读后续写专题讲解导学案-高一英语下学期第55期周报.docx

读后续写专题讲解-高一英语第55期周报原文材料："Eric! Eric! Wake up! You will be late for school today!"Eric's mum said while pulling Eric out of bed.“Mum, don't worry!” Eric said as he quickly got up, put on his clothes, took his bag, and ran to the bus stop.Recently, Eric had gotten enrolled（注册）in a new school so he knew no one there and had made no friends yet. At school, Eric longed for the bell to ring for the class break so that he could eat something. After a while, when the bell rang, Eric quickly opened his bag to take out his money to buy some food. But just then he remembered he had forgotten to take the money his mum had given him.Not knowing what to do, he walked out of the classroom and sat on a bench（长凳）in front of the dining room. He saw a few of his classmates there, among them was Bob. He was one of the richest kids in his class but he was very unfriendly. But as Eric was new, he didn't know much about anyone.Eric thought he might borrow some money from Bob and return it to him the next day. So he got up and slowly went towards Bob and asked if he could borrow some money.Bob smirked（幸灾乐祸地笑）and said，“I knew you were a loser，but I didn't know you were a beggar too?" Bob laughed out so loud that the other kids heard and also made fun of Eric.It was too humiliating（丢脸的）for Eric. He could not answer Bob and slowly walked back towards an empty bench. He could still hear them laughing at him in the distance. When he reached the bench, he noticed something lying near it. It was a wallet. He picked it up and recognized it as Bob's, as he remembered Bob showing it to his friends and saying that his uncle bought it for him from the UK.Para1: First, he thought to keep it a secret.Para2: “Because I was told by my family that Honesty won't let you down,” explained Eric.原则：原文一致原则； 正能量原则； 解决问题原则。踩雷点：1. 角色称呼：Eric, Bob不能写成I; 两个人同时出现时，不能都用he代指。2. 头重脚轻，狗尾续貂：第一段写得很丰富，而第二段字数不足，或衔接不上。材料分析：1. 明线 Plot line:When; Who; Where; WhatIn the _, _ forgot to take the _his mum had given him, so he had to _ some money from _, one of the richest kids but _ one. Bob didnt help him but _ and made fun of him. Back to the bench, _ picked up the lost wallet of _.2. 暗线 Emotion Line: (1) How: Eric: _ _ _ ? keep it a secret Bob:_ _ _ ？(2) Conflict: Eric _. Bob _.(3) Why：Why do the author write this story?首句分析：Para1: First, he thought to keep it a secret.1. Why did Eric want to keep it a secret?(1) Bob _.(2) Eric forgot to _.2. If he kept it a secret, what would happen?(1) Eric would _.(2) Bob couldnt find his wallet.3. What would Eric finally do?He would _.Para2: “Because I was told by my family that Honesty won't let you down,” explained Eric.1. Why did Eric explain? Who did he explain to?Because when Eric returned the wallet to Bob, Bob was _.2. What was the response of Bob after listening to the explanation?Bob might feel _.3. What is the end of this story?Bob and Eric might _.优秀表达Para 1l 黄婕娜：But he changed his decision finally because of his virtue, so he left the moral dilemma quickly. （点明主题）l 赵漉轩：Eric thought twice and told his family about his trouble. (细节重现）l 马彤欣：Bob said thanks to him and said sorry for smirking him. （细节重现）l 朱晓娜：However, a voice appeared from his brain “return the wallet to Bob”. （修辞手法）l 马佳宜：However, another voice rang in my mind “you should be an honest child”./ So he gathered his courage and ran to Bob. （修辞手法，点明主题）l 吴思敏：And he could take advantage of this money to eat a meal.（高级词组）l 李丹纯：Bob ran into the class in a hurry. （动作描写）l 连方仪：However, when he walked out the school, he saw the board on the wall that said “honest”.(环境描写)l 蔡菲敏：Suddenly, it occurred to him that his family has taught him “ Honesty wouldnt let you down.” （心理描写，细节重现）l 吴凯婷：After careful consideration, Eric made the final decision.（心理描写）l 马嘉琳：In the end, honesty defeated selfishness. （升华主题）l 郑静茹：As long as no one knew that, Eric could spend the money by himself.（细节描写）Para 2l 周敏欣：I couldnt keep the wallet at the cost of my honesty.（高级词组，心理描写）l 郭嘉淇：This story tells us that we need to be honest and dont laugh at others. You are kind to others, and so are others.（点明主题）l 周芷筱：Even if others are unfriendly to you, you should maintain your kindness instead of repaying evil with evil. （细节重现，点明主题）l 许乐涵：He made up his mind to respect others and become someone like Eric.（高级词组）l 吴玫霞：Only by being honest can he become better and have more things, such as friendship or other things.（升华主题）l 吴依诺：Instead, he went to help those in need, feeling that being helpful would make him happy.（升华主题）l 黄纯娜： The more honest you are, the more fortune you will get.（高级句型）l 李茵茵：Eric said, “Let the past pass by. I am just doing what I think is right.”（对话描写）l 张雪敏： “Honesty is a virtue, and we all should have an honest heart.” （升华主题）范文赏析First, he thought to keep it a secret. But then he remembered what his elder sister once said to him: “Honesty won't let you down.” Thus he got up and walked towards Bob and his group. Eric called out to Bob, who turned around and said, “Hey loser! Are you okay? Still want money?” “No, I've just come to return your wallet which you dropped over there,” Eric said. Bob stood in silence for a second. All his friends were silent too. “Why are you giving the wallet back when you could have kept it for yourself?” asked Bob. “Because I was told by my family that Honesty won't let you down',” explained Eric. Bob was ashamed and, interestingly, he said sorry to Eric immediately in front of everyone. By being honest and saying the truth, not only did Eric get some money to buy lunch when Bob lent him some, but he was also able to make new friends. On the other hand, Bob's life changed, all his pride and selfishness went away and he learned an important lesson, “Honesty won't let you down.”学科网（北京）股份有限公司