【课件】读后续写---语言描写（说）课件-2023届高三英语写作专项.pptx

ContinuationContinuation WritingWriting读后续写语言描写读后续写语言描写 “说说”Step 1 Lead inKid:How much is the movie ticket?Man:Ten dollars,kid.Kid:I only have 5 dollars.Please let me in.I will see it only with one eye.The kid _,“How much is the movie ticket?”The man _,“Ten dollars,kid.”The kid _,“I only have 5 dollars.Please let me in.I will see it only with one eye.”askedreplied/answeredbegged/said jokinglyStep 2 Know ways to express“say”more vividly 说道 _ 回答道 _ 问道 _ 补充说 _ 解释道 _ 叹气地说 _ 承认道 _ 同意地说 _ 大笑地说 _ 尖叫道 _ 大声地吼道 _ 通知 _ 承诺 _ 宣布 _ 安慰 _ 道歉 _ 陈述 _低/耳语 _ 低语/嘟囔 _ 辩论 _抱怨道 _ 争论 _ 说服 _ shout/yell/roarlaughsayreplyaskaddexplainsighadmitagreescream/exclaiminformcomplaincomfortmurmurpromisewhisperstateannounceapologizearguepersuadedebate 1)_ 激动地说 2)said _ 轻柔地说 3)_ 冷静地说 4)replied_ 不冷不热地说5)answered _ 胆怯地说 6)_ 冷冷地回答 timidly said excitedlyreplied coldlysaid calmlyhalf coldly,half kindlysoftly 1)said Mr.Wilson _ 一脸严肃地2)he said_ 用一种坚定地语调 3)He said _ 他慌慌张张地说4)she said_ 用一种坚定地表情 5)Jenny laughed_ 兴奋地笑了起来 6)said the stranger_ 冷笑着说7)She asked _ 用一种梦幻般地语调说 in a dream-like voicein a flurrywith a serious look on his facein a determined/firm voicewith a determined lookwith excitementwith a cold smileTip 3 Use verbs+prep phrases 1)said Newland,_ 心里暗自高兴 2)she begged him,_ 眼睛充满恐惧3)she said,_ 眼睛在跳跃着/闪闪4)she murmured,_ 又沮丧又担忧 upset and concernedher eyes dancing/shiningher eyes filled with fear secretly delightedTip 4 Use verbs+伴随状伴随状语语（adj,doing,done）(改改编自自UnitTwoModuleThree:HealthyEating)He smiled as he welcomed some customers warmly at the door but the smile left his face when he saw Yong Hui walking in.She did not look happy and glared at him.“May I ask what you were doing in my restaurant the other day?I thought you were a new customer and now I know that you only came to spy on me and my menu!”she said.“Please excuse me,”he calmly said,“I wanted to know where all my customers had gone last week.I followed one of them and found them in your restaurant.I don t want to upset you,but I found your menu was limited.Why dont you sit down and try a meal?”Yong Hui agreed to stay and soon they were both enjoying dumplings and breast of chicken cooked with garlic.When they were served the ice cream,Yong Hui began to look ill.“The food is too fat and heavy,”she said,“I miss my vegetables and fruit.”Wang Peng was enjoying a second plate of dumplings so he sighed.“Yes,”he said,“and I would miss my dumplings and fatty pork when I was in your restaurant.Dont you get tired quickly?”“Well,I do have to rest a lot,”said Yong Hui.“But dont you think it would be better if you were a bit thinner?Im sure you d feel much healthier.”shouted explained commented added admitted say shout explain comment add admit1.-“Whatever are you doing up here,Bill?”_.-“Im trying to repair the bell,”answered Bill.2.-“Have you anything to declare?”he asked,_.-“No,”I answered confidently.asked the vicar in surpriselooking me in the eye3.-“Perfume,eh?”he _.“You should have declared that.”-“But it isnt perfume,”I said.“Its hair gel.”Then I _,“Its a strange mixture I make myself.”As I expected,he did not believe me.