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大作文：首段：第一部分：阐述寓意(隐性)第二部分：开篇套话+整体描述第三部分：细节描述第一部分：阐述寓意(隐性)What a thought-provoking picture it is!The picture never fails to fascinate me,for it gives me a great deal of+情绪名词.情绪名词：Delight/encouragement/vibrationRegret/disappointment/sorrow第二部分：开篇套话+整体描述第三部分：细节描述开篇套话:as is shown in the picture,介词短语+be(stand/lie/exist)+N.,who/which+V.+逻辑串词(meanwhile/obviously/apparently),there be.2004as is shown in the picture,on the course exists a youngster,who is sweating all over.Meanwhile,thereis finishing line in front of him,which can be regarded as a start one.2001The picture never fails to fascinate me,for it gives me a great deal of vibration,as is shown in thepicture,in front of us lies a lamp,which stands in a dark place.Obviously,there is a sweet smile on itsflame.2007The picture never fails to fascinate me,for it gives me a great deal of regret.As is shown in the drawing,in front of us stands a man,who prepares to kick the ball.Apparently,there is another person and he isguarding the goal.Both of them imagine each other as too huge to defeat.2011The picture never fails to fascinate me,for it gives me a great deal of disappointment.As is shown in thecartoon,on the boat sit two tourists who throw rubbish into the lake.Meanwhile,there exist endlesslitter on the surface of the lake.2010The picture never fails to fascinate me,for it gives me a great deal of delight.As is shown in thecartoon,in front of us exists a hotpot which seems delicious.Obviously,there are many kinds ofcultural food in it,just like Lao She,the Swan Lake and so on.Ps:组合:中间段：主旨句（显性）+论 证+（总结句）主旨句（显性）一联系现实：1 “三个代表”+2 综合论述1 三个代表：represent/symbolize/be associated with（can be imagined as）2003The flower represents the next generation of our nation.The warm room symbolizes their parents.The storm is associated with the harsh reality.PS:andThe flower represents the next generation of our nation.Meanwhile,the warm room symbolizes theirparents.And the storm is associated with the harsh reality.2004The youngster drawn in the picture represents a great many adolescents.Obviously,the coursesymbolizes the life we experience.And the finishing line can be imagined as the goal we have achieved.2005The old man drawn in the cartoon represents the aged parents.Apparently,the three sons and onedaughter symbolize their offspring.And these goals are associated with the households of thesechildren.2006The two men in the photos represent a great many adolescents.And Beckham,a football superstarsymbolizes their idols.20072008The two men in the cartoon represent a great many adolescents.And their broken legs can be imaginedas their shortcomings/weaknesses/disadvantages.2 综合论述2008范文1.The vivid picture,to my mind,is urging us to cultivate the awareness that+寓意+has always beenthe traditional virtue of our nation.20042.The youngster drawn in the picture represents a great many adolescents.Obviously,the coursesymbolizes the life we experience.And the finishing line can be imagined as the goal we haveachieved.The vivid picture,to my mind,is urging us to cultivate the awareness that persistencehas always been the traditional virtue of our nation.2 The vivid picture,to my mind,is urging us to cultivate the awareness that+寓意+of greatimportance.2002The American girl represents the western culture.And the costume she wears can be imagined as theChinese culture.The vivid picture,to my mind,is urging us to cultivate the awareness that the culturalblending is of great importance.3 The vivid picture,to my mind,is seriously warning us that.exerts a bad/negative effect on.2003The vivid picture,to my mind,is seriously warning us that the blind love from parents exerts a negativeeffect on children.PS:This sort of attitude/behavior exerts a bad/negative effect on.2000主旨句（显性）+论 证+（总结句）联系现实+主旨句+逻辑串词+批判句型+原因分析1 +逻辑串词+原因分析2there are still a few people who rashly attempt to cross the Pass on foot.-亮点：there be 替换 了 主用兵+Our vicar is always raising money for one cause or another,but he has never managed to get enoughmoney to have the church clock repaired.-亮点：语气强烈的批判句型/Even he still lives under the illusion that country life is somehow superior to town life.-亮点：把对方的观点定义成“幻觉”，强烈的讽刺。There be+N.+定语从句-后面再加上一个 DS 发展句：，just like+sb.+drawn in the picture.+Sb.+be+always/frequently+ving,but/however sb.