head/look up下,决心：make the final decision/make up one,s mind/detennine to do欢迎、迎接某人：welcome sb./give sb.a warm welcome情绪类紧张：feel nervous/feel stressed out/be nervous骄傲：feel proud of/take pride in【点睛】高分句型 1 Devin raised his head and looked at her,tears welling up in his eyes.（tears+现在分词构成独立主格结构）高分句型 2 It was at that moment that Devin made his final decision.（强调句型 It is+被强调部分+that+其余部分）高分句型 3 Hardly had he finished the last word of the song when a wave of applause eruptedfrom the audience,（hardly.when.就.hardly 否定词置于句首，主句部分倒装。）4.（2020.浙江杭州市学军中学高三月考）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。It was 7 a.m.on 12 May 1998.Mohr had already scanned several packages listing dangerousmaterials aboard the train.The presence of gas would mean taking extra precaution when brakingthe 6,200-ton train.With explosive gas on board,it would be disastrous if the train came off the第1 0页track.After a final inspection,Mohr jumped aboard.He was heading east,into a sun that promiseda beautiful day for their 276-km run to Peru,Indiana.At around noon that day,Marshall prepared to tackle some yardwork.It was a beautiful dayfor it,she thought,gazing past the houses across the street.Some 45 meters away,railroad tracksshone in the sun.Marshall began working in a patch（地块）of soil.Sitting next to her,cheerfully running herhands through dirt,was her 19-month-old daughter,Emily.For a while,she kept turning to checkon Emily,who played close at hand.Eventually,though,Marshalls absorption in her work becametotal.Mohr approached the town where Marshall lived at about 1:45 p.m.and slowed the train tothe 40-kmph speed limit.He activated the flashing lights and warning bell.Mohr had beenthrough the town hundreds of times,but he grew extra cautious rounding the first curve.As the train came out of the curve,Mohr noticed a small dot on the track about 200 metersahead.He thought it might be a dog.Although it was against the rules to do so in the town,hebegan lightly tapping his horn.Come on,puppy,move,1 he urged.The toots（嘟嘟响）of a train whistle startled（使受惊吓）Marshall from her yardwork.Thafs odd,she thought.They don*t usually blow the whistle through town.She glanced over tocheck her daughter,and her heart skipped.Emily was nowhere in sight.Now,as the train approached within 100 meters of the object on the rail,Mohr narrowed hiseyes,trying to make out what exactly was lying ahead.Then shock ran through him like electriccurrent.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.应使用5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语：3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。第1 1页Para 1My God!he yelled as a tiny face turned towards him.Its a baby!Para 2The child was now just 36 meters ahead.【答案】Para 1My God!”he yelled as a tiny face turned towards him.Its a baby!Mohr had an instant decisionto make,applying full emergency brakes with half the train still wrapped around a curve.He hadto risk an emergency stop.Hard as he try,the train kept moving just as a cat saw a fish,whoseenticing smell attracted the cat to approach the baby.Meanwhile,Marshall rushed towards herdaughter,nervous but desperate,fearing the train would run into her beloved.Para 2The child was now just 36 meters ahead.Mohr pulled the brake with his whole effbrts.Thesound of wheels grinding against the rails rang through the sky.The situation was quitedangerous.As the train was almost stopped,he immediately opened the left door of the engine cabquickly and swiftly jumped from the moving train and ran back to the child.She lay crying by thetracks.A great relief sweeping over Mohr,he lifted her from the dirt hurriedly.It was only then thatMohr noticed the train had stopped and Marshall was just coming to her baby.With the baby in hisarms,Mohr began to walk towards the mother.第1 2页【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了火车司机M ohr,在一次驾驶火车全速前进时，他注意到远处的铁轨上有个黑点，他以为是一条狗，后来证实这个黑点是一个婴儿。他要在保证火车安全的情况下，救下这个婴儿。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“我的上帝!”当一张小脸转向他时，他大叫起来。“是个婴儿！“，可知，第一段可描写火车司机M ohr的心理感受及其采取的措施，同时可以描写婴儿妈妈Mashall的现场反应。由第二段首句内容“这时火车距离婴儿只有36米了。”可知，第二段可描写火车司机Mohr努力减速火车直至火车停下，然后救婴儿，最终婴儿平安得救。2.续写线索：看见婴儿决定刹车跳车救孩子一孩子得救3.词汇激活行为类.做决定：make a decision/make up his mind/keep in mind that.刹车:pull the brake/stop the train with effort.救孩子：save the child/rescue the child/save the babys life情绪类焦急：anxious/have ones heart in ones mouth【点睛】高分句型 1.Mohr had an instant decision to make,applying full emergency brakes with half thetrain still wrapped around a curve,（applying.为现在分词作状语）第 13页 高分句型 2.Hard as he try,the train kept moving just as a cat saw a fish,whose enticing smellattracted the cat to approach the baby.（a s引导的让步状语从句，whose之后为非限制性定语从句）5.（2020江苏南京市高三月考）阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落首句进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。I grew up in a small town where elementary school was a ten-minute walk from my houseand in an age,not so long ago,when we children could go home for lunch and find our motherswaiting.At the time,I didnt consider this to be so important,although today it certainly