-“Try it!”I _.asked sarcasticallyadded with a smilesaid encouraginglyStep 3 Blank Filling1654327891011121.习大大习大大笑着说笑着说:“嫦娥嫦娥五号五号的的成功发射，表明成功发射，表明了中国人民的智慧了中国人民的智慧(wisdom)。Xi Dada _,“The successful_ of Change-5 shows the wisdom of Chinese people”.said with a smilelaunch2.这位球迷不断这位球迷不断重复重复：“马拉多纳马拉多纳(Maradona)已经已经走了走了。再见了，球王！。再见了，球王！”The fan _,“Maradona has _.Goodbye,King of the Football!”kept repeating passed away3.就在这时，一个小就在这时，一个小女孩女孩尖叫起来尖叫起来，“那那就是那个因纯真笑容就是那个因纯真笑容而一夜走红的男孩丁而一夜走红的男孩丁真！真！”Just then a little girl _,“Thats the boy Ding Zhen who became famous overnight for his_ smile.screamedinnocent4.几秒钟之内，他们就几秒钟之内，他们就像像老朋友老朋友一样开始一样开始聊聊了起来了起来，谈到谈到他们他们作为作为打工人打工人(laborer)的快乐的快乐。Within seconds,they _like old friends,_their happiness as laborers.began chatting/to chattalking about5.在直播节目中，李在直播节目中，李佳琦佳琦发出发出一声惊人一声惊人的的喊叫喊叫，“我的妈呀我的妈呀，答应答应我，买它！我，买它！”In a live streaming,Li Jiaqi _,“Oh,my God!Promise me to buy it”!shouted with a surprised voice6.一些人一些人问问李子柒为何视频做得那么优秀李子柒为何视频做得那么优秀，她她没有没有回应回应。Some people asked Li Ziqi why she made such excellent videos,she _.didnt respond7.很多同学都很多同学都叹息说叹息说，他们没有时间去，他们没有时间去看看 八佰八佰这部电影。这部电影。_ that they had no time to see the film The Eight Hundred.Many students sighed8.女女主持人来到台前，主持人来到台前，宣布宣布钟钟南山获得了共和国南山获得了共和国勋章勋章(medal)，他的事，他的事迹迹受到全国人民的高度受到全国人民的高度赞扬。赞扬。The hostess came to the stage,_that Zhong Nanshan won the Medal of the Republic.His deeds were_ praised by the people of the whole country.announcinghighly 9.他他低声低声对我对我说说，就是洋仔唱火了这，就是洋仔唱火了这首首 可可托海的牧羊人可可托海的牧羊人。He _,“It was Yangzai that made the song The shepherds of Cocotohai so popular.”whispered to me10.特朗普是如此生气，以致于他在特朗普是如此生气，以致于他在办公室办公室 大声大声吼道吼道，“这下完蛋了！这下完蛋了！”So annoyed_ that he_ in the office,“Its over”!roared loudlywas Donald John Trump11.这位记者这位记者打断打断我的我的话，话，解释说解释说，“封锁封锁”(lockdown)这个这个词带词带给了人们太多的回忆。给了人们太多的回忆。The reporter _,_ that the word“Lockdown”brought back too many memories to people”.Lockdowninterrupted meexplaining12.一些小区居民总是一些小区居民总是在在抱怨说抱怨说，新冠病毒新冠病毒的传播给他们带来了的传播给他们带来了太多的不便！太多的不便！Some residents of the community _ that the spread of Covid-19 has brought them too much _.are alwayscomplaininginconvenienceStep 4 ConsolidationLast week at a dinner party,the hostess asked me to sit next to Mrs.Rumbold.Mrs.Rumbold was a large,unsmiling lady in a tight black dress.She did not even look up when I took my seat beside her.Her eyes were focused on her plate and in a short time,she was busy eating.I tried to make a conversation.“Will you be spending your holidays abroad this year?”_“Yes.”“Will you be staying in England?”_“No,”_,“Do you like your meal?”“Young man,”_，“if you ate more and talked less,we would both enjoy our dinner.”I asked politely with a smile.She answered without looking up,I continued in a gentle tone.I inquired,looking into her eyesShe responded in an annoyed voiceshe replied,shaking his head.Homework1.1.就就在那时，一位年轻人来到警察局，在那时，一位年轻人来到警察局，宣称宣称 他他找到了凶手找到了凶手(murderer)。2.保罗保罗突然突然尖叫尖叫起来，起来，“赶快！狼朝我们冲赶快！狼朝我们冲过过 来来了！了！”3.“噢，就这样了，但愿下次运气好些，噢，就这样了，但愿下次运气好些，”她她 叹息叹息道道。4.这一次，儿子对父亲这一次，儿子对父亲喊道喊道：“你为什么一你为什么一次次 又又一次问我同样的问题？一次问我同样的问题？”5.当我冲向当我冲向(dash)终点时，队友们都在为终点时，队友们都在为我我 尖叫尖叫，欢呼，欢呼。6.“等一下，等一下，”一个虚弱而苍老的声音一个虚弱而苍老的声音回答道回答道。