+have never/rarely done.Sb.still live under the illusion that.2000The fishes represent the ocean resources.And the boats symbolize human beings.The vivid picture,tomy mind,is seriously warning us that overfish exerts a negative effect on our living environment.Sad tosay,although the world is developing,there are a great many people who pay no attention to our naturalresources.They live under the illusion that the resources on the earth is endless and countless.And theyare always focusing on their own interest,but they have never thought of our future.2006The two men in the photos represent a great many adolescents.And Beckham,a football superstarsymbolizes their idols.The vivid picture,to my mind,is seriously warning us that this sort of behaviorexerts a bad effect on ones life.Sad to say,although our society is developing,there are a few peoplewho lose themselves Just like the two men in the photo.They are always imitating stars,but they havenever considered the reason why these famous people succeed.2004The youngster drawn in the picture represents a great many adolescents.Obviously,the coursesymbolizes the life we experience.And the finishing line can be imagined as the goal we have achieved.The vivid picture,to my mind,is urging us to cultivate the awareness that persistence has always been thetraditional virtue of our nation.Sad to say,although the society is developing,there are many peoplewho cant realize its importance.They are always satisfying the goals they have already achieved,butthey have never tried best for another one.Such is human nature,that most of people are shortsighted.The significance of.is often ignored.2008The two men in the cartoon represent a great many adolescents.And their broken legs can be imaginedas their shortcomings.The vivid picture,to my mind,is urging us to cultivate the awareness thatcooperation has always been the traditional virtue of our nation.Sad to say,although the society isdeveloping,there are a great many people who are always self-centered.They live under the illusionthat anything is possible even if they depend on themselves.Such is human nature,that most of people are shortsighted.The significance of teamwork is oftenignored.It is well-known that we exist in a world with various difficulties.We can do nothing but facethem.More importantly,attitude is the key point to take the first step.Assuming cooperation to solvethe problem,you will find it is not as huge as you imagine.PS:Such is human nature,that most of people are shortsighted.The significance of.is often ignored.20042008高分范文1 .severs as the best weapon when we face difficulties and challenges in life.2007高分范文Firstly,it is well-known that we exist in a dynamic world with various difficulties.We can do nothingbut face them.Secondly,attitude is the key point to take the first step.Assuming bravery andconfidence to solve the problem,you will find the question is not as huge as you imagine.2 it is well-known that we exist in a world with various difficulties.We can do nothing but face them.More importantly,attitude is the key point to take the first step.Assuming.to solve the problem,youwill find it is not as huge as you imagine.2008it is well-known that we exist in a world with various difficulties.We can do nothing but face them.More importantly,attitude is the key point to take the first step.Assuming cooperation to solve theproblem,you will find it is not as huge as you imagine.it is well-known that we exist in a world with various dreams.There is no one but longs to fulfill theirgoals.More importantly,attitude is the key point to take the first step.Assuming.to realize dreams,you will find it is not as difficult as you imagine.32008高分范文Failure is the only destination waiting for us if we.There is no one but longs to succeed,however,failure is the only destination waiting for us if wePS：1The successful hosting of Beijing Olympic Games should be attributed to.(spirit).Cooperation/confidence/devotion/striving spirit2The English language possesses a vivid saying,which is called“A tree cannot flourish without its root5,.As for me,寓意+is nothing but our root.Without it,nothing could ever be brought to a conclusion.末段：主旨句+建 议+总结主旨句 坏事”-In my opinion/To my best understanding,measures should be taken if such disappointingsituation is to be avoided.好事”-In my opinion/To my best understanding,we can never emphasize the importance of.toomuch(,for it is not only necessary,but also irreplaceable.)王旨句+建 议+总结In my university,campaigns have been launched to educate people to pay more attention to.(insteadof.)2000In my university,campaigns have been launched to educate people to pay more attention to our planetand resources.20052004主旨句+建 议+总结总结Only in this way can the problem be effectively solved.Only in this way can we live happily and affluently.Only in this way,can we lead a harmonious and happy life.Only in this way can we possess a better and bright future.I cherish the hope that.I cherish the hope that the situation described in the picture will disappear from our life.PS:The pictures never fail to fascinate me,for they give me a great deal of+情绪名词.对立：These two pictures display a sharp contrast:并列：As is shown in the pictures,逻辑串词：对立：While conversely,并列：2003The pictures never fail to fascinate me,for they give me a great deal of regret.These two cartoonsdisplay a sharp contrast:in the warm room is a pot of fresh flower,which blooms beautifully under theprotection.While conversely,the same plant withers quickly,when it is put in the storm.英语二首段：As is shown in the bar chart/line chart/pie chart/table,小幅稳步增长一have a steady and slight increasehave witnessed a slow increase大幅上升/增加一have a great surgerise rapidly/sharply保持不变/稳定一remain constant/stable大幅下降/减少decline/fall/drop+rapidly/sharply达 至 I 最高点peak at/reach the peak at/reach the highest point at达到最低点-reach the bottom at中间段：This chart reflects different developing/change modes of+事物 1 and 事物 2.There are/exist at least two fundamental causes accounting for these changes.Firstly+原因 1.Secondly+原因 2.末段：As discussed above,it is not surprising to see this change.In my opinion/To my best understanding,this trend that+总体描述图画的变化趋势+wiH continue for a while in the future.As is shown in the bar chart，the market share taken by domestic car brands has a great surge fromjust above 25%in 2008 to nearly 35%in 2009.While conversely,that of Japanese cars drops rapidlyfrom 35%to 25%in those two years.Meanwhile,the market owned by American brands remains stableduring this period.This chart reflects different developing modes of these three brands.There are at least two fundamental causes accounting for these changes.Firstly,with the rapid increase in technology,Chinese cars have an unmatched advantage in aspect of price.Undeniably,people who choose them are more likely to save more expense,compared with those whodont.Secondly,Japanese cars used to receive great praise for their high quality.However,it occurs sometechnology drawbacks.And it exerts a negative effect on its market share.As discussed above,it is not surprising to see this change.In my opinion,this trend that the market ofChinese cars is increasing will continue for a while in the future.PS:1 2小作文一应用文一书信-格式语域Two months ago you got a job as an editor for the magazine Designs&Fashions.But now you find thatthe work is not what you expected.You decide to quit.Write a letter to your boss,Mr.Wang,telling himyour decision,stating your reason(s),and making an apology.Write your letter with no less than 100 words.Write it neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter;use“Li Ming”You do not need to write the address.(10 points)instead.Dear Mr.Wang,PS:Dear+人 名，1 私人2 公务-Dear Sir or Madam,首段：自我介绍+写信目的自我介绍一I am Li Ming,a staff member from this magazine.(1)学生：I am Li Ming,a senior from the Department of Chinese Language of Zhengzhou University.(2)职员：I am Li Ming,a staff member from your company/the Nokia Company.PS:写信目的一I am writhing the letter in purpose ofI am writhing the letter to.建议信：(Generally speaking,the services you offer is quite good,however)I have some suggestionsfor you to adopt.I am writhing the letter in purpose of resigning my job.Please allow me express my deep sorry to you.Iknow this may bring about some troubles.Dear Sir or Madam,I am a student in this university who regularly come to the library to spend my spare time.Generallyspeaking,the services you offer here is quite good;however I have some suggestions for you to adopt.And I would like to extend my greatest appreciation if you are so kind as to take my suggestions intoconsideration.To begin with,would you please prolong the time for reading?In the day time,most of the students arehaving class,so they cannot come to the library.What is more,some of the books on shelves are out ofdate.If you are so kind as to provide us some books such as the latest magazines,we will be greatlyhonored.I really wish to have a more comfortable library.Thank you for your time and your consideration.Yours sincerely,Li Ming中间段:I decide to quit for reasons as follows.First of all,the joy as an editor is not suitable to me for thesimple reason that my major is computers.Whats more,末段：表达感情+期待回信(1)Thank you for your time and your consideration.-建议信专用(2)Thank you for your time and patience.-所有书信都能用！Again,I apologize for./1 would express my sincere apologies to you.(1)1 am looking forward to your reply.(2)I look forward to a reply at your earliest convenience.-“建议信 专用Dear Mr.Wang,I am Li Ming,a staff member from this magazine.I am writhing the letter in purpose of resigning myjob.Please allow me express my deep sorry to you.I know this may bring about some troubles.I decide to quit for reasons as follows.First of all,the joy as an editor is not suitable to me for thesimple reason that my major is computers.Whats moreThank you for your time and patience.Again,I apologize for my resignation.I am looking forwardto your reply.落款:Yours sincerely,Li Ming2011Dear Jack,Havent see you for a long time!How is everything going?As I know,you are a movie fan.So,Iam writing the letter to recommend one,Forest Gump for you.The film never fails to fascinate me.First of all,the language of it is thought-provoking.Whatsmore,it will give you a great deal of confidence if you watch it.投诉信求